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@zcu8404 3 күн бұрын
Basically, from what I wrote in my last comment; read the rules so you know how to break em!
@zcu8404 3 күн бұрын
It’s okay, but before writing harmonically and rhythmically complex pieces I’d recommend listening to more music which incorporates this. The piano melody seems rather uninspiring, with the rhythm itself seeming “off” with those fast notes at the end of the bar. Listen to Bill Evans for example to see how he incorporates different rhythms and pauses, with some juicy chords. Drums are fine, perhaps improve on the soloing? Again with the rhythms. Overall I’d recommend transcribing famous jazz pieces before writing your own in order to understand how one forms this type of music, solid start though!
@christopheluciani1913 8 күн бұрын
Hello there ! Nice piece ! On my channel I have recorded a piece for cello/piano called "l'Etreinte d'un Rêve", would be curious to have your opinion about it if you have time to check :) Best, Christophe
@boyleiidea 8 күн бұрын
That's different... But I love it! Wonderful job, please keep it up!
@TheAgilityDude 8 күн бұрын
I can't believe you did this. It looks so complicated.
@TheAgilityDude 17 күн бұрын
Glad you didn't stop making music. I'm aways here don't worry 😊
@洪淑貞-p3n 21 күн бұрын
好聽 請問曲名叫什麼？
@Der_Komponist Ай бұрын
Interessantes Musikstück.
@user-we5mi6zl2s Ай бұрын
Who is the composer?
@ScriabinistheGOAT24 Ай бұрын
I wish it were longer. I love your use of harmony
@starlitoceans Ай бұрын
i think so many people missed the point of this composition
@RockPile_ Ай бұрын
Your compositions have gone from “nightmare” to “afternoon daydream” both literally and figuratively. Amazing work, I wish I could compose as well as you!
@AbeLincoln1 2 ай бұрын
It actually does sound like something from my nightmares... (Great composition btw 👍)
@oddguys178 2 ай бұрын
I'm surprised people are so critical, I wish my compositions were this good
@Nigel711 2 ай бұрын
Bar 18 linda goofy ngl
@ATEC9084 2 ай бұрын
Everyone stop being annoying hypocrites. You are the reason why people are afraid to show their talents.
@Jamesmusica 2 ай бұрын
i wrote this like 2 years ago and just posted it lmao. but thank you for your concern
@ATEC9084 2 ай бұрын
@@Jamesmusica You are welcome! And also, I like this composition.
@michelprezman51 2 ай бұрын
How is that possible to create such empty music? Consternant.
@Jamesmusica 2 ай бұрын
Thank you! that's the point. finally, someone who understands!
@apianoguylol Ай бұрын
@@Jamesmusicano I don’t think u understand he’s saying a bad thing to u
@polarpython183 Ай бұрын
@@apianoguylolHe knows. He is not caring though.
@apianoguylol Ай бұрын
@@polarpython183ah ok
@zevelgamer. 2 ай бұрын
This piece has to much chromaticism I feel like it has no key, It's literally Atonal.
@cgcomposer_ 2 ай бұрын
is this a joke
@zevelgamer. 2 ай бұрын
No, tell me what they key center is.@@cgcomposer_
@Andante_marcato 3 ай бұрын
In measures 15 and 17 (25 also) you should write as (a-flat) instead gis (g-sharp); it will be right from the point of view of harmony. =) Sorry for my english, I can't speak English vell))
@SmilingArcticWolf-qd5fd 3 ай бұрын
Amazing work done by 13 y old!!!
@fletcherslife9234 3 ай бұрын
Awesome. Also when writing with the Viola, you made it sound so smooth in that recording. Whenever i write for strings it sounds really clunky. Did you do anything with the recording and if so can you tell me how to do the same? Thanks :)
@tzavvet 3 ай бұрын
You have to work it out. It sucks.
@Stancotangent 3 ай бұрын
This sounds more like nocturne than waltz
@BrettElpers-yr8zn 3 ай бұрын
so instead of writing "andante" again the "correct" way of writing it is "a tempo", also it's a little bit repetitive but i completely understand, it can be hard to come up with something new
@tavitenorclef 3 ай бұрын
Honestly it feels pretty unbalanced and random, but overall it's decent.
@Jamesmusica 8 күн бұрын
I can see that, thank you though!
@hello_person_wathing_beatSaber 3 ай бұрын
Here before the Whatismusic123 guy comments
@depisoroszkoltosrac6547 3 ай бұрын
It sounds like a film soundtrack... i know it would be great effort, but i'd really like to see an orchestrated version of that. Congratulations on your hard work!
@mohamedplayz3995 3 ай бұрын
FINALLY A FELLOW 14 YR OLD COMPOSER LIKE ME DAMN I THOUGHT I WAS ALONE I LOVE THIS PIECE SM POOKS (im 15 and i just finished composing my first waltz a few weeks ago)
@samuelcabellogonzalez7590 3 ай бұрын
Real nice work. I think ideal for a movie
@Jamesmusica 8 күн бұрын
Thank you!
@lolllololllo 3 ай бұрын
it's so repetitive... you could add variations... or something else...
@Jamesmusica 3 ай бұрын
@@lolllololllo I wrote this a few months after I had started composing, it was written around march 2022. I didn’t know any better.
@lolllololllo 3 ай бұрын
@@Jamesmusica the problem (not your fault) is that somehow this video has thousands of views, while my most complex and even my most simple videos don't even have 100 views. some of my works, like many works of many other composers, took a long time to write, and instead of being at least viewed by the algorithm they get replaced by this video. it's really frustrating, like my time has been thrown in the mud as I lost many nights of sleep for nothing.
@cantdecideonmyname4441 2 ай бұрын
@@lolllololllowomp womp
@lolllololllo 2 ай бұрын
@@cantdecideonmyname4441 pointless and annoying comment.
@hello_person_wathing_beatSaber 2 ай бұрын
@@cantdecideonmyname4441bro couldnt think of a good response
@Bartholomew_Johannes_the_II 3 ай бұрын
Me
@oaker_ligmasigma 3 ай бұрын
Drake💀
@ivangonzalezpolaiii1223 3 ай бұрын
que buena musica donde la descargo :D
@Jamesmusica 8 күн бұрын
Gracias!
@dinarbable 3 ай бұрын
Интересно👏🏻👏🏻
@boyleiidea 3 ай бұрын
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@TacoAlligator 3 ай бұрын
I love how there is 0 dislikes
@komponist. 3 ай бұрын
I love its mood and violoncello's calming melody!!!👀🎻
@Jamesmusica 8 күн бұрын
Thank you!
@2prism73 3 ай бұрын
How do you screen record these videos?
@RockPile_ Ай бұрын
You can use musecore
@smurf4110 3 ай бұрын
Very nice!
@Jamesmusica 8 күн бұрын
Thank you!
@alexsturrock9602 3 ай бұрын
Well, that was a very nice exposition, although I think it could do with some variation on the repeat. You've grown a good amount as a composer since your earlier works. Will you be finishing the movement or will this be it?
@Jamesmusica 8 күн бұрын
This is it
@Jamesmusica 8 күн бұрын
Thank you for the kind words!
@AwKeShen. 3 ай бұрын
Mesmerizing piece! relaxing and somewhat mysterious at the start, inspiring in the louder sections...
@Jamesmusica 3 ай бұрын
thanks!
@boyleiidea 3 ай бұрын
Beautiful!!!!
@Lorenzo_gl 3 ай бұрын
Well done, love it!
@R.E.WCompsandProds 3 ай бұрын
Nice piece.
@张大侠-q4c 3 ай бұрын
Wonderful pieces, just sounds great.
@Iumine 3 ай бұрын
i didnt feel the development to bigger chords and octaves, with the accents, accelerando, and fortissimo were as impactful you wanted them to be. thats not to say the idea isnt there and obvious, but instead that its left feeling to me a little straightforward and its power is weak. maybe you could consider somehow building up to it more or using some dissonance as other users have suggested. personally, i struggle alot with keeping them from being plain, and its the texture that i struggle with. something that helps me is looking at what older and well accomplished composers do to make texture. i dont mean youd have to get down in the weeds too much and 'study' the scores (though you could if you want, i myself struggle with that) but find a part of a composition you love and try to see what the composer does to make it something other than the skeleton its built around and try to bend those same techniques around parts of your composition. i find its much easier to grow your 'composing toolbox' when you can collect *real* experience through doing hands on things like this as opposed to reading textbooks (for me at least). i hope you take my solicitation lightly and that its helpful
@Gmajor713 3 ай бұрын
Young composers like us are the best
@kalynnscompositions 3 ай бұрын
This is really epic James! Nice work! (:
@Jamesmusica 3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!
@TheAgilityDude 4 ай бұрын
Nice work