A Surprise For Mavis | Free to Adapt Story | Richard Jordan

[@CraneProductions27]

Poor Mavis, it must be lonely for her to be at the Quarry on her own. I liked the conversation between her and Daisy. The little comment from Mavis to Daisy made me laugh. But I loved how Daisy was kind to her and then came up with a plan to make Mavis feel better. Daisy really is a good friend :) .

[@williamchivers380]

An absolute 10 out of 10 for this latest episode.

[@jimmyhook4852]

Now that was such a sweet story focusing on Mavis. ^^

[@ryanharris5184]

I absolutely love this story, 10 out of 10!! 😍

[@champbaka]

I love the flashback using actual footage

[@WesleyO05]

Very wholesome story ^^

[@darioguerrero2580]

I felt bad for Mavis for being so lonely, but in the end, a nice wholesome ending when Thomas, Percy, Toby, and Daisy all surprised her to where she was in tears of joy

[@thekaibacorpexpress4043]

That was a beautiful story

[@zacharyspinks6207]

This is a great Story, I do Enjoy it.

[@retrorobbyreviews]

Another great story 👏 👌 🙌

[@BillandBenProductions6792]

That was a really nice story

[@bigmacsama]

That was very good!

[@alexcanine4948]

Nice one

[@TrampyFan]

Maybe remake this with my wooden railway

[@aceproductions43]

I guess Richard wrote this in the TVS timeline given that Mavis and Daisy don't know each other