Thank you. I specifically wanted to narrate stories written by real people because I was tired of hearing the other stuff.

That's a good idea. I'll work that in going forward.

This comment wasn’t necessary, keep your negativity to yourself.

Nah it helped me not listen to the story

Why are you so negative bro just hush and listen🤨

Aren’t you just a ray of sunshine, my best friend worked really hard on this story and you’re critiquing it like you’re some kind of professional. Do you have nothing better to do with your life that you feel the need to leave multiple negative comments. Just keep your comments to yourself.

When was it ever stated that the mimics share a conscience ? Why would the other mimic upstairs know? They're working together to get them to the woods, so even if it did know it doesn't matter lol. Also it's mentioned throughout that the mimics can't hold on to one form very long, so yeah it would break cover.

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I didn't mean they share consciences lol. I meant if the one downstairs is dead and the one upstairs is unaware, why would it stand naked in front of her friends boyfriend, not common behavior if your trying to mimic someone and act like them, and up to this point they have fooled the group so well. Now the one in the shower just decides to act all nuts lol. it's a scary concept, the story is decent. Just my opinion ha. The monster in the end was a story ruiner too I think, I've never heard of mimic folklore sounds spooky. Plus anyone in their right mind if they saw a girl squeeze out a tiny window like the grudge wouldn't casually go back to bed and go to sleep lmao 🤣🤣 "I'm just gonna let that one slide" especially people from the city who aren't use to any form of nature or animals. Dude would have crapped his pants and started yelling for everyone to wakeup. Story was rushed that's all I'm saying in my opinion. Not bad story just not the best I've listened to many :) just share my thoughts we all have our own opinions no big deal.

I mean, I get what you're saying but the entire beginning of the story keeps reiterating that the narrator is going to try his best to have a good time no matter what 😭

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks! I had to learn the hard way that I can't juggle regular uploads while narrating audiobooks. Hopefully I'll get better at it.

Thanks!

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.