Just discovered you on my page! 2HU Arranges!This is awesome! *SKADOOSH‼️💥🐼*

Some pretty good stuff. Working on one myself, but as a total beginner I need the tools for this such as the soundfonts and audio visualizer... Would you mind sharing yours by any chance?

Did you make this before the apfbt fools song? There's some pretty apparent dissonances in here, stemming both from weird chord choices as well as non-ideal harmonization. What's your chord progression during the intro? It makes the melody sound really floaty. Whether that's a bad thing depends on whether you intended for that to happen or not. Some other parts of the song are better, at least. The climax sections use a VI - VII - i progression, and that makes the section sound much more solid. Turns out you really can't go wrong with a VI - VII - i progression. The climax melody is also pretty solid. Some complaints about the harmonization, but by 7:16 you seem to have figured out how to harmonize the melody correctly.

For a newcomer, this isn't half bad. It already sounds competent. Some mistakes with harmonizing the melody here and there (for example at 1:59), but nothing that took me out of it. I like the melody during the chromatic descent part. Is the structure ripped from some other song? I can't tell at a glance because I'm significantly less familiar with earlygame songs.