It's another take on the bully turning boyfriend story. It's strange that the word 'bully' was used in the title, while in the story was made clear Rory was not a true bully, he was teasing Adam. The story is mainly about all the insecurities that Adam feels and his internal battle between allowing himself to fall for Rory or to flee from him. It's not a very sensational story, it's a story with a slow pase, but I like the story quite a bit, but most would probably say it's just boring.

Why would anyone be friends with Victor if he thought he should know everyone's business.

Bro she never loved him to just leave the wedding not even trying to stand by his side she just up and left and everyone started blaming him for what his friend said she was clearly cheating already she maybe was planning to divorce him after awhile or planned something at the wedding to stop it a woman in love doesn't give up this quick she at least tries to see if the man she loves, loves her back not just leave cause someone said something and what if it was a sick prank would she still blame him even tho it wasn't his fault

This story doesn't make sense.

The pictures really do not fitt the story subject. Like the hosptal picture when its not part of the story until much later in the story. The story itself is great.

RYAN and ELIOT have their own STORES at 34 minutes

This channel’s Clocks Never make any sense. This Is 2025, you don’t need wrong clocks. Clocks have been one of humanity’s first technical innovations. Ok, Maybe it was a sundial. But still!

LOL, all the characters in these stories drink so much coffee, like it's the only beverage on the planet! I'd be bouncing off the ceiling, too! 🙃

But I thought Victor is interested in Jason. So why the shift to Liam and Andrew?

This narrator is confusing …. Not able to understand

Good story, great narrator

Why would viktor care about andrew and liam's fake relationship? I thought he was just after jason?

Good story but in what reality does a boss expect people to work 24/7?

Shannnayes❤😊

Omfg. Grow a goddamn spine and just say the truth.

Beautiful story. It moved me. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

The AI image at 11:17 .. 😬

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I now yearn to ask someone, “was that a flirtation?”

This story has potential but needs some MAJOR editing. There are too many huge inconsistencies and time skips.

I'm not going to lie, I ugly cried at this one.

We need a part 2 😅

точно-точно, давайте продолжение😉🤗

Beaucoup de corrections à apporter!! Il faut relire le texte avant de le publier . Des incohérences et des scènes en doublon!! C’est du travail à moitié fait ça !🤣

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@42:40 isn't 3 arms kind of a strange anatomical oddity? 😂 Love the story though ❤

I agree! Please part 2

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Very sweet story! 😍

Well written & absolutely stunning work. ❤

8:26 why did we go back to the morning after the confession at the coffee shop after they had already decided to have their first date? I’m so confused.

I am confused...and a little stoned. Did the Cafe scene happen twice and in two different ways? If I'm not tripping I like the second café scene better

How about you double check the AI to make sure it doesn't repeat the same lines four million times

I did that, once. Turned out he was waiting for it.

I agree with bornhartberg. This looks/sounds like several drafts mashed together. Like, is the car broken or not? Is Jake wearing his leather jacket or not? When did Alex take the sketch to Jake's place? Where's the convo about Ryan? I do adore that there are 2 first kisses between them, though, that is cute! If they're besties, Jake would also have been to Alex's place before... oops

Chapter 6, His Dick Hurts!

Hey he said, Hey I said… I like Tacos. He gave me a look. high praise from you he said. I know, I said. Now we’re Married.

Scene 7: The unplanned DINNER LOLOL 😂

Like Alex, perhaps the writer should pause a moment before pushing send. Like others, it feels like at least 2 drafts of the same story were mashed together. It was a good story, but confusing when the versions got all tangled up.

I like the storyline. We’ve all accidentally hit “send” on something or sent it to the wrong person. Continuity is really important. I was invested enough to read it twice, for clarity. It seems like there’s a time loop, in two different sections. They have the café meeting twice, and their first kiss twice?

Love this best possible scenario of how a best friend might react to our love for them. FYI there seems to be two versions of the cafe scene. The first one is less detailed so of course I like the second one better.👍🏽

Ring on 18th Bday? Doesn't match the story.🤔

This story seems a bit like a toxic relationship ngl.

I really like the narrator's voice and expressions.

Very enjoyable story. Very well narrated, it's the best.

I honestly can't stand someone getting in my space like don't come in my room without asking don't eat my food without asking like asking isn't gonna kill you you'll get a no 99% of the time but i'll respect you for asking

Elliott kept saying they are the same and how he struggles in the industry. But the whole story, there's no explanation about how they were the same. I didn't see their connection at all. Yes, maybe he didn't directly responsible about the scandal, but he admitted that he can stop it, but he didn't because that could further his career. That means he didn't have a right to basically order Julian to get over it and act like a victim just because Julian can't forgive him. And he also kiss Julian without permission and act like he did him a favor. What?

Enjoyable story!❤😂❤😂

Well this was nice, but there is a part two, right? I need to know what happens next!

The store doesn't make a lot of sense if you're so distraught for what you did you would think you would go out of your way to find this person and ask them for forgiveness but she didn't do that if by a coincidence this person had not come back into your life you would have kept on living not ever looking back at the bullying you did I mean I want to listen to something sexy this is piss me off