surprisingly relatable

Thanks for this video, dear! ❤

For which program did you write this essay?

How did you go about outlining your essay?

LUTENITSA MENTIONED. This is beautiful, Bulgarian diaspora stay winning

Love this essay so much

writing a personal essay is my end

THIS IS SO HARD

Hey! Your essay is just amazing!!! I’ve wondered how do you find such a subtle topic and how did you learn to feel this subtlety along with skills to write with a such a depth?

This is poetry! Thank you so much for sharing.

I love the music - and then it is sooo emotional - first of all with myself and the music, and at the same time with the leader, as i am a follower, as the steps moves on. When i manage to follow good, it put a smile in my soul, when i cant..just hope for the next steps🙃

Your essay is like poetry. It's beautiful to listen to. Thank you for the advice!

There's an essay topic that i made up myself, can you let mr know if it's a good topic. I'm not really sure how to start but i am just starting somehow. I'm at the verge of "start from scratch" totally. "Young Poet By The Corner Of The Street". That's the essay topic.

i love the way you speak so much, you seem like such a genuine person

I've been doubting myself because of all the essays I've been watching on the internet, no one actually focused in the importance of being ourselves but the clarity you had make me feel like I truly have something to share.... You've actually put me in an intense vibe... Thanks a lot for sharing your essay... It's a pure masterpiece....

Beautiful!!!

You wrote real essay and its great, marvelous, fabulous. I hope I'll write the same. Can you give me your mail? I am applying for Yale and need your help with essay.

I'm from Bangladesh. I am a high school student. It would be my best pleasure for ever if I can accept to Harvard. As my mother tong is not English I don't know what difficulties are waiting for me ahed.. 🇧🇩

Your writing is so beautiful!! Are you still editing essays?

Best essay I've heard, hands down. It's not gimmicky. It's very genuine and has deep meaning. Beautiful! Thank you!

I’m usually a silent viewer but WOW! I’ve watching countless essay videos on KZbin and your essay is absolutely sensational. I’m near the end of my application process and I relate to every advice you gave here (I nodded vigorously to all your points 😅). I felt to need to express how insightful this video is :)

"It's not what you chose to write about, as much as HOW you write about it" 💯💯🌟 This is a truly amazing and beautiful tip to help with overthinking and obsessing about having the best story. To instead find the greatest meaning and explanation in anything no matter how small! This is so helpful, thank you!!!😄🙌🏽🙌🏽

oh my god this essay is so freaking good

14:50 woah it’s almost like I’m a human being

This video is so genuine I’m starting high school next year and I have no accomplishments or talents yet and really want to get into Columbia but I feel intimidated cause of all these people with 20 awards etc

although I have already submitted my application, Im here again to watch your video your voice and the manner of speaking make me relax pleaseeeee start a podcast, if no one listen to it I will listen each of your podcasts a million time.

DAMNNN THAT WAS SOOO GOOD. HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO WRITE AN ESSAY LIKE THAT !!

you have said intimidating many times in the video... But you know what else is isintimidating ? your voice.

And I love your voice.

i loved your essay, It was one of the best things that I have heard in past 5 years. the view count should be at least a million.🥲🥲

This is so well written and seems so heartfelt, especially in comparison to other college essays.

I usually don't comment on KZbin, but it would be unfair to this video not to comment. It's amazing in every sense of the word!!! for me I am still stuck writing my essay, as if there is a lot inside me that I want to get out and there is not enough space 🥲

The ignorance of Leftists is staggering.

Brutal. Just brutal

Hey, i need your little help

this was so beautiful

Wow. Your writing gives life to your words in a way mine just completely fall short of. I've read so many essays but this is the only one that communicates feelings in the way I want mine to. I see you've closed your fiverr page, but is there any way you'd consider reviewing my essay?

Hi are you still offering your services on fivee? I haven’t been able to reach you

As a writer, that was beautiful. Genuinely the best written essay I've ever heard. So much symbolism and personality to unpack! I seriously cannot express how much i love this work ahhh it's beautiful!!!

I never watched any of these until this week (orientation at my ivy) but lots of people were talking about and sort of wondering what got them in… what about their essay “worked” and it made me curious about it as well. I completed my app and essay with days to spare for the deadline and this was because I originally had no plans to apply for an ivy. But it was suggested so I gave it a go. I wrote my essay in one sitting and edited it for length and clarity over two days and sent it off to do its job. I think it was good… at least I was satisfied with it. I didn’t have any idea what to write about but I researched the school and decided to tell them why I was the perfect candidate based on the culture of the institution. I started with stating I was what they were looking for essentially. Talked about how two of my educators inspired me and changed the trajectory of my life as a student and then talked about the university and how I was a good fit and hoped they’d let me come and study there. I’m a songwriter so I’m used to making few words paint a larger picture. But basically I told them I love to learn, I hear they have dedicated educators and that I think they should let me come learn there. 🤷🏽‍♀️ I know my recommendations were great as well. I mean, I had the right credentials and felt the school was a good fit for me and just told them that. 🤷🏽‍♀️ I think all things bring equal, many ppl have the right credentials to get in, schools are not just looking for people ticking off boxes…. If who you are is the right fit and it comes through in your essay, that’s probably the best way to go.

your first sentence of the video is incredibly relatable to me

I'm Guatemalan !!!

I’m thinking abt writing how me as a African American I feel like I don’t have a culture to truly call my own n how that’s why I’m so fascinated with other’s culture and I live through them In a way but I’m not rlly sure how to convey this in a essay

so helpful

This is a very strange Moment… very strange Dadent indeed

😂 ahh haha what a asphole Go 🇺🇸 👍

The most difficult thing is to put it all in 650 words

You gave me hope that these collages are still selecting students who didn't write about poverty or family problems.

Wow!

this is the essay!!!