I enjoy your stories and this one is no different. I'd like to see it morf into a sequel. I really like Nala's look; I have a thing for red hair. ;-) I'd also like to see more images as the story progresses.
@ivorholtskog550617 күн бұрын
Almost always blue skin.
@benjackson787216 күн бұрын
Must be the writer’s favorite color.
@kevinstorm216714 күн бұрын
Stan, I don't know how to say this, but you get stuck on phrases a lot. I swear you have been covered in a bath of maple syrup if I ever hear this phrase again ..anything with "together" in it. Work on some alternate stuff to improve your stories. Otherwise your better than most, that fracking old English guy is used in all the wrong stories.