01 - First Touhou-style attempt [Touhou-style Original]

[@RickyRister]

Did you make this before the apfbt fools song? There's some pretty apparent dissonances in here, stemming both from weird chord choices as well as non-ideal harmonization. What's your chord progression during the intro? It makes the melody sound really floaty. Whether that's a bad thing depends on whether you intended for that to happen or not. Some other parts of the song are better, at least. The climax sections use a VI - VII - i progression, and that makes the section sound much more solid. Turns out you really can't go wrong with a VI - VII - i progression. The climax melody is also pretty solid. Some complaints about the harmonization, but by 7:16 you seem to have figured out how to harmonize the melody correctly.

[@nuttaponpanyasit5966]

yes I made this long before apfbt fools song, the apfbt fools song is my 6th song that I made only for a few hours. for the intro chords, the piano uses DECF but the string uses FGEA, its intended but I don't remember why I did that. (bruh)

[@agentoverheaven580]

Some pretty good stuff. Working on one myself, but as a total beginner I need the tools for this such as the soundfonts and audio visualizer... Would you mind sharing yours by any chance?

[@nuttaponpanyasit5966]

for DAW I use LMMS if you want to use it I'd recommend the nightly version (it has more functions) The MIDI Visualizer I use MIDITrail for the soundfonts, I got it from Orange's Video kzbin.info/www/bejne/Y3-WeGujeK53jM0