96 Quite Bitter Beings -CKY Main Riff Tutorial

This is a tab I found on ultimate guitar, and then my own version of playing the main riff from CKY’s 96 Quite bitter beings. I do not own the rights to this song.
So the first one is a tab I pulled off of UG, and the second is how i play the riff. I think my way is easier, but they both sound super close to the song so what ever's clever. also the guitar is tuned half step down, but I refer to the strings in standard tuning out of habit. my bad.
D#|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A#|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
F#|--------4----------------4--5--4------------------5/7--5---4--2--0---2/4--0--|
C#|-----5---------------5-------------5--4--------5--------------------------------------|
G#|---7--------------7---------------------------3-----------------------------------------|
D#|------------0-----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D#|----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A#|----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
F#|-----------------------------------------------------------------------9-7------7/9-------|
C#|----------9--------------9-10-9-----------------10/12--10--------10-------10--|
G#|---7-10--------7-10---------10-9-------10------------------------------------------|
D#|-------------0-------------------------------8----------------------------------------------|

[@JamesSmith-fz1og]

Fun way of playing it man but Deron literally shows you how to play it on a couple of KZbin videos.