BAC Writing Task 1: How to Write a Biography

[@vostroshlif9044]

that's really great, but the biggest problem for bac student in dealing with guided writing is SPACE provided which in most cases not enough

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Yes, exactly. I suggest that students get only the free writing task, in which they can write more than 16 lines. It would be better.

[@walasouli7710]

Ahmed zewail was born on february 26 , 1945 in Egypt . He is a scientist egyptian american . He was dubbed by the father of offemto-chemistry. He won Nobel prize in 1999 in chemistry , worked on femto-chemistry . He was the third Egyptian received Nobel prize and the first Arab who won it in scientific field . he passed away on August 2 , 2016 at 70 years. i hope that i know my mistakes soon

[@ryhabchebbi4303]

He was a scientist

[@houssemmarzouki5001]

Ahmed zewail was born in February 26 in 1946 in Egypt. He was Egyptian and American in the same time. He was a scientist and known as the father of offemto-chemistry. He got the nobel prize in 1999 in chemistry. He worked on femto-chemistry. Zewail was the third Egyptian who received the Nobel prize and the first arab who won the Nobel prize in scientific field. He died on August 2 in 2016 at age 70 years old.

[@kidsmail5921]

Cool

[@oussamasouid1654]

Ahmed Zewail was born on February 26,1946,in Egypt,he was an Egyptian and American scientist,he known as the father of offemto-chemistry,he was awarded the Nobel prize in 1999,he was a chemistry who worked on femto-chemistry then he was a third Egyptian who received the Nobel prize,and also he was the first Arab who won the Nobel prize in scientific field,on August 2,2016 at the age of 70 he passed away

[@imensfar187]

is it an obligation to follow the same order of given ideas ? (l can speak about his death at the beginning)

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Yes, if you want to be on the safe side.

[@imensfar187]

@@LearnEnglishwithRiadh thank you mr

[@ksourimohamedarbi376]

Just what is required to write a biography.

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

What else is missing?

[@Zino727]

sir can we add new verbs like he was dubbed ".." or it is not allowed ?

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Yes, you can. Good expression

[@imensfar187]

can l add some linkers in a guided writing? or it is concidered as a mistake ?

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

YES, you can. But each type of task has its own linkers. You should know how to do that.

[@sonnaziha2421]

Nice

[@BenmoussaYasser]

Ahmed zewail was born in February 26th,1946 in Egypt. He was half Egyptian half American. He was a scientist. Ahmed was known as the father of offemeto-chemistry. He obtained the Nobel prize of chemistry in 1999. He is the third Egyptian to work on femto-chemistry. He was the first Arab to receive a Nobel prize in the scientific field. He passed away on August 2,2016 at the age of 70.

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Ahmed Zewail was born on * February 26, 1946, in Egypt. He was an Egyptian and American scientist. Ahmed was known as the father of offemeto-chemistry. He obtained the Nobel Prize * of chemistry in 1999. He was the third Egyptian to work on femto-chemistry. He was the first Arab to receive a Nobel Prize * in the scientific field. He passed away on August 2, 2016 at the age of 70.

[@mahertun5788]

@@LearnEnglishwithRiadh what if we used 'who' rather than 'to" like : "He was the third Egyptian who worked on femto-chemistry" and why do you use "to" ?

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Hi. Much better.

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Do you think " to " is false?

[@mahertun5788]

@@LearnEnglishwithRiadh not sure ! i have no idea why we used it !

[@ziedktiti5602]

Ahmed Zewail was born on february 26, 1946 in Égypte. He had two nationalty he was from Egypte and he was from America. Ahmed Zwail was a famous persone who khnow's by the father of offemto chemistry. when was 53 years old he won Nobel prize in chemistry then he worked on femeto chemistry. he was the third egyptian who recevied Nobel prize. and finally, Ahmed Zewail was the first arbian man who won Nobel prize and scientific field..

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Ahmed Zewail was born on February* 26, 1946 in Egypt *. He was an Egyptian-American scientist. He was known as * the father of femtochemistry. When he **was 53 years old, he won the Nobel Prize in chemistry in recognition of his work on femtochemistry. He was the third Egyptian who had received Nobel Prize and the first Arab who had won The Nobel Prize in the scientific field.

[@hanachakroun4536]

Thank u

[@gharbikawther4634]

Thnx 💟

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Welcome 😊

[@Zino727]

or we say the great man instead of "he ".....?

[@LearnEnglishwithRiadh]

Yes

[@Zino727]

@@LearnEnglishwithRiadh thank you so much sir