A Week In Appalachia r/nosleep

[@Grimm.Webster]

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[@MarshqueensavannahHK]

The writer has a unique style of incorporating fiction into the mix, with an unseen forecast, literally. The story not only dives into the love he has for her, and putting her desire to get back to her roots before drawing attention to his crisis (illusion?). Heck we've all doubted if we've really seen something before, and not wanting to look insane! It also shows an indepth style that can't be taught in a class! There's layers in this story. A lot of real human emotions with a fictional twist. You have love, self doubt, confusion, along with empathy. I enjoyed it and the attention to detail!

[@DalTheFox]

I almost never look at new creepypasta channels because I feel like 75% of them are just AI slop nowadays so I'm always glad to find a narrator like yourself ^_^

[@Grimm.Webster]

Thank you. I specifically wanted to narrate stories written by real people because I was tired of hearing the other stuff.

[@Squeaky_Bean]

This 100%!

[@EchoesoftheAbyssstories]

new here in the niche, love your videos

[@alfredoparrilla9508]

Love the stone of voice. I dunno if I am def but this one I could listen to clearly

[@raqaylad1981]

Wonderful story!!

[@roastkingjesus]

Starbucks my god man you are a city boy lmao

[@EchoesoftheAbyssstories]

hey

[@roastkingjesus]

Stories alright so far 14:20 but no one believes someone would see that in the bathroom and shrug it off lol doesnt make the story sound real more rushed

[@duckieeee]

I mean, I get what you're saying but the entire beginning of the story keeps reiterating that the narrator is going to try his best to have a good time no matter what 😭

[@MC-zr6gc]

I can't

[@yehlichi5727]

I'm sorry but this story is so badly written omg, so many inconsistencies, the characters don't act like real people at all, most of it doesn't make any sense

[@liddybug_drawz]

This comment wasn’t necessary, keep your negativity to yourself.

[@zurzz2434]

Nah it helped me not listen to the story

[@tylaquiljones]

It's okay to do the female voices in your normal voice, it's kind of distracting to have it sound so different, like when a comedian puts on a girly voice. Otherwise good job.

[@roastkingjesus]

So at first they are deceiving you... You kill one and the other is in the shower unaware rhe other mimic is dead downstairs... But the mimic breaks cover and stands in front of you naked lmao ... bruh this story is good nut needs minor fixes

[@duckieeee]

When was it ever stated that the mimics share a conscience ? Why would the other mimic upstairs know? They're working together to get them to the woods, so even if it did know it doesn't matter lol. Also it's mentioned throughout that the mimics can't hold on to one form very long, so yeah it would break cover.

[@raqaylad1981]

@@duckieeeeliterally!!!

[@roastkingjesus]

I didn't mean they share consciences lol. I meant if the one downstairs is dead and the one upstairs is unaware, why would it stand naked in front of her friends boyfriend, not common behavior if your trying to mimic someone and act like them, and up to this point they have fooled the group so well. Now the one in the shower just decides to act all nuts lol. it's a scary concept, the story is decent. Just my opinion ha. The monster in the end was a story ruiner too I think, I've never heard of mimic folklore sounds spooky. Plus anyone in their right mind if they saw a girl squeeze out a tiny window like the grudge wouldn't casually go back to bed and go to sleep lmao 🤣🤣 "I'm just gonna let that one slide" especially people from the city who aren't use to any form of nature or animals. Dude would have crapped his pants and started yelling for everyone to wakeup. Story was rushed that's all I'm saying in my opinion. Not bad story just not the best I've listened to many :) just share my thoughts we all have our own opinions no big deal.

[@roastkingjesus]

The ending ruined it lmao

[@raqaylad1981]

Why are you so negative bro just hush and listen🤨

[@liddybug_drawz]

Aren’t you just a ray of sunshine, my best friend worked really hard on this story and you’re critiquing it like you’re some kind of professional. Do you have nothing better to do with your life that you feel the need to leave multiple negative comments. Just keep your comments to yourself.