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@Tom-bfc
@Tom-bfc 4 ай бұрын
It says on the internet that the book costs 5 shillings?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Yes, it did cost 5 shillings, so Bob could have bought 3 of them with one week's wages - sorry for the confusion!
@Tom-bfc
@Tom-bfc 4 ай бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish I’m just wondering why this would link to Bob meaning shilling or would it just be the same link anyway?
@john.smith12
@john.smith12 4 ай бұрын
@@Tom-bfc yes thats exactly what I was thinking lol
@mansasingh3062
@mansasingh3062 4 ай бұрын
@@john.smith12 yeah samee!
@Ao2-lq4pk
@Ao2-lq4pk 4 ай бұрын
@Tom-bfc I wrote a pragrapgh on the point about the link about "Bob" and the shilling, and hope it shows what Mr Salles meant: By drawing attention to Bob's earnings, which could purchase three copies of the book itself at the time of publication, Dickens underscores the disparity between the financial circumstances of the characters and the intended audience. The choice to target the upper-middle classes, who often employed domestic workers like Bob, suggests Dickens' aim to provoke reflection and empathy among those with the means to affect societal change. Additionally, Dickens' deliberate naming of Bob Cratchit, possibly derived from the shilling, a common unit of currency in the Victorian era, adds a layer of symbolism to the character's portrayal. This choice hints at themes of transformation and redemption, subtly reminding readers of the potential for personal and societal change.
@Miracle4631-k6m
@Miracle4631-k6m 4 ай бұрын
Nice video Mr salles good luck everyone on monday
@Miracle4631-k6m
@Miracle4631-k6m 4 ай бұрын
Mr salles are you an anime fan?
@teamsupers9046
@teamsupers9046 4 ай бұрын
@@Miracle4631-k6m lmao
@teamsupers9046
@teamsupers9046 4 ай бұрын
@@Miracle4631-k6m this video is op bro trust the adaptation part is so englightening we will fr do better than honestly 93-95%% of our school
@gracesolar4850
@gracesolar4850 4 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@Miracle4631-k6m
@Miracle4631-k6m 4 ай бұрын
@@gracesolar4850no problem
@MillieNowell
@MillieNowell 4 ай бұрын
good luck to everyone for tomorrow!!
@thatonefreak_
@thatonefreak_ 4 ай бұрын
thanks!!! ill need it haha
@faiiry_liights
@faiiry_liights 4 ай бұрын
you too, kinda scared but we can do this
@ru_denn15
@ru_denn15 4 ай бұрын
Bro im so cooked good luck ​@@faiiry_liights
@Kaymckay-f1b
@Kaymckay-f1b 4 ай бұрын
Told my teacher about your videos and he makes us watch them at the end of class, really helped us all this year thank you so much… hoping I can get a grade 9 on Monday fingers crossed 🤞
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Thanks for the publicity and to your teacher
@imintoomanyfandoms114
@imintoomanyfandoms114 4 ай бұрын
We can do it dw❤!
@xxrobloxyjanexx2995
@xxrobloxyjanexx2995 4 ай бұрын
the bomb sound scared me😭😭😭 thank you for making these videos though🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
@teamsupers9046
@teamsupers9046 4 ай бұрын
Mr salles ur actually too good bro like you fr saved my English grade and have honestly made me develop a passion for English me and my friend Rashawn (pyro in the comments section) as we always talk about your analysis in norrmal conversations and I feel as if it has expanded my understanding of my of English and enabled me to go into deeper forms of analysis thank you sir you are the GOAT!
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
This is a great comment - I hope you continue to love it
@BillySawAMan
@BillySawAMan 4 ай бұрын
Rashawn is my boy
@Miracle4631-k6m
@Miracle4631-k6m 4 ай бұрын
@@BillySawAManThanks bro
@brainweasel2100
@brainweasel2100 4 ай бұрын
Good luck for monday, we've got this
@Reem-d2h8q
@Reem-d2h8q 4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! Best Christmas Carol revision ive had all year! Good luck everyone!
@aiyanarobinson9980
@aiyanarobinson9980 3 ай бұрын
what was the question, was he right?
@hussainmir1496
@hussainmir1496 4 ай бұрын
these alternative unique views are what is going to get me the grade 9 this is brilliant !!
@simplyblue8069
@simplyblue8069 4 ай бұрын
Everyone who’s angry can’t be mad, he did say 50% chance and you could have used these points in your essay anyway, the lesson learnt was to prevent poverty :3
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Nice one
@swiftie_widow13
@swiftie_widow13 4 ай бұрын
thanks this is soooo helpful. good luck on monday guys x
@AndrewPearce-hx7nn
@AndrewPearce-hx7nn 4 ай бұрын
I had never watched your videos previously but heard such great recommendations so decided to come and check you out. They were certainly not wrong! Thank you
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Welcome aboard!
@drjakett
@drjakett 4 ай бұрын
8:20 Searched it up , they did have croissants in London back then
@mathsaccount-fb5kb
@mathsaccount-fb5kb 4 ай бұрын
the important things in life 😂
@pryvyte
@pryvyte 4 ай бұрын
knowing this got me a 40 marks on ACC last year.
@MCpatch21
@MCpatch21 4 ай бұрын
Exactly what i needed right now, thank you so much!
@Peter-xc8qj
@Peter-xc8qj 4 ай бұрын
thank you, managed to apply many of these ideas to my essay, people who are mad must of not watched the end, or listened that it was only a 50% chance!
@pixue.
@pixue. 4 ай бұрын
Thank you! Taking it tomorrow and hopefully this helps me
@tillyrafferty8187
@tillyrafferty8187 4 ай бұрын
Omg thank you SO SO MUCH, this is so helpful! lm so nervous for the exam tomorrow GOOD LUCK EVERYONE 😊
@tobeh_kko2730
@tobeh_kko2730 4 ай бұрын
Me and my mates love you man! Best English revision videos and it's not even close.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Glad you like them!
@BONCE-
@BONCE- 4 ай бұрын
Anyone watching this on Sunday? Like me?
@Angularie2
@Angularie2 4 ай бұрын
me
@ElinHumphries
@ElinHumphries 4 ай бұрын
Same....
@randomised5937
@randomised5937 4 ай бұрын
might be cooked
@BONCE-
@BONCE- 4 ай бұрын
@@randomised5937 😂 same
@tnt_master6986
@tnt_master6986 4 ай бұрын
possibly done for
@jan-nd3ml
@jan-nd3ml 12 күн бұрын
The question:How does Dickens present the redeemed character of Scrooge? Write about: >how Dickens present Scrooge in this extract >how Dickens presents Scrooge at the start of the novella. Dickens thoughtfully crafts the character of Scrooge as a cruel, vindictive individual who miraculously transforms into a selfless, generous man to highlight to his well off readers that change is truly possible and results in a better, fairer society Immediately, we are presented with a harsh strong image of Scrooge as being "squeezing, wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous old sinner" before we even meet him properly. Dickens cleverly does this in order for the readers to immediately recognise his bad nature and creates him as almost an exaggeration of the middle and upper class to highlight that they need to change and reconsider their miserliness. These seven negative adjectives used to describe him mirrors the seven deadly sins which were seen in the bible as the root of all evil.As victorian society was strongly Christian this would ultimately serve to frighten them and remind them of hell, but also the parallels between sin and Scrooge used by Dickens emphasises that the rich are more sinful than the poor which would have contradicted the popular view that the poor were lazy individuals.Additionally, these words are semantically linked to hands which shows how tightly he held onto things. Dickens does this to convey Scrooge as a ruthless person to make his transformation and redeemed character appear evermore glorious. Through the weather we are able to see just how ostracised and miserly Scrooge is and can pinpoint his truly unwelcoming nature. Surprisingly, just when we think his attitudes towards people are the only impact he has but also the "external heat and cold had little influence on Scrooge" which demonstrates his successful ostracisation of himself as even elements of nature, typically uncontrollable, he has managed to isolate himself from. Alternatively the noun 'heat' could be referring to kindness and love(from others) and 'cold' could be referring to anything unpleasant which suggests that he is blocking all things whether positive or negative. Moreover, his surroundings are "foggier"and "colder", the pathetic fallacy of cold weather creates an uninviting atmosphere directly reflecting Scrooge's character. Fog symbolises ignorance, perhaps implying his ignorance to understand what is happening around him and to those he's oppressing- the lower class. Additionally, metaphorically the fog is acting as a barrier and dividing the classes and is almost supporting the ignorance of the ruling class who are oblivious to their actions. To further expand, fog came about as a result of the industrial revolution, so Dickens may be criticising this as many at the time were in awe of England's productions but Dickens was critical of it as it ultimately resulted in neglecting the most vulnerable and overzealousness of money. Dickens constructs an exemplified version of someone who is overzealous of money to make the attitudes of the middle and upper classes visible. Through the intervention of the ghosts, a spark in Scrooge lit as he gains knowledge and heals his inner childhood trauma and abandonment. The stark contrast between 'hard and sharp as a flint' to now 'as merry as a schoolboy', creates an instant shift in tone from melancholy to jubilant as he has now regained his youthful innocence and ability to see the world in an untainted light. Scrooge's excitement is bulging, it seems like he has only just now realised the greatness and wonders of this world. Dickens establishes that money won't bring happiness, the only thing that will bring true happiness is connection with people, love, support and generosity. As Victorian society was predominantly Christian, the readers would understand this as they would be familiar with many Bible readings signifying this. Scrooge's transformation resembles a quite spiritual one and his redeemed character seems to be reconnected to God as he becomes as "happy as an angel". This religious simile highlights how Scrooge feels that redemption has led him back to the path of God and faith. He was previously described as a "sinner" embodying the seven deadly sins yet his redemption has led to his restoration of religious morals. Additionally, an "angel" is probably the purest, holiest closest thing to God so by connecting him to that of an angel, it is evident that he has truly transformed. Angels are specially chosen by God and are guaranteed to stay in heaven forever, therefore perhaps hints that Scrooge's transformation has been accepted by God and he has reopened the gates of heaven for him and stopped his intended doom in purgatory. During the Victorian Era, the middle and upper class didn't quite understand their overzealousness and ignorance of the poor and how greatly it affected people as they were so wrapped up in their bubbles, shielded by ignorance. Therefore by Dickens showing the detrimental impacts and the clear consequences of purgatory/hell, he is enlightening his readers and providing them with the correct knowledge so they can avoid doom like Scrooge has. Dickens presents the redeemed character of Scrooge in such a positive light and makes his kindness and happiness extremely clear. When Scrooge wakes up in stage 5 the first thing his redeemed self says is "Merry Christmas carol to everybody!A happy New Year to all the world!", the fact that the presents Christmas first is significant as this a direct contrast to "bah humbug"! The exclamation mark show his joy and excitement as he now sees the value in non-monetary things. Also, the plural pronoun "everybody" suggests he now cares about and wants to extend his love to everyone which highly mirrors the language used by Tiny Tim. The fact that Dickens uses "Merry Christmas" as he first words pairs Christmas with joy perhaps Dickens is trying to urge us to always keep the Christmas spirit and generosity all year round. Another important thing to point out is his "splendid laugh" which is the first time in this novella we read of him laughing. Laughing symbolises knowledge in a Christmas Carol which finalises his transformation and this laugh was described as "the father of a long, long line of brilliant laughs" emphasising that this redeemed character will last. I didn't include a conclusion but i would usually i just don't have time. I would really appreciate if you could mark this. Thank you very much.
@Tony-xm6wq
@Tony-xm6wq 4 ай бұрын
the ocr paper talked about how the poor were cared for and i was able to intergrate this thank you so much
@nahiisham
@nahiisham 4 ай бұрын
im aiming for a grade 9 so thank you for these last minute notes!!
@isixudjemsjxjcjrkzkkxjxkxkc
@isixudjemsjxjcjrkzkkxjxkxkc 4 ай бұрын
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@Seabeanz
@Seabeanz 4 ай бұрын
Is bro okay
@isixudjemsjxjcjrkzkkxjxkxkc
@isixudjemsjxjcjrkzkkxjxkxkc 4 ай бұрын
@@Seabeanz mb bro i just had an outburst
@faiiry_liights
@faiiry_liights 4 ай бұрын
i think you just saved me for tomorrow... good luck everyone!
@buchi3826
@buchi3826 4 ай бұрын
I have a suggestion for the brave in ribbons quote. Could you perhaps say that ribbons could represent positive energy and happiness which could symbolize the abundance of wealth in happiness the Cratchits have??
@nuxq3731
@nuxq3731 4 ай бұрын
whos watching this the night before 😂😂
@rayvfx.
@rayvfx. 4 ай бұрын
Thank you for all your videos! The prediction being wrong/right doesnt matter and its a prediction for a reason. Your analysis videos helped so much!
@buchi3826
@buchi3826 4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for this video I hope I'll be able to get a least a 7/8 in the GCSE exam tomorrow 😊
@InezSteane
@InezSteane 4 ай бұрын
Examiners reading the same analysis 100 times : 🤔 Great video 🤟
@Riaaaa19
@Riaaaa19 4 ай бұрын
Literally bro😭😂
@Riaaaa19
@Riaaaa19 4 ай бұрын
That’s why you gotta use your own intelligence
@Mohamed-tj9mm
@Mohamed-tj9mm 4 ай бұрын
This is was helpful seriouly for me getting in some depth ananlyis about the writer and a03 felt so secure for the first time thank you mr sales we move to paper 2
@DailyHas
@DailyHas 4 ай бұрын
I cant explain it but this guy is amazing. Ive honestly learnt so much. Thanks Mr Salles, your a lifesaver
@drdmr
@drdmr 4 ай бұрын
Thanks Mr Salles, keep up the good work!
@Izzyhopes
@Izzyhopes 4 ай бұрын
I'm watching this at half 11 the night before the exam beduase I didn't revise but I'm still desperate for a 7 oops I'm on a 6 rn
@Felixwas_there
@Felixwas_there 4 ай бұрын
You got this mate...
@heyyh5950
@heyyh5950 4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much I feel so much more prepared for monday. No matter what the question is we can do it;)
@IlhamMohamed-ev9io
@IlhamMohamed-ev9io 4 ай бұрын
Thank you for this Mr Salles. I learnt a lot from this video and the Macbeth one. I am way more prepared for my GCSE exam tomorrow!!!😊😊
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Best of luck!
@zenixlo
@zenixlo 4 ай бұрын
Hi sir, Another quick one- I've been looking at lots of example exam questions, and some of them are very difficult to mold these ideas to (for me atleast) Do you have any ideas? For example - how does dickens presents the importance of family -how does dickens create a sense of atmosphere - how does he use the theme of charity and Christmas spirit (yes- this one is slighty obvious, however i am quite partial to going off track and answering a different question) Many thanks!
@MillieNowell
@MillieNowell 4 ай бұрын
importance of family you can talk about redemption and how scrooge is miserable when he doesn't realise the importance of it but when he realises he redeems himself and mention Fred as scrooge is Fred's uncle, for the atmosphere talk about how he mentions London with crime etc and maybe learn some more setting quotes
@zenixlo
@zenixlo 4 ай бұрын
@@MillieNowell thanks
@thenobledarkshinobi5457
@thenobledarkshinobi5457 4 ай бұрын
After exam. My time skill was quite bad. Took about 70 min on macbeth because kept changing my mind and so i got some ACC using the extract and got the very beginning and the ghost of christmas past
@drmsfx
@drmsfx 4 ай бұрын
tysm, i passed with flying colourssss ; i wrote about poverty on a non poverty question
@rayvfx.
@rayvfx. 4 ай бұрын
LMAOAOAO JULIA
@Nuhuh-q9k
@Nuhuh-q9k 4 ай бұрын
Bro he liked ur comment 💀(IM HANISNI)
@itsanisah
@itsanisah 4 ай бұрын
Thanks for the video! It really helped!
@mnx_2852
@mnx_2852 4 ай бұрын
BRO THANK YOU, the question was linked to like the lesson Scrooge learns, and I was able to apply 90% of the context you gave BRO YOU MADE ME PASS THAT EXAM TYSM ❤No joke Also everyone that’s complaining and saying you’re the reason they failed, just ignore them. They left their revision last minute and are now facing the consequences of that.
@Zaraxx123
@Zaraxx123 4 ай бұрын
Literally idk why people r hating i used so much of this
@mnx_2852
@mnx_2852 4 ай бұрын
@@Zaraxx123yes, they just don’t know how to link it to major themes I suppose.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Glad you applied it
@Zaraxx123
@Zaraxx123 4 ай бұрын
@@mnx_2852 literally!
@L3g3ndsInTh3Makin
@L3g3ndsInTh3Makin 4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for these videos! Best revision source I’ve seen by far! 🙏🏽
@Hemimana
@Hemimana 4 ай бұрын
I hope this could be useful tomorrow - I’m doing eduqas so I’m doing acc tmr!
@meriellagempesaw
@meriellagempesaw 4 ай бұрын
good luck guys !!!
@lotusdreaming07
@lotusdreaming07 4 ай бұрын
im so scared bc i want to do lit for a level and i got 7s in both mocks really want an 8 now. im just scared the question will be something really niche and weird and i'll have no ideas :')
@LaStallion
@LaStallion 4 ай бұрын
fr same
@sidney2738
@sidney2738 4 ай бұрын
Be careful everyone if lots of people write very similar answers with the same ideas and quotes the examiners will communicate with each other and then we’ll all get less marks, try to change your answer a bit to make it different and unique.
@seanchan08
@seanchan08 4 ай бұрын
Hi Mr Salles, if I talk about Greek Mythology (as suggested in your an inspector calls guide on Amazon), would that count as AO1/AO2/AO3? Because it wouldn’t be a great idea to spend a whole paragraph talking about mainly context. Thanks 🙏🏻
@gigachadproductions6068
@gigachadproductions6068 4 ай бұрын
im confused, as you said that the book of a Christmas carol costs one shilling, then you said you could buy 3 copies with 15 shillings, which was bob Cratchit's wage
@voxary9577
@voxary9577 4 ай бұрын
its beacuse other companys copied it and sold it for cheeper so he had to decrease the price to compete
@MelissaBibi
@MelissaBibi 4 ай бұрын
Yh can someone explain I’m confused
@lotusdreaming07
@lotusdreaming07 4 ай бұрын
@@Ziyaad-pg9gq google says that it cost 5 shillings tho so he would be able to by three
@BillySawAMan
@BillySawAMan 4 ай бұрын
He corrected himself
@greenlist2314
@greenlist2314 4 ай бұрын
loving this video sir. Thanks a lot for this.
@atomicgamer5401
@atomicgamer5401 4 ай бұрын
hello i have a few question, im struggling on how to adapt this no matter the question, and also how many paragraphs should we have ands what should they include?
@SourPineapplez
@SourPineapplez 4 ай бұрын
i've been told you want 4 paragraphs 100-200 words long maximum. Include the summary and thesis. So start with your thesis, then 4 paragraph then summary
@chaoticocean4413
@chaoticocean4413 4 ай бұрын
ur saving my grades
@r44men
@r44men 4 ай бұрын
im still lost how do i structure the essay what paragraph about what. should i not show a range of ideas in the thesis?! please someone help i need a grade 9 😭😭😭😭
@beatzz4892
@beatzz4892 4 ай бұрын
Good luck class of 2024!❤
@Darkforce2543
@Darkforce2543 4 ай бұрын
WE GETTING AN ENGLISH LITERATURE GCSE OUT OF THIS LETS GO !!!! Not joking i got a 3 in both English mocks in January. So thank you Mr Salles
@VenusApril21
@VenusApril21 4 ай бұрын
Im watching right now in the morning of english lit😅👍 GOODLUCK YEAR 11!!! DO YOUR BEST🤍
@mayoul7288
@mayoul7288 4 ай бұрын
good luckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
@VenusApril21
@VenusApril21 4 ай бұрын
@@mayoul7288 you too!!
@itsmeeEliza
@itsmeeEliza 4 ай бұрын
Hello , love your videos. Could you show some model answers for some of these points? Thankss 😊
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Check the description
@krabby-patty
@krabby-patty 4 ай бұрын
thank you so much sir, good luck everyone
@zenixlo
@zenixlo 4 ай бұрын
How many of these should you include in an essay - and what would a good example of a thesis statement be? Cheers!
@RingerLuca651
@RingerLuca651 4 ай бұрын
excellent video sir and some great ideas, my only question is how would you get marks for AO2 for these points?
@brandonnjengah8193
@brandonnjengah8193 4 ай бұрын
before including all that mention a language technique dickens has usen before you use all that depth knowledge then say this is frther shown through then the stuff he taught us for each number
@fcrqq
@fcrqq 4 ай бұрын
u are bloody incredible mate ty
@emwood-tw6mk
@emwood-tw6mk 4 ай бұрын
Praying it’s poverty now 🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼
@uman4812
@uman4812 4 ай бұрын
ong
@hanan4315
@hanan4315 4 ай бұрын
Amazing video Mr Salles, thank you so much. If the question came up on the importance of family, would it be fine to just say all of your mentioned points and then add how it affects families in poverty instead of just the poor in general or does that not cover the question properly?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Yes, absolutely.
@thepigeonlor
@thepigeonlor 4 ай бұрын
Stressin bro wanna get that 7 but unsure if I can 😅
@teamsupers9046
@teamsupers9046 4 ай бұрын
Watch his all in one inspector calls video
@Hellooooo378
@Hellooooo378 4 ай бұрын
Inspector Calls and poetry paper will get us there because that's easier to predict.
@mikailacar542
@mikailacar542 4 ай бұрын
@@Hellooooo378 can you give the predictions 😭😭
@jasmine-kg7dd
@jasmine-kg7dd 4 ай бұрын
the secret to getting a grade 9 is quick writing, embedding quotes at least once or twice a paragraph, linking to the question after every point, creating interesting ideas on the spot or planning unheard of ideas at home. I got a 26/30 on my aic question with 2 quotes with a lot of analysation and embedding a lot of quotes. I'm a slow writer, so I didn't get to write a conclusion
@At-Herm
@At-Herm 4 ай бұрын
@@jasmine-kg7dd heyy! Umm quick question so if i just have 2 big and some what well analysed paragraphs ( one from extract and one from play) and its on just one character ( coz i am also a slow writer) i can still get good marks ?
@Auntiearmita
@Auntiearmita 4 ай бұрын
THANK you so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh your literally the best Sir if the question was on family, what would you talk about? in terms of dickens purposes
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Charity begins at home
@louistafller-hyde4427
@louistafller-hyde4427 4 ай бұрын
I would say that the 'gallantry' referenced is meant in an ironic sense in the terms of modern day 'sick' of 'wicked' rather than an honest description of character.
@demonslayer6693
@demonslayer6693 4 ай бұрын
Honestly was so helpful 😊
@Zaraxx123
@Zaraxx123 4 ай бұрын
Wait so if the questions supernatural should we just say that that the ghosts showed scrooge all these things and how they are supernatural??? Pls replyy
@landoplayz6500
@landoplayz6500 4 ай бұрын
Me just watching this at 5am for 2 hours (I watched the prediction video on Macbeth already)
@AdamIsaji
@AdamIsaji 4 ай бұрын
Hello, Do you know how you split all your points into paragraphs because you can't write 1 paragraph on each quote? Thanks
@karishmapatelyay
@karishmapatelyay 4 ай бұрын
I’m confused isn’t the conclusion supposed to be just a summary of what you’ve already said and you’re not supposed to add new points?
@tabitharrr2642
@tabitharrr2642 4 ай бұрын
My school tells us not to do a conclusion at all because you won't get any extra marks for it if you spend that time focusing on ur analysis
@jamesaustin.
@jamesaustin. 4 ай бұрын
thanks sir! do you have any ideas on how the plan could be adapted for a theme of family? i'm slightly stuck on this theme
@muhammadhasaan3101
@muhammadhasaan3101 4 ай бұрын
explore the ways the crachits stay unified as a family even in "poverty"
@anabucur4206
@anabucur4206 4 ай бұрын
think of dickens trying to present society as one big family. Society should be like a family in supporting the worst off like the cratchits support tiny tim. Then you waffle about poverty.
@Emily-wn4vd
@Emily-wn4vd 4 ай бұрын
What if the extract that is given does not include any of these points?
@zakarieabdala7372
@zakarieabdala7372 4 ай бұрын
The thesis part was very helpful thanks sir.
@OmnipotentClips
@OmnipotentClips 4 ай бұрын
Very close. It was How does Dickens present the life lessons Scrooge learnt.
@stuffing202
@stuffing202 4 ай бұрын
7:50
@blushy2343
@blushy2343 4 ай бұрын
Super helpful thanks sir
@pleth-premierleagueeth9137
@pleth-premierleagueeth9137 4 ай бұрын
Mr Salles, are you allowed to use an ellipsis in between a quote in the exam? similarly to how you've written them on the board.
@ethantoal42
@ethantoal42 4 ай бұрын
yes, it just shows you're skipping part of the quote to only mention relevant parts
@comrade.1148
@comrade.1148 4 ай бұрын
EXAM WAS SO F***** EASY CMONNNNNN THANK YOU MR SALLES
@abcabcabc434
@abcabcabc434 4 ай бұрын
Hi Sir! In regards to Macbeth, i was just wondering if the question on the supernatural would be about the witches and how the supernatural are presented or the effect of the supernatural in the play?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
They are the same!
@abcabcabc434
@abcabcabc434 4 ай бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish I'm so worried about monday!! More worried than i was for today's biology.
@abcabcabc434
@abcabcabc434 4 ай бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish i really appreciate the predictions
@indeliblevictory
@indeliblevictory 4 ай бұрын
BOOM WHAT AN AMAZING IDEA!
@Jake-ri3tv
@Jake-ri3tv 4 ай бұрын
Seems like good ideas but how could I link it to a question about the theme of redemption or isolation
@Tjh-io1pb
@Tjh-io1pb 4 ай бұрын
You saved my bacon today 🙏
@willsteadyshot6330
@willsteadyshot6330 4 ай бұрын
Awesome Vid! Finger crossed for tommorow :)
@SourPineapplez
@SourPineapplez 4 ай бұрын
you said Bobs name is the same as a shilling, which is the same cost of a book. But you also say he makes 15 shillings a week which would allow him to buy 3 copies of the book?
@breadstick4458
@breadstick4458 4 ай бұрын
24:43 You say that but in the last mock paper I did the question was on Fred, don't know if that's because of the mocks being weird tho
@CRK-zj3lv
@CRK-zj3lv 4 ай бұрын
Do you think it will be about Christmas or family? They haven’t came up and the poor came up twice and so did transformation through the ghosts and the cratchits and greed…
@lilybv18
@lilybv18 4 ай бұрын
thank you so so much!!!!
@rafaypeaks5170
@rafaypeaks5170 4 ай бұрын
if too many people use this in the answer will we be marked down?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
No
@dayome7719
@dayome7719 4 ай бұрын
Thx king
@SuryanshuChatterjee
@SuryanshuChatterjee 4 ай бұрын
Hello Mr Salles, I’ve been noticing that the feedback I get on Tilf isn’t as good as yours? Any ideas why? Because of this, I’m really desperate to have my Sheila essay put on Substack one more time next week (promise you it will be 30/30) as I’m a student aiming a 9 in Literature!
@furydragon11
@furydragon11 4 ай бұрын
OMG BRO THANK YOU SO MUCH
@aaaaaa-om7fc
@aaaaaa-om7fc 4 ай бұрын
Hello sir, I wanted to ask for the 5th point, could you say that the fact that the poor couldn't eat on a Sunday may imply that the Christian tradition of keeping the Sabbath day is criticised by Dickens as an alternative interpretation to the novella.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Yes, that's a whole other video, and I didn't want to scare people, but 100%
@mysticalA153
@mysticalA153 4 ай бұрын
Are you confident that Poverty and the Crachits might come up although it has come up in the past? I feel like it's going to be something less obvious, don't you think the same?
@josephsermonphotography
@josephsermonphotography 4 ай бұрын
same, I saw that it came up in like November 2020 and I doubt its going to be similar because it was too recent?
@mysticalA153
@mysticalA153 4 ай бұрын
@@josephsermonphotography Exactly! I'm trusting Mr Everything English and going for the theme of the supernatural. If not then it might be redemption and regret (linking to Scrooge).
@josephsermonphotography
@josephsermonphotography 4 ай бұрын
@@mysticalA153 ok I will watch his video. Do you think I could link mr Salles video to redemption and regret? I think I could?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 ай бұрын
Who knows!
@mysticalA153
@mysticalA153 4 ай бұрын
@@josephsermonphotography If you are an ambitious student, I think you can find a way. What I recommend is to watch YT vids on ACC redemption and regret and using chatGPT to sample an essay for you to understand it.
@crazymemes2832
@crazymemes2832 4 ай бұрын
Sir for romeo and juliet when the play finishes there is no NURSE on the stage ? Apart from social inequlaty link could you give a brilliant Mr salles interpetation. My teacher couldnt, Please........
@llllllllllp
@llllllllllp 4 ай бұрын
GOATTEEDDDD
@okmatey
@okmatey 4 ай бұрын
thank you sir, quick one, how can i link this to 'consequences of selfishness' ? can I go from a grade 4 to higher if I use this :)
@demneye
@demneye 4 ай бұрын
I often struggle to find language techniques for analysis in this novella. Is this essential for the higher grades?
@aimeerae3718
@aimeerae3718 4 ай бұрын
turns out the questions was about Scrooges life lessons, however i did include some of the points and tips in this video into my exam. THANK YOU!!
@Lmao-gl8yg
@Lmao-gl8yg 4 ай бұрын
how would you change it if redemption, the supernatural of social injustice came up?? PLEASE HELP IM SO LOST
@Durgebites
@Durgebites 4 ай бұрын
Good luck tomorrow everyone! 💕
@cxwsy
@cxwsy 4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!!
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