500,000 Years After Humans Disappeared, We Woke From Cryo Sleep

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[@myraecheberry807]

Liked the story. I just wish it did not rushed. Am looking forward for more.

[@jamesaaron1533]

There it is. The jaw set with grim determination. At least they aren't zorgons.

[@davidcollins2993]

Not yet

[@muzzaresarf5038]

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to hearing many more, thanks 👍🇦🇺

[@qvazarqvaz9050]

Thanks for story!

[@amieadkins2343]

Granted the pronunciation needs some work on certain words. However, the overall cadence is well done. Enjoyed the story.

[@guyvalentine7258]

How many Times can you bring One person back to life.

[@daleraney9456]

Seems to be a recurring theme with these stories read by this AI voice. The antagonist is vaporized/atomized annnnnnd 5 minutes later they are fighting them again. And again.

[@daleraney9456]

Oh and regardless of who the original attackers are, it always boils down to 'The Void in one form or another that is the ultimate antagonist

[@Red-Raider]

Corvis is quite resilient!😂😂🤣🥲

[@bobmiller7502]

@@daleraney9456 the void is the arbitrator of the force (Tao/Dao) where true contentment and unconditional love lives

[@davidbancroft2478]

@@daleraney9456 AI written rubbish

[@redakroma1]

Decent enough story, I liked it. That being said, the author needs to work on keeping track of deaths of characters and other plot holes.

[@junehartley2770]

I really enjoyed this story thank you

[@D1craigRob]

Did the Edenites really make an alliance with 3 earth humans and let them almost run/control the alliance?

[@BobbyCochran-yk2eg]

Great story loved it

[@defenderoftheway]

Nice story. ty

[@jerm7096]

Wait just a few minutes back corvus was atomized how did he spring a trap

[@gregoryshaw3790]

Thank, thank you. I enjoyed that

[@timblack6422]

Interesting… I’ve given this a listen.. now I’ll go back to reading Heinlein and Asimov

[@DownhillAllTheWay]

Wow! Such an endorsement!

[@Gracee40]

It started off okay but when you got to the leviathan... nope. I'm done.

[@andrew4882]

Commercial every 60 seconds

[@Gollammeister]

Was rather good I enjoyed listening

[@rurirotaru516]

There is no continuity. The big bad warlord got vaporized and then was leading an attack 2 minutes later on new edan.... a girl who does a suicide mission and the main protagonist ran off without her suddenly had her in his arm and taking her to safety to be saved from her injuries. Out of all this the most unbeleiavble thing was that changing the fuel a machine uses suddenly gave the machine reality changing effects....... Either this is a fever dream of a 14 year old. Or some lefy leaning college student who doesn't think continuity matters as long as they can use as many words as possiable to try and sound smart.

[@fookyuunsa678]

It's ai written genius

[@rurirotaru516]

@@fookyuunsa678 and how does that change anything or that it's continuity is bad? Or that due to that the story is bad? How does your comment and attempted at an failed insult change these facts since what you said was obvious and doesn't just make you come off looking like a complete dumb ass?

[@84kirbphillas]

You're possiably right.

[@daleraney9456]

How the Hell is Corvus still alive after the Quantum Forge atomized him?

[@JackT1961]

Remember Battlestar Galactica. But I don't know about you. But firing on an energy source that registers off the scale, not a bright idea

[@Red-Raider]

He was resurrected from a knife to the eye through the brain

[@sondgerothja]

They lost me on his third death and saying how he was somehow at a camp when he’d been on the ground fighting…but also in the fleet…and atomized…again.

[@mstone1212]

Like the story well done ❤

[@jamestrowbridge8646]

Great story

[@user-og3ji3cb3p]

19 minutes in and they have been attacked and found more humans also in stasis along with the ability to defeat the shields of a war class ship with a transport ship. Also the moon had no air yet the dead ship had enough air to bring people out of stasis.

[@jasonhays6793]

Ridiculous number of commercials.

[@rustyrichardson1242]

Nice. Needs to be longer so you can realy connect with the characters

[@greanstreak04]

I liked the story.

[@eurorpeen]

So after 500000 years you can read the name Corvus on a suit ???? And he steaks english ???? Bullshit

[@gravseyfam9627]

No it speaks English not sure how you would steak it

[@marwerno]

Good story, but it leaves some points open, what happened with Earth any ancestors left (other than from the Prometheus)? How has Corvus been revived?

[@JackT1961]

love the story

[@clintdodson44]

I like the story keep it up

[@stephenkessell2854]

Wait up didn't corvis get vaporised in the forge room and then reappear later or was that just my imagination?

[@shanebraden8482]

Again STOP! 500K years and just as they wake up it so happens mow the humans are noticed? Sigh...

[@NoahFentz976]

And the alien commander had a name tag spelled in English.

[@mechag9499]

And all the human tech worked normally. .. after 500K years. And the aliens who wanted to kill them boarded instead of just destroying the ship.

[@thelinuxlearningcurve5394]

another storie out of sequence - please fix this

[@babarama283]

500,000 years REALLY!

[@ObesePuppies]

Would’ve been more believable if it was 499.003

[@visnuexe]

This is almost religious in nature. It's a story that gives obstacles just like the story encounters adversaries. Plot repetition, same phrases rearranged on a plane of story narrative with a smattering of bright story resolutions.

[@tonydabaloney]

Small pet peeve, you can't call any other planetary system a solar system, because our sun is technically called Sol, as in The Solar System and when the guy in the book is fighting the alien the book says they were rolling around in the lunar dust! No! Only the dust on our moon,Luna, can be called Lunar dust. Andromedan system is correct term and the dust would be moon dust until named. Peace out,ya'll!😂😂

[@Red-Raider]

The quantum forge is a behemoth yet they can move it in a shuttle

[@scottfraser-lp9ss]

I like the story

[@ianhampton6856]

I advert started advert listening advert but advert too many advert adverts. Advert every advert 3-4 advert minutes advert.

[@davidcollins2993]

Why is everyone named Hawkins

[@latedecember2805]

Wow this one alien just won't die. I know they killed him twice and yet he comes back again and again. In other words the book sucks.

[@escapefelicity2913]

the only thing more boring than reading an action story is listening to somebody else reading one

[@kurtnewyork9374]

Omg, slow down with all the advertising. Ridiculous.

[@MISTSHIFTGaming]

? I didn't have a single one here

[@angelwild5665]

Too many frequent interruptions! Outta here

[@berges104]

Basically a Mass Effect Andromeda rehash

[@shadedlightdigital]

The air erupted on an airless moon?

[@MuminahBlanks-S.E.H.D]

movie name please

[@Amoth_oth_ras_shash]

nice with the humans not being silly op at the start , though... last ditch hoppe for a whole civilization.. yee , that cargo hold would have hade not just purpose built hardware and heaps of compacted just ..junk.. for raw resource or 'scrap low tech improvisation' , but also what ever could been crammed in so.. nice plasma guns , here is my panther with excessive ablative heat shielding covering it and some nice uranium enhanced 'dumb' munitions , then agen the tech to make that kind of cryo tech.. the ark ship should have hade a nasty drone swarm hiding in the dark that sweep in the moment boarding ships nocked out the arks power wich actually not would have needed to been built at launch either , the ship should been told to snatch what astroids it could on the way in to enlarge material stores not to mention spending half a million years stable in system should have hade automated systems expand those basic resource redundancy and security efforts

[@danielyacob8353]

i lyk da story

[@tinlizziedl001]

There's some logical inconsistencies in it, and a few glaring chain-of-events mixups, but overall a decent story. If you use 1.25 playback speed, it flows better too.

[@Pete-lx2eg]

That 1.25x..... Genius. Crazy how much of a difference it makes to how tense the story becomes.

[@DownhillAllTheWay]

Who reads it? From the outset, it sounds like an AI - in which case, I won't bother.

[@RodMaster-qy3zc]

What's the title?

[@achuris77]

I'm not sure where to start with this story's stupidity. Or even the shit that doesn't make sense. And don't get me started with the stupid characters making even stupider decisions...

[@fckimmel]

How many times does Corvis have to be killed? Not to mention Zephir.

[@art.is.life.eternal]

No different from every major Sci Fi franchise or movie, be it the Marvel characters, both good guys and bad guys, Star Wars, ditto, and on and on and on. It’s a holdover plot device from the early Saturday theater Movie Matinées where they showed serial Buck Rogers and many other 'cliffhanger' serial 'movie comics,' and you'd have to come to next week's matinée, to see your heroes brought back.

[@nancybrewer8494]

Please proofread. Many words sound almost alike.

[@stargatetitanx]

This needs to be a full length series of books

[@bobmiller7502]

2 ADDS EVERY 6 minutes spoiled it BIG TIME for me had to keep clicking them off there's MAKING A LIVING and taking the PISH greedy greedy piggywiggy bad NO SUB from me no i don't want add blocker,,you ever read the small print,, bummer

[@chrisrancat2808]

Good grief youtube! Every two minutes an add. This sucks.

[@user-ky7cz8gn9c]

Excessive amounts of advertisements which broke up the story far more than necessary. AI voice cold and detracts from the story causing me to "zone out"

[@nwnmiria]

Sorry I'm going to be a downer here, I stopped at 40 minutes. First if you go 500,000 years into the future, you are not going to run into a ship that launched 100 years before you who just so happened to also had a system failure and no one woke up for a long time. This has to be an AI base, and if you are going to do that you MUST edit it carefully. Promethius which launched 100 years before had more advanced weapons? What the hell is a colony ship doing with weapons in the first place? Fix the things that make no sense then record it using a humans voice, the AI voice is ok, but it stumbles in its pronunciation of words.

[@JoshuaCushing]

Man this is poorly written. They jump around to different setting with no explanation on how they got there, introduce equipment with no in depth description of what it is or where it came from. The story line has potential but the story has gaps bigger than the grand canyon

[@guyvalentine7258]

I despise this thing that this author has for bring dead people back to life. It happens almost every story I read by this author it's ridiculous and asinine.

[@omc2629]

It's AI generated I think.

[@edwardm141]

Doom and gloom tripe. The person surely is a card carrying democrat. Excessive

[@HughJassol-ed3bq]

Lots of diversity characters in this story. It’s kind of a turn off. I’d prefer to just hear normal names…

[@MrAabbccddeeffgg]

Utter nonsense.

[@jeffslusher1973]

Tired 😢of his AI voice ruining every story.

[@Lumberjack_king]

It’s not that bad

[@bannor_murphy369]

Not ai

[@richardhampshire8443]

Always one who has to moan grow up and f**k off this is a brilliant audiobook

[@napster3456]

May be ai voice that's mono tone. But it's still a good listen

[@bullshtman447]

I like it

[@SacredCovenant4ever]

I cannot stand AI voices... Ruins everything

[@DoraDuncan]

Narrartor is pathetic. Mispronounces simple words. Story is dull and to mired in cliches. Gads it's bad.

[@DevilDogDevinPHH]

This is very poorly written

[@ohioborn9929]

The battle was won... but the ....is far from over. Im done. Same story over and ever!

[@davidburgess6128]

I like the storie love syfi

[@bannor_murphy369]

Far too many ads to enjoy 👎

[@larvinthompson2286]

I like the story