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@jokaeru5762 3 сағат бұрын
Hello Pietro! I am trying to download the free PDF but I am not receiving any confirmation in my email after filling information on your website.
@linnerdclayton7030 3 күн бұрын
OK cool
@gabrielsantosbastos5257 6 күн бұрын
This short film was so good
@writeforanimation 3 күн бұрын
One of my favorites!
@lotus630 6 күн бұрын
how to introduce a character in seconds with no dialogue.... Jack Sparrow
@terramidia3d 6 күн бұрын
Always learning from you. Perhaps we can work together at some point, it would be great!
@writeforanimation 6 күн бұрын
Thank you! I have an amazing team, and even though I’m fully occupied at the moment, I’m always eager to collaborate with new artists.
@writeforanimation 7 күн бұрын
Can you think of other ways of introducing a character in a short film?
@RashidMBey 6 күн бұрын
This video packs so much wisdom and fun in such a concise way, and I really appreciate everyone's work on bringing up to a quality to share. A small ask that means a lot: Will you start linking the media you discuss when it comes from small creators you interview or highlight?
@writeforanimation 6 күн бұрын
Absolutely! I've just added an info card during the video and a link to the short film in the video description.
@JohnSnow3 8 күн бұрын
Is one way enough or the more of these ways you give the batter and when it's too much?
@Viewer802 12 күн бұрын
Need a full video with advance tips for anime script writing and breakdown all process 🙏 please with your openion, we need your opinion please 🙏
@writeforanimation 12 күн бұрын
How has storytelling impacted your life?
@gauthami.e 13 күн бұрын
Great breakdown!💫
@TheRoryJohn 13 күн бұрын
Love your videos, thank you for sharing x
@writeforanimation 13 күн бұрын
You are so welcome!
@vilmalazzarini8847 13 күн бұрын
Disney should re-imagining Thumbelina 1994 in CGI animation with sabrina carpenter as the voice of thumbelina, Alex Aiono as the voice of prince cornelius, Nicki Minaj as Mrs toad, James Corden as Jacquimo, Seth MacFarlane as Beetle and Kristin Chenoweth as Mrs Fieldmouse✨🧚♀
@totallynotacultleader 12 күн бұрын
Thumbelina is a Don Bluth film actually! (also I am hoping for new and cool and fresh ideas and for Disney to steer away from remakes)
@theflowerhead 11 күн бұрын
I think it could look lovely, but also I wish to see 2d again.
@vilmalazzarini8847 10 күн бұрын
@@totallynotacultleader the rights are now owned by The Walt Disney Company after they acquired most of 21st Century Fox (including 20th Century Fox).
@monkeyattackedmyass5435 14 күн бұрын
???🚨The FREE How to Write a Short Film PDF Guide link does NOT work. 🚨🤷🏼♂????
@hayden2076 15 күн бұрын
I first saw treasure planet in 2005 after seeing pirates of the Caribbean. It was like the perfect mix of pirates & Star Wars for me. I absolutely loved the movie. I hope they’d make a live action film of it.
@priyashahclass6 16 күн бұрын
This was really insightful! Love it 😄
@kentmessick3457 20 күн бұрын
These suggestions also help to move the plot forward, which is actually the purpose of each scene.
@jessejanssennavarro6211 20 күн бұрын
Encanto: A plain daughter has to find her place inside her magical family that has been separated by generational trauma.
@juliocastillo4189 21 күн бұрын
this is the movie that needs to be done on live action! can make 3 movies out of it
@leoreadss 22 күн бұрын
I love the video! I'd love to read the guide but it seems the link is broken :(
@writeforanimation 20 күн бұрын
Let me check on this, thanks for letting us know
@Francesco_-hy7yo 23 күн бұрын
hi pietro, thanks for the video, may I know your studies or anything else you did to get to work as a writer for animation?
@writeforanimation 20 күн бұрын
Hi! Thanks for your question. My journey started with a love for storytelling, which led me to study screenwriting at the New York Film Academy in LA. There, I connected with industry pros and honed my craft, got into my first internship, offered to work for free on film sets, and kept writing and sharing my script and pitches with friends from the industry.
@Francesco_-hy7yo 20 күн бұрын
@writeforanimation thanks for replying! I discovered that the same school is also here in Italy, I love animation and its writing so I might think about it for my future.
@writeforanimation 20 күн бұрын
@Francesco_-hy7yo Si, fanno alcuni corsi anche in Italia. Se vuoi lavorare in animazione comunque non te li consiglio.
@Francesco_-hy7yo 20 күн бұрын
@@writeforanimation capisco grazie. in Italia dovrebbero esserci altre possibilità per corsi di animazione, anche se non so quanti collegamenti possano avere, nonostante per me ora siano più accessibili
@ArsalanHasnain 23 күн бұрын
Hi Pietro, really like your work, been binging thorugh your videos. I also saw your post on reddit asking for an accountability partner for KZbin so wanted to ask if you are by any chance still interested, would love collaborate with you!
@DasjaPinnix-zv4tm 24 күн бұрын
Wow, this is just what I needed! Thank you both. I have no ties or connections to the industry but I am working on an animated series script that I really believe in. This really helped me.
@StephenHoover-z8u 25 күн бұрын
Thank you for this informative video. I'm a writer (WGA member) and am learning about the animation process. Great videos.
@writeforanimation 25 күн бұрын
Congrats on being a WGA member! And I'm glad you're liking the videos :)
@Sally-op6wr 27 күн бұрын
I just love this movie❤ it reminds me of my childhood
@wunderwalze 29 күн бұрын
No way this is just out here for free
@writeforanimation 29 күн бұрын
:) there's a lot more, feel free to explore our library of videos. And if you want to support the channel, please consider joining the WFA Academy for even more content: writeforanimation.com/academy/
@dv6165 Ай бұрын
I agree with a lot of what you're saying, but let's not undersell story structure. Yes, these books often approach it as a formula or recipe, and that's the wrong way of looking at it. But these do come from best practices in storytelling through the centuries, ever since we first set down around the campfire and asked grampa to tell us once again how he defeated that raging mammoth. Now, these best practices are reciprocal: audiences come to expect certain things from well told stories and we should give it to them (in an original form). That's why it seems so formulaic. I look at story structure the way I look at music theory. Can you write good music without having the knowlegde of music theory? Sure. But great composers understand music theory very well and use it to their advantage. It's a tool box.
@writeforanimation Ай бұрын
I completely agree with you-you couldn’t have said it better. My issue with screenwriting books was that I used them as a form of procrastination.
@pesquisador82 Ай бұрын
Você sabe se Chris Sanders tem alguma religião?
@jonremimuziq Ай бұрын
I'm super excited to see all the amazing short films you and your cohort students come up with !!
@CatPee-tb4gg Ай бұрын
I've been watching you're videos recently about writings and let's just say that I'm a 19 year old guy who wanned to get started on wriding , in this case in my situation , I've already have ideas for an tv show or a comic but the problem is it's an inspiration from other animated series that already existed , I'm just modifying the plots , adding a new character but the same concepts are here and i can tell from myself that i have a wild imagination but when I'm trying to come up with original characters , scene , plot and concept my mind is just ......stuck I don't know what to do honestly.
@kimcastro3844 Ай бұрын
Whoa. He wrote Penn Zero? Awesome! Thanks for the very helpful video, Mr. Pietro.🥰
@bigolla5073 Ай бұрын
I like the channel very much, but this explainer missed sooooo many things that are critical to the success of this structure as it pertains to this film. I also think without explaining these nuances, you leave out the most important aspect of the structure.... which is the WHY for each major plot point... The "WHY" makes each each part of the structure transition smoothly. Especially since it has no dialog!
@MoonlightsMuse Ай бұрын
How can you sign up for it?
@writeforanimation Ай бұрын
You can sign up today from writeforanimation.com/academy/ and use Promo Code: OHMYSHORT
@jonnyboy4289 Ай бұрын
Is Ariel from the Little Mermaid a flat character? People complain about her not changing or learning anything from putting everyone in danger by striking a deal with Ursula. I get people say that Ariel doesn't need an arc because she wants to go to the surface due to her fascination and curiosity. But, in the end, she was proven right as the surface world is where she belongs. So, Triton has to learn to let her go and be independent and Sabastain develops a new point a view about Prince Eric, especially in the 3rd act where Ariel and the gang find out that Eric breaking up with Ariel was really due to him being hypnotized by Ursula in disguise trying to sabatoge the deal. But, at the same time, Ariel struck a deal with Ursula, the villain. We all make mistakes. But, you need to learn and grow from your mistakes.
@HlaAmrAdel Ай бұрын
Small question! If you don't mind... " Can anybody in different ages join this course or is there a certain ago who can join this course or even write for animation academy for general?" Because truly you guys are the best ❤❤❤❤❤❤
@writeforanimation Ай бұрын
I would recommend this for ages 15 and older. If you’re underage, it’s important to have your parents sign up on your behalf.
@storyshayleen Ай бұрын
Greatttt video, Pietro and team!
@JetPuff96 Ай бұрын
Made me feel better about my screenplay, and I love your snoopy shirt.
@matthewlavagna6080 Ай бұрын
Watch movies. Read screenplays. Write.
@adriannadraws2018 Ай бұрын
I love to draw too. This person’s thoughts, arts and personality make me fall in love with him.
@adriannadraws2018 Ай бұрын
I think that this person’s value is gold, one of my favorite producer. I can absolutely relate to all of his characters of Disney cartoons. I wish I could meet him once.🩷✨
@myautobiographyafanfic1413 Ай бұрын
US American films (even your examples) are filtered through these books by procuders, while the "wisdom" is incestuously spread among US American writers to the point that every single US American films message is "it's better to live x way/do or be x than to live y way/do or be y" Literature, and films from non-english speaking countries actually have more depth than that. But what really frustrates me the most is when "the heroes journey" is presented as proto-save-the-cat, prescriptive structural guidelines. The heroes journey is a glossary of mythic motifs interpreted through a Jungian lens to work out their function
@victorgutierrezmelian Ай бұрын
Thank you for this video. I really needed to listen all that advice.
@writeforanimation Ай бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@Crude8s Ай бұрын
Just curious, but what if you’re making a twist villain then how would you introduce them?
@valhatan3907 Ай бұрын
04:54 I'm strongly agree with this. There's writing approach that I don't align with Hollywood/western way, that's why I lean toward works from Japan for example, Ghibli. Some of their scenes are as mundane as wearing shoe, walking through one setting to another setting, or climbing the stairs. But it made me feel more immersive to the story and character.
@Tacom4ster Ай бұрын
"Save The Cat" is a crap book, like I would not follow the guy that wrote "Blank Check"
@dv6165 Ай бұрын
So you have written and sold a better movie that was produced and had a theatrical release? If not, maybe withhold your judgement. It'll make you look wiser.
@writeforanimation Ай бұрын
I think it's a great book once you understand storytelling. The problem is that it can give you the illusion of understanding story. It's common to get notes from execs like "your act break come a little late" Just because they've learned that it should happen on page 21 from Save the Cat.
@writeforanimation Ай бұрын
Hey @tacom4ster, I get what you mean about wiring books. Many of them are written by people who’ve never seen their stuff come to life. I haven’t seen ‘Blank Check’, but I don’t think it’s a good way to judge the book’s quality. There are so many things that can go wrong with a good script and turn it into a bad movie. Even when the writer is also the producer or director. But I do agree that it's much better to learn from people who have proved to be great storytellers. That's why my awesome team and I are working hard to bring the best animators and writers in the industry to this channel. That way, you can learn from the people behind the movies you love. If you have any ideas for topics or guests, let us know!
@dv6165 26 күн бұрын
@@writeforanimationPage 25, but yes, exactly this! Blake uses great examples from films to prove his points, like how 'The Godfather' has a perfect midpoint. But guess what, 'The Godfather's 1st act break is not on p25. Even if you compensate for length it's 3 to 4 pages late. What you should take from it is: try not to make your 1st act too heavy. You don't need to put all your exposition there. In fact, a great way to expose character traits is when they meet new people in the 2nd act. It allows you to have them talk about themselves casually and not on the nose.
@DDumbrille Ай бұрын
Pietro, I'm listening to this with headphones on, because I live in a house where I can't turn things up enough to hear them at night. And maybe it's just me, but I found the bass or guitar/drum 'soundtrack' REALLY distracting and unnecessary. I hope you'll leave it out next time.
@LuziSantos Ай бұрын
Thank you!
@ZelaurahDD Ай бұрын
wait- so can I create stories like that?
@DDumbrille Ай бұрын
After you write about 6-7 screenplays, you probably can!
@jonremimuziq Ай бұрын
As a composer who loves the storytelling through animation and looks forward to someday (fingers crossed) working with animation stories, this was such a breath of fresh air for me to watch. Tomm Moore's films, especially Wolfwalkers definitely has helped shape how I see visuals telling an added layer to the stories.