Alien Soldier Visits Human Military Academy - Leaves Absolutely Terrified! | HFY | A Sci-Fi Story

Alien Soldier Visits Human Military Academy - Leaves Absolutely Terrified! | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story
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[@Sci-FiGuy_]

Do You Guys Want A Part 2 Of The Story?🤔

[@darthcervantes]

I do, that was really good

[@gradymcnutt2247]

Yes please. Very good story

[@TheGreyAreaBetween]

Yeah, that would be great. I really enjoyed this.

[@TheGreyAreaBetween]

@@michaelnash9970 The Bible also says; Moses was angry with the officers of the army--the commanders of thousands and commanders of hundreds--who returned from the battle. "Have you allowed all the women to live?" he asked them. "They were the ones who followed Balaam's advice and were the means of turning the Israelites away from the LORD in what happened at Peor, so that a plague struck the LORD's people. Now kill all the boys. And kill every woman who has slept with a man, but save for yourselves every girl who has never slept with a man. Numbers 31:15-18 Then there is Jesus saying: Do not think that I have come to bring peace to the earth. I have not come to bring peace, but a sword. For I have come to set a man against his father, and a daughter against her mother, and a daughter-in-law against her mother-in-law. And a person's enemies will be those of his own household. Matthew 10:34-36 I must admit, I find more morals in the books of Sir Terry Pratchett than I do in the Bible. However, in this tale, it could go both ways, having morals only to forget them at a key moment perhaps. Either way, it’s a wonderful story so far and I’ve enjoyed listening to it. I wouldn’t think the writer needs suggestions for what comes next.

[@michaelnash9970]

@@TheGreyAreaBetween i appreciate you putting references that shows good follow up. I wasn't arguing semantics, ... I was thinking 🤔 his story had a great moral dilemma... Now that the Aliens know our 'Code of Conduct' would they exploit it or use as a guide for diplomacy. It was merely a desire to see a follow up. That you're using it as an opportunity to make controversy... I think misses the point of the story. "This is a 'diplomatic' mission..." Princess Lea.

[@tremedar]

Poor Zarklith, as soon as he gets home and begins telling of what he learned from the humans, they'll indeed regard Earth as a threat. He may or may not live to see the war as they may consider him compromised. Such a rigid society never changes easily.

[@user-uo7wd4yd2c]

I'm surprised old Zarklith had the energy to do anything, he seemed to spend every night lying awake.

[@chrisweidner4768]

Indeed. In basic I don’t remember having any dreams. My head would hit the pillow, and then, seemingly instantaneously, it was time to get up. Ft. Benning 35 years ago.

[@TheOcculus]

Improvise, adapt, and overcome. Then adapt again.

[@user-uo7wd4yd2c]

Does this sound familiar? Plan, Do, Check, Act (PDCA) PDCA is an improvement cycle based on the scientific method of proposing a change in a process, implementing the change, measuring the results, and taking appropriate action. It also is known as the Deming Cycle or Deming Wheel after W. Edwards Deming, who introduced the concept in Japan in the 1950s. It is also known as PDSA, where the “S” stands for “study”. The PDCA cycle has four stages: Plan - determine goals for a process and needed changes to achieve them. Do - implement the changes. Check - evaluate the results in terms of performance Act - standardize and stabilize the change or begin the cycle again, depending on the results

[@johndough8219]

Yep, don't forget to improve. That's the 4th step.

[@johndough8219]

@@user-uo7wd4yd2c Deming.

[@robertpaik]

dodge, duck, dip, dive and dodge

[@FinGeek4now]

You forgot to hurry up and wait :)

[@oddctioum]

"the rich tapestry of human cultures unfolded before him..." *...and i can not lie, you other brothers can't deny...* "who here plays classic music?"

[@Bellator_of_the_Shadow]

And then there is of course. "Music is like candy. You throw away the rappers" 😁

[@zenoohshit5498]

⁠@@Bellator_of_the_ShadowMusic is for everyone, just because you don’t like or appreciate it, doesn’t mean others don’t. Just listen to what you like, pretty simple😁

[@beardaquatics9163]

​@@zenoohshit5498just because some like it doesn't make it good. It also doesn't make it music. After all rap is more dramatic monologs usually then anything actually sung

[@zenoohshit5498]

@@beardaquatics9163 Again, listen to what you like. That’s not true for all rap. Painting a broad brush over something you don’t like doesn’t mean you’re right either.

[@nightmarexgaming120]

@@Bellator_of_the_Shadowhorrible opinion even coming from somebody that generally doesn’t like rap

[@laramyelliott2903]

Good story but title doesnt quite fit.

[@dominickefrim3088]

Agree

[@Agent47395]

Agreed

[@broken505rythem_yt]

Agreed

[@charlesbarnes7520]

Part 2 please!! Your writing is FANTASTIC!!

[@deborahdavis4216]

Good story and I want more. Title was incorrect.

[@KillerBebe]

A story from an alternative reality, where DEI hadn’t destroyed the USMA

[@chuckintexas]

Good job . Good work presenting both sides with one voice , from the P.O.V. of the alien "guest" , without being demeaning to either side , but respectful ro both . Nice change from a more typical approach !

[@rowdyharger2799]

Enjoyable story, however, the ending, that had managed......😂

[@o-key6297]

Video stops in the middle of a

[@Sci-FiGuy_]

Hi, can u tell me which minute?

[@sleepingbackbone7581]

@@Sci-FiGuy_ at the end - "...for a culture that had managed".... managed, what? looks like whole few sentences are missing. and please change the title, it's clickbaity nature is lame and missguiding.

[@glitchingwiththethugz8400]

@@sleepingbackbone7581 it's probably AI generated.

[@guyvalentine7258]

🤗👍👍👍😍🤩😃 Ohh how i wish many of the other authors that I've listened to had this author's ability to write and do a Very Good Job. Even the narration is extremely good. He writes a straight line story with no bouncing around. His characters are Realistic. He doesn't have them during impossible things. Like dying and coming back to life in the next sentence. And he doesn't have them talking like comic book characters. If you have not already started listening to this story. I highly recommend it,it's good.

[@mikehoyle6092]

Facts

[@9LiveEmpire]

almost certain that the author is an AI

[@mutantplants1]

"Like dying and coming back to life in the next sentence." I know the story you're referring to. That was crazy, but not the only crazy thing in it. This one was well written and narrated. I noticed you capitalized the "R" in Realistic. I'm listening to this through some great old Realistic speakers from Radio Shack that I bought in 1973. (They don't make them like they used to.) I'm wondering if you have some of that good old equipment that wasn't designed to die after five years.

[@debra-qq1np]

The alien is too impressed too fast.

[@Codex7777]

I thought the writing was terrible, myself, lol. Incredibly simplistic psychology, one-paced, each chapter formulaic. No real sense of person or character. An idealistic, rose-tinted spectacles view of humanity and both species depicted as pretty homogeneous and monolithic, despite vague references to a rich cultural diversity in humanity, that was never seen or shown in any way, other than, 'it's really culurally rich, honest', even though everyone seemed a soulless cypher... Mind you, the ai narration didn't help. Apparently either the author, or the narrator, possibly both, didn't understand the usefulness of punctuation, in communication.

[@justnews9738]

Hey, you got a great voice the best male voice. I’ve heard so far so keep reading, please.

[@Sci-FiGuy_]

Alright then! Thank you! 🙏

[@najebz3121]

I think think that's all AI, the reading and the story

[@ronellis9710]

An excellent story and super narration. I'm going to subscribe. Two thumbs up.

[@Sci-FiGuy_]

Thank you! 🙏

[@AWEvans]

Great story, very well told.

[@mutantplants1]

Great story and narration. I'm wondering if it was cut off at the end. It ends with "...for a culture that had managed". That had managed to do what?

[@lorenzodiaz595]

Was he invited or did he infiltrate the place? I’m confused 🧐

[@ashliselberg5444]

He was invited. They said it was an exchange program.

[@Exile-exe]

They also said he was sent to infiltrate.

[@Bob.Jenkins]

32 years in the Military and I've *never* seen a 'Physically Formidable Officer'... unless you include being Fat as a defence. LOL

[@rejej200c]

Thank you I enjoyed your story and narration

[@hornet224]

I'm terrified every day by human behavior.

[@sudenkieppi]

This is very nice, and I'm not quite at the end of the video yet so I don't know if the topic comes up at all... Also this isn't meant with any harm in mind, just my own thoughts.. but I have to say I was a little bit disappointed that during the war simulations, WW1 was skipped. I have a couple reasons and thoughts. 1. There were certain tactics/weapons that were used and/or developed during that time and I think they would have been fascinating to hear the alien fella's thoughts about. Specifically the Western Front in WW1. Trench warfare, chemical weapons (later banned for obvious reasons), the first use of tanks, friendly fire because of how inaccurate targeting was.... 2. The horrific conditions in the trenches. War itself is pretty dang harsh on the human mind (perhaps a bit of an understatement even) and then add the conditions the soldiers had to live in while in the trenches? I imagine, depending on the history of the alien race and what kinds of war they've waged, that it may be quite a shocking or even a rather traumatizing experience even as a simulation. I imagine it could also be useful to show any fresh possibly battle-hungry soldiers the reality of war. I guess I just would've been interested to see how the alien would react. Quite many stories depict the wars waged between humans as absolutely barbaric, what with all the things that are now considered war crimes/inhumane acts (e.g use of chemical weapons is literally a crime). Many alien races find the humans monstrous due to how savage their fighting has been. It would have been very interesting to see how thr guest would react to said horrors in our past. Could also provide info about the alien's own species, seeing as they seem to be mainly warriors.

[@nesapanjalingam704]

Thank you 💐🌺💐for all your effort & the time you put in when uploading this. It is really truly appreciated 🙏

[@Sci-FiGuy_]

My pleasure 😊

[@jerryloper3688]

Found Part 2 and discovered Part 1, now I'm going to begin my adventure.

[@Sci-FiGuy_]

Enjoy! 🍻

[@killerjoker222]

This guy is a wizard with a pen what an author

[@dw1809]

When I listen to these stories it reminds me of how the British rage war. We don’t want war BUT you bring it you get WAR.

[@kiegaltugball4007]

It's a cookbook 🤯☠️

[@raymorphis5714]

In the ideal of conflict the battle is won or lost in the mind ( most of the time) Belief that the goal is just will make men fight until their hearts blood stains the ground red.

[@virtualatheist]

Victorious warriors win first and then go to war, while defeated warriors go to war first and then seek to win. - Sun Tzu

[@SkyBiscoff]

Awful kind of the Terrans to spare him the shock of going with the marines 😝 incredible writing though really enjoyed it

[@quentinfairchild2263]

Good story. Interesting that the American Christian ethos is the human philosophy in so many of these stories.

[@STScott-qo4pw]

Repellent. Sorry but I am so sick of it.

[@stableArtAI]

As the first light of dawn broke over the horizon, the air buzzed with anticipation. Zeltron stood at the forefront of the assembled army, her crimson cloak billowing in the wind, her gaze steely and determined. Before her rose the imposing silhouette of Shadowkeep, the enemy stronghold that had loomed over their lands for far too long. With a resolute nod to her commanders, Zeltron raised her sword high, the glint of steel reflecting the fiery determination in her eyes. "Today, we march on Shadowkeep! Today, we reclaim what is rightfully ours!" Her voice echoed across the ranks, stirring the hearts of every soldier gathered. The ground trembled beneath the thunderous advance of the army as they surged forward, banners snapping in the wind, war cries mingling with the clash of weapons. Zeltron led from the front, her blade a whirlwind of death and defiance as she carved a path through the enemy ranks. The defenders of Shadowkeep, taken by surprise at the ferocity of the assault, rallied to meet the onslaught. Arrows darkened the sky, swords clashed, and the air filled with the screams of the fallen. But Zeltron's resolve was unyielding, her courage a beacon that inspired her troops to fight on with unwavering determination. Amidst the chaos of battle, Zeltron's elite warriors fought with unmatched skill and precision, cutting through the enemy lines like a scythe through wheat. With each step closer to the heart of Shadowkeep, the intensity of the fighting only grew, but so too did the resolve of Zeltron and her forces. At last, they reached the towering gates of the stronghold, where the enemy's final defense stood ready to repel their advance. With a deafening roar, Zeltron charged forward, her sword blazing with righteous fury. The clash of steel rang out like a symphony of war as Zeltron's warriors surged forward to join the fray. For hours that felt like an eternity, the battle raged on, the fate of the realm hanging in the balance. But in the end, it was Zeltron's unwavering courage and indomitable spirit that carried the day. With a final, thunderous blow, the gates of Shadowkeep fell, crumbling to dust before the triumphant army. As the sun reached its zenith in the sky, Zeltron stood victorious amidst the ruins of her enemies' stronghold, her cloak stained with the blood of her foes, her sword held high in triumph. The people cheered her name, their voices ringing out in jubilant celebration. But even as the echoes of battle faded into memory, Zeltron knew that the war was far from over. There were still other battles to be fought, other enemies to vanquish. And as long as there was darkness in the world, she would be there to stand against it, a beacon of hope in a world consumed by chaos.

[@constellationorion8679]

Why do I just want to give that alien a hug

[@David-wc8ze]

comments missing

[@Sci-FiGuy_]

Hi, which minute?

[@OuterRimPride]

This would be one hell of an animation or short film

[@jordanfalkowski6924]

Whats his name uh Cadet Stone from Major Payn when he had to go try get that trophy

[@jrandom422]

B. H. Liddell-Hart and " The Strategy of the Indirect Approach"

[@mistbooster]

incorrect title and the story ends to a wall, click bait much?

[@rinkevichjm]

They should have put him in the battle off Samar.

[@Creativebb1]

or Vietnam the strategy used in the rainforest warefare would have been interesting to see Zarkliths perspective on that

[@thekeefer690]

Zarklith awakens from a series of dreams though one in particular still fresh in his memory as though a fever had placed it there, of space rings, ancient powerful civilizations with monolithic architecture and prowess, with vague images of insect like "primordials". Despite all of these images of immense awe one image in particular still burnt into his mind for days if not weeks after, the humans equipped in powersuits and vast flying fortresses, one particular human in a powersuit with the number 117 etched into Zarkliths mind like fire and woke him from a legendarium of a universe, he was never quite the same as he was now beholden to the immeasurable ignorance from his race of the abilities of the humans to conduct and forge warfare, he sat still for some time before proceeding unto the training camps of the human base.

[@daldre8710]

I agreed with comments on the title and also the AI image. No need to click bait. Awesome story.

[@germanmandalorian3514]

Zeltron... with a name for such a species i must think on the Star Wars Race, ah... the Zeltrons...

[@johngillan4475]

Interesting idea. Thank you

[@DaniMartVtbr]

Carter, Jackson. You using Stargate SG-1 references?

[@scottphillips2870]

Thermoplye was over 2,000 years ago. Not centuries but millenia.

[@RamosLuis2550]

simplified version of a civilian entering boot camp and coming out a millitery person

[@harveylee65]

This would make a great mine series for tv

[@mariociaramellano7509]

At the Terran academy entrance there is an arch, it says: “Diversity is our Strength “

[@Lowkey_ID]

Why would we simply give away this Intel to an alien race? 😮

[@David-vi9jq]

The irony of talking trash about humans by an alien SOLDIER, lmao

[@Pete-lx2eg]

Basically, we can destroy our own species but no one else can! Yeah humans for the win baby!!!... Hold up.... Hmm.

[@Loriannlk]

Part 2 please!

[@Sci-FiGuy_]

It's out!

[@starhawk7592]

Yes 👍

[@alexc4300]

Shades of Republica Balboa talking to its prisoners of war.

[@Callum_Summer0972]

Yeah this feel too much of a AI, it doesn't have the extra dialogues or interactions that would have been added if it was created a human, or someone who has creativity. Or that the AI generated voice just makes it too AI.

[@farrier2708]

I found this story; how shall I put it? Idealised? It speaks of human ethics in war. Wars are not initiated by soldiers. Wars are initiated by Politicians who remain safe in bunkers while their nations young men die on the battlefield. Where are the ethics in that?

[@jblockminermc5401]

Your comment speaks of 2 different things not really comparable…. One is a war getting initiated, the other is soldiers following ethics and comradery during a war…. Those things aren’t the same so I don’t see what point you’re trying to make here. After all, The things said in the video sounds pretty dang close to what my brother went through and was taught during his USMC training (minus the sci fi stuff of course). Edit: actually about the “minus the sci fi stuff”…. never mind, I just remembered he had a ‘ufo’ thing occur during some kind of drill. Lol

[@matthewbenton4767]

@@jblockminermc5401 'unidentified flying object' is a drill, it might be a nuke delivered by balloon, might be a kid with drone (and no common sense), might be a drunk marine with mexican bottle rockets. everything must be identified. might be aliens too though.

[@farrier2708]

@@jblockminermc5401 Soldiers may prophes ethics during peacetime. However, on the battlefield the only ethic is survival and once the red mist kicks in morality goes out the window.

[@jblockminermc5401]

@@farrier2708 pretty sure that’s just projection in your part dude, in fact their literally trained to keep a level head during combat. That’s what separates a professional soldier from a militia soldier (or a fresh recruit/conscript).

[@farrier2708]

@@jblockminermc5401 "My Lai" ? If you don't know what I'm talking about, Google it.

[@Dranok1]

I'd settle for tge end of the sentence! "...for a culture that had managed" ...managed what?!? Several of these voice synth stories I've listened to have lots of obvious cuts and also cut out right at the climax. It's a real anticlimax when they do!

[@9LiveEmpire]

what's up with the ending?

[@davidbell1619]

He left it open. There will be more. Excellent story!

[@claudeyaz]

Who wrote this story?

[@doktorsnotememes3617]

90% sure it's AI

[@claudeyaz]

@@doktorsnotememes3617 I was worried about that because this story had a lot of parts and make no sense

[@davidstemmler1836]

Then Zarklith pushed the button controlling his high level technology created eons ago, and earth was obliterated.

[@Tang0Fox1]

Ok I like the story but the lack of proof reading and punctuation is disturbing.

[@dphill96]

Same

[@jamiejones7325]

Somehow being feminist, Chapters Indigo national bookstore chain allowed Monopoly, has ‘banned and censored all novels by male authors and protagonists.’ YOU are letting this happen.

[@ajrimmer7231]

Zarklith has been schooled in the power of Democracy. Truth, Freedom, and the American way. USA, USA, USA.

[@jeremydennis6988]

Let's just hope trump and the russia republicans don't destroy democracy.

[@jeremydennis6988]

Vote for president Biden 💙democrats up and down the ballot if you are a American. But if you want a dictator and to live in the russia way then vote for the RRP

[@LuisReyes-do7pd]

America Ya :D

[@williamhartley4752]

Abrupt ending.

[@user-db8wg2vk4b]

The premise of this story is unbelievably stupid. Like a alien with higher technology would ever Think like this...

[@garryrichardson4572]

Can any of you nerds tell me the first book/movie/comics to use the title “Teren” for people of earth? I thought it was just a guardians of the galaxy reference.

[@link10909]

No clue, but "terra" is Latin for earth. So "terra firma" is dry ground, which is a phrase that has been used in earth science for a long time.

[@Exile-exe]

Was also used in Star Trek OTS. common term for us Earthlings…

[@Crimethoughtfull]

Nifty...but Zarklith clearly wasn't at a Russian military academy. He would have come away with a vastly different view of humanity.

[@johnthompson6550]

Exactly, you get a gun and you get 3 bullets.....LOL LOL

[@zenoohshit5498]

Doubt it.

[@kevinyoung9557]

No doubt the academy must have been woke.

[@howelltaylor6774]

You had me until the botched cadet recon. Guards are not pulled off their post because of an explosion. Nor does a recon team youse a distraction with an explosion that are supposed to get out without being "detected"? And what was the objective was to retrieve intelligence from a guarded facility, nothing about data files? That's called observe and report things like number of guards, changing of the guards and activities at the base. High level VIPs what the builds are used for power lines drainage pipes and distance between building and so on. This writer is too busy telling a story. Worse they don't even follow their own story line! Think about what your writing make it consistent with the narrative.

[@dougww1ectebow]

So he's "infiltrating" but invited openly? Tighten up your plot.

[@shadowpoet4398]

Sprawling campus surrounded by rugged mountains... That sounds like West Point