The problem is that the director loses too much time in every scene. Lacks dynamics. Need to be remade till perfection. 🎉❤

Thank you for brightening my day.

Filmed in or near Quincy, MA?.

I enjoyed this very very much. Provoking. Thank you for uploading.

I have a good idea for a twilight zone episode. A guy robs a store and runs out then gets in a shootout with police, he loses the cops then gets on bus. He feels relieved that he got away, on the bus is him and a bunch of old people they all get off the bus at the next stop, but he stays on the bus but as the bus makes more stops along the way it picks up angry and sometimes violent commuters. The guy decides the people on the bus are too dangerous and tries to signal for the bus to stop but the bus driver doesnt stop or say anything and then eventually everyone on the bus starts freaking out and fighting when they realize they are all dead and the bus is taking them all to hell.

Yeh! I agree dialog characters and story. Did not agree with, "people are not sure what's on the other side, do not realize it could be better than what it was" be careful here, you don't want people giving up on life for a chance at a happy eternity. My 2 cents worth. Thankyou utube for that.

Great work! I loved it <3

As soon as i saw the guy with the white shirt i was like “Oh your dead“ the pizza line killed.

I think I truly enjoyed that!

Kinda reminds me of the episode where the old toy maker selling his stuff on a busy street corner soon sees Murray Hamilton in his apartment, and is told of his impending "demise", then the little girl gets injured, and so the old man has to make that "pitch for the angels" in order to try to delay "death" from taking her. Once he's finished with his sales pitch, the girl comes to, and the old man is escorted "up there" as originally scheduled.

wonderful

This was really good until they went from God to systemic racism.. The country has come a long way from black/white restrooms..The white liberals are the big problem falsifying stats indoctrination children and driving a wedge between black and white that doesn't exist in the magnitude portrayed by these diabolical fascists..The more they divide the more they conquer...My point at this point we know how bad systemic racism was, so let's make things that show the true love there is between all Americans..

Turn back! Don’t watch!! Brain cells are sure to die!!! Dumbest film ever!

being honest i usually don't like fan films but this was done very very well i loved it

THAT WAS *IGNORANT* !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Follow me, so he walks behind him and 'follows' him.

Follow me, so he walks behind him and 'follows' him.

This is really beautiful.

I wish they would put all the old ones on, they were the best when I was growing up.the newer ones are ok but it’s not the same as the old black white ones.it was better acting with the older generation.twlight zone, tales from the crypt.the dark side.

Cool show of love

Well that was stupid.. got about 7 minutes and then had to quit, no patience

this was excellent. i wish someone would remake the episode the odyessy of flight 33

Reminds me of death takes a holiday. Good job 😁

Great story, but it shouldn't have a narrative behind it

There's a deeper meaning I don't think anyone else noticed.

Well done...I’ll like it

I had chills and was blown away by your great film. I am a big fan of the original twilight zone and I loved this. Thank you ❤️

camera work was good. music selection was awesome. screenplay could use a little help. The acting was ok. all around I give it 8 out of 10. I would love to see more

I really like this, even if we don't consider it's amateur film, the acting is awesome. But there are all those easily avoidable mistakes. I am no expert, and I hope it won't sound as if I want to mock you, but it's so hard to not see these mistakes, because they are so glaring, partly because the rest is so good. 1) You are using the static shot, as the original did, but it is still not used as much as it should. 2) That stock footage looks so out of place. Especially in the forest, I doubt they would see a shore and a field. Is it hard to find some forest stream, a footage of city skyline, amateur baseball game and of group of people in charity T-shirts doing some work? 3) That's just a stop sign, not a bus stop sign. 4) When is this supposed to take place. Is it during Jim Crow era? That would be against the background, clothing, or even the fact that people dying on bike or using helmet wasn't really a common thing until 70s. Is it just the Space in Between messing up the reality? If so, then why isn't it happening elsewhere? What are the rule of Space in Between? 5) Try either limiting the background noise, or use just one microphone in one place. It's weird to hear the background noise changing between camera angels. 6) Why is death surprised by finding out about prejudice and poverty? Wouldn't he be the one who cleans up after lynchings and overdoses? Again, the story, acting and camera work are phenomenal, but those mistakes were so easily to avoid. If you ever reshoot this movie or make a new one, please consider those tips. Thank you and keep up the good work

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I enjoyed this very much , and i bet mr Serling would have also.

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The music is a pain in the backside .

I think that if this episode were in black and white it would be even better . It would then be identical with other Twilight Zone episodes. The spirit of Rod Serling lives on.

Your a fraud. You should be fined ALOT!!!!! FLAG

Very very good.

Wow...SYC....south Boston yacht club. Weymouth beach Quincy mass.

4-1/2 minutes in, and I had to check the credits. How come that noisy bird didn't get a listing in the credits? He was louder than Robert.

The world is imperfect because of sin.

I wonder where this was shot

Very nicely done for a limited budget/non professional effort. Unfortunately I missed the “point” of the story however.

Boring.😌

not bad there's some good acting here in this video, well done guys,

This was so good, I cant beleive I haven't seen it somehow.😁