Alien Amazon Female Fighter Shocked When HUMAN Soldier Didn't Kill Her | HFY | Sci-fi Story

[@murphymmc]

How did Jason know Zyra's name? A name tag? "Hi, my name is Zyra". Little slips like this bring an automatic fail. The story is pretty silly anyway.

[@ramonalejano671]

"...her violet skin glowed under the planet's twin sons..." shouldn't it be twin suns?

[@seamusharris4420]

No, one of her twin son's is standing behind her in the picture.

[@JHunt-qh5ek]

Every story must have a beginning, a middle and an end. And do some editing.

[@michaelblankenship6125]

I would not have listen to story if I knew it did not have a ending ! NOW ! The story sucks !

[@darthslater6077]

WHAT? NO HOOK UP??