5 tips to improve your writing 1) Don't use Contractions such as; don't, can't, shouldn't use; do not cannot should not 2) Avoid there is/ there are There are many issues that students face at university Students face many issues at university 3) Don't use common words such as; really, very, a lot, so 4) Use active voice instead of passive 5)Use strong verbs
@vazedashaikh61278 жыл бұрын
Tarkan Gürpınar Thnks for summarizing.
@Hekeepsitclassy8 жыл бұрын
Safir Semon crap
@tarkang6578 жыл бұрын
how in the world would you use that in an essay wtf :D:DD:D
@claudiavillatoro99827 жыл бұрын
definitely some people do, for example, English learners like me. These tips will be helpful for my writing proficiency test, which I am about to take.
@muhammadalam69657 жыл бұрын
Tarkan Gürpınar s
@cmrandall91519 жыл бұрын
It's ironic that in spoken English we use long sentences to sound smart, but in written English we achieve that result with short sentences.
@gagangrewal47068 жыл бұрын
CM Randall and.
@Josh-Parkhill7 жыл бұрын
Why is that ironic?
@roayasaaida38517 жыл бұрын
because people prefer listening more than reading
@conditionalbee96037 жыл бұрын
CM Randall My sentences are always too long whenever I'm writing
@feedhyungwonplease60877 жыл бұрын
Cause a reader will be bored if the sentence is too long
@Demitrival4 жыл бұрын
Writing is such a skill to have. It’s like forming a puzzle. I’ve always envied people that could tell stories n write.
@nathancrotty81154 жыл бұрын
I’ll help you out if you’re taking notes. 0:29 Do not use contractions 1:40 Avoid using there is/there are 3:05 Avoid using really/very/a lot 6:06 Use active voice instead of passive voice 9:00 Use strong verbs
@rosemallowss13094 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@monikahasda39343 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@walkover-cc1dm2 жыл бұрын
Tyvm
@discoveryourvision71322 жыл бұрын
best
@H21-c9d2 жыл бұрын
She did this
@whitlovesu26 жыл бұрын
I attend university online, at Ashford University. Your videos have helped me, so much in my writing. Thank you, and keep up the good work.
@Technicalwriter4 жыл бұрын
Good
@nosiphojanelle25884 жыл бұрын
This is useful because I was surprised why my teacher circled “so” and other words in a red pen in most of my essays
@dmdm91983 жыл бұрын
Really shows you teacher sucked because all she did was grade and not teach
@mouna88833 жыл бұрын
@Rebecca Beverly hello, please can I send you an email too? I need help but I have no one to help me.
@iwilldonothingtomorrow18408 жыл бұрын
1.do not use contractions ex.don't can't shouldn't 2.avoid there is &there are 3.don't use really ,a lot ,so &very 4.use active voice 5.use strong verbs
@workbutlive4 жыл бұрын
Oh my god! I just realized that I might have been making these mistakes all my life. And, all it took was a few minutes of conscious effort and practice. Thanks, this is super useful.
@vancouverkiz24 күн бұрын
What in the ai
@vamsispr16 жыл бұрын
I'm already a better writer than I was 15 minutes ago, thank you.
@longjunior76383 жыл бұрын
😂good keep it up😂
@lauragallardo66296 жыл бұрын
Just watching this video has raised my grade up from a 75 to a 95 😍 thank you.
@LEONLOVESMUSIC5 жыл бұрын
Awesome bro you maded this video work in your exams
@akagrimreaper67025 жыл бұрын
How!? I had a 78% and I got 5 A’s in a row, and I still don’t even have a 85% yet
@twasadream4965 жыл бұрын
You saying that gives me hope
@sayanidhar74764 жыл бұрын
You guys even get 75?
@zeeeabhaize32444 жыл бұрын
@@sayanidhar7476 hahaha happy to see someone had the same reaction as me
@detrex31056 жыл бұрын
I’m using these tips for my selective exams tommorrow, pray for me
@kameliyaoppal6 жыл бұрын
IceyShot hey 👋🏼 how was your exam?
@Ceylon036 жыл бұрын
Yeah how was it
@Supot1766 жыл бұрын
What happened to your exam?
@charismatalks84776 жыл бұрын
@@Supot176 Press F to pay respect
@kimjong-un85436 жыл бұрын
Howd it go
@paulevensen4 жыл бұрын
Emma, this is great! I am recommending it to my students and have sent the video to colleagues. I've even embedded it in a blog post I wrote on academic or formal writing. Really well done and very enjoyable. Brava!
@sharin77626 жыл бұрын
Thank you for helping me because when I checked my grades today, I saw that I had an F in ELA and started crying so I decided to look for videos to help me and this helped me a lot
@ambercoelho92324 жыл бұрын
same
@juba78 жыл бұрын
I got 86 (overall) and 22 on the speaking section and 21 in writing. Thanks for all your amazing videos. Without them, I could not make it.
@kismatsapkota33096 жыл бұрын
Juliana Bassetti yes
@ishavrisha10 ай бұрын
Watching it in 2024
@jacobbravo89438 ай бұрын
Real 😢
@SalmanSalman-w3b5 ай бұрын
Me😂
@MartinaGarcia-k7h5 ай бұрын
Same
@zihaamapdisalam10455 ай бұрын
Me
@AmiduNoimot4 ай бұрын
Same here
@Bel0ve014 жыл бұрын
So HELPFUL OMG Tips for writing: 1. Avoid contractions 2. Avoid there is/there are (sentence become stronger to the point) 3.Avoid really, very, a lot, so (weakens writing) Use “many” or “much” ex:Much of the time is wasted 4. Have subject, verb, object 5.Use strong verbs When you see verb and noun (try to use verb) Example 1 : he gave assistance -> He assisted Ex 2: made an objection -> He objected (Does the noun have verb form?)
@paolabarajas38137 жыл бұрын
I always tought Passive voice was more formal than active voice. Thanks!!
@sccm1008 жыл бұрын
I think you can learn from this free video than from the $91 book I had to buy for my English class.
@JesperSalama7 жыл бұрын
Your sentence seems incomplete?
@erickaguero14397 жыл бұрын
sebastian cuello I bet money you did not even read the 91$ book, yet you complain how useless the book is. Take the easy route and watch videos, that would help you more than reading a book, you mundane fool.
@filiplindstrii45816 жыл бұрын
sebastian cuello o
@dragonflyhk6 жыл бұрын
Whether you prefer watching videos or reading books, continue to practice you writing skills. Finding books your are interested in reading will help your writing improve as well.
@nemesis0436 жыл бұрын
exactly
@springtime10099 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Emma. You increased my english knowledge.
@rajachowdaryvepuri48809 жыл бұрын
Sirad Hanad where is task 2 video
@redstonegate58969 жыл бұрын
+Sirad Hanad "enrich" is used better on "knowledge"
@shubhamdhruv98369 жыл бұрын
+RedstoneGate lol
@siddhantbiradar17917 жыл бұрын
even I play minecraft
@Meteaura227 жыл бұрын
You mean enrich rather than increased.
@shark18344 жыл бұрын
wow i was never taught this kind of stuff at my highschool, surprised i got the grades i did in English
@exoticcats61194 жыл бұрын
For the past year or two my teachers haven’t taught me anything new
@enricdomingo70964 жыл бұрын
Exotic Cats so did mine
@enricdomingo70964 жыл бұрын
Exotic Cats all they did was do the whole thing again. Notthing new
@glennhonestly66004 жыл бұрын
Dont tell me they never taught abt contractions
@杜若-j1o4 жыл бұрын
sorry,the passive voice
@mariotapalla77835 жыл бұрын
The most important is I have learned even a little bit of knowledge the proper use [WORDs] in academic writing, Thank you, Emma, for this video
@lawbnowercuj4 жыл бұрын
my teacher gave me an extension to submit my assessment and im so happy cause she is so nice and i would be sad if i put no effort into something that she gave me extra time to do
@gxsai4 жыл бұрын
aw that’s sweet
@irpansalampenjelajah60674 жыл бұрын
Great
@CrystalFaith2944 жыл бұрын
Uhhh
@gichuruboniface27674 жыл бұрын
@@CrystalFaith294 I can help with assignments and essays
@MyNamezSlimShady5 жыл бұрын
I just wanted to thank you for all that you’re doing. Your teachings helped me big time and I scored 7 bands in Writing. Keep up the good work and wish you all the very best!!
@edgarpinyol4410 Жыл бұрын
I am very grateful for this type of support to those of us who need it. Much appreciated!
@KoffiBossoMath Жыл бұрын
I agree
@noneone.............5 жыл бұрын
Ironic actually, short sentences are powerful, to the points, thanks Emma, you are something else.😊
@armyalwaystogether74064 жыл бұрын
Same here
@ayeshamehrban32493 жыл бұрын
@@armyalwaystogether7406 lol
@blessingflorencetsikata67065 жыл бұрын
Thank you for assisting me in the improvement of writing. God bless you.
@MrAdudavid4 жыл бұрын
WHO ELSE IS WATCHING THIS IN 2022 AND BEYOND
@quanghuyvu1164 жыл бұрын
me
@saberivy99424 жыл бұрын
Maybė...
@mofenyimudabuka70344 жыл бұрын
Me
@saberivy99424 жыл бұрын
@@mofenyimudabuka7034 ö
@zainalkaddu91524 жыл бұрын
Me too
@PartidasInmortalesdeAjedrez3 жыл бұрын
Very useful tips! Thanks!
@ldaniii3 жыл бұрын
Che que buen video el de hoy
@minimalmedial973010 жыл бұрын
There are a lot of tips in your video that really helps me :)
@emineaygun56110 жыл бұрын
avoid using really:PP
@nourchaar450310 жыл бұрын
Emine aygün (There are) & (a lot of) too :P
@chrisg.650910 жыл бұрын
And just "help" no s
@nourchaar450310 жыл бұрын
Hahaha
@joonpark213510 жыл бұрын
apparently you DID NOT pay attention that much. She CLEARLY said do not use "THERE ARE". But then again i do not agree with the instructor in alot of things like at 2:11 she should have wrote, Students face many issues at the University or Universities if She didnt want to use "THE" in the sentence. Unless the University is the name of the university but i doubt that, hopefully.
@BackToRootz8 жыл бұрын
Thank you. It just made my day and how ever i was making exactly these 5 mistakes in my essays.
@anthonyjosephtay58308 жыл бұрын
This video really helped me a lot!! Thank you so much! I feel more confident in my essay writing! Can u make videos on how to write different type of middle/high school essays?
@AlexHilarious8 жыл бұрын
Singaporean siol... U taking o levels this year?
@ttheguyy8 жыл бұрын
gg tmr start liao
@unknown_85884 жыл бұрын
This video really helped me. I thought it's more formal and smart to write something in longer sentences 😂
@minnicute25444 жыл бұрын
Me too😂😂
@anamavarez69414 жыл бұрын
Me too lmao I swore "conducted an investigation" sounded formal and smart sajdasd
@astderi68404 жыл бұрын
Who else watch this the day before the exam
@xintrea_21404 жыл бұрын
I literally am/:
@sov_eleanor95424 жыл бұрын
Yall pray for me bros😭😭😭
@harinisatishkumar22434 жыл бұрын
@@sov_eleanor9542 Even me. ATB
@aynahan85994 жыл бұрын
my english exam is in 3 days 🤷🏻
@sidra2k54 жыл бұрын
MEEE
@ProfessorLooney955 жыл бұрын
This is great. Doing the quiz immediately after watching this video really helped me solidify this new found knowledge. Thank you, Emma.
@TatyanaEdgeworth5 жыл бұрын
Definitely need this! I’m taking this written exam for transfer students in a hour! Wish me luck
@auryhudamc74975 жыл бұрын
I have been learning English for one year and I always love your videos on KZbin. I’ve learned many things and today I learn to be a good writer. Thank you for always sharing.
@sangitagaikwad83803 жыл бұрын
I wasn't taught like this ever in my whole life, I understood everything what you taught, thank you mam, this was very useful ❤
@russellperez81908 жыл бұрын
Good teaching better than my English teacher
@cuongon75047 жыл бұрын
LOL
@blueandbronzeravenclaw19615 жыл бұрын
What if you teacher reads this!😯
@briandauch3035 жыл бұрын
I struggle so much about n writing essays just nothing comes to mind
@yucenyao54385 жыл бұрын
Brian D me toooo i can’t even write a good essay in my mother tongue
@bobby35095 жыл бұрын
Brian D I LITERALLY HAVE THIS PROBLEM TOO! I’ve been searching online for what I can do about it but can’t find any... 💀
@lucifer74584 жыл бұрын
Read books and novels, that might help
@RukhShariq4 жыл бұрын
@@lucifer7458 any book suggestions
@lucifer74584 жыл бұрын
@@RukhShariq harry potter series, percy jackson, but if you want to start off big then you can read lord of the rings as well
@atirahshamsul6764 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for sharing this! This lesson can't get at anywhere ! May your day bleesed and happy!
@bluesea_1111 жыл бұрын
very helpful , very simple , thank u
@jianminshi11 жыл бұрын
Avoid use very, plz. haha
@BrentWigginsWords10 жыл бұрын
Aaron Shi Dead Poets Society taught us well!
@sheepblitzer11 жыл бұрын
Great tips! I also say avoid using phrasal verbs. For example: give up = forfeit; go down = decrease; do over = repeat. This usually improves formality. It also helps shorten sentences, like your tips #2, #4 and #5. Simplicity is key :)
@cr07forever938 жыл бұрын
Thanks for saving my money
@simonkordloo79806 жыл бұрын
money money money
@silverlinedshadow4 жыл бұрын
Wow. I couldnt agree more. Great tips! I am in school for engineering, however, I wanted to make sure that my communication skills were "clean" and powerful. This helped immensely, you are a fantastic teacher.
@gurmeetkaur114311 жыл бұрын
really helpful, thanx a lot
@일레깅_YT5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. I can use these tips for my students and my own essay. These tips apply to writing in other languages too.
@juliancorredorhernandez25287 жыл бұрын
This lesson was "really" "very" useful, "so" thank you!
@EnglishMentor-cp7qn Жыл бұрын
Really Impressive of your videos and way of learning system. It is greatly helpful for learning English. Love it
@chokthumrongchongchorhor76749 жыл бұрын
Thank you (from Thailand student.)
@TheKiwiColonel9 жыл бұрын
Awesome tips, very useful for GCSE English.
@tansijiesherlynphoebe64484 жыл бұрын
1. Avoid using *contractions* 2. Avoid using *there is/there are* 3. Avoid using *alot, really, very, so* 4. Instead of using *passive voice* use *action voice* ➡️subject, verb then the object 5. Use *strong verbs* Just for easier reference for u guys and myself Don’t need thank me😜 I’m like alr over the age of learning grammar but I’m learning cuz I just got a borderline pass of 50+ for English but I need to get 70+ to graduate my school and get into the school that I want
@HighLanderPonyYT Жыл бұрын
*a lot Alot is a meme animal from the early internet days.
@emmanuelmadzivanyika3495 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Emma for your teachings I passed IELTS academic with Band 7 last month.
@danielroque6574 жыл бұрын
Thank you teacher Emma! i will follow your suggestions now i am going to write a different way to express my ideas
@Oxygaze1Ай бұрын
What is the way can you explain
@mememan28597 жыл бұрын
knowledge is fun 😊
@芹菜很好吃6 жыл бұрын
Lender Sneaks you're such a Ravenclaw xD.
@abdullalahalzouman94455 жыл бұрын
Are you serious?! Knowledge is useless for gamers! *_Watching this video and says Knowledge is the best_* *Edit: You must be a gamer to read this.*
@mcthiccmac73195 жыл бұрын
Knowledge is fun But I’m to lazy to gain such a magnificent thing
@3iwriter4225 жыл бұрын
That depends on the way you interact with it.
@zalinamohammed45905 жыл бұрын
Simple and straight to the point. Excellent teacher.
@Aditya620002 жыл бұрын
Mam i am Indian girl and i am fan of your teaching methods
@PapaSmurf182410 жыл бұрын
7:04 Can you teach my how to draw a straight line like that?
@zm426110 жыл бұрын
it's straighter than me using a ruler 0_o
@JWu-jt7fz10 жыл бұрын
That straight line :O
@MrAndyCarlos10 жыл бұрын
xX zebyrocks456 Xx LMAO!
@friedchicken110 жыл бұрын
xX zebyrocks456 Xx did you buy the ruler "swerver 5000"?
@dhirupranadheer10 жыл бұрын
lol
@23dexedc6 жыл бұрын
AMAZING!! :) i speak spanish but i KNOW that i can use this tips for essays as well.. thx.
@tkkhan5664 жыл бұрын
I want to friendship with you.
@atari_hmb10 жыл бұрын
The video helped my writing improve. Thank you Emma.
@sophiaw276110 жыл бұрын
Chandi Tome haha !
@lutherwissa23614 жыл бұрын
This is one of the most useful videos on writings I found on KZbin
@roslindamonte12375 жыл бұрын
Thanks I really like your videos, Everything is so helpful, I've been watched your video a few months ago and I think that my knowledge is getting better. Thanks again for everything you have done for all of us around the world.
@leaveme18403 жыл бұрын
That's perfect , Thank you very much my teacher 😊❤
@MsWright8 жыл бұрын
This video was so helpful for my students.
@carolinemcgookin27998 жыл бұрын
Good Job☝👍👌✌
@-chairs-95416 жыл бұрын
*b_e_a_n_i_e *b_o_o *b_r_o *c_u_t_i_e she is my teacher. Lol
@GadGetHackss6 жыл бұрын
So you're a teacher and you need another teacher to help you?
@yukiw39516 жыл бұрын
i agree
@deresse256 жыл бұрын
Refer to rule no 3 do not use so in sentences.
@Lucynduku327 Жыл бұрын
I just love how you explain everything and that helps significantly
@zaedynpasha3993 жыл бұрын
3:08 is the most helpful tip
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة8 жыл бұрын
thank you Emma for helping us improve our English
@zombie7668 жыл бұрын
You should marry her
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة8 жыл бұрын
I want marry her .lf she say OK
@ahmedmadrid88358 жыл бұрын
get lost😂
@MohsinKhan-xc1xk8 жыл бұрын
please tells how we make better English
@ابراهيمادريسالجنينة8 жыл бұрын
ahmed madrid why not dear
@newsnetwork916 жыл бұрын
this video is helping us to improve our english skills and its a great platform to enhance our english writing skills Thanks Emma
@desireensaspa58015 жыл бұрын
thaingk you for teaching us😌😌
@cnemenzo1122 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for making video. I’m currently taking an English first year college reading and writing course I’m having a hard time constructing my sentence. English is not native language, I’m glad I can watch your videos and learn. Thank you. - By the way I love your teaching styles, clear and easy to understand plus your voice is comforting.
@zadorazciencekidsfun76053 жыл бұрын
This helped me out for my grade five writing! I'm 9, I do grade six by the way Keep up the good work Miss. Emma!
@sultanelban768 жыл бұрын
Thank u so much ,it's so helpful
@tkar668 жыл бұрын
Thank you, it is helpful.
@marioland848 жыл бұрын
totally agreee....
@أبتجده8 жыл бұрын
hhh ikhwana l3areb hadhirin bi 9ouwa masha'allah 😉
@youngrogsoprano53437 жыл бұрын
Didn’t you watch the video?
@youngrogsoprano53437 жыл бұрын
She said not to use the word,”so.”
@matplayz238 жыл бұрын
I'm 9 and this helped me
@matplayz238 жыл бұрын
Yeah I know u are weird if u reply
@escobedojazz8 жыл бұрын
cool :D
@chrissysingh69238 жыл бұрын
+JACKIE Chan how rude
@hbktj22268 жыл бұрын
U a perverted sick weirdo
@أبتجده8 жыл бұрын
cool ! .. where you from ?
@MarcosThomason Жыл бұрын
I really enjoyed this video it was both informative and entertaining. Thanks for taking the time for these instructions.
@Youtuber90sdude8 жыл бұрын
I hate English but that is why I am here. I will make it my strength.
@khoa87186 жыл бұрын
Alejandro Morales well said
@williamli07226 жыл бұрын
I don’t feel so good.
@ayushsharma70366 жыл бұрын
Alejandro Morales Yes because It always decrease our overall percentage.
@divashankarvarnaraja17476 жыл бұрын
Alejandro Morales all the best
@envyvaliente21526 жыл бұрын
Shut up fuck up get up here
@fletrgoodboy74564 жыл бұрын
Let me guess, you searched this and it didn't get recommended. Thanks for 1 like!
@trousleperson6324 жыл бұрын
56 likes now XD
@alexanderdelapaz56374 жыл бұрын
99 likes now lol
@bob12444 жыл бұрын
I have the power of being the 100th like🌚
@trousleperson6324 жыл бұрын
@@bob1244 lucky 😭
@antoi05207 жыл бұрын
I'm confused.. I can't shorten my sentences because there is a number of word to target. And some say to use complex sentences..
@rickcarvalhosantiago74166 жыл бұрын
What she means is that some words or terms we commonly use at home or with friends, are used as colloquialism. And that makes your writing poor and non-professional.
@marklu85666 жыл бұрын
Rick Santiago hi
@ctoe50285 жыл бұрын
When you use a good mix of short and long sentences, it makes your writing interesting
@0Raik5 жыл бұрын
In my experience teachers are sadist f*cks that don't get along with students (even if you think you do, they experts in faking a smile). None of them is consistent so you need to learn each one as like a new cat. Always listen to others who had a previous teacher and their warnings. Teachers don't change, YOU change.
@lovettuduebor19025 жыл бұрын
I want to say that word count is a very high/middle school thing. Professional writing and college writing concentrates more on length, like how many pages something needs to be, letter font and size. The only writing that might focus on word count is journalism.
@deanberry79785 жыл бұрын
The best English teacher I ever have
@gulafridi74205 жыл бұрын
Mam, I know, i got late, but its very interesting to follow your lectures on English grammar, and i really like your way of teaching, Thanks mam
@AyanaMegumi5 жыл бұрын
This is my 3rd videos from you and I would say, I am impressed. Thank you for this free tutorial. You're a great help to us non-native speakers. :)
@garlicgirl31498 жыл бұрын
Sad I don't remember some of this from High School. I almost want to say we need updates depending on the type of job you have!
@simonkordloo79806 жыл бұрын
aaaawwwwwwww
@ethansim57464 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! I got 96 marks on my writing!! Thank youx999999999
@PoorDog698 жыл бұрын
Thank you. This makes sense. I want to share my writing skill. Someone reply to me any mistakes and give me a rating. Don't use emotion. Use logic. Mark's about to be attacked by a great white. Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed. Jack tries it second time and hits the great whites nose, but there's a strange difference. The great white does not quit. "Jack!" Mark shouted. "Grab the harpoon! It's right behind you!" Jack takes the harpoon with a grunt. "Throw it to the great white!" He shouted. "I can't!" Jack replied. "Why not?"Mark asked. "It's too heavy!" Jack replied. "Just throw it Jack!" Mark screamed. "This great white is about to shred my life!" Jack throws the harpoon with all of his power. The harpoon did not hit the great whites nose, but it's eye. The great white swam away with blood trails in the sea. Mark swam to the shore safely. "Are you ok Mark? Ow," Jack asked in pain. "Yeah I'm ok," Mark replied. "My arm is sore," said Jack. "Well. It was worth to save a friends life," said Mark. "Yeah,"Jack replied.
@doraemonandchibi8 жыл бұрын
There are some quibbles: First of all, your sentences are a teeny bit jittery, they don't have a a constant flow. Try writing sentences of various lengths with a greater use of punctuation ( a coma, dash, semicolon, a pause etc.) "Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed" Okay..um, what do you mean by "avoid"? Also, since you are narrating the incident in real-time, use present tense Rephrasing the sentence, a better way to write this would be: "Jack hurls a rock at the Great White's nose to free Mark from it's clutches, but fails in the process" Always shift the paragraph when you use a new line of dialogue, I can almost see my English teacher pulling her hair out in agony xD And keep in mind that rich words are essential to a good writing. Instead of using "Throw", use "Hurled" Likewise, use "Moaned" instead of "Asked" and so on. (Though this might depend on the context) ------ All in all, it's good, you'll get there. You have the potential 3.5/5
@PoorDog698 жыл бұрын
Umer Usman Thank you for rating, using logic, and helping me out something rich and new. I'll try my best
@doraemonandchibi8 жыл бұрын
ƬψƬΩiiXinnex Don't mention it :)
@cookiecrumbler11768 жыл бұрын
I may not be the best at writing, but I'll give you my opinion on your writing skill: I like it, but it's a bit on the choppy side. It is nice, but not the best. Please don't get upset if I'm being too blunt. Afterall, you did ask for criticism.
@krumpin312anime8 жыл бұрын
ƬψƬΩiiXinnex How can i write if i am creative? The logic part of my brain struggles. Do have any advice?
@ЯковН-ю9х7 жыл бұрын
great tips. really great tips. i tried and used a couple of times this testing and training in writing and my texts began look very different, it looked like some govr statement :) and that was the goal i wanted. thanks for explaination. And guys - just make yourself to train more and more, train writing speaking listenin and reading with your great efforts - its hard and not a lovely doing but do it untill exam and know that after this you will relax as never before :) motivate yourself and know one single main thing - everything will be ALRIGHT !!! Cheers
@MiguelSilva-lx8qc9 жыл бұрын
you're awesome really good teacher... :>
@luvstyle1114 жыл бұрын
this so so helpful thank u so much!!!
@jayson78656 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful! Thank you so much, now i realize why i always get B For My English 😂
@car75615 жыл бұрын
Blink!!! 😄
@Bnoopy5 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for these tips! I've been delving into the translation business, and your tips have been of great assistance. I'm especially guilty of (over)using "there is/are ...", so now I look specifically for these two once my drafts are done.
@ez70965 жыл бұрын
you just failed her lesson by saying very
@venidetta5 жыл бұрын
@@ez7096 i-
@k5rakitan9 жыл бұрын
"I issued a fart." becomes "I farted."
@Human_019 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan You are getting there my friend. Just a 5 more years to go and your English levels will be comparable to that of 5 year olds : 3 God speed my friend.
@rodrigovargas13556 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan xD
@rodrigovargas13556 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan lol
@thelowlypianist73106 жыл бұрын
Kari Rakitan ru 3?
@ruqaiya66976 жыл бұрын
Nice one
@vasu75203 жыл бұрын
it is mazing to have a dexterous teacher like you , you are providing immense knowledge to learners. truly hats off to your effort.
@kevinmiz50905 жыл бұрын
why i could i not had you as my english teacher back in 1-12 haha love how you teach and show us!! thanks !
@jecr86235 жыл бұрын
You want to be a better writer? A B W ALWAYS BE WRITING
@TimeManInJail5 жыл бұрын
To add onto that you will improve faster with someone correcting your work.
@nooriman59445 жыл бұрын
What should I write? Idk where to start
@MissteriousMisstress5 жыл бұрын
@@nooriman5944 just free write - and some thing will come out. Or choose a topic of interest
@sejfzlrrhman5 жыл бұрын
What the hell is "YABWA"?
@HeiMarLy5 жыл бұрын
Syed Fazlur Rahman lol I was wondering if I had missed something orrr...
@jerihallberg58757 жыл бұрын
EMMA'S PRESENTATION ARE ATTRACTIVE, EASY TO UNDERSTAND AND RELIABLE OF CONTENT!! Being used at International Business College, English Comp 1301 and 1302. Thank's again.. Jeri Hallberg Harmon Griffin, M Ed
@mahbubsiddique30682 жыл бұрын
u r an excellent teacher. You taught me the lesson which i had failed to learn during my whole academic years. Thank u teacher. Oh! yes, your smile is great! Love u!
@ericjardine82105 жыл бұрын
Anyone else watching this and not going to school?
@Laraamaa5 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I am from Germany and I have a classtest tomorow 😂
@marysun44354 жыл бұрын
how was your classtest?
@phant0m0th_10 жыл бұрын
This would have helped when I was in high school!! Ugh!
@joseph364710 жыл бұрын
Hi Bethany, we are writing a letter to a person. We have to write about our pastime. Could you please check it for wrong words ect. ? :)
@khala95210 жыл бұрын
this is not for u. this video for us (international students)
@janavi17472 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your wonderful teaching. I have been learning English for more than an year. My speaking skills got improved. However, I have to improve my writing skills. When I started learning, I came across your videos. When I am looking into your videos, it's becoming more easy for me to correct the mistakes on writing part.
@dRBAR6 жыл бұрын
Thanks! Here's a tip: Don't forget to cover your dry erase marker :)
@mainaEmJay4 жыл бұрын
hey friend, you are still using contractions even after the lecture?
@nelvinraj28295 жыл бұрын
I’m using this method for my exams tmrw...hope and pray for me that I’ll get A!
@Alex-oi5kt5 жыл бұрын
NELVIN RAJ me too I also have exams tomorrow
@pequod_5 жыл бұрын
how'd it go
@ayerbel76544 жыл бұрын
its been a year, did you get the A???
@bero13915 жыл бұрын
I’m using this for my fsa tomorrow I’m in 4th grade doing my writing fsa writing
@thegammaduskit37045 жыл бұрын
State Exam?
@emptydreams2255 жыл бұрын
@@thegammaduskit3704 Yes it is the Florida standardized Assessment test. I also will be taking this test in just a couple hours. (Im practicing the use of a more formal voice).
@thegammaduskit37045 жыл бұрын
@@emptydreams225 I finished my 5th grade yesterday and Tuesday. It was easier then ny Intern Assessment.
@FoxesDragonsAndVirgos Жыл бұрын
Short, simple, and educational. I was making at least three of the mistakes every single time that I wrote a formal letter. Thanks!