Galactic Council Betrayed Humanity and Paid The Price When Our Fleet Arrived! | HFY Sci-Fi Story

[@frederickslack1071]

Love the story, keep it up and have you thought about writing a full length novel?

[@SeeBuYouTuBer-d4v]

Really Great Amazing 🎉❤

[@barksdalehales438]

Broken and disjointed. No continuity. Locations jump around. One moment they are on the bridge ( what a Torture rack is doing on the bridge I cannot say ) the next they are in the engine room.

[@bad1cj]

Why would that alien betray the zorgans in the first place giveing the humans a fighting chance they never had, them betray them. Also the torcher rack that he just overpowered and broke out of… evil villain stateing the plan of the planet killer ship in dumbass cartoon villain fashion?!! Also I believe the guy in the torcher rack said that xeno had betrayed them only for them to again be betrayed on the colony?

[@woswasdenni1914]

@@bad1cj and meeting on another planet in another system mid fleetbattle wtf is this nonsense

[@orange42]

And the invaders wanting earth for resources but also wanting to destroy it completely.

[@gregoryjohnston9854]

Ample potential, but far too many continuity errors.

[@helgebreiland1926]

THINK YOU HAFT TO HAVE A BIT FANTASY A BIT LIKE ME WHEN AM READING,BUT WHEN AM READING IT HAS TO BEE AT MOST QUIT HOURS OF THE DAY,SO AS A BIT ATT THE NIGHT WHEN I KNOWING COULD RELAX MOST IN MY SKJELETT AND NOT SCRIMING FROM CHILDRING IN THA KINDERGARTEN,ITS SO LOUD AND THEY CRYING OR LAUFIN... SO I HAVE FINDING THE MOST CHILL TIME ATT THE DAY,CAUSE THOSE CHILDS LOVE TO SLEEP EVERY TIME AFTER THE HAVE EATING CHICKEN SOUP OR WHAT FOOD THEY LIKE TO EATING SOME 2 OR 3 TIMES THEM HAS EATING

[@kitfo18]

Great as always! I like the story!

[@timberwolf2093]

That was outstanding. Thank you.

[@davbenmon]

Really great story. Thanks 😊

[@muzzaresarf5038]

We all came together, we all fight together, we all leave together, leave no one behind. You don’t leave mates behind and cowardly leave, otherwise a good story👍🇦🇺

[@tajenkins]

Many of these scifi stories sound like they were written using AI. I am growing weary of them.

[@MM-ne6pk]

yeah, same characters races names reapet

[@woswasdenni1914]

@@MM-ne6pk an AI that modelled after a 6year old.

[@NegativeSum]

It's because they are. The stories are written and narrated by A.I and the channel owner has several of these types of channels. It's a way for them to make that KZbin money without any effort. I always smash the do not recommend button on all these channels, and let people know about them in comments. Starbound HFY and Agro Squirrel are great human narrated channels with stories you can actually comprehend.

[@MM-ne6pk]

@@NegativeSum can confirm on aggro squirel haven't seen aby od starbound yet

[@rjhergert6590]

im starting to log repetitively used lines over the many stories and might make bingo cards

[@trumprocks5795]

Good story, keep striving forward

[@FadedNeff]

Great story. Keep up the good work 👍

[@mileshandymanservicemiles6302]

awesome loved it

[@shrouddragoon6151]

Loved the story.

[@6600Mom]

I liked the story. Thank you.

[@swoesteban5570]

How did Cragg get into another fight after he had died in a puddle of blood earlier?

[@woswasdenni1914]

zombies thats how

[@rjhergert6590]

its on the spiritual plane ( they couldn't just die)

[@runpop1]

Because he was playing opossum.

[@tonylongshore1]

Obe-Wan Kenobe, "You can't win, Darth. If you strike me down I will become more powerful than you could possibly imagine". Craggy was on some next level shit!

[@DavidBrown-nr9py]

Someone really needs to proof read these stories. There are too many inconsistencies.

[@Realitygetreal]

Welcome to the future, Human Youth can barely read or write, this is all A.I. garbage and this is the future, the Human race is at the end of the Gene Pool

[@robertcezarfirme5879]

I like the story.

[@garronn]

I really feel like the quality of the stories has been dropping. Scripts need to be run through several drafts before they get published for a reason, this one has the markings for a great story but it really felt like a standard Sci-fi movie that's forgettable. Take beginning where humanity was betrayed and their escape from the council, that alone should have been a hour story. Easily part 1 with seeing how the ambassador was struggling to get out of jamming. Part 2 would be the slow invasion by the enemy, say colony after colony getting hit, the humans are; alone until one of council members joins in. Part 3 would be the conclusion of the battle of earth plus the betrayal we saw. Then end it with the new species attack.

[@NegativeSum]

Typical A.I written and narrated stories. KZbin is absolutely chocked full of this trash. Check out Starbound HFY, it's got a really good human narrator and pretty decent stories. Story's that actually make sense.

[@rolanders7553]

Nice

[@helgebreiland1926]

All of this tellings i really like very much,but it should bee animated that has been King of all story..... I Am sci fi lover... SO TANX FOR ALL YOUR TELLING STORIES... GREETINGS FROM OSLO

[@vickymolinar4248]

If you dont like the story dont listen.

[@SolTerran5050]

OH PUUULLLEEAASE !!!

[@saeidrazzaghi5939]

That was Great

[@rusco1948]

GREAT VIDEO

[@michaeldix7588]

How is bobby fighting wasnt he hurt badly 😂

[@vickymolinar4248]

I loved their names JACK AND BOBBY. So great.

[@dragonking1244]

Nice story

[@shadowroamer]

One moment, it's Bobby, Mike and Jack who took down this Cragg. The next, like the very space-time continuum warped and reformed, Bobby and Mike are elsewhere completely, and it is Jack alone that takes down Cragg who'd been giving him great trouble the previous scene... At that point, I no longer saw any further reason to keep following along; if the story's going to jink and juke all over the place like that once, why wouldn't it happen again?

[@Huck49]

The closer you get to the end the more ads you get

[@arthurknox3701]

keep it coming

[@morrisj.briones6716]

I really liked the story

[@moxgion]

❤❤❤ i like the story

[@ErikPernisie]

Love the story keep going but make sure to make a script draft so you can catch any mistakes in the plot or ominous the story also would love to see this animated if possible but keep up the good work❤❤

[@TroyWells-s2i]

I like it

[@rockmanafb]

Wish Sara Chen was here those Zorgons wouldn’t of tried us

[@omaracevedo4784]

Good story

[@johnhedden1424]

I liked the video

[@chrisebling850]

These are great

[@raven_lee_black]

The ending sucked on this one. If the galactic council betrayed us, there is no way, we would have forgiven them so easily!!!

[@CMAzeriah]

Time for a bloody crusade accross the stars. If we can't expand in peace then we should take their worlds for our own and use those resources to see just how "endless" this Zorgan Empire is.

[@wilburcollins8342]

I liked it

[@purespiritcloud]

I loved the story.

[@FrankMeiser-yv4rn]

I liked the story

[@WilliamWard-f2m]

every 30 seconds a new ad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@DuckSith]

A very 'young ' story, aimed at youth. Quite basic full of tropes and formulaic stereotypes. Fun enough, although frustratingly simple for a mature listener. Would be interesting to see this properly fleshed out at some point, as there's lots of potential here.

[@NarensCorner]

I like the story

[@Thoridin58]

This would have been a good story but for the crazy jumping from one event to another. No continuity at all. Completely disjointed.

[@manvendrasinghbundela9897]

i like the story

[@SabineKielhorn]

I like this storries by driving long distace on the autobahn ❤

[@BradUSMCVETrider]

How long?

[@SabineKielhorn]

@@BradUSMCVETrider 3~10 hours drive?

[@J.A.W.1964]

this is a story , actually not a bad concept but the “Person” who wrote it has not much of a concept . Torture on the bridge , locations jumping , people fighting after they dies a traitor wants a meeting on a planet after he’s been under guard ………or maybe the 3 species have only a limited number of names ???

[@JanHornberger-e6r]

The ending was a let down why not have take railway cars of RAID Fumigator. LOL

[@joseenriquemendeznunez4255]

Which was first video in this series and how can I see them in order?

[@invincibleim7988]

Fool me once shame on you fool me twice shame on me

[@iakatat2]

It was a good try, but a lot of story is missing. It jumps around too much and leaves out way too many connecting details.

[@MichaelSchisler-jx3uc]

88 I enjoied this story and the excellent read❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY

[@francisvantuyle]

75 here, I enjoyed it to.

[@davidwickboldt712]

I gave up. Throw in a new enemy out of the blue. For what, was the story not good without it? First story I wish I could get my time I listened.

[@robppp7184]

Let's take a quick timeout to discuss how to beat the doomsday cannon while it finishes powering up and blasting earth during our meeting... Let's also go onto the ships our new tech should be destroying and set charges and then fight, kill, and borrow both their same exact sized flightsuits and ships which we have no problem flying...

[@guysalsburg]

Jumps all over sencelessly. 'Bobby' (for example) is grieveously wounded & in need of medical attention on the Titan, but no time for that as they streak off to defeat the planet killer's controls. Bobby is miraculously fit & capable of fighting. He gets severely wounded on his shoulder yet manages to fight several more man to Zorgan fights. Also, the humans destroy the planet killer cannons base & rocket off ONLY for the next sentence, having them still in the base fighting Zorgans while trying to escape the base. This author did not have his story proofread before posting it. Poorly done!

[@debramurphy121]

Liked the story. Needs work though.

[@Sarah-gw3ng]

Doomsday cannon...could it be related to the location of the Doomsday Glacier? Thwaites "doomsday" glacier...reminds me of Thomas Waites and Tom Waites. Off the shore of Antarctica 🇦🇶.

[@CryptidsRoost]

This story is definitely written by AI, most likely ChatGPT. That one line at around the 46 minute mark... "We'll make them pay for every inch of earth's soil", I have heard that line in at least another 3 or 4 stories over the last day or two. Same goes for thenphrase "tip of the spear" at around 56 minutes! I am also NOT sayjng this channel is responsible, but many of the HFY sci-fi channels have been doing stories that have been written by authors on reddit, and the channel owner has not given them permission and the channel owners claim they have wrote them themselves. For those that channels are responsible, I hope the author's set up a yt copyright claim against them. Unfortunately this is not the only niche where this happens. I narrate creepypastas, and it happens alot there too.

[@devil8975]

This one is extremely popular as well..."The tension was palpable"

[@CryptidsRoost]

@@devil8975 Agreed.

[@robertdelarosa864]

There must be different versions of this story, and the KZbinr stitched it together badly. Should of stuck to one version of the story. I've listened to stories that had different versions of it, and it turned good.

[@caztx75482]

Kept on jumping around

[@michaelbuteau4183]

I hate AI voices, but it was a good story.

[@Clay_ant_army]

What the hell happened at 57:56 😂😂

[@christianbarger9524]

I liked the story!!

[@seanthiar]

Story iss chaos. In one second the alien is dead and in the next one off the brothers talk with him, places are jumping around and people, too. Bad broken story.....

[@ngatokorimatuaputai5317]

I want to know how bobby was flying an the next he's in da enemy ship in 1 second. Wat a load of rubbish

[@ErnieRoss-i9o]

Planet killer. ( a star wars cannon) story jumped about far to much

[@naynaya3565]

What AI is Used for this

[@1stupidfish]

These notes are a great idea for a story. Flesh this story out and it would make a good multi chapter story. You have way too much going on for a short story.

[@silasclayton7777]

Are these completely AI generated?

[@Fnyx_BodyWorks]

Are these written by ai? It feels way to wonky

[@deathheaht]

the title is misleading and the ending is not satisfying, so I give it a C-

[@josuemorales8105]

Sooo the whole fleet including capital ships were support for two small fighter ships. The pilots also where the main fighting force. This convoluted story is terrible. Humanity deserved to die in this one 😂

[@johnlonghair6461]

How many different ways can pronounce a persons name?

[@MichaelSchisler-jx3uc]

Turn you adds down some dude❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY

[@dwightehowell8179]

To much of this AI BS does not compute at all. They try to have the same characters do everything when it's obvious that isn't what would happen in real life. They also seem to compress the story line way to much. The same event more than once is mistake. That is illogical as Spoke would have said. OK, I'd call it a4rth rate at best. I regard is as being sort of like elevator music. White noise.

[@ChadLetourneaurhavoc]

shield room bridge engine room bathroom shower closet what is it where is it why is it all over the place

[@Friunt24]

This sounds like fully AI, too many jumps. Shame.

[@CommonManEDC]

Needs improvement

[@ryantownsley1388]

4 ads in 15mins

[@WarchiefTua]

this one is trash, they keep believing the same guy that betrayed them twice already... like what???

[@EmmanuelBubod]

Too much mombo-jumbo...and a lot of contast...seems to be the mind of a high schooler...

[@dwightehowell8179]

This story is completely illogical. It does not compute. To call it BS is to insult BS. I gave up.

[@richardward9111]

Very poorly presented. No continuity. How many times does the enemy leader die? If you want this channel to grow you need to present better work.

[@charlesdickens9685]

like hell you will take my dog . i will not subcribe

[@EmmanuelBubod]

A bullshit of a story. Why go into hand to hand combat when you have weapons that throws projectile or death?...

[@blaizellee4441]

Lay off the drugs

[@EmmanuelBubod]

What a waste of time reading...

[@eyesopen6807]

A few jumps in plot but not bad and I'm sure you or your A.i. I don't know will get better in time. Not ment as insult looking forward to future story,s

[@everaldrobley7573]

I like the story

[@everaldrobley7573]

I like the story

[@aarongarrett1626]

I liked this story

[@johnbeck8512]

I like the story

[@WilliamMoralee-tl8kk]

I like the story

[@wat_cher]

I like the story