The first one was so engaging: So much character development in so few words. None of the characters felt wooden, which is hard to achieve in writing. I agree, I’d love to hear more.
@bigfoxki2 жыл бұрын
Adult's Monster inc
@libertyprime69322 жыл бұрын
It was very cartoony but also really fun
@JosephDCLXVI2 жыл бұрын
I wish there was more...that felt like a netix cancelation
@zaphod33462 жыл бұрын
Do you know who the author is? Or how to find out?
@stephenlyons8589 Жыл бұрын
Scam ATM and card readers are a serious problem in the U.S of A.
@joann31902 жыл бұрын
The first story was amazing! Kudos to the person who wrote it, I felt like I was watching a movie. I wanted it to be longer.
@TalesByMax2 жыл бұрын
u/damon_michaelis says there are more being written
@MastarNinja2 жыл бұрын
Yeah...I'm gonna need a part 2 for the first story too. Got surprisingly invested in the promotional exam of a ghost.
@dawnmidnightsun25212 жыл бұрын
It definitely an interesting take on the 'rules' genre
@helixtropium62692 жыл бұрын
I think I saw a little skit before from a show where it's like a ghost exam! Can't remember the name since I haven't seen it in years
@TalesByMax2 жыл бұрын
u/damon_michaelis is working on more!
@TitaniumAlloyz2 жыл бұрын
In all honesty, "why do you have a gun?" "I'm American!" "We're in Canada!!" Is some of the best dialogue I have heard in a creepypasta.
@maryann38202 жыл бұрын
Is there a part 2 to the first one? I really wanna know who is leaking the rules and what they do about it.
@TalesByMax2 жыл бұрын
u/damon_michaelis is writing more
@lunamajor92642 жыл бұрын
I would love to hear more about the first story.
@MrsCaranAmy2 жыл бұрын
This story collection is great. My favorite is the one about the dead language. I'm having a cup of hot tea. Thank you. Have a marvelous day 💖 🌟 😊
@richiearruda37612 жыл бұрын
Holy crap the first one was amazing!!! That really needs to keep going, the concept is great and it could keep going for a good amount of time seeing as the whole corporate monster theme gives the benefit of being able to use any cryptid or made up monsters they want. Man I really hope the writer plans to continue this story for a while because it is awesome and I truly want to hear more. Bravo on the narration too, I wouldn't want anyone else telling this one.
@darian.ry4132 жыл бұрын
1:57:02 "fresh of breath air" made me chuckle. I love listening to your videos while I play games!💜
@ZaZa-oo3dw2 жыл бұрын
That first story was so well written! Wish there was a part 2
@djpyroteknikz1352 жыл бұрын
Time stamps for mobile device users... ►0:00 // 1) "I’m An Evaluation Officer That Enforces The ‘Rules’" ►28:57 // 2) "I Was On An Archaeological Dig; We Unearthed Horrors Not Seen For A Thousand Years" ►45:15 // 3) "I Stumbled Upon A Dead Language" ►1:13:07 // 4) "They Stand Outside" ►1:32:08 // 5) "I'm The Only Worker at An Abandoned Theme Park" ►2:02:35 // 6) "DON'T Go Near The Ball-Pit" ►2:22:47 // 7) "Each Month I Get A Random Item From Amazon" ►2:51:07 // 8) "Zip Code- 00666"
@Dark_Angel..2 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much💕
@kathyinwonderlandl.a.89342 жыл бұрын
Bless u🙏
@rosetanner98172 жыл бұрын
Yes! I agree with both of them 🙂
@ZaZa-oo3dw2 жыл бұрын
🙏 Thank you 💕
@hilaries882 жыл бұрын
I NEED more about #1. Such a great story!
@trishamingin90032 жыл бұрын
Tough day. Perfect way to de stress and relax. Best channel on YOU TUBE
@kibasays2 жыл бұрын
At 1:57:05, was the “fresh of breath air” (in the theme park story) intentional?
@jesmoon35882 жыл бұрын
5:05 "It's me, ya boi !" Shane is that you!?!? Where's Ryan???
@nexxorick16492 жыл бұрын
Any one else here to fall asleep to this bc the live stream isnt going?
@rosetanner98172 жыл бұрын
I did. I'm embarrassed to tell anyone 😉🤔
@amandapace99512 жыл бұрын
I Fall asleep to this stuff. It's cool
@amyplunkett10272 жыл бұрын
Such an amazing and soothing voice you have!💕
@karencomette27832 жыл бұрын
Wow I hope story one has more parts coming
@abrimudd67992 жыл бұрын
creeps never misses. thanks for more amazing stories !!
@icecoffee9072 жыл бұрын
Ooh! Coffee! That's right up my alley.
@ianalli4912 жыл бұрын
Love everything you make, just a heads up right after 22min theirs a voice overlap for about 3-4 seconds
@anitacharron91532 жыл бұрын
I love ball ur long compilations. They come in handy so I can listen when going to sleep. The 24/7 creepypasta comp can only b listened to so many times so Thank You from the bottom of my heart 💜❤️💕😘Also you are an awesome narrator
@labelladonna91222 жыл бұрын
First story gives strong Dead by Daylight vibes. Need a series.
@symbiosister2 жыл бұрын
love the self care tip in the description
@REexpert442 жыл бұрын
The one about the Amazon packages would make me more worried about a brushing scheme than a ghosty goo
@candiceperry58172 жыл бұрын
These stories would make me fall asleep
@seanflanagan96752 жыл бұрын
Just remember, Creeps has a Minecraft series from 7 years ago.
@PabloGameZ12 жыл бұрын
First story is really good
@stephenlyons8589 Жыл бұрын
Was there ever a second or even more then that, stories followed the first story about the criptids giving exams. That was such a good story i always love listening to that one. Always wanted a entire series but never paid attention to find out.
@voidjxnna2 жыл бұрын
Perfect timing, thank you Creeps 💜
@jackeilhigh2 жыл бұрын
Behold the power of the word.
@savageoffroadmowers61992 жыл бұрын
If someone doesn't produce a part 2 to the first story I'll be forced to write it myself
@TheReal_BallzBDragon2 жыл бұрын
I cant wait to blare this in my car and make other drivers uncomfortable
@LuisaD932 жыл бұрын
You’re awesome! Ty 😊
@TheGentleman619682 жыл бұрын
I’ll have caffeine if I want... but you have a point...
@dondawson21742 жыл бұрын
Perfection as always..... You never fail to tell amazing stories.
@DirtyMac51512 жыл бұрын
I still want more, more, more!
@gregwilliams682 жыл бұрын
It's me! It's ya boi Asmonbald!
@magenabark9432 жыл бұрын
That last one pissed me off when it abruptly ended.
@benjaminh89102 жыл бұрын
Gonna need this for my essay thanks
@nookleer7 ай бұрын
I really enjoyed these, though a few of them felt like they stopped suddenly and were incomplete. -You "impose" expectations on things, not expose. -You don't "keep someone SOME company", but "keep someone company some".
@zaphod33462 жыл бұрын
How do you find out who wrote the different stories he narrates?
@asiaizzard37912 жыл бұрын
First is my favorite listened to it more than once. I need a continuing of this. I think the little boy and the bus rules one is connected
@coralkavanaugh52522 жыл бұрын
Lmfao I woke up to this and had a craving for coffee, and then saw the title...🤣
@imgonnasayanything27332 жыл бұрын
My hallucinations thinks it's my fault for anxiety
@chriscode64312 жыл бұрын
So who wrote the first one? I need to know what happens next? Does he get a second shot? Who's leaking information? Does the examiner get eaten? Does the woman get what's coming to her? I need to know!
@rigatoniphoni82472 жыл бұрын
Why the thumbnail throwin up ghost signs at us
@aSipOfHemlocktea Жыл бұрын
A mysterious figure was outside of my house, my little girl started banging her head on the window where the mysterious figure had been on the other side in her sleep, and my neighbor who warned me about a ghost died in front of the area where both happened, but nah ghosts definitely don't exist
@LostLagrange2 жыл бұрын
OHHH HELL NAHHH… we need to talk about that first story creeps… where’s the rest of it bro???
@Manhandle7302 жыл бұрын
That first one was straight out of a high school sophomore’s creative writing class.
@cfl_finn48312 жыл бұрын
I love that very specific title Lemme get my non caffeine coffee
@isaacivans904 Жыл бұрын
The first one felt like a game of Dead by daylight with the way the survivors treat the killer
@roberthernandez7822 жыл бұрын
I like long stories.I listen and play osrs
@recklessrex2 жыл бұрын
Is the first one supposed to give me Dead by Daylight vibes? Cuz it definitely gives me Dead by Daylight vibes
@lilmsmischief692 жыл бұрын
Like number 470 idk but it feels cool lol 😆
@MrKJ2212 жыл бұрын
Love the tittle lol
@mingfanzhang46002 жыл бұрын
Happy 😊
@619timbercali2 жыл бұрын
Creeps the title to this one made me giggle. -sips matcha-
@vlork6662 жыл бұрын
I've never wanted a fictional character to die as much as Daina
@jenniferortega13162 жыл бұрын
What I loved her 😂
@Jay-qn4ez Жыл бұрын
Me too bro. Shi pissing me off
@julius8792 жыл бұрын
24:50... what?
@ShadowParker-hm9ns2 жыл бұрын
Does anyone remember the name of Creepypasta creeps did where these 2 kids lost their cat when they moved, but they left a walkie talkie at the old house just in case because they got the cat in between the move, and the story ended with them hearing meowing coming from the walkie talkie? I cant remember the name and if anyone can help id be grateful
@BreifCase518022 жыл бұрын
The thumbnail looks like their doing the finger trick where your like oh look my finger is in half hahahah
@salemthesable2 жыл бұрын
As an opposition to the title I drank tea instead
@Sarah-Lou912 жыл бұрын
❤️
@lilmsmischief692 жыл бұрын
I drink tequila to these stories 🤪
@TrollingHistory2 жыл бұрын
Today I did my first day's work in years and yepp. Just as I thought. Phuck that I'm done for another 5yrs im so sore I could sue their azzes. 🇺🇸 they don't phuck like they used to.
@Motor-Mouth-313 Жыл бұрын
The first story was dope, hopefully there's a 2nd part
@gavinjohnson59022 жыл бұрын
First one is just jaystation
@cielvalentine01610 ай бұрын
Obstan..
@DirtyMac51512 жыл бұрын
Sorry but if one has no eyes, no eye contact can be made, let alone maintained lol!
@imgonnasayanything27332 жыл бұрын
God says the blame shouldn't be on me
@rosetanner98172 жыл бұрын
😂👍🙏👌👏
@monicacayenne-robinson90542 жыл бұрын
frank
@jakofthefrost2 жыл бұрын
First
@LalaLillith2 жыл бұрын
Not very good “rules” ones. Tired and overdone. Oh my how scary there are rules. This is called life sir
@BADALICE2 жыл бұрын
Dam* I already heard this and it was just ripping faces off, not "scary" this is Gore; ...big difference. scary is the old woman at the foot of your bed pulling off the blankets and you can't move or scream. Hello?
@CONCISEtheGHOST2 жыл бұрын
I liked the first story until the end. The end made me dislike the whole story because what was the point of that? It should’ve just ended after he told the wraith that he could possibly get a second chance, IMO.