Aliens Surprised That Humans Are Trained To Fight Without Weapons - Best HFY Story

[@Anon-mk4ms]

This feels very much like something shat out by an AI.

[@FictionalReimagined]

I agree

[@Vin-yo3ig]

The story concept is good but let's be real. In just the first four minutes the same words were repeated three times in three different ways....no thank you

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks for The feedback

[@CaseyinTexas]

The circling back and restarting events, effectively rewriting the storyline is irritating.

[@FictionalReimagined]

I agree!

[@PaulBoehme-d1k]

I assume someone knitting together separate AI chapters ... at minimum wages.

[@stevedriver3387]

If you mean that there are too many words for a short story I totally agree.

[@FictionalReimagined]

@@stevedriver3387 thanks for the feedback!

[@firstname4337]

@@FictionalReimagined then why the fuck did you post it

[@zyphrumzypheny2631]

look to the forest rather than the tree. Sarah fought with an enemy combatant to overthrow a mutual enemy. Tons of respect there.

[@LuciferMornStar]

@CaseyinTexas: The circling back seems to be a common glitch with the AI authors! But other than that my only real issue with this story is to much AI and not enough story. To much of what was going on in Sarah's mind. In a fight, you dont/can't have all that noise in your head! A trained fighter is not going to have all this thinking going on. She's going to be running on yrs of training ,all her attention on her opponent!

[@FictionalReimagined]

Hey thanks for this!

[@SelwynClydeAlojipan]

Why weren't the rules of the combat elaborated at the invitation? What was the purpose of selecting unarmed martial artists to fight against armed and armored alien warriors? This story lacks sense or reason.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks!

[@dropshot1967]

feels like an AI written story (badly) without quality control and AI voice with strange inflections. 5 minutes was more than I could stand.

[@FictionalReimagined]

lol

[@BunnyNiyori]

You do realize these are ALL written by AI.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks!

[@jeffhall4228]

They exchanged playful banter

[@FictionalReimagined]

lol

[@stillrookie]

lol

[@paulacornelison243]

When you have to fast forward a story, then the story needs excess material removed.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks for your feedback!

[@albutterfield5965]

So we get the first match repeated next but with some embellishments.

[@FictionalReimagined]

lol

[@peterdawson2403]

!

[@armadillotoe]

I thought I was having flashbacks.

[@CarlosRodriguezVon-SamosadeAqu]

Why can not some authors understand the difference between fact and fiction? 'Fiction' is meant to entertain and amaze, to make you laugh and cry, to drag you to the tops of mountains and down into the dark valleys. 'Fact' is meant to educate and inform, enlighten and illuminate, shining a light into dark places so we might all see better. This story fails on both accounts.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks for the feedback!

[@diaperjoeisaped1723]

That is your opinion. Your personal problem. 👎

[@FictionalReimagined]

@@diaperjoeisaped1723 You look sick to me today... how are you?

[@CarlosRodriguezVon-SamosadeAqu]

@@diaperjoeisaped1723 Yes it is my opinion, I'm not sure why you would consider it a problem, I don't

[@diaperjoeisaped1723]

@@CarlosRodriguezVon-SamosadeAqu I prefer to support the authors instead of beating them up. There are too many "critics" such as yourself that have never written one short paragraph that continue to berate others. That is my opinion. But this story IS substandard.

[@QuintonMarshall-ci1li]

enjoyed this story

[@FictionalReimagined]

Hey thanks for the feedback!

[@fyrekrystaal27]

Very good story, and I hope there is a follow-up about what happened after the tournament

[@FictionalReimagined]

Hey thanks!

[@TheLartomar]

Mehaa

[@jimsavage147]

C+

[@PaulBoehme-d1k]

How to ID an AI ... until AI understand 😏

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks!

[@SrVerataro]

Ai art and ai voices i do not mind, but stories written by ai just feels wrong, like something crawling under your skin, i dont like it...

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks for your feedback!

[@timopalmer6239]

Sound like good AI

[@FictionalReimagined]

thanks for the feedback

[@gordmorris3368]

well if humanity honor depended on it we would send a man not a woman so stop with all the woke stuff

[@FictionalReimagined]

Huh... why?

[@edwardpaulsen1074]

Story was good, but the AI reader sucked... even the subtitles were wrong half of the time... Since you can't seem to be able to put in the effort, Channel blocked.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thnaks and see you soon!

[@diaperjoeisaped1723]

​@FictionalReimagined LMAO. You can't even spell "Thanks" correctly! 😅 Your mommy has your warm baba waiting for you. Then nappy time for you in the crib.😴

[@diaperjoeisaped1723]

​@@FictionalReimaginedLMAO. You can't even spell "Thanks" correctly! What don't you understand about being blocked? DUH!