THE SPACE BETWEEN (TWILIGHT ZONE FAN FILM)

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Archaic Films

Archaic Films

10 жыл бұрын

A tribute/addition to the immortal series "The Twilight Zone", created by Rod Serling.
Produced, Written, and Directed by Jake Aaron
Starring:
Kinson Theodoris as Robert
Charles Edwards as James
We hope you enjoy it!
This short film is not intended to infringe copyright and is simply for entertainment purposes only. Filmed in 2013.
KINSON'S CHANNEL: / thehonestactor

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@sammydogg123
@sammydogg123 5 жыл бұрын
This sort of reminded me of the one where the old man and his dog were trying to get into heaven and the one gate wouldn't take his dog. So he moved on till he found the real heaven.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
That's one of my favorites!
@onnislee1
@onnislee1 2 жыл бұрын
What's the name of the movie?
@sammydogg123
@sammydogg123 2 жыл бұрын
@@onnislee1 It was an old twilight zone.
@onnislee1
@onnislee1 2 жыл бұрын
@@sammydogg123 is it called The Hunt?
@sammydogg123
@sammydogg123 2 жыл бұрын
@@onnislee1 I think so. A guy and his dog go coon hunting but the both drowned and ended up of the other side trying to find heaven.
@markheller197
@markheller197 5 жыл бұрын
It’s all in the music! Totally creates the mood.
@anothonypeterson3402
@anothonypeterson3402 4 жыл бұрын
Love the T.Z. music from episode 'Willoughby'! ...TONY
@johnallen2771
@johnallen2771 5 жыл бұрын
Pretty good effort I must say. I've written many short stories that I thought were worthy of TZ, but alas, never was accepted. But I've had more than 500 mag and paper articles published so I know this is good script writing. Remember when Robert Redford was Death, and he was after the old lady hiding in her basement?
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much!
@roymerritt6992
@roymerritt6992 5 жыл бұрын
You must be an old fellow like me to remember that one. The most notable thing about that particular episode was that despite the old lady being aware of Death stalking her it was his appeal to her humanity that convinced her to open her door and allow Death in. If you recall she heard some disturbing activity outside and a gunshot. Redford in the guise of the cop convinces her that he is wounded and needs assistance lest he himself dies. Once inside he eventually reveals to her that death is a natural part of life itself and she shouldn't fear it, but welcome the relief of it after a long life. He shows her her peaceful corpse and she at lasts accompanies him into the realm of the Dead.
@johnallen2771
@johnallen2771 5 жыл бұрын
For black you must have white. For day you must have night. For life you must have death. It makes so much sense that I don't know why more people don't think this way.
@roymerritt6992
@roymerritt6992 5 жыл бұрын
@@johnallen2771 Of course its a natural instinct to be frightened of the prospect, or should I say the inevitably of death, which is more the fear of the unknown than the fact of dying itself other than expecting it to be painful if it results from a terrible accident, violence, or a disease that has made the fact of existence a painful experience. What a person should understand is if it is a painful transition it will no doubt be very brief at the fateful moment of one's demise unless certainly they have been suffering from a devastating illness which in many cases death is a perpetual respite from the pain of that illness. But the fact of the matter is the idea of it not being as much a part of life is a ludicrous thought lest the earth would so over crowded that it would become a hellish experience to exist without the relief of death. It would necessitate humanity no longer procreating and passing along their genetic makeup which is instinctual to all mammals which humans most certainly are. Some religious types might perceive there is some punishment for the type of life they lived, but I'm not one who holds to that notion considering religion a mythology that is simply a man made construct whose manifestation merely a way for powerful individuals and groups to control people and relieve them of their hard earned money. What death is illustrative of is the Yin and Yang of existence. I'm inclined to think life is a perpetual process for whatever purpose because we know that energy never dies but rather merely dissipates over time. An argument for reincarnation perhaps. A way of having every life form to experience the entire panoply of existence again for whatever purpose. Whether this is the result of some deity or higher life form endeavoring to make all to appreciate it from the moment of their current revelation is a subject for debate I suppose. Or it may well simply be as Oxford Philosophical physicist Nick Bostrum proposes and speculates there is a 20% likelihood of that we are all sentient beings living in a post human simulation to understand how humanity arrived at their present circumstance.
@sammydogg123
@sammydogg123 5 жыл бұрын
@@roymerritt6992 That part at the end may be true. But souls are just recycled and come back eventually. For the people that have souls on this planet.
@davidsusskin1545
@davidsusskin1545 3 ай бұрын
Thank you for brightening my day.
@Proudtrekkie96
@Proudtrekkie96 7 жыл бұрын
Honestly I wasn't expecting the ending I loved it. Kind of reminds of the One night at Mercy in the 2000s version where death takes a vacation. Good job!
@moonspots01
@moonspots01 5 жыл бұрын
Very good. TWZ is all about dialog, characters, and story. Not special effects and big scenes. You did great capturing the essence of Serling's work.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
I tried! Thanks for the kind words.
@100forks
@100forks 5 жыл бұрын
I think Serling would be proud.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
I could only hope!
@Lifeformhuman
@Lifeformhuman 5 жыл бұрын
I enjoyed the show. You captured the twilight zone atmosphere and message. Hope you continue!
@michaelmorgan7893
@michaelmorgan7893 Жыл бұрын
Kinda reminds me of the episode where the old toy maker selling his stuff on a busy street corner soon sees Murray Hamilton in his apartment, and is told of his impending "demise", then the little girl gets injured, and so the old man has to make that "pitch for the angels" in order to try to delay "death" from taking her. Once he's finished with his sales pitch, the girl comes to, and the old man is escorted "up there" as originally scheduled.
@joegoedhart1259
@joegoedhart1259 2 жыл бұрын
Follow me, so he walks behind him and 'follows' him.
@galemartinezganojo
@galemartinezganojo 3 жыл бұрын
I had chills and was blown away by your great film. I am a big fan of the original twilight zone and I loved this. Thank you ❤️
@stoneymorris5366
@stoneymorris5366 5 ай бұрын
I enjoyed this very very much. Provoking. Thank you for uploading.
@roger.e.lareau4556
@roger.e.lareau4556 3 жыл бұрын
I think that if this episode were in black and white it would be even better . It would then be identical with other Twilight Zone episodes. The spirit of Rod Serling lives on.
@deliveryguy7402
@deliveryguy7402 Жыл бұрын
I think I truly enjoyed that!
@mikeyboo5603
@mikeyboo5603 3 жыл бұрын
A ruminative story, reminiscent of Earl Hamner's work. Haunting.
@rebeccatanner2740
@rebeccatanner2740 6 жыл бұрын
😊 thank you. Lovely tale. Thank you for putting up 😊🌺😊
@Stgfre
@Stgfre 8 жыл бұрын
A very good Twilight Zone parody.
@R.F.9847
@R.F.9847 5 жыл бұрын
I don't think "parody" is the right word here. "Homage" would be a better choice.
@carmellathomas2516
@carmellathomas2516 2 жыл бұрын
Reminds me of death takes a holiday. Good job 😁
@joex17
@joex17 5 жыл бұрын
watching and enjoying the film when suddenly I see SYC in the background - shot right down the street from my house! --- excellent writing, and acting - actually sorry it took me so long to "discover" your channel ---- if you ever need extras please give me a yell - thanks again for a neat escape!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks! Glad you recognized home!
@prettypointlessvideo
@prettypointlessvideo 2 жыл бұрын
Please where was this shot? Greetings from U.K
@ExposingTheOldWorldOrder
@ExposingTheOldWorldOrder 9 ай бұрын
I have a good idea for a twilight zone episode. A guy robs a store and runs out then gets in a shootout with police, he loses the cops then gets on bus. He feels relieved that he got away, on the bus is him and a bunch of old people they all get off the bus at the next stop, but he stays on the bus but as the bus makes more stops along the way it picks up angry and sometimes violent commuters. The guy decides the people on the bus are too dangerous and tries to signal for the bus to stop but the bus driver doesnt stop or say anything and then eventually everyone on the bus starts freaking out and fighting when they realize they are all dead and the bus is taking them all to hell.
@gregoryreese8491
@gregoryreese8491 4 жыл бұрын
A small thing, hardly noticeable, but very cool. The fade where, in the "old days", the commercial break would have occurred , was perfectly placed! It really adds to the feeling of authenticity.
@QuizmasterLaw
@QuizmasterLaw 3 жыл бұрын
This is worth watching.
@piusmurray6378
@piusmurray6378 5 жыл бұрын
A formidable paen to the Twilight Zone! Excellent plot, with very good acting. The one surprise for me was the discussion between Robert and James in the Church. First of all, I was surprised that it took place in a church of all places; (the Grim Reaper is not necessarily linked to churches). I suspect that the scene is a very Twilight Zone-esque twist and is to be commended. More surprising though was James's response to Robert's question "why is your world so ... very imperfect?" James's responds that we do not like change. I suppose that answer fits the plot (change/death) but I was expecting a response concerning the exercise of free will (given the scene's placement in a church). That latter response however might have required the ending to be structured differently. Great job on this video! 4 stars (****)!!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot! Making this was a valuable experience for me. I learned a lot from this, and have grown my skills quite a bit in the years since.
@jmflyer55
@jmflyer55 10 жыл бұрын
This is an really interesting short film. The script is very well written and the shoot and cinematography done is excellent considering the lack of a set and a budget. The actors did quite well. I'd be interested to know what kind of equipment you shot this on and also if there were any special filters used especially in the "sun-ray" shots.. The depth of field (f-stop) on some of the shots is outstanding and were done with an eye for artistry. If there are any big name directors who see this, take this young man under your wing as he's a natural talent and an excellent writer. Thanks for posting, JM
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 10 жыл бұрын
It was shot on a Canon T2i, and aside from some color correction, no special filters were really used. All lens flares you see as an effect from the sun are 100% genuine as we tried to shoot during "the golden hour" quite often.
@jmflyer55
@jmflyer55 10 жыл бұрын
aFilmByJake Thanks for the tech info. The only thing I forgot to mention in my previous post was how well I thought it was edited and/or put together post production. The film flows nicely from scene to scene without anything getting lost in the mix. A good clear story line right through to the end of the film.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 10 жыл бұрын
jmflyer55 Thanks again, but this wouldn't have been possible without my actors. I'm glad I had two experienced friends who worked off of each other well and played the characters exactly how I envisioned them.
@cpountney3882
@cpountney3882 Жыл бұрын
Yeh! I agree dialog characters and story. Did not agree with, "people are not sure what's on the other side, do not realize it could be better than what it was" be careful here, you don't want people giving up on life for a chance at a happy eternity. My 2 cents worth. Thankyou utube for that.
@aliced7505
@aliced7505 3 жыл бұрын
4-1/2 minutes in, and I had to check the credits. How come that noisy bird didn't get a listing in the credits? He was louder than Robert.
@asully3006
@asully3006 5 жыл бұрын
I have a lot of time on my hands. I see potential in Kinson and Charles.
@stepanotrisal1512
@stepanotrisal1512 3 жыл бұрын
I really like this, even if we don't consider it's amateur film, the acting is awesome. But there are all those easily avoidable mistakes. I am no expert, and I hope it won't sound as if I want to mock you, but it's so hard to not see these mistakes, because they are so glaring, partly because the rest is so good. 1) You are using the static shot, as the original did, but it is still not used as much as it should. 2) That stock footage looks so out of place. Especially in the forest, I doubt they would see a shore and a field. Is it hard to find some forest stream, a footage of city skyline, amateur baseball game and of group of people in charity T-shirts doing some work? 3) That's just a stop sign, not a bus stop sign. 4) When is this supposed to take place. Is it during Jim Crow era? That would be against the background, clothing, or even the fact that people dying on bike or using helmet wasn't really a common thing until 70s. Is it just the Space in Between messing up the reality? If so, then why isn't it happening elsewhere? What are the rule of Space in Between? 5) Try either limiting the background noise, or use just one microphone in one place. It's weird to hear the background noise changing between camera angels. 6) Why is death surprised by finding out about prejudice and poverty? Wouldn't he be the one who cleans up after lynchings and overdoses? Again, the story, acting and camera work are phenomenal, but those mistakes were so easily to avoid. If you ever reshoot this movie or make a new one, please consider those tips. Thank you and keep up the good work
@hadassahrose8295
@hadassahrose8295 5 жыл бұрын
Wonderful actors. Thank you.
@tmomanon5521
@tmomanon5521 Жыл бұрын
wonderful
@anonymous-zn5em
@anonymous-zn5em 5 жыл бұрын
Wow! What a head-spinner... A great piece of work.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you! This was a real learning experience for me.
@WorgenGrrl
@WorgenGrrl 3 жыл бұрын
I wonder where this was shot
@mofarrell90
@mofarrell90 5 жыл бұрын
The actor's delivered there lines like Robots, cold, mechanical ,and with out life !
@martyzielinski2469
@martyzielinski2469 3 жыл бұрын
Not professional actors.......but they did OK for amateurs.
@tamarajimenez5861
@tamarajimenez5861 2 жыл бұрын
Like you can do better
@TheKonga88
@TheKonga88 5 жыл бұрын
More dollies and less frogs to put the money in the account for the family to stay at a hotel but Lironza spoke to the Martians so all is fine.. 👽👽👽🏃🏃🏃🏃🐙🐙🏩🏩😕😀😀🐸🐸🐸🐸
@SwarthySkinnedOne
@SwarthySkinnedOne 5 жыл бұрын
Pretty good TZish plot. The mood fits. Wouldn't have hurt if there'd been an intro and ending voice-over brief narrative. Not use to seeing the T zone in color. Think they should all be in B&W. Make a voice-over beginning and ending statement to this. Would be VERY nice:)
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks! I made quite a few mistakes, indeed, but this was a great learning process. In the years since, I'm happy to say my sensibilities have improved!
@SwarthySkinnedOne
@SwarthySkinnedOne 5 жыл бұрын
Archaic Films Well, you're not too far off the mark. That exchange of places at the end was the way Serling would do. So that was apt. Good job there man. If you keep them in color, will take some important adjustment to get use to it, for those of us very use to seeing the originals in B n W. (Really...I'm not so certain if color can do as much Justice as B n W has - that nice moody filmy black and white and grey that goes so well in the Twilight Zone Universe. Creates a distance and remoteness, it seems, to make the mysteriousness of it all just right. And Please try to work out very intelligent succinct voice over intro and ending statements. That would Surely move it much closer to the Serling way of placing us into the wondrous land of imagination... Looking forward to checking out more:)
@michaelwayne1012
@michaelwayne1012 5 жыл бұрын
It wasn't bad at all. Just a voice over beginning and ending & That would be the final touch....... well done. Do you have more..... ?
@SwarthySkinnedOne
@SwarthySkinnedOne 5 жыл бұрын
Archaic Films And on the "mistakes" bit, well mastering the violin dosen't happen by day's end, first picked up in the morn. So don't fret. Serling made mistakes also. His frequent complaint on the TZ was "lack of consistency", qualitywise. I agreed. Because although most of his episodes were good, some of them were, well...you can take them or leave 'em. But then again he had to contend with budget limits and sponsor and network censorship issues, as well as fatigue (the guy would work like 15 hours a day). And there were some mistakes he saw he didn't like, that I'm glad he didn't alter or remove as they, in my book, were just right for the occasion...Yeah, a lot of it is subjective also.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
@@michaelwayne1012 Not yet! Perhaps another venture will come about :)
@jeremiahbucko4597
@jeremiahbucko4597 Жыл бұрын
being honest i usually don't like fan films but this was done very very well i loved it
@jaycoster8471
@jaycoster8471 5 жыл бұрын
The Space Between is now on IMDB to be rated and reviewed www.imdb.com/title/tt9158282/
@dobeus8957
@dobeus8957 5 жыл бұрын
Wow... I loved this
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much!
@wesseavey
@wesseavey 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much, ...that was excellent
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot!
@michaellatta7699
@michaellatta7699 3 жыл бұрын
This is still in the algorithm. I love how they used the original music.
@scummymummy2548
@scummymummy2548 3 жыл бұрын
What's algorithm? I'm 7 and don't know what that means...
@michaellatta7699
@michaellatta7699 3 жыл бұрын
@@scummymummy2548 it means the computer sees what you like and randomly puts videos that are close to it. Hope that helps😋
@awaren8375
@awaren8375 5 жыл бұрын
will say it's a Twilight Zone tribute and will get a lot of views
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@DihelsonMendonca
@DihelsonMendonca 22 күн бұрын
The problem is that the director loses too much time in every scene. Lacks dynamics. Need to be remade till perfection. 🎉❤
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 13 күн бұрын
Agreed. Making this short was a big learning experience for me ten years ago. Have come a long way since. Thank you for watching!
@Otokichi786
@Otokichi786 5 жыл бұрын
Rod Serling and Bernard Herrmann salute you!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
I could only wish!
@dangeroreilly2028
@dangeroreilly2028 5 жыл бұрын
Well done. Reminds me of "Between two Worlds" 1944, with John Garfield.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
I'm glad you feel that way! Much appreciated!
@lololtrollyou
@lololtrollyou 10 жыл бұрын
Good stuff! Keep it up.
@stoneymorris5366
@stoneymorris5366 5 ай бұрын
Filmed in or near Quincy, MA?.
@xokbrxo
@xokbrxo 10 жыл бұрын
This was absolutely amazing, great job guys!! Can't wait for the next one.
@kendannibale5417
@kendannibale5417 3 жыл бұрын
Brilliant, well done.
@janespencer7121
@janespencer7121 Жыл бұрын
Great work! I loved it
@christianradioE5
@christianradioE5 3 жыл бұрын
Bravo !! Amazingly well done !!
@R.F.9847
@R.F.9847 5 жыл бұрын
Well done! Rod Serling would approve. If not for the cinematography and time setting, I would believe this really was an episode from the original run.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you! This was a real stepping stone for me, made several years ago. I learned a lot from making this.
@melaniekeeling7462
@melaniekeeling7462 2 жыл бұрын
This is really beautiful.
@paulettescott1310
@paulettescott1310 5 жыл бұрын
Nice piece of work. Keep it up and you might get somewhere with your talent.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
You're too kind. Thank you.
@paulettescott1310
@paulettescott1310 5 жыл бұрын
@@aFilmByJakethank you for sharing your talent.
@gregoryreese8491
@gregoryreese8491 4 жыл бұрын
My one small criticism would be the acting, not terrible by any means, but a bit stiff; one can easily find examples of even poorer acting on the original program! The rest, atmosphere, camera work, dialogue and plotting were, honestly, top notch!
@audreymcginnis8370
@audreymcginnis8370 3 жыл бұрын
This was so good, I cant beleive I haven't seen it somehow.😁
@Whitecat151
@Whitecat151 5 жыл бұрын
Outstanding! If the end is like this, then maybe my worries are all for nothing important... :)
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much!
@bloodyblade916
@bloodyblade916 3 жыл бұрын
not bad there's some good acting here in this video, well done guys,
@joematus410
@joematus410 2 жыл бұрын
Cool show of love
@ic07291
@ic07291 2 жыл бұрын
Great story, but it shouldn't have a narrative behind it
@trevormiles5852
@trevormiles5852 5 жыл бұрын
Do an other one.... is about the best compliment I can come up with... i enjoyed it. now.. going out for pizza.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Maybe sometime soon!
@randymiller1074
@randymiller1074 2 жыл бұрын
I wish they would put all the old ones on, they were the best when I was growing up.the newer ones are ok but it’s not the same as the old black white ones.it was better acting with the older generation.twlight zone, tales from the crypt.the dark side.
@mastertek383
@mastertek383 5 жыл бұрын
White balance
@kazilziya830
@kazilziya830 3 жыл бұрын
I enjoyed this very much , and i bet mr Serling would have also.
@raygrange7312
@raygrange7312 3 жыл бұрын
Very very good.
@stephenmiller3939
@stephenmiller3939 5 жыл бұрын
A very good job!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@kaiser9287
@kaiser9287 5 жыл бұрын
I only wish there was an intro and ending sequence. Other than that, this is easily 4.75 stars!
@jimmymaximusace
@jimmymaximusace 5 жыл бұрын
Awesome
@23lboogs
@23lboogs 10 жыл бұрын
I never seen the original making of the film, but this film caught my attention and with the limited amount of resources you acquired you made it a great film. And to the actors in the film, y'all got some skills looking like Will Smith and Denzel came together to reminisce from past experiences. Great Job!!!....I can see a bright future for all of the cast and staff in this film. PS: Where can I get a Pizza like that?! it made me hungry
@panamarose9494
@panamarose9494 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching!
@dianacassinelli4932
@dianacassinelli4932 2 жыл бұрын
Well done...I’ll like it
@kelvintorrence5994
@kelvintorrence5994 5 жыл бұрын
Excellent job great job
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Also, what led you to the video? I've gotten quite the boost in views lately and was wondering if this was linked somewhere.
@lauriem5751
@lauriem5751 5 жыл бұрын
Should have been done in black and white, otherwise very good!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
One of my regrets, but thank you!
@guesswhosimon6766
@guesswhosimon6766 5 жыл бұрын
@@aFilmByJake it is fine just way it is. Helll, if it was shot in black and white, these dumb heads would still complain. 🤔🤔🤔
@larrytruelove7112
@larrytruelove7112 5 жыл бұрын
It’s pretty good, considering the limitations. Conjuring 1950-1960’s automobiles would be nearly impossible. However, the clothes and dress styles of the 1950’s or 60’s could be done. Music was good. The music felt Twilight Zone-ish. I’m not sure pizza became a restaurant staple that early but I might be wrong. I suggest hamburgers. The white guy early in the movie was wearing shorts that were casual type fashion at a later date. Polite gentlemen tucked their shirt inside their pants in the 50’s. James let his untucked. That happened later. And gentlemen would more likely have worn white shirts. Ties would have been skinny ties. I saw magnolia or laurel leaves, indicating this was in the south, which was segregated. Shirt sleeves would have been short in the warm weather. I can understand “Death” being more formal in his speech. But the clients would have been more casual in speech, I would think. Good job for not being professional in the full time sense. Camera work was awesome!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks for all your feedback!
@jtenrec1
@jtenrec1 5 жыл бұрын
Nicely done.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@kennethrisner8648
@kennethrisner8648 2 жыл бұрын
this was excellent. i wish someone would remake the episode the odyessy of flight 33
@mf77francis9
@mf77francis9 5 жыл бұрын
good. thank you
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thank YOU!
@johnlivingston9217
@johnlivingston9217 5 жыл бұрын
Pretty good sketch.
@tectonicD
@tectonicD 5 жыл бұрын
Filming location?
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Several different communities just outside the Boston area
@tectonicD
@tectonicD 5 жыл бұрын
Archaic Films thank you! This is GREAT!
@themoviemaniac8416
@themoviemaniac8416 5 жыл бұрын
Turned off the color, and it worked.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
I'm glad to hear that!
@princessstokes975
@princessstokes975 3 жыл бұрын
Mental Programs
@janetwestwood9194
@janetwestwood9194 3 жыл бұрын
🤔👍🇬🇧
@bhakkawazoe9596
@bhakkawazoe9596 2 жыл бұрын
There's a deeper meaning I don't think anyone else noticed.
@godsbeast.69
@godsbeast.69 5 жыл бұрын
Big fan of twilight zone. Your movie came up within the search. I thought really well made. The acting was just like character’s from original episodes. Very impressive. Really enjoyed the storyline. Very original While keeping to the whole twilight plot. Are you guy’s still film making.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Still going at it! Thank you so much.
@clvanhorne7841
@clvanhorne7841 5 жыл бұрын
Nice.
@solidgroundmusic
@solidgroundmusic 3 жыл бұрын
camera work was good. music selection was awesome. screenplay could use a little help. The acting was ok. all around I give it 8 out of 10. I would love to see more
@splash5150izy
@splash5150izy 5 жыл бұрын
The Legend Goes When The World Was First Created There Were 13 God's But Only 12 Were Aquainted, So One Day They Decided To Invite The Stranger To A Banquet, A Decision They Would Inevitably Regret As The Thirteenth God Was Death :P] .. .
@MrTwenty20video
@MrTwenty20video 3 жыл бұрын
✔☺
@martyzielinski2469
@martyzielinski2469 3 жыл бұрын
Very nicely done for a limited budget/non professional effort. Unfortunately I missed the “point” of the story however.
@bud...wise...ass.
@bud...wise...ass. 3 жыл бұрын
Wow...SYC....south Boston yacht club. Weymouth beach Quincy mass.
@craigcorson3036
@craigcorson3036 5 жыл бұрын
Apart from the truly awful makeup job on Mr. Hannigan's bloody face, and a few spots where the mostly wonderful sound track needed some additional tweaking, not a bad little film. I like the title, too. Reminded me of a poem by Alexander Pope. Let me share it with you: Placed on this isthmus of a middle state, A being darkly wise and rudely great... He hangs between, in doubt to act or rest; In doubt to deem himself a god, or beast; In doubt his mind or body to prefer; Born but to die, and reasoning but to err. I hope that you like it.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the kind words! It was an early effort in my tenure. A true learning experience!
@craigcorson3036
@craigcorson3036 5 жыл бұрын
@@aFilmByJake Yes, I noticed that it was five years old. I'm going to have to take a look at some of your more recent work. Hope you enjoyed the poem.
@tomdooley3522
@tomdooley3522 3 жыл бұрын
The music is a pain in the backside .
@davidfaumuina9866
@davidfaumuina9866 3 жыл бұрын
The world is imperfect because of sin.
@dianacassinelli4932
@dianacassinelli4932 2 жыл бұрын
We just choose the path we want...at the end Will have our judgement Day
@anothonypeterson3402
@anothonypeterson3402 4 жыл бұрын
Pretty good,but weren't those people chosen to die supposed to be shocked? ,you know like the old man in One for the Angels.
@thelaughinghyenas7962
@thelaughinghyenas7962 10 жыл бұрын
Good in many places but you lost it when you began the element of the prejudice in the South, the Whites Only bench. Every indication was that this took place in the present day, from the necktie on the grim reaper to all the modern cars that passed. You would have needed to work to put it into that time frame. A few signs and some dialogue mentioning President Kennedy and Dr. King could have done it.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 10 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for your criticism, I needed to hear something constructive to work off of, so your comment helped! When shooting, I knew the cars would be distracting if I was trying to give a 60s feel to this, but I felt the suspension of disbelief would help with that. Also, I appreciate your honesty in saying I lost it with the prejudice element. Not all viewers may like that, but I felt I had to tackle a central theme in the film. Thanks for your contribution!
@R.F.9847
@R.F.9847 5 жыл бұрын
Ah. I was a bit confused and thought this took place more or less now, but in some tucked-away corner of the USA where old-fashioned bigotry was still in full force. Given what's going on right now, that's not too far-fetched.
@shelbycole2546
@shelbycole2546 5 жыл бұрын
See the guy at 9 mins walking in the background?
@TheKonga88
@TheKonga88 5 жыл бұрын
It is a frog jumping 🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🏃🏃🏃🏃
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Must have missed it myself!
@brianlewis6249
@brianlewis6249 5 жыл бұрын
Nice made in Boston .
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Indeed!
@tundratomo
@tundratomo 5 жыл бұрын
I was tired of it , five minutes in. Oh well.
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@matthewboyce5123
@matthewboyce5123 2 жыл бұрын
Well that was stupid.. got about 7 minutes and then had to quit, no patience
@williamanthony9090
@williamanthony9090 5 жыл бұрын
Well... It had it's flaws. The worst being the sound. Between the background noise, and the music soundtrack, the actors could barely be understood at times. And what EXACTLY was the story about? Mister Death's ignorance of reality? The dead man's acceptance of his life somehow earned him a "special" place in "The Space Between?" I'm still scratching my head over what I've just watched. If I had to grade it, I'd give it a... ... Well, I'm not going to grade someone else's art. A lot of time and trouble went into this production and, truthfully, critics are a dime a dozen. The best part about this production were the two main actors. Against noise, and a rather muddled script, they kept the story moving forward. My advice, unsolicited as it is, comes down to this-- Keep pursuing your craft! Creativity should always continue on from one project to the next. Thanks for uploading your work for all of us to see. I enjoy watching artists as they practice their craft-- writers, directors, producers, and actors!
@aFilmByJake
@aFilmByJake 5 жыл бұрын
Trust me, looking back I can agree with all your criticisms. This was a big part of my filmmaking journey, so thank you for your feedback! I've grown quite a bit since then.
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