ThunderZone Cadence

A cadence I wrote for my school's drumline. This is my first real music piece, and I would appreciate any advice or constructive criticism.
Sheets are here: musescore.com/user/70555960/s...
Channel Links:
Musescore: musescore.com/user/70555960
Newgrounds: potatocat28.newgrounds.com

[@michaelsudduth2405]

Put the accents above the notes stems and stickings (RLRL) below the noteheads. Incorporate dynamics to create more tension and release in the music. I really like the 4 on the floor in the bass drums and the syncopated 16th accents in the upper battery! Keep up the good work! :)

[@potatocat28]

Thanks! I’m pretty new to MuseScore and didn’t know how to do that at the time of making this video, but I’ll try to remember next time!

[@jakerussell135]

me when geometry dash

[@freakyfartspider]

what i thought too

[@Robstar664]

The Golden reference?!?!?

[@unitedstates4125]

What I had noticed is that it is really repetitive and may bore your audience add more diversity in rhythm with different phrases. I would listen to other cadences online where you can take sections of it and modify them and insert it into your cadence. Also, As a quads player, some of the composition is cumbersome to play, you need to consider what drums to place your rhythms on, for example: the rhythm at measure 17 with the diddles going into the descending 8th notes from drums 2 to 3 is an awkward run, I would change drums 2 and 3 to 3 and 4, this would be easier to play. Besides that, well done on your first ever composition!

[@rendonut3655]

Drum cadences are usually supposed to be repetitive, such as jig 2

[@I_Want_Adrenaline]

YOU FOOLED THE WHOLE GAME>:(

[@ChickenMsalad]

Nice

[@Zsullivan27]

Bruh this slaps

[@Lady_Mando]

Was this written by a middle schooler?

[@ROCKNROLLFAN]

Sounds like a house number.....lol.....