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@jolujo5842 10 сағат бұрын
Make sure you narrate competently Stan
@benjackson7872 14 сағат бұрын
Not gonna lie, I thought they’d kiss at the end. Not all have to in these stories, though.
@wehrmacher 16 сағат бұрын
I enjoy your stories and this one is no different. I'd like to see it morf into a sequel. I really like Nala's look; I have a thing for red hair. ;-) I'd also like to see more images as the story progresses.
@robertsuter4671 Күн бұрын
Interesting. All these various beings from different planetary systems mingling, yet entirely separate. Poor marital choices I can understand: those should be avoided at all costs, but racial purity for its own sake would appear to invite stagnation. These two need time alone to grow as a couple before joining the masses once again.just my thoughts.
@TheSci-FiContinuum Күн бұрын
Enjoy the listening!
@TheSci-FiContinuum 2 күн бұрын
Enjoy the listening!
@kenwalker687 3 күн бұрын
Nice story HOWEVER, I can't help but wonder about the authors. This will not make it to a pulp scifi book. Writers need to study high school world history and extrapolate or come up with a believable alternative in a scifi story.
@davidcadman4468 3 күн бұрын
Come on!! this is like a B rated nudist magazine from the 50's or 60's... air brushed the sexuality out of existence... Frustrating for a 16 year old who just found his father's porn collection... seemingly ridiculous for a 77 year old, with memories that transcend the imprecision of your words... Perhaps it is because you have used an A.I. app rather than a creative human mind... You got to do better...
@ivorholtskog5506 3 күн бұрын
Only the politicians can speak and come to a political peace.
@johnmoore8016 3 күн бұрын
A very good story. two people who didn't know each other at first, with one wanting to learn about humans, then they help with peace between themselves and other species. Thanks for the story. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
@TheSci-FiContinuum 3 күн бұрын
Enjoy the listening!
@robertsuter4671 3 күн бұрын
I did. The story wasn’t complex, but it was appealing and the outcome was hopeful. I know that some will quibble because it was far too easy to get into an active research center than it should. It might help for the facility to be abandoned and the tech to be hidden. Just my thoughts.
@TheSci-FiContinuum 3 күн бұрын
Thanks Robert
@TheSci-FiContinuum 5 күн бұрын
Enjoy the listening!
@TheSci-FiContinuum 5 күн бұрын
Enjoy the listening!
@TheSci-FiContinuum 5 күн бұрын
Enjoy the listening!
@HarryDick-h7n 5 күн бұрын
Bow wow chicka bow wow - pizza's here. Let me wrap my head about this: science nerd gets a super sized amount snu-snuing from two beautiful women (most guys' fantasy) and he's complaining? He needs to hang out with Captain Kirk....if Kirk landed in the midst of a mating frenzy involving beautiful alien women, it would take a week to find him and three months to bring him back.
@Morosoph_deLore 5 күн бұрын
He should be awarded a "I survived a Rema Reproduction Craze" tee-shirt.
@TheSci-FiContinuum 5 күн бұрын
Agreed!
@danzielinski5036 5 күн бұрын
cute short romance
@robertsuter4671 6 күн бұрын
Purpose? I suppose you could call it that, although it seems somewhere between an elder’s fantasy and a hero’s tale. More precisely, a “hero” whose average life experiences can liberate entire worlds. This one needs to stay tongue in cheek; however, if there are any sequels, they can touch on the realities of the family dynamics and the children they’ve produced. Just my thoughts.
@TheSci-FiContinuum 6 күн бұрын
Thanks for your feedback!
@peceteve1743 6 күн бұрын
judge: I condemn you to deth by snu snu
@carlmanis879 7 күн бұрын
He is beating on the door let me in and nobody came to the door, can you say setup. His emgerance beacon going off and nobody see it for a day. Lets get mikey.
@kenwalker687 7 күн бұрын
The guy is a rake, I do not like.
@johnmoore8016 7 күн бұрын
This would be a sailor's dream. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
@wehrmacher 7 күн бұрын
I love the story, but you need to show the baby. AI can do anything. ;-)
@johnrettig1880 7 күн бұрын
Apparently this guy is a junior researcher that got locked out HELLO BAIT
@benjackson7872 7 күн бұрын
I wonder why he didn’t wear a condom? Better safe than sorry.
@johnmoore8016 8 күн бұрын
A very good story. I wished that he had went with her back to her world and that they could have been mates, maybe the next chapter you can make it happen. thanks. (Mississippi gulf coast, USA).
@TheSci-FiContinuum 5 күн бұрын
Thanks a lot!
@davidcadman4468 8 күн бұрын
I know a few sites that would allow a fuller, more intense reading of the script. Where lingering kisses and touches exploring each other's precious cores, driving each other to explicit heights of passion. Totally XXX but reality where humanity of the Nards and Humans differences merge in reproductive union. We'll leave it there, for your readers to fill in the known human connection.
@adamfaultersack6158 9 күн бұрын
good story love allways wins!blue lady's need hubbys too lol
@drcovell 9 күн бұрын
Apparent “Sexual harassment” is in the eye of the beholder. 🤼♀️
@johnmoore8016 10 күн бұрын
Even better the second time around. How a story where the alien women had 4-8 babies and show a pictures of them. Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
@DavstrWrexham 10 күн бұрын
I have one thing to say. Randel is a lucky bugger.
@TheSci-FiContinuum 10 күн бұрын
That he is!
@WinstonBarrett-p4e 10 күн бұрын
Exciting!😅
@williamwallace9826 11 күн бұрын
What a ridiculous story. Total Bee Ess.
@markcopeland4344 11 күн бұрын
Where can I find a blue girl for a girl friend?
@uwose 12 күн бұрын
I'm missing completely one part: how did his companions react when they learned that he had met someone?
@nethanelmasters5170 12 күн бұрын
I wonder if the three girl were PG at the end of the cruise. Sounds like they wanted to learn 😉😉 more about humans. But the blond sounded like she wanted to set on his tool again. And both the others wanted to continue their lessons also.
@jimmiekendrick1632 12 күн бұрын
Sprinkler system lol
@davidhall8874 12 күн бұрын
Well, we know they are not earth females who don't want babies nor fuck men.
@Sowhat300 12 күн бұрын
I want to move there😂
@jasondrew5768 12 күн бұрын
1st! Allegedly!😁😁😁😁😁😁
@wehrmacher 12 күн бұрын
Again, I love the story. I'm a Hallmark fan and I think this has a bit of a Hallmark feel. It's easy to see why Asha was chosen. Great work. Keep it up. :-)
@TheSci-FiContinuum 12 күн бұрын
Thanks!
@keith20thSOS 13 күн бұрын
APPARENTLY AI STORY WRITERS NEVER HEARD OF ENGLISH LANGUAGE PUNCTUATIONS, ACCURATE REPEATABLE SPELLING OR GRAMMAR! THUMBS DOWN FOR EXECUTION OF WRITING! HOW MANY DIFFERNT WAYS ARE YOU GOING TO SPELL THE CHARACTERS' NAMES ON THE SCREEN.!??
@petercrawford3370 13 күн бұрын
I know right? Sad.
@TheSci-FiContinuum 13 күн бұрын
Hey. Thanks for the feedback. The function in the video editing software called "Auto Caption" which listens to the audio and turns it into text is sometimes doing a half hearted job. I hope they'll improve the function more. It's a handy tool otherwise
@theloneranger8725 12 күн бұрын
@@TheSci-FiContinuum I have a novel idea. Since this is a story, it was originally written, was it not? Have the text software scan the script and transfer it to the screen, thus creating properly constructed text. Or, if necessary, have an expert actually key (gasp!) the text into the story. Something has to be done. The text in most of these HFY stories is just terrible. Some are so bad that the story cannot be followed by reading the text alone.
@TheSci-FiContinuum 12 күн бұрын
@@theloneranger8725 Thanks for your feedback. I'll bring it back to the others :) We initially wanted to manually text the stories in the video editing software for a proper flow, none volunteered for it after it turned out it was incredible time consuming. Hopefully we can find a good option soon! Thanks again
@johnmoore8016 13 күн бұрын
Very good story. from the looks of the woman she is a sailor's dream when he a long way from home. Glad they found each other. Hope they had a lot of children. Thanks. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
@patrickcreighton5109 13 күн бұрын
Me too., he has a family to care for and he needs to learn how co cook for three. ⚖️
@markhunter9264 14 күн бұрын
If she gathered food from the jungle, why was she starving?
@kevinstorm2167 14 күн бұрын
Stan, I don't know how to say this, but you get stuck on phrases a lot. I swear you have been covered in a bath of maple syrup if I ever hear this phrase again ..anything with "together" in it. Work on some alternate stuff to improve your stories. Otherwise your better than most, that fracking old English guy is used in all the wrong stories.
@keith20thSOS 14 күн бұрын
EVERY TIME THEIR NAMES ARE GIVEN IN THE WRITTEN TEXT, THEY ARE SPELLED DIFFERENTLY! LENO, LETO. LETTO, LINO, ETC ETC ETC, AND META I S MEDDA, MAIDA, , META AND MORE, EVEN HER SPECIES IS SPELLED 20 DIFFERENT WAYS! THIS IS THE PROBLEM WITH TNIS AI BULLSHIT WRITTEN STORIES! REST ASSURED HUMANS, AI IS AS STUPID AS KAMALA HARRIS AND WILL NEVER TAKE OVER!
@davidhall8874 14 күн бұрын
Why the hell did she not go back with the team? I guess the moral of the story is don't explore unknown planets during their mating season!
@robertsuter4671 14 күн бұрын
So the natives are Asthmatics? Bad jokes aside, this story can’t be any more minimalistic. Survival > relationship > decision. I would be pleased to see this expended into a longer narrative so the fate of these two and their child/children could be known. What says the author?
@TheSci-FiContinuum 14 күн бұрын
Thanks for the feedback man. I'll bring it to the team !
@uwose 12 күн бұрын
I'm eager to know: what will their child look like?