A HFY Story : The Girl Next Door | 2174 ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

[@zuzax1656]

A wonderful story, and a thought provoking one as well. If the book that Jeremy was reading was 'The Swiss Family Robinson', then the timeframe of this universe would be approximately our current one. Given that, and the usual nature of the HFY stories narrated here, when humanity finally reaches for the stars, we would have orcs and worgs beside us, as well as dogs and cats. I can imagine a whole new branch of stories from that.

[@evilgasm5320]

Excellent extrapolation!

[@markfergerson2145]

@@evilgasm5320Indeed. You reading this, author?

[@BlackJack-qg3ws]

​@@markfergerson2145I might dive further into this universe someday, but right now my "to be written" docket is a bit full. 😅 Still, I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😁

[@Sum-kj8jo]

​@@BlackJack-qg3wskeep up the good stuff

[@BlackJack-qg3ws]

​@@Sum-kj8joWill do! I'm writing 4 chapters a week for my book, and 1 short story on Fridays more often than not. Got plenty of content to go! 😉

[@beingsneaky]

Every teenage boys dream 'Marry the girl next door'

[@mbdzel]

It was 3 houses down..

[@Kira_Laeloria]

and my dad actually did so

[@maylabrown4584]

I had that but it was the girl across the street to the right, I still remember her but never had the strength to tell her, but funnily enough not only did a girl across the street to the left of me apparently have a crush on me but so did a girl to my right that I also liked in return. It didn't go anywhere, her family was too different from mine and we just grew apart. I'll never forget that time though.

[@KeithJones82]

Until she wound up pregnant at like 15 yeah.

[@carlfranz6805]

My girl next girl was a complete waistoid. Sigh.

[@wngimageanddesign9546]

Oh she was a keeper when she could build a treehouse! Like finding a human girl who can overhaul a V8.

[@nooneofimportance2110]

All jokes about orc waifus aside, I think this was a great story. Kinda hope the author expands on it a little bit more.

[@BlackJack-qg3ws]

It's on my list of worlds to come back to, but that's a long list! I put out 4 chapters a week to my main series, right now "Of Men and Dragons" and save Fridays for one off stories. Right now I got about 20 to 30 one offs with the bare bones jotted down waiting to be written! 😅 too many ideas and not enough time, that's a first world problem for ya!

[@nooneofimportance2110]

@@BlackJack-qg3ws Oh Hell yes! Whenever you get the time and inspiration my dude. Quality can't be rushed, and I like what's on the page. I'm gonna have to check out that series.

[@kitemaywilder1792]

@@BlackJack-qg3wsholding my breath hoping for a follow up too ^^

[@BlackJack-qg3ws]

@@kitemaywilder1792 Well, I havent gotten back to this one YET. Atm I'm working on my new story, Of Men and Spiders, (lots of cute and wholsome moments with a few heavy and serious ones for spice) but a little while back I did write a two part "light horror" story about a man who suspected his girlfriend might be a wendigo that actualy ended in a pretty sweet and wholsome way. "My Girlfriend Never Eats" is part one if you wanna give it a gander.

[@MrTiberus1701]

I remember playing D&D as a young lad back in the early 80’s and wondering what Elven and Orcish girls would be like. This would be a cool world to live in.

[@12gagebastis]

elves would maybe like us and depends on the type of orc and which universe.

[@j.vincentlee9578]

Those are the kind of stories I like… adaptability and proper moral values.. Thank You.

[@jeffreyharris3440]

Terriers were bred to hunt mice, rats and other vermin. The smaller size helps to hunt around the food storage and home rather than the fields.

[@nickpossum3607]

As sweet as shepherd's pie, body like the farmer's daughter and can Hit like a MACK Truck! Jeremy, you didn't hit the Jackpot, you got the Whole Dang Slot Machine thrown at you from a moving vehicle! Good on yah man!

[@MidnightSmoke]

A romance story for today, well done. Here is a like and comment to help your channel grow and get you the recognition you deserve.

[@Nerdcoresteve1]

Loving the wholesome stories like this and skeleman.

[@GyorBox]

Yes, I agree. This one and Skelleman both were a couple of good stories.

[@crazycatboysolomon7006]

16:05 I like to imagine that Naz wasn't actually at all concerned about the prospect of fighting in school, she just wanted to show off what she learned in human class

[@geoshark12]

The problem was the fact that she would have to be careful especially since the teachers didn’t seem too fond or orks

[@timothyterrell1658]

That was significantly cuter and far better done then I anticipated. Thanks for that.😂

[@tarsinsigmundson2714]

Amongst a range of good stories that one stands out .

[@henrythered3139]

Just lovely

[@BlackJack-qg3ws]

Always good to hear another one of my stories from ago! For the algorithm!

[@Danodan94]

When I saw the name and thumbnail I thought to myself "Oh no. Agro's posting thirst..." Wonderful story by the way!!

[@wasa1207]

da red unz go fasta!

[@Wotan874]

For the Story, for the Author, for the Narrator for the Algorithm! A great story, I love it! I could write so much more, but others already were faster expressing all my thoughts.

[@QuakeMidaro]

Need more of these style of stories it's all around a good one and puts a smile in the face

[@rafaelsanches501]

Finally, some orc appreciation, love this story.

[@someoneawesome8717]

Dash being a Terrier means he would absolutely hunt, but his prey would be something like rabbits (or in my doggo's case possums and raccoons

[@jeanannd]

Orcs as next door neighbors? As a kid I'd have loved playing with young orcs. We could go imagine great battles through out the neighborhood. Tug a rope would be great, or tie a rope to a tree and swing on it. Jeremy could put the book away for a while. It will still be there later. The orc girl - bike riding and fun is NOW!!!! How wonderful, childhood friends and sweethearts grow up and marry.

[@alganhar1]

I would not have, like the Jeremy in the story I was a book worm.... a book worm who ran marathons, but still a book worm. The point of this story is it was about MUTUAL respect. Jeremy had his interests, Naz had hers, they met in the middle....

[@toraxmalu]

🤣 - your face at 23:18 🤣👍it fits so perfectly to the "usually"! - thank you for reading it, was a relly nice story.

[@Maeshalanadae]

Only thing is, when you’re greeting new orc neighbors, I’d imagine they’d appreciate a nice pork roast or such more.

[@randolphphillips3104]

Don't roast it. Walk it over alive.

[@ShneekeyTheLost]

Then I'll extend my southern hospitality by offering a smoked brisket, and introduce them to BBQ.

[@Maeshalanadae]

@@ShneekeyTheLost Now that’s the mark of true friendship. Nothing better than a good authentic barbecue.

[@walterroche8192]

The annoying problem with multiple races is that whole 'aging' issue! An elf who looks 20 could be 12-700 yo. A 10 to Oni girl could look 15-19! A dwarf guy could look 8 but be an 'adult' of 45! Lots of remembering how old who is and finding 'polite' ways to ask! 😆

[@nvfury13]

Thing is, you have to individually ask with humans too. I went to High School with a girl who was 15 and looked like a rough late 30s, while her mother was in her late 30s and looked about 16. Also had a teacher you’d swear was a student, but was in her 40s; and other teachers that looked like they were rounding 50 but were in their mid to late 20s.

[@ShneekeyTheLost]

I think there was an anime that took this on in an interesting manner. The viewpoint wasn't the 'hero', but one of his supporting cast, the elven mage. Who had a lifespan into the centuries, and a centuries long view on things. When the hero passed from old age, it prompted her to go on and finish other projects she'd put aside to help him out. The age gap and the different perspective in time flow is a central element.

[@JacenHawk]

@@ShneekeyTheLost that series does not yet have an anime adaptation, it is coming later this year.

[@juliusnesakysiu4778]

​@@JacenHawkwhat is it called?

[@JacenHawk]

@@juliusnesakysiu4778 Sousou no Frieren, anike airs this Sep.

[@Kualinar]

That's a fun one. Had me laughing and giggling.

[@greanstreak04]

Your enthusiasm for narration is very entertaining. As I have said before, the new format with your expressive POV is perfectly rendered keep it up and you will succeed...

[@widdershins5383]

I really wonder how many takes some of these are, it looks like he does it all, different voices included, in one go. Very impressive lol

[@anticarrrot]

"Ray, if a girl your own age asks 'Do you want to wrestle?', you say 'YES'!"

[@blackg0076]

well maybe after a few months of building up muscle mass.

[@MidnightDStroyer]

That's probably the kind of "trouble" Naz was thinking about, there at the end of the story but only *after* getting back home from Thom's dinner... 😉

[@samsignorelli]

I read that in Winston's voice!!

[@Zael_Moonblade]

Ah! The Swiss Family Robinson! Such a good book especially in 'Classics' format!

[@MyrdinAnnoth]

Well written and executed. Also love the happy ending haha. In fact this was one of those stories that you just want to see more of. All the "in between" the beginning and the end in fact! Hope the author decides to write more on the adventures of these two from being kids to growing up, getting together and all that jazz.

[@rainynight02]

That was way more adorable than I expected it to be!

[@maelglorious]

Well, this is an absolutely new take on marrying the tomboy nextdoor neighbor. Never expected to consider greenskins "cute".

[@nightmarereaper5601]

Never thought feet would look "cute" but apparently there is someone who likes that

[@nooneofimportance2110]

Maybe he's just into muscle chicks. Or more likely, he loves the girl for who she is.

[@timothyterrell1658]

The color of ones skin is not nearly as important as the color of ones spirit. 10 on the outside,2 on the inside,...Pass it by... Remember this.5 on the outside plus 8 on the inside is a 13.. A 13 is very good...🤨

[@markfergerson2145]

@@timothyterrell1658This. If only today’s humans could manage it…

[@ratzelbarreto2070]

Flashbacks to UP opening story, hitting me hard here. Please it late at night for me to cry.

[@leonievanheerden7090]

Another uplifting and sweet/funny story ❣️ For the author and narrator 💐⭐⭐💐

[@NinaJnoland]

Truly an awesome story!!! Hit me in the feels!!! Good stuff!!!! ❤❤❤

[@islemrebiai9188]

Yep, this right here the best romance story I've ever read in my whole life 😊😄💯

[@LegendStormcrow]

Made me smile, friend.

[@alganhar1]

That was actually a rather sweet story. One thing I will say though, is Terriers were actually hunting dogs. Most Terrier breeds were bred as vermin hunters. Mostly rats, which is why many terriers are small, though not all of them.

[@soubigo]

this story warmed my heart X3

[@hammerspace8866]

I just listened to this story again. I just feels good to come back to story like this once in awhile. I just like agro squirrel's reading of this story. It's a pity I can only give it 1 tumbs up.

[@reighniz4488]

Oddly enough despite my general distaste for fantasy style stories like this I really love everything about this one.

[@geoshark12]

Probably because its written quite well and seems to be more of an urban fantasy ( fantasy aspects in the modern day) well the ones that are not doing the hidden world trope anyways Might be something to look into

[@Xerdar36]

Human married, a female orc… he was a man of culture I see…

[@BlackJack-qg3ws]

I seem to have a habit of writing stories with strong female characters... the original story link ageo posted has a link to my wiki if you wanna read more of them. (And maybe talk agro into reading more too. Of course, he's already read several, but there's still plenty to go!)

[@appachaihoppachai1246]

Brother was living the dream.

[@normiesalvador1854]

This was wholesome.

[@lunkystraydog6572]

what a life to have lived............... my man is a God amongst men

[@christophercunningham3679]

For a story about ORC SMASH this was borderline terminally wholesome and sweet. Nearly had dirt in my eye.

[@allenw794]

I rather like that one. I hope we get more slice of weird life stories.

[@pauldockins9635]

That was excellent

[@Obligate.Carnivore]

What a fun and enjoyable story! Really loved it. I’ve always had a thing for Orcs just never had the guts to try!!

[@christopherandera2039]

That seems like it would be a worth wild anime

[@thelaughinghyenas8465]

I really liked that story. Thank you!

[@13thBear]

That’s a good one. I like it. It’s a nice twist on the usual characteristics of human/orc relations. And, yes, Virginia! That’s where half orcs come from!

[@johnmccarty5315]

That was a great story. I really enjoyed that.👍

[@wrenchpony9735]

Well that was surprisingly cute.

[@barelyasurvivor1257]

A great story, and a great concept.

[@whimsicallychrissy]

Cute. The story would probably do good expanded into a book, I know I would read it.

[@scottclark3761]

Yeah.....humans will bone anybody. We're that way. And we'll bond to anyone. Even things. Pretty much the way it would work. Good story! Boy meets Girl.....classic.

[@PanduPoluan]

Ahh, such a cute and wholesome story! A nice change of pace 😊 Really like how we not only made peace with orcs but also actively integrating... in more ways than one 😄

[@jfpalermo]

Great story!!!!! Thoroughly enjoyed it!!!!!

[@lettmien218]

Adorable

[@GyorBox]

This was a pretty good story, actually.. 😅

[@BlackJack-qg3ws]

You sounded like you doubted it would be... I find your lack of faith disturbing! 😉

[@wavegun]

Charming and instructive. Exactly why i tune in! Thanks again, Agro!

[@theblackswan2373]

Delightful

[@Psalmster023]

A very cute story!

[@norby511]

that was a good one

[@Sum-kj8jo]

Aaaahhhhhh, the good stuff.....

[@renaissancepress247]

Good one

[@gearhead1807]

Quality content

[@acefire4050]

11 hours ago my house caught on fire destroyed it and it's all over the internet and I hear it was on some news. I'm nearly broke.

[@bobreil7464]

I love the mixing of cultural affirmations I love the sincerity of the New York characters that are met later in the book they're clear lack of malice while still having cultural exchanges that could be considered dangerous if not deadly excellent use of narrative an observation of cultural differences

[@RealArcalian]

Greetings, Mentlegent! For the Rhyhtm that is Algo Yeah, it was pretty clear Naz had decided which way their relationship would go.

[@CaptainShield]

Love is love.

[@chrisreadwells]

Wholesome.

[@maitemarinseguer8558]

Wonderful story! I must say that I miss seing you painting or ordering cards and your tatoos, I'm still getting uded in seeing your face

[@draconusspiritus1037]

You ain't never been hugged till you been hugged by an Orc Female.

[@maelglorious]

You ain't never considered how important your ribcage is till you been hugged by an orc female.

[@williamcastro3017]

That will pop You’re ear drums! 😁👍🏽

[@draconusspiritus1037]

@@williamcastro3017 cheaper than a chiropractor

[@nexrese1160]

Thanks fam! It's a cute n wholesome story I didn't know I needed. Stay awesome

[@timfielder9893]

That was a wonderful, and unique, story! More please

[@scotthinger6397]

A very good story Sir. Well done!! I am so glad I found you on YT! Thank you so very much for what you do and how well you do it!!!

[@mikecoatsworth6048]

I saw the worg as soon as they wrote vet.

[@HavocPrime8989]

This was a cute story. I like these cross species romances, probably due to watching Gargoyles growing up...

[@LDSG_A_Team]

That was so adorable. Kudos to the author, and thank you for sharing it with us :)

[@Keith_WB2VUO]

Ah, probably not a series, but this would be a great one! One can hope, and when I send the link for this story to my son-in-law, he's just going to add to the "CrazyCrap Dad likes & does" list, heh...

[@bananabreadguy7960]

Anime alternative title : "That time when an orc girl moved into my neighborhood"

[@MatthewScur]

Good story, made my heart smile. Thanks for reading it for us.

[@wyrmhand]

For the almighty algorithm and cats :)

[@stupidclipsinc.2269]

NOW THIS this a great story i hope this person gets all the attention he deserves for this, cause this is a great story such fluent storytelling great work on the steriotypes great ending this guy has so nuch potential i hope they will write more cause this work is addicting to say the least.

[@sinpathicenderson1198]

wow that was suprisingly good

[@t3h_m0nk3y]

Resistencia a 3rd time really enjoy this story

[@chrstfer2452]

Oh this is a fun one

[@Dragonbear13-k2r]

Delightful story!

[@ArcangelOrtiz]

Cool story. Thanks for sharing.

[@allenmorgan1007]

For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Holographic Voice!

[@alanblack6500]

This was a very fun and sweet story, loved it, thank you.

[@dragon1011dk]

Soo Sweet! Loved this story.

[@CHRF-55457]

Dang. That girl is a good one.

[@bufordbaberiii2398]

That was a fantastic one!!

[@allensheets9369]

what a great story

[@jimmycoyote74]

Nice one. And for the algorithm

[@phillipnorton2929]

Really like this one

[@allanmonroe692]

Good story!

[@robertbemis9800]

Terriers we’re raised to be ratters

[@AlexanderBushi]

Thanks