Was this written by a middle schooler?

How specific. I love it

I love it!

sounds nice

YOU FOOLED THE WHOLE GAME>:(

Nice

Bruh this slaps

Hey man, I really like your music. im a roblox game dev, and would you mind if I used your music in some games? All proper credit would be given (yeah, it’s roblox but I promise it’s not horrible like alot of people make it out to be)

Sounds like a house number.....lol.....

The Salt Has Been Summoned

What I had noticed is that it is really repetitive and may bore your audience add more diversity in rhythm with different phrases. I would listen to other cadences online where you can take sections of it and modify them and insert it into your cadence. Also, As a quads player, some of the composition is cumbersome to play, you need to consider what drums to place your rhythms on, for example: the rhythm at measure 17 with the diddles going into the descending 8th notes from drums 2 to 3 is an awkward run, I would change drums 2 and 3 to 3 and 4, this would be easier to play. Besides that, well done on your first ever composition!

Put the accents above the notes stems and stickings (RLRL) below the noteheads. Incorporate dynamics to create more tension and release in the music. I really like the 4 on the floor in the bass drums and the syncopated 16th accents in the upper battery! Keep up the good work! :)

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