What's the matter: can't you spell the name of the zoo owners, the Zather? Why does it always "spell" out as "Z"? What is wrong with the hulking beast in the picture, one of its tusks is curved the wrong way. That's "barrier" not "bar". Shouldn't the "rag" part of "rag Rock" be capitalized also? Jack places the meat and suddenly the creature is a "ragar Rock"? That is "unscathed" not "inscathed". PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE read your stories first and listen to them as I am. You will find many unnecessary/silly/stupid errors that are easily corrected. "Force Jack into a situ situation"? Figure the rest out for yourself [ves].