5 tips to improve your writing

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English with Emma · engVid

English with Emma · engVid

Күн бұрын

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@tarkang657
@tarkang657 8 жыл бұрын
5 tips to improve your writing 1) Don't use Contractions such as; don't, can't, shouldn't use; do not cannot should not 2) Avoid there is/ there are There are many issues that students face at university Students face many issues at university 3) Don't use common words such as; really, very, a lot, so 4) Use active voice instead of passive 5)Use strong verbs
@vazedashaikh6127
@vazedashaikh6127 8 жыл бұрын
Tarkan Gürpınar Thnks for summarizing.
@Hekeepsitclassy
@Hekeepsitclassy 8 жыл бұрын
Safir Semon crap
@tarkang657
@tarkang657 8 жыл бұрын
how in the world would you use that in an essay wtf :D:DD:D
@claudiavillatoro9982
@claudiavillatoro9982 7 жыл бұрын
definitely some people do, for example, English learners like me. These tips will be helpful for my writing proficiency test, which I am about to take.
@muhammadalam6965
@muhammadalam6965 7 жыл бұрын
Tarkan Gürpınar s
@cmrandall9151
@cmrandall9151 9 жыл бұрын
It's ironic that in spoken English we use long sentences to sound smart, but in written English we achieve that result with short sentences.
@gagangrewal4706
@gagangrewal4706 8 жыл бұрын
CM Randall and.
@Josh-Parkhill
@Josh-Parkhill 7 жыл бұрын
Why is that ironic?
@roayasaaida3851
@roayasaaida3851 7 жыл бұрын
because people prefer listening more than reading
@conditionalbee9603
@conditionalbee9603 7 жыл бұрын
CM Randall My sentences are always too long whenever I'm writing
@feedhyungwonplease6087
@feedhyungwonplease6087 7 жыл бұрын
Cause a reader will be bored if the sentence is too long
@Demitrival
@Demitrival 4 жыл бұрын
Writing is such a skill to have. It’s like forming a puzzle. I’ve always envied people that could tell stories n write.
@nathancrotty8115
@nathancrotty8115 4 жыл бұрын
I’ll help you out if you’re taking notes. 0:29 Do not use contractions 1:40 Avoid using there is/there are 3:05 Avoid using really/very/a lot 6:06 Use active voice instead of passive voice 9:00 Use strong verbs
@rosemallowss1309
@rosemallowss1309 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@monikahasda3934
@monikahasda3934 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@walkover-cc1dm
@walkover-cc1dm 2 жыл бұрын
Tyvm
@discoveryourvision7132
@discoveryourvision7132 2 жыл бұрын
best
@H21-c9d
@H21-c9d 2 жыл бұрын
She did this
@whitlovesu2
@whitlovesu2 6 жыл бұрын
I attend university online, at Ashford University. Your videos have helped me, so much in my writing. Thank you, and keep up the good work.
@Technicalwriter
@Technicalwriter 4 жыл бұрын
Good
@nosiphojanelle2588
@nosiphojanelle2588 4 жыл бұрын
This is useful because I was surprised why my teacher circled “so” and other words in a red pen in most of my essays
@dmdm9198
@dmdm9198 3 жыл бұрын
Really shows you teacher sucked because all she did was grade and not teach
@mouna8883
@mouna8883 3 жыл бұрын
@Rebecca Beverly hello, please can I send you an email too? I need help but I have no one to help me.
@iwilldonothingtomorrow1840
@iwilldonothingtomorrow1840 8 жыл бұрын
1.do not use contractions ex.don't can't shouldn't 2.avoid there is &there are 3.don't use really ,a lot ,so &very 4.use active voice 5.use strong verbs
@workbutlive
@workbutlive 4 жыл бұрын
Oh my god! I just realized that I might have been making these mistakes all my life. And, all it took was a few minutes of conscious effort and practice. Thanks, this is super useful.
@vancouverkiz
@vancouverkiz 24 күн бұрын
What in the ai
@vamsispr1
@vamsispr1 6 жыл бұрын
I'm already a better writer than I was 15 minutes ago, thank you.
@longjunior7638
@longjunior7638 3 жыл бұрын
😂good keep it up😂
@lauragallardo6629
@lauragallardo6629 6 жыл бұрын
Just watching this video has raised my grade up from a 75 to a 95 😍 thank you.
@LEONLOVESMUSIC
@LEONLOVESMUSIC 5 жыл бұрын
Awesome bro you maded this video work in your exams
@akagrimreaper6702
@akagrimreaper6702 5 жыл бұрын
How!? I had a 78% and I got 5 A’s in a row, and I still don’t even have a 85% yet
@twasadream496
@twasadream496 5 жыл бұрын
You saying that gives me hope
@sayanidhar7476
@sayanidhar7476 4 жыл бұрын
You guys even get 75?
@zeeeabhaize3244
@zeeeabhaize3244 4 жыл бұрын
@@sayanidhar7476 hahaha happy to see someone had the same reaction as me
@detrex3105
@detrex3105 6 жыл бұрын
I’m using these tips for my selective exams tommorrow, pray for me
@kameliyaoppal
@kameliyaoppal 6 жыл бұрын
IceyShot hey 👋🏼 how was your exam?
@Ceylon03
@Ceylon03 6 жыл бұрын
Yeah how was it
@Supot176
@Supot176 6 жыл бұрын
What happened to your exam?
@charismatalks8477
@charismatalks8477 6 жыл бұрын
@@Supot176 Press F to pay respect
@kimjong-un8543
@kimjong-un8543 6 жыл бұрын
Howd it go
@paulevensen
@paulevensen 4 жыл бұрын
Emma, this is great! I am recommending it to my students and have sent the video to colleagues. I've even embedded it in a blog post I wrote on academic or formal writing. Really well done and very enjoyable. Brava!
@sharin7762
@sharin7762 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you for helping me because when I checked my grades today, I saw that I had an F in ELA and started crying so I decided to look for videos to help me and this helped me a lot
@ambercoelho9232
@ambercoelho9232 4 жыл бұрын
same
@juba7
@juba7 8 жыл бұрын
I got 86 (overall) and 22 on the speaking section and 21 in writing. Thanks for all your amazing videos. Without them, I could not make it.
@kismatsapkota3309
@kismatsapkota3309 6 жыл бұрын
Juliana Bassetti yes
@ishavrisha
@ishavrisha 10 ай бұрын
Watching it in 2024
@jacobbravo8943
@jacobbravo8943 8 ай бұрын
Real 😢
@SalmanSalman-w3b
@SalmanSalman-w3b 5 ай бұрын
Me😂
@MartinaGarcia-k7h
@MartinaGarcia-k7h 5 ай бұрын
Same
@zihaamapdisalam1045
@zihaamapdisalam1045 5 ай бұрын
Me
@AmiduNoimot
@AmiduNoimot 4 ай бұрын
Same here
@Bel0ve01
@Bel0ve01 4 жыл бұрын
So HELPFUL OMG Tips for writing: 1. Avoid contractions 2. Avoid there is/there are (sentence become stronger to the point) 3.Avoid really, very, a lot, so (weakens writing) Use “many” or “much” ex:Much of the time is wasted 4. Have subject, verb, object 5.Use strong verbs When you see verb and noun (try to use verb) Example 1 : he gave assistance -> He assisted Ex 2: made an objection -> He objected (Does the noun have verb form?)
@paolabarajas3813
@paolabarajas3813 7 жыл бұрын
I always tought Passive voice was more formal than active voice. Thanks!!
@sccm100
@sccm100 8 жыл бұрын
I think you can learn from this free video than from the $91 book I had to buy for my English class.
@JesperSalama
@JesperSalama 7 жыл бұрын
Your sentence seems incomplete?
@erickaguero1439
@erickaguero1439 7 жыл бұрын
sebastian cuello I bet money you did not even read the 91$ book, yet you complain how useless the book is. Take the easy route and watch videos, that would help you more than reading a book, you mundane fool.
@filiplindstrii4581
@filiplindstrii4581 6 жыл бұрын
sebastian cuello o
@dragonflyhk
@dragonflyhk 6 жыл бұрын
Whether you prefer watching videos or reading books, continue to practice you writing skills. Finding books your are interested in reading will help your writing improve as well.
@nemesis043
@nemesis043 6 жыл бұрын
exactly
@springtime1009
@springtime1009 9 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Emma. You increased my english knowledge.
@rajachowdaryvepuri4880
@rajachowdaryvepuri4880 9 жыл бұрын
Sirad Hanad where is task 2 video
@redstonegate5896
@redstonegate5896 9 жыл бұрын
+Sirad Hanad "enrich" is used better on "knowledge"
@shubhamdhruv9836
@shubhamdhruv9836 9 жыл бұрын
+RedstoneGate lol
@siddhantbiradar1791
@siddhantbiradar1791 7 жыл бұрын
even I play minecraft
@Meteaura22
@Meteaura22 7 жыл бұрын
You mean enrich rather than increased.
@shark1834
@shark1834 4 жыл бұрын
wow i was never taught this kind of stuff at my highschool, surprised i got the grades i did in English
@exoticcats6119
@exoticcats6119 4 жыл бұрын
For the past year or two my teachers haven’t taught me anything new
@enricdomingo7096
@enricdomingo7096 4 жыл бұрын
Exotic Cats so did mine
@enricdomingo7096
@enricdomingo7096 4 жыл бұрын
Exotic Cats all they did was do the whole thing again. Notthing new
@glennhonestly6600
@glennhonestly6600 4 жыл бұрын
Dont tell me they never taught abt contractions
@杜若-j1o
@杜若-j1o 4 жыл бұрын
sorry,the passive voice
@mariotapalla7783
@mariotapalla7783 5 жыл бұрын
The most important is I have learned even a little bit of knowledge the proper use [WORDs] in academic writing, Thank you, Emma, for this video
@lawbnowercuj
@lawbnowercuj 4 жыл бұрын
my teacher gave me an extension to submit my assessment and im so happy cause she is so nice and i would be sad if i put no effort into something that she gave me extra time to do
@gxsai
@gxsai 4 жыл бұрын
aw that’s sweet
@irpansalampenjelajah6067
@irpansalampenjelajah6067 4 жыл бұрын
Great
@CrystalFaith294
@CrystalFaith294 4 жыл бұрын
Uhhh
@gichuruboniface2767
@gichuruboniface2767 4 жыл бұрын
@@CrystalFaith294 I can help with assignments and essays
@MyNamezSlimShady
@MyNamezSlimShady 5 жыл бұрын
I just wanted to thank you for all that you’re doing. Your teachings helped me big time and I scored 7 bands in Writing. Keep up the good work and wish you all the very best!!
@edgarpinyol4410
@edgarpinyol4410 Жыл бұрын
I am very grateful for this type of support to those of us who need it. Much appreciated!
@KoffiBossoMath
@KoffiBossoMath Жыл бұрын
I agree
@noneone.............
@noneone............. 5 жыл бұрын
Ironic actually, short sentences are powerful, to the points, thanks Emma, you are something else.😊
@armyalwaystogether7406
@armyalwaystogether7406 4 жыл бұрын
Same here
@ayeshamehrban3249
@ayeshamehrban3249 3 жыл бұрын
@@armyalwaystogether7406 lol
@blessingflorencetsikata6706
@blessingflorencetsikata6706 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you for assisting me in the improvement of writing. God bless you.
@MrAdudavid
@MrAdudavid 4 жыл бұрын
WHO ELSE IS WATCHING THIS IN 2022 AND BEYOND
@quanghuyvu116
@quanghuyvu116 4 жыл бұрын
me
@saberivy9942
@saberivy9942 4 жыл бұрын
Maybė...
@mofenyimudabuka7034
@mofenyimudabuka7034 4 жыл бұрын
Me
@saberivy9942
@saberivy9942 4 жыл бұрын
@@mofenyimudabuka7034 ö
@zainalkaddu9152
@zainalkaddu9152 4 жыл бұрын
Me too
@PartidasInmortalesdeAjedrez
@PartidasInmortalesdeAjedrez 3 жыл бұрын
Very useful tips! Thanks!
@ldaniii
@ldaniii 3 жыл бұрын
Che que buen video el de hoy
@minimalmedial9730
@minimalmedial9730 10 жыл бұрын
There are a lot of tips in your video that really helps me :)
@emineaygun561
@emineaygun561 10 жыл бұрын
avoid using really:PP
@nourchaar4503
@nourchaar4503 10 жыл бұрын
Emine aygün (There are) & (a lot of) too :P
@chrisg.6509
@chrisg.6509 10 жыл бұрын
And just "help" no s
@nourchaar4503
@nourchaar4503 10 жыл бұрын
Hahaha
@joonpark2135
@joonpark2135 10 жыл бұрын
apparently you DID NOT pay attention that much. She CLEARLY said do not use "THERE ARE". But then again i do not agree with the instructor in alot of things like at 2:11 she should have wrote, Students face many issues at the University or Universities if She didnt want to use "THE" in the sentence. Unless the University is the name of the university but i doubt that, hopefully.
@BackToRootz
@BackToRootz 8 жыл бұрын
Thank you. It just made my day and how ever i was making exactly these 5 mistakes in my essays.
@anthonyjosephtay5830
@anthonyjosephtay5830 8 жыл бұрын
This video really helped me a lot!! Thank you so much! I feel more confident in my essay writing! Can u make videos on how to write different type of middle/high school essays?
@AlexHilarious
@AlexHilarious 8 жыл бұрын
Singaporean siol... U taking o levels this year?
@ttheguyy
@ttheguyy 8 жыл бұрын
gg tmr start liao
@unknown_8588
@unknown_8588 4 жыл бұрын
This video really helped me. I thought it's more formal and smart to write something in longer sentences 😂
@minnicute2544
@minnicute2544 4 жыл бұрын
Me too😂😂
@anamavarez6941
@anamavarez6941 4 жыл бұрын
Me too lmao I swore "conducted an investigation" sounded formal and smart sajdasd
@astderi6840
@astderi6840 4 жыл бұрын
Who else watch this the day before the exam
@xintrea_2140
@xintrea_2140 4 жыл бұрын
I literally am/:
@sov_eleanor9542
@sov_eleanor9542 4 жыл бұрын
Yall pray for me bros😭😭😭
@harinisatishkumar2243
@harinisatishkumar2243 4 жыл бұрын
@@sov_eleanor9542 Even me. ATB
@aynahan8599
@aynahan8599 4 жыл бұрын
my english exam is in 3 days 🤷🏻
@sidra2k5
@sidra2k5 4 жыл бұрын
MEEE
@ProfessorLooney95
@ProfessorLooney95 5 жыл бұрын
This is great. Doing the quiz immediately after watching this video really helped me solidify this new found knowledge. Thank you, Emma.
@TatyanaEdgeworth
@TatyanaEdgeworth 5 жыл бұрын
Definitely need this! I’m taking this written exam for transfer students in a hour! Wish me luck
@auryhudamc7497
@auryhudamc7497 5 жыл бұрын
I have been learning English for one year and I always love your videos on KZbin. I’ve learned many things and today I learn to be a good writer. Thank you for always sharing.
@sangitagaikwad8380
@sangitagaikwad8380 3 жыл бұрын
I wasn't taught like this ever in my whole life, I understood everything what you taught, thank you mam, this was very useful ❤
@russellperez8190
@russellperez8190 8 жыл бұрын
Good teaching better than my English teacher
@cuongon7504
@cuongon7504 7 жыл бұрын
LOL
@blueandbronzeravenclaw1961
@blueandbronzeravenclaw1961 5 жыл бұрын
What if you teacher reads this!😯
@briandauch303
@briandauch303 5 жыл бұрын
I struggle so much about n writing essays just nothing comes to mind
@yucenyao5438
@yucenyao5438 5 жыл бұрын
Brian D me toooo i can’t even write a good essay in my mother tongue
@bobby3509
@bobby3509 5 жыл бұрын
Brian D I LITERALLY HAVE THIS PROBLEM TOO! I’ve been searching online for what I can do about it but can’t find any... 💀
@lucifer7458
@lucifer7458 4 жыл бұрын
Read books and novels, that might help
@RukhShariq
@RukhShariq 4 жыл бұрын
@@lucifer7458 any book suggestions
@lucifer7458
@lucifer7458 4 жыл бұрын
@@RukhShariq harry potter series, percy jackson, but if you want to start off big then you can read lord of the rings as well
@atirahshamsul676
@atirahshamsul676 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for sharing this! This lesson can't get at anywhere ! May your day bleesed and happy!
@bluesea_11
@bluesea_11 11 жыл бұрын
very helpful , very simple , thank u
@jianminshi
@jianminshi 11 жыл бұрын
Avoid use very, plz. haha
@BrentWigginsWords
@BrentWigginsWords 10 жыл бұрын
Aaron Shi Dead Poets Society taught us well!
@sheepblitzer
@sheepblitzer 11 жыл бұрын
Great tips! I also say avoid using phrasal verbs. For example: give up = forfeit; go down = decrease; do over = repeat. This usually improves formality. It also helps shorten sentences, like your tips #2, #4 and #5. Simplicity is key :)
@cr07forever93
@cr07forever93 8 жыл бұрын
Thanks for saving my money
@simonkordloo7980
@simonkordloo7980 6 жыл бұрын
money money money
@silverlinedshadow
@silverlinedshadow 4 жыл бұрын
Wow. I couldnt agree more. Great tips! I am in school for engineering, however, I wanted to make sure that my communication skills were "clean" and powerful. This helped immensely, you are a fantastic teacher.
@gurmeetkaur1143
@gurmeetkaur1143 11 жыл бұрын
really helpful, thanx a lot
@일레깅_YT
@일레깅_YT 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. I can use these tips for my students and my own essay. These tips apply to writing in other languages too.
@juliancorredorhernandez2528
@juliancorredorhernandez2528 7 жыл бұрын
This lesson was "really" "very" useful, "so" thank you!
@EnglishMentor-cp7qn
@EnglishMentor-cp7qn Жыл бұрын
Really Impressive of your videos and way of learning system. It is greatly helpful for learning English. Love it
@chokthumrongchongchorhor7674
@chokthumrongchongchorhor7674 9 жыл бұрын
Thank you (from Thailand student.)
@TheKiwiColonel
@TheKiwiColonel 9 жыл бұрын
Awesome tips, very useful for GCSE English.
@tansijiesherlynphoebe6448
@tansijiesherlynphoebe6448 4 жыл бұрын
1. Avoid using *contractions* 2. Avoid using *there is/there are* 3. Avoid using *alot, really, very, so* 4. Instead of using *passive voice* use *action voice* ➡️subject, verb then the object 5. Use *strong verbs* Just for easier reference for u guys and myself Don’t need thank me😜 I’m like alr over the age of learning grammar but I’m learning cuz I just got a borderline pass of 50+ for English but I need to get 70+ to graduate my school and get into the school that I want
@HighLanderPonyYT
@HighLanderPonyYT Жыл бұрын
*a lot Alot is a meme animal from the early internet days.
@emmanuelmadzivanyika3495
@emmanuelmadzivanyika3495 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Emma for your teachings I passed IELTS academic with Band 7 last month.
@danielroque657
@danielroque657 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you teacher Emma! i will follow your suggestions now i am going to write a different way to express my ideas
@Oxygaze1
@Oxygaze1 Ай бұрын
What is the way can you explain
@mememan2859
@mememan2859 7 жыл бұрын
knowledge is fun 😊
@芹菜很好吃
@芹菜很好吃 6 жыл бұрын
Lender Sneaks you're such a Ravenclaw xD.
@abdullalahalzouman9445
@abdullalahalzouman9445 5 жыл бұрын
Are you serious?! Knowledge is useless for gamers! *_Watching this video and says Knowledge is the best_* *Edit: You must be a gamer to read this.*
@mcthiccmac7319
@mcthiccmac7319 5 жыл бұрын
Knowledge is fun But I’m to lazy to gain such a magnificent thing
@3iwriter422
@3iwriter422 5 жыл бұрын
That depends on the way you interact with it.
@zalinamohammed4590
@zalinamohammed4590 5 жыл бұрын
Simple and straight to the point. Excellent teacher.
@Aditya62000
@Aditya62000 2 жыл бұрын
Mam i am Indian girl and i am fan of your teaching methods
@PapaSmurf1824
@PapaSmurf1824 10 жыл бұрын
7:04 Can you teach my how to draw a straight line like that?
@zm4261
@zm4261 10 жыл бұрын
it's straighter than me using a ruler 0_o
@JWu-jt7fz
@JWu-jt7fz 10 жыл бұрын
That straight line :O
@MrAndyCarlos
@MrAndyCarlos 10 жыл бұрын
xX zebyrocks456 Xx LMAO!
@friedchicken1
@friedchicken1 10 жыл бұрын
xX zebyrocks456 Xx did you buy the ruler "swerver 5000"?
@dhirupranadheer
@dhirupranadheer 10 жыл бұрын
lol
@23dexedc
@23dexedc 6 жыл бұрын
AMAZING!! :) i speak spanish but i KNOW that i can use this tips for essays as well.. thx.
@tkkhan566
@tkkhan566 4 жыл бұрын
I want to friendship with you.
@atari_hmb
@atari_hmb 10 жыл бұрын
The video helped my writing improve. Thank you Emma.
@sophiaw2761
@sophiaw2761 10 жыл бұрын
Chandi Tome haha !
@lutherwissa2361
@lutherwissa2361 4 жыл бұрын
This is one of the most useful videos on writings I found on KZbin
@roslindamonte1237
@roslindamonte1237 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks I really like your videos, Everything is so helpful, I've been watched your video a few months ago and I think that my knowledge is getting better. Thanks again for everything you have done for all of us around the world.
@leaveme1840
@leaveme1840 3 жыл бұрын
That's perfect , Thank you very much my teacher 😊❤
@MsWright
@MsWright 8 жыл бұрын
This video was so helpful for my students.
@carolinemcgookin2799
@carolinemcgookin2799 8 жыл бұрын
Good Job☝👍👌✌
@-chairs-9541
@-chairs-9541 6 жыл бұрын
*b_e_a_n_i_e *b_o_o *b_r_o *c_u_t_i_e she is my teacher. Lol
@GadGetHackss
@GadGetHackss 6 жыл бұрын
So you're a teacher and you need another teacher to help you?
@yukiw3951
@yukiw3951 6 жыл бұрын
i agree
@deresse25
@deresse25 6 жыл бұрын
Refer to rule no 3 do not use so in sentences.
@Lucynduku327
@Lucynduku327 Жыл бұрын
I just love how you explain everything and that helps significantly
@zaedynpasha399
@zaedynpasha399 3 жыл бұрын
3:08 is the most helpful tip
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة 8 жыл бұрын
thank you Emma for helping us improve our English
@zombie766
@zombie766 8 жыл бұрын
You should marry her
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة 8 жыл бұрын
I want marry her .lf she say OK
@ahmedmadrid8835
@ahmedmadrid8835 8 жыл бұрын
get lost😂
@MohsinKhan-xc1xk
@MohsinKhan-xc1xk 8 жыл бұрын
please tells how we make better English
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة 8 жыл бұрын
ahmed madrid why not dear
@newsnetwork91
@newsnetwork91 6 жыл бұрын
this video is helping us to improve our english skills and its a great platform to enhance our english writing skills Thanks Emma
@desireensaspa5801
@desireensaspa5801 5 жыл бұрын
thaingk you for teaching us😌😌
@cnemenzo1122
@cnemenzo1122 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for making video. I’m currently taking an English first year college reading and writing course I’m having a hard time constructing my sentence. English is not native language, I’m glad I can watch your videos and learn. Thank you. - By the way I love your teaching styles, clear and easy to understand plus your voice is comforting.
@zadorazciencekidsfun7605
@zadorazciencekidsfun7605 3 жыл бұрын
This helped me out for my grade five writing! I'm 9, I do grade six by the way Keep up the good work Miss. Emma!
@sultanelban76
@sultanelban76 8 жыл бұрын
Thank u so much ,it's so helpful
@tkar66
@tkar66 8 жыл бұрын
Thank you, it is helpful.
@marioland84
@marioland84 8 жыл бұрын
totally agreee....
@أبتجده
@أبتجده 8 жыл бұрын
hhh ikhwana l3areb hadhirin bi 9ouwa masha'allah 😉
@youngrogsoprano5343
@youngrogsoprano5343 7 жыл бұрын
Didn’t you watch the video?
@youngrogsoprano5343
@youngrogsoprano5343 7 жыл бұрын
She said not to use the word,”so.”
@matplayz23
@matplayz23 8 жыл бұрын
I'm 9 and this helped me
@matplayz23
@matplayz23 8 жыл бұрын
Yeah I know u are weird if u reply
@escobedojazz
@escobedojazz 8 жыл бұрын
cool :D
@chrissysingh6923
@chrissysingh6923 8 жыл бұрын
+JACKIE Chan how rude
@hbktj2226
@hbktj2226 8 жыл бұрын
U a perverted sick weirdo
@أبتجده
@أبتجده 8 жыл бұрын
cool ! .. where you from ?
@MarcosThomason
@MarcosThomason Жыл бұрын
I really enjoyed this video it was both informative and entertaining. Thanks for taking the time for these instructions.
@Youtuber90sdude
@Youtuber90sdude 8 жыл бұрын
I hate English but that is why I am here. I will make it my strength.
@khoa8718
@khoa8718 6 жыл бұрын
Alejandro Morales well said
@williamli0722
@williamli0722 6 жыл бұрын
I don’t feel so good.
@ayushsharma7036
@ayushsharma7036 6 жыл бұрын
Alejandro Morales Yes because It always decrease our overall percentage.
@divashankarvarnaraja1747
@divashankarvarnaraja1747 6 жыл бұрын
Alejandro Morales all the best
@envyvaliente2152
@envyvaliente2152 6 жыл бұрын
Shut up fuck up get up here
@fletrgoodboy7456
@fletrgoodboy7456 4 жыл бұрын
Let me guess, you searched this and it didn't get recommended. Thanks for 1 like!
@trousleperson632
@trousleperson632 4 жыл бұрын
56 likes now XD
@alexanderdelapaz5637
@alexanderdelapaz5637 4 жыл бұрын
99 likes now lol
@bob1244
@bob1244 4 жыл бұрын
I have the power of being the 100th like🌚
@trousleperson632
@trousleperson632 4 жыл бұрын
@@bob1244 lucky 😭
@antoi0520
@antoi0520 7 жыл бұрын
I'm confused.. I can't shorten my sentences because there is a number of word to target. And some say to use complex sentences..
@rickcarvalhosantiago7416
@rickcarvalhosantiago7416 6 жыл бұрын
What she means is that some words or terms we commonly use at home or with friends, are used as colloquialism. And that makes your writing poor and non-professional.
@marklu8566
@marklu8566 6 жыл бұрын
Rick Santiago hi
@ctoe5028
@ctoe5028 5 жыл бұрын
When you use a good mix of short and long sentences, it makes your writing interesting
@0Raik
@0Raik 5 жыл бұрын
In my experience teachers are sadist f*cks that don't get along with students (even if you think you do, they experts in faking a smile). None of them is consistent so you need to learn each one as like a new cat. Always listen to others who had a previous teacher and their warnings. Teachers don't change, YOU change.
@lovettuduebor1902
@lovettuduebor1902 5 жыл бұрын
I want to say that word count is a very high/middle school thing. Professional writing and college writing concentrates more on length, like how many pages something needs to be, letter font and size. The only writing that might focus on word count is journalism.
@deanberry7978
@deanberry7978 5 жыл бұрын
The best English teacher I ever have
@gulafridi7420
@gulafridi7420 5 жыл бұрын
Mam, I know, i got late, but its very interesting to follow your lectures on English grammar, and i really like your way of teaching, Thanks mam
@AyanaMegumi
@AyanaMegumi 5 жыл бұрын
This is my 3rd videos from you and I would say, I am impressed. Thank you for this free tutorial. You're a great help to us non-native speakers. :)
@garlicgirl3149
@garlicgirl3149 8 жыл бұрын
Sad I don't remember some of this from High School. I almost want to say we need updates depending on the type of job you have!
@simonkordloo7980
@simonkordloo7980 6 жыл бұрын
aaaawwwwwwww
@ethansim5746
@ethansim5746 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! I got 96 marks on my writing!! Thank youx999999999
@PoorDog69
@PoorDog69 8 жыл бұрын
Thank you. This makes sense. I want to share my writing skill. Someone reply to me any mistakes and give me a rating. Don't use emotion. Use logic. Mark's about to be attacked by a great white. Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed. Jack tries it second time and hits the great whites nose, but there's a strange difference. The great white does not quit. "Jack!" Mark shouted. "Grab the harpoon! It's right behind you!" Jack takes the harpoon with a grunt. "Throw it to the great white!" He shouted. "I can't!" Jack replied. "Why not?"Mark asked. "It's too heavy!" Jack replied. "Just throw it Jack!" Mark screamed. "This great white is about to shred my life!" Jack throws the harpoon with all of his power. The harpoon did not hit the great whites nose, but it's eye. The great white swam away with blood trails in the sea. Mark swam to the shore safely. "Are you ok Mark? Ow," Jack asked in pain. "Yeah I'm ok," Mark replied. "My arm is sore," said Jack. "Well. It was worth to save a friends life," said Mark. "Yeah,"Jack replied.
@doraemonandchibi
@doraemonandchibi 8 жыл бұрын
There are some quibbles: First of all, your sentences are a teeny bit jittery, they don't have a a constant flow. Try writing sentences of various lengths with a greater use of punctuation ( a coma, dash, semicolon, a pause etc.) "Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed" Okay..um, what do you mean by "avoid"? Also, since you are narrating the incident in real-time, use present tense Rephrasing the sentence, a better way to write this would be: "Jack hurls a rock at the Great White's nose to free Mark from it's clutches, but fails in the process" Always shift the paragraph when you use a new line of dialogue, I can almost see my English teacher pulling her hair out in agony xD And keep in mind that rich words are essential to a good writing. Instead of using "Throw", use "Hurled" Likewise, use "Moaned" instead of "Asked" and so on. (Though this might depend on the context) ------ All in all, it's good, you'll get there. You have the potential 3.5/5
@PoorDog69
@PoorDog69 8 жыл бұрын
Umer Usman Thank you for rating, using logic, and helping me out something rich and new. I'll try my best
@doraemonandchibi
@doraemonandchibi 8 жыл бұрын
ƬψƬΩiiXinnex Don't mention it :)
@cookiecrumbler1176
@cookiecrumbler1176 8 жыл бұрын
I may not be the best at writing, but I'll give you my opinion on your writing skill: I like it, but it's a bit on the choppy side. It is nice, but not the best. Please don't get upset if I'm being too blunt. Afterall, you did ask for criticism.
@krumpin312anime
@krumpin312anime 8 жыл бұрын
ƬψƬΩiiXinnex How can i write if i am creative? The logic part of my brain struggles. Do have any advice?
@ЯковН-ю9х
@ЯковН-ю9х 7 жыл бұрын
great tips. really great tips. i tried and used a couple of times this testing and training in writing and my texts began look very different, it looked like some govr statement :) and that was the goal i wanted. thanks for explaination. And guys - just make yourself to train more and more, train writing speaking listenin and reading with your great efforts - its hard and not a lovely doing but do it untill exam and know that after this you will relax as never before :) motivate yourself and know one single main thing - everything will be ALRIGHT !!! Cheers
@MiguelSilva-lx8qc
@MiguelSilva-lx8qc 9 жыл бұрын
you're awesome really good teacher... :>
@luvstyle111
@luvstyle111 4 жыл бұрын
this so so helpful thank u so much!!!
@jayson7865
@jayson7865 6 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful! Thank you so much, now i realize why i always get B For My English 😂
@car7561
@car7561 5 жыл бұрын
Blink!!! 😄
@Bnoopy
@Bnoopy 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for these tips! I've been delving into the translation business, and your tips have been of great assistance. I'm especially guilty of (over)using "there is/are ...", so now I look specifically for these two once my drafts are done.
@ez7096
@ez7096 5 жыл бұрын
you just failed her lesson by saying very
@venidetta
@venidetta 5 жыл бұрын
@@ez7096 i-
@k5rakitan
@k5rakitan 9 жыл бұрын
"I issued a fart." becomes "I farted."
@Human_01
@Human_01 9 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan You are getting there my friend. Just a 5 more years to go and your English levels will be comparable to that of 5 year olds : 3 God speed my friend.
@rodrigovargas1355
@rodrigovargas1355 6 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan xD
@rodrigovargas1355
@rodrigovargas1355 6 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan lol
@thelowlypianist7310
@thelowlypianist7310 6 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan ru 3?
@ruqaiya6697
@ruqaiya6697 6 жыл бұрын
Nice one
@vasu7520
@vasu7520 3 жыл бұрын
it is mazing to have a dexterous teacher like you , you are providing immense knowledge to learners. truly hats off to your effort.
@kevinmiz5090
@kevinmiz5090 5 жыл бұрын
why i could i not had you as my english teacher back in 1-12 haha love how you teach and show us!! thanks !
@jecr8623
@jecr8623 5 жыл бұрын
You want to be a better writer? A B W ALWAYS BE WRITING
@TimeManInJail
@TimeManInJail 5 жыл бұрын
To add onto that you will improve faster with someone correcting your work.
@nooriman5944
@nooriman5944 5 жыл бұрын
What should I write? Idk where to start
@MissteriousMisstress
@MissteriousMisstress 5 жыл бұрын
@@nooriman5944 just free write - and some thing will come out. Or choose a topic of interest
@sejfzlrrhman
@sejfzlrrhman 5 жыл бұрын
What the hell is "YABWA"?
@HeiMarLy
@HeiMarLy 5 жыл бұрын
Syed Fazlur Rahman lol I was wondering if I had missed something orrr...
@jerihallberg5875
@jerihallberg5875 7 жыл бұрын
EMMA'S PRESENTATION ARE ATTRACTIVE, EASY TO UNDERSTAND AND RELIABLE OF CONTENT!! Being used at International Business College, English Comp 1301 and 1302. Thank's again.. Jeri Hallberg Harmon Griffin, M Ed
@mahbubsiddique3068
@mahbubsiddique3068 2 жыл бұрын
u r an excellent teacher. You taught me the lesson which i had failed to learn during my whole academic years. Thank u teacher. Oh! yes, your smile is great! Love u!
@ericjardine8210
@ericjardine8210 5 жыл бұрын
Anyone else watching this and not going to school?
@Laraamaa
@Laraamaa 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I am from Germany and I have a classtest tomorow 😂
@marysun4435
@marysun4435 4 жыл бұрын
how was your classtest?
@phant0m0th_
@phant0m0th_ 10 жыл бұрын
This would have helped when I was in high school!! Ugh!
@joseph3647
@joseph3647 10 жыл бұрын
Hi Bethany, we are writing a letter to a person. We have to write about our pastime. Could you please check it for wrong words ect. ? :)
@khala952
@khala952 10 жыл бұрын
this is not for u. this video for us (international students)
@janavi1747
@janavi1747 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your wonderful teaching. I have been learning English for more than an year. My speaking skills got improved. However, I have to improve my writing skills. When I started learning, I came across your videos. When I am looking into your videos, it's becoming more easy for me to correct the mistakes on writing part.
@dRBAR
@dRBAR 6 жыл бұрын
Thanks! Here's a tip: Don't forget to cover your dry erase marker :)
@mainaEmJay
@mainaEmJay 4 жыл бұрын
hey friend, you are still using contractions even after the lecture?
@nelvinraj2829
@nelvinraj2829 5 жыл бұрын
I’m using this method for my exams tmrw...hope and pray for me that I’ll get A!
@Alex-oi5kt
@Alex-oi5kt 5 жыл бұрын
NELVIN RAJ me too I also have exams tomorrow
@pequod_
@pequod_ 5 жыл бұрын
how'd it go
@ayerbel7654
@ayerbel7654 4 жыл бұрын
its been a year, did you get the A???
@bero1391
@bero1391 5 жыл бұрын
I’m using this for my fsa tomorrow I’m in 4th grade doing my writing fsa writing
@thegammaduskit3704
@thegammaduskit3704 5 жыл бұрын
State Exam?
@emptydreams225
@emptydreams225 5 жыл бұрын
@@thegammaduskit3704 Yes it is the Florida standardized Assessment test. I also will be taking this test in just a couple hours. (Im practicing the use of a more formal voice).
@thegammaduskit3704
@thegammaduskit3704 5 жыл бұрын
@@emptydreams225 I finished my 5th grade yesterday and Tuesday. It was easier then ny Intern Assessment.
@FoxesDragonsAndVirgos
@FoxesDragonsAndVirgos Жыл бұрын
Short, simple, and educational. I was making at least three of the mistakes every single time that I wrote a formal letter. Thanks!
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