40,000 Years Passed After Earth's Destruction But Humans Gave Them One Message: "Run"

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@brucewelty7684 3 ай бұрын

Seriously disjointed. the humans would be the last thing needing discovered. WHATEVER beat them 40K years ago is the REAL menace.

@emmanuelijomah8163 3 ай бұрын

They never said they were beaten the humans probably won but just left the galaxy because they definitely suffered high casualties and needed time to regrow their forces

@emmanuelijomah8163 3 ай бұрын

Also what if what ever fought them before might have been multiple species forming an alliance to take on the humans

@mtpender69 2 ай бұрын

40,000 years... FOR THE EMPEROR!

@rickharms1 3 ай бұрын

Aliens, never have seen a human. “Wild goose chase”, “ knife through butter”. Oh?

@patlab555 3 ай бұрын

2:43 So after 40,000 years in the middle of ruins, the battery of the holographic pad was still working... Seriously? In comparison, 40,000 years ago we were in the Upper Paleolithic, we were living in a cave, we were Cro-Magnon...

@whyjnot420 3 ай бұрын

I would just like to add something of a counterpoint or extension to this. For about 99.99999% of the time humans have existed, we had a single tool (a hammer stone). But once you get to the point where we have a second tool (basically what would become scrapers), the rate at which we develop new tools (and improve old ones) increases exponentially. A rate that has only ever increased. Almost every single tool ever developed (or improved), has been done so within living memory. Now, I might have missed it if there was a starting date stated. All I heard was that this is 40k years after the destruction of Earth, nothing about how far in the future that destruction is from where we are now. So there is an untold level of technological change, likely advancement given what is said about the power of Humanity, between now and whenever that destruction is supposed to occur. Also it seems like the place where they found that pad could have been from even later than the destruction of Earth and thus has the possibility of being even more advanced (though this is likely pushing it). edit: I doubt I need to say it but... If humanity was the bane of the galaxy or something to that effect, that would require a ludicrous amount of advancements over what we have today, beyond ludicrous. We went from the first powered flight to the first person walking on another world within the lifetime of a single person. Less than 65 years. Who knows what we will come up with in hundreds or thousands or even tens of thousands of yeas.

@remo27 3 ай бұрын

@@whyjnot420 Very good points. To truly have a Galactic Empire one almost certainly needs FTL technology for one thing and that is so far away that our leading theorists doubt it is even possible and the few who see possibilities in some of our nascent 'warp' technologies (most scientists see guys like Harold White as on the edge between science and pseudoscience) still speak of hundreds if not thousands of years of development being needed. And that's just one technology that would be needed as presumably many, possibly most races we'd encounter would have FTL too. Basically we'd have to probably be, a minimum a Kardashev type 3 civilization fighting a coalition of type 2 pluses.

@whyjnot420 3 ай бұрын

@@remo27 You know, a fun (read: will drive you insane) answer to that problem (ftl) in the form of ignoring it is something that gets toyed with on occasions but I have only seen really get utilized well on a couple of occasions. The reason for why it isn't used well all that often is obvious as soon as the basic concept is uttered... the dreaded connected-alternate/multiverse idea. One of the major benefits I hardly ever see used, is using something like a combo of a multiverse + portals/teleportation. No travel since you are really in the same place, just a different universe/reality/whatever. I wonder how many writers (or attempted writers) have been slowly driven insane trying to get that kind of idea consistent with its whatever logic they had developed. As ZZ Top famously stated: I wouldn't touch it with a ten foot pole.

@dcsmoviemusicvideos4107 3 ай бұрын

It's possible and plausable at the same time, i mean any civilization advanced enough could certainly make a perpetual energy cell/battery tbat never runs out of juice no matter how many mellenia it passes as long it's intact an in a working condition as long they have created a certain advanced sturdy alloy that doesn't degrade over time for its shell and an advanced material needed to store and generate energy. There are various sci-fi civilizations from books, films, and series that had the capability of these magnitude.

@barenekid9695 2 ай бұрын

Zarkon.. AGAIN !!! Some serious Imagination on display here.

@ncox001 2 ай бұрын

It's AI generated, so no true imagination at all

@trwsandford 3 ай бұрын

More plot holes than pot holes on a neglected ally in Portland Oregon. Send this one back to the author.

@bessie1854 3 ай бұрын

Agreed.

@lomotil3370 3 ай бұрын

That's a lot of holes!

@Dave_of_Mordor 3 ай бұрын

LIke what? List them or you're just mad that an AI is telling you the story

@lomotil3370 3 ай бұрын

@@Dave_of_Mordor Let me guess...you are in your teens.

@Dave_of_Mordor 3 ай бұрын

@@lomotil3370 guess i hit the nail on the head with this one

@christopherjenkins2373 Ай бұрын

Another great story!

@GomirofWRA 3 ай бұрын

this feels like it was written by an AI

@RansomMemoryAccess 3 ай бұрын

Suspect just about the entire body of work of this and the plethora of similar channels is entirely AI generated. They all follow the same nearly identical theme and look the same across the many channels.

@martinm3474 3 ай бұрын

This does have a level that seems shallow and some others also.

@tazmokhan7614 3 ай бұрын

This was a fun vid, i didnt expect Bradon Sandersen Level of writing, just a fun read, and this was fun. Please continue this story, you cant get better if you dont keep writing!

@jesussaldana4558 3 ай бұрын

Ok so yeah, it's disjointed as hell and the plot holes are massive but it's only because the emperor wanted vengence for taking the 40k idea and declared exterminatus on the story itself.....the story did not have plot armor in a weird sense of irony.

@Rankbaajin 3 ай бұрын

I like the thumbnail....that's about it. Zarkon? Gimme a break

@sir.willthur5428 2 ай бұрын

Sci-fi fans are brutal critiques. Just keep writing ✍️

@redhedkev1 3 ай бұрын

"Like a hot knife through butter" I think I've heard that phrase a half dozen times already listening to these stories.

@zlateify1 3 ай бұрын

cool hfy👍

@gregkun1 3 ай бұрын

roboute guilliman is that you?

@nerdtalkvanwilliams6227 3 ай бұрын

Zarkon? Are we forming Voltron in this one?

@Briguy1027 3 ай бұрын

Hot knife through butter was a bad analogy. It should have been some reference to something about how precise the human fleet was. Also, not really sure about the human fleet if Dante is the last of the humans. Lots more expository needed to prove that humans had evolved their ability of warfare to take down the Zithani.

@emmanuelijomah8163 3 ай бұрын

Can we get a part 2 of this

@mikeriley2475 3 ай бұрын

The Subtitles are going faster then the voice :P Around 10 minutes or so

@malahammer 3 ай бұрын

Zarkon......the Galaxys worst leader.

@OhioCruffler 2 ай бұрын

Zarkon, hearing this insult, slammed his scaly fist into the nearby console, which crumpled under the blow...

@davidb4715 2 ай бұрын

For the God Emperor!!

@MrBongsky 2 ай бұрын

O great,APPLE IPhone survived!

@dudimenthegreat9886 2 ай бұрын

Your story has more holes than my mother's swiss cheese!!!

@tazmokhan7614 3 ай бұрын

#HUMANITYFIRST

@stevemartindale8745 2 ай бұрын

All of a sudden being shot at, no pirates?

@user-so9lm1mc3w 3 ай бұрын

Man doing the helldiver emotes with a army, of helldivers behind him.

@jcheck1107 2 ай бұрын

Got me with the 40k but had to stop listening

@lisear2926 3 ай бұрын

How about 89❓☺️

@charlesadams1725 3 ай бұрын

88 Great stories love them

@alanb8884 3 ай бұрын

I think I've finally had it with this channel.

@StarvinitySaga 3 ай бұрын

👍 👍

@oldmanfromscenetwentyfour8164 Ай бұрын

Inconsistencies and more Inconsistencies. Where's the Human Editing?

@ccp4415 3 ай бұрын

What happened to the pirates, disjointed crap.

@richardcorwin1828 3 ай бұрын

Asking the same here.

@maximusmeridius3380 3 ай бұрын

Zorgon apparently survived the fight.

@kantankeroz1305 3 ай бұрын

Chat GPT forgot about the.

@diGritz1 3 ай бұрын

Hot knife through butter? How would aliens know what butter is....... Dear God it all makes sense. Aliens didn't come to Earth just to steel our cows, The SOB's were after our butter. "0_o"

@KasssandraNox 3 ай бұрын

This changes everything. Quick, get out the margarine! It's our only chance.

@rhago32 3 ай бұрын

Would have been better if it weren't so disjointed 😢

@soulseptem5281 3 ай бұрын

Anyone know where the image is from? It is very cool.

@dottietyre9062 3 ай бұрын

AI Generated I think but I don't know the source

@Farmores 2 ай бұрын

Dang another non hfy story.

@keithvernonlewis9403 3 ай бұрын

I think it's time for your AI to pick up a book on words and how they are to be used and what their definitions are because if this was written by a human English-speaking writer they need to get out of the business. Come on you guys can do better than this!!

@robertwolff1429 3 ай бұрын

@the critics, i love sci-fi as much as u but really this a light short story (for free on youtube) I found this channel just a week ago and there are strong ones and funny ones and all of them made me listen to them till end.... Im just grateful in times of all that failure BS from Star Wars and Marvel to at least listen to good stories. And this story right here would have made a better script like the most mainstream movies. so yeah! i love it!!!^^ and i dont know why 88... just sayin as a german i hope it has a differnt meaning XD

@nosotrosloslobosestamosreg4115 3 ай бұрын

14 times I agree.

@ryanmcewen415 3 ай бұрын

Wow this was hot garbage.. No plot continuity. Was this written by a child? Or worse, an AI?

@willdavis3802 3 ай бұрын

AI, you can tell by the repeated story lines, some word for word from well written stories and disjointed nature with the falling off of major characters and plot ideas.

@williamstuckless2892 3 ай бұрын

Man. Disjointed is right. A pleasant idea for a story, to be sure, but seriously in need of editing AND rewriting. It kind of reads like it was originally written with a human protagonist, then every instance of the word "human" was replaced with the name of an alien species. Hah, it actually reads like a poor quality AI job.

@snappycenter7863 3 ай бұрын

Looks like the Emperor's plan failed in this story (props to anyone who gets the reference).

@TheLoobis 3 ай бұрын

Dude, there are so many holes in this story. Who's the idiot writer?

@wat_cher 3 ай бұрын

AT8

@mictiry 3 ай бұрын

Keep writing these short stories I like them

@willdavis3802 3 ай бұрын

This was AI written, stolen names, ideas, and whole sentences from actual good stories.

@Trollpharius_XX 3 ай бұрын

The Black Templars finally circling back

@Paladin7845 3 ай бұрын

What a Mess! Disjointed! Plot HOLES you could lose a star ship in!! More and more AI CRAP.

@bessie1854 3 ай бұрын

Yup.

@mothmagic1 3 ай бұрын

Never mind a starship, you drive a space fleet through some of those holes.

@Sattrax 3 ай бұрын

It's a good story. Humans to the rescue. A few intuitive leaps were necessary. I don't like it all laid out neatly. It takes all the fun out of it. Thank you.

@uberwayz 2 ай бұрын

The story just doesn't make any sense at all.

@Lastprometheus1 2 ай бұрын

Oh look ... In the last 30 secs the author makes a pro-Nazi plug to the audience (88).

@Matterian 3 ай бұрын

The Author failed the assignment. F-

@santiagovilla6219 2 ай бұрын

Well this story has no coherence whatsoever ai at its worst

@BruceBowman-wz9or 3 ай бұрын

Great story as usual 88

@Steve-wn8us 3 ай бұрын

Not sure about "fly through space".

@Gunther-mt2bk 3 ай бұрын

Seems like some bad editing

@mothmagic1 3 ай бұрын

Actually it is just proof of what happens when you trust AI with anything.

@sunshineamthauer3668 3 ай бұрын

88. I want more of this story!!!

@theutilizer 3 ай бұрын

Like all the missing parts that would explain what happened to the pirates, how Zarkon apparantly talked to Zarkon, and the "rocked by another blast" comments when the story jumps from dialog into the middle of a battle scene with no context?

@willdavis3802 3 ай бұрын

@@theutilizer AI story taking bits from a dozen stories written by humans and mashing them together, AI narrator. It's garbage Front to back.

@volleyballDave 3 ай бұрын

Some of these AI generated stories are decent. BUT this one is total crapola. It’s just a part of a story with no real ending. The Krel are worried about the humans returning and taking back their empire, but then rejoice when the humans return. The pirates don’t act like pirates at all. And naming the two biggest protagonists Zorgon and Zargan… well thats just bad story telling. And all in the name of just generating buttloads of crap stories to put on youtube for monetizations. Def not recommended.