Alien Princess Was Hurt and Abandoned, Until the Human Soldier Saved Her! | HFY Story

Alien Princess Was Hurt and Abandoned, Until the Human Soldier Saved Her! | HFY Story
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[@GINGERGARY1]

Jackson is only a corporal now he is an ambassador for earth. great story

[@AmeliaRomanov]

Amazing story and I'm just 2 months away from finishing project citadel an interstellar super dreadnought I've been working on the last 6 years with great help from my military base in the rockies

[@hypnoticrelaxation9365]

Here’s a question: where are Earths defenses? That all took too long. After the first base attack where were the rest of the military forces?

[@davidcrick1123]

Didn't you say at the beginning that Jackson was (just) a Corporal?

[@v65dreamer]

Secure / hide the escape pod. Any military person would understand that somebody WILL come looking for it.

[@kconnor4568]

Half way through and already this story looks amazing and different. I just started watching sy-fi stories and while most of them are just BS W/A LOT OF SOAP OPERA THROWN IN. This one actually seems to have some interesting ideas and a decent plot line thrown in. I just hope that it retains its appeal for the rest of the story.

[@morrissoublet25]

How did Kale escape the destruction of the Dominator??

[@aaronfarr4753]

Yeah and if Jackson fought him hand to hand on the Dominator and overpowered him, why didn’t he kill or capture him then?

[@tommcguire6472]

Where are reinforcements? Where is the airforce?

[@coolet9132]

I would say a mediocre story. It was rushed so some parts didn't make sense and some pieces of information that should have been told earlier wasn't. Like the thing that humanity had a fleet and why they didn't have a way to contact other bases except going into occupied territory. Would also been useful to know where on Earth it took place and what year. The enemy is apparently also incompetent as f*ck when his opponents can just walk into his bases multiple times without anyone noticing, I can accept that it would work the first time but when it happens time and time again and it just show the incompetence of the enemy. The human betrayal is also weird and not very realistic, especially if it was an elite soldier like the story say. An elite soldier getting scared of enemies sure sounds like incompetency which also doesn't make much sense with them being elite soldiers and why the greed? He might had a reason for wanting the money but because they never tell anything of these 1d characters backgrounds that can't be used as an excuse. I would guess they are either in North America or in northern Europe with it being a dense forest and deer's being around and the names sound like American names so I would guess the soldiers are part of the US army or former US army or something like that. What I know of US soldiers is that they are probably the best among human soldiers and their elite soldiers even more so which makes it so weird when one of the elite soldiers just randomly decides to just shit his pant and switch sides for some money. They also only knew that the enemy were traitors and nothing else which then make the decision of an elite soldiers to just switch sides seem forced as f*ck, when he should know that joining people you know nothing about that are power hungry could easily lead to you dying. Any reason for the soldier to switch sides are also invalid with them never telling anything about the peoples backstory. I guess if it was a regular soldier it would have been more believable that he could have switched sides but the author wanted them to be elite soldiers for it to sound impressive so it can't be excused. Also where the f*ck were the army, we only hear about humanities space fleet at the end of the story and nothing about the army on the ground. They should already know about the attack when the enemy attacked the first base and yes the enemy could have used jamming devices but we are talking about an enemy leader that allows his enemies to just walk into his bases over and over without doing anything about it like in some cartoon or a game which makes jamming unlikely. Even if they jammed them, the military should have some protocol for that sort of thing like sending a group away to get outside the jamming field to then calling in for help. We don't know how long everything takes place but at least a week would be my guess which makes humanity look incompetent for only learning about the attack by the message sent when they went into the enemy base. There might have been a reason for humanity not knowing but once again, the author didn't mention any reasons so that point is invalid and humanity and the enemy they fought in this universe were just incompetent and that was the only reason they could win. Like seriously, don't you know to switch the codes so that the enemy can't use them or change the security so that the enemy won't have an easy time to just walk in?