(Bad Ending) "Winning" a Battle Royale [F4A] [Final Fight] [Action] [Betrayal]

[@GoldenProxyy]

Script writer here! And she gets it done again. Fantastic job on this series Xailey you nailed it. Thanks so much for doing it, you’re very talented.

[@xaileyaudio]

Thank you Proxy! ^^ You're also very talented! I've read a lot of your scripts and I'm planning to fill more in the future! 🥰

[@greenonedragon7356]

Thank you again for your fantastic performance!

[@xaileyaudio]

Thank you for listening Dragon! 🥰

[@MidnightSmoke]

at least you are out of the game and I'll be joining you soon. See you on the other side. Here is a like and comment for the story, for entertaining me, to help your channel grow, and get you the recognition you deserve.

[@xaileyaudio]

No, you're not allowed to join me! You're supposed to win the next one! 😣

[@Quanta-_]

Let's talk , the good ending is emotional 😶 but the bad one feels more grounded to reality , excellent writing and good performance by you 🌟. I feel the good one can be better if we saut things with respect and Knives ,🥷 eventually it is survival game and Betrayal is part of life 😊 . Have to say you good at topic selection good work pal 💛.

[@xaileyaudio]

I agree on both endings! Proxy wrote this baby so well! When I read it, I got so immersed that the time passed by so quickly LOL That's when I knew I had to cover it. 😂

[@Emily_North]

Comment For Engaygement🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍🌈

[@Quanta-_]

I have a suggestion , it could have been more better if you have drop the 1part and and at 2 days gap drop both endings , the pase between video upload help to connect with topic environment , All though it's just a suggestion 🖤💛.

[@xaileyaudio]

I thought about doing that too, and it makes total sense, but I tend to overthink. This is a good example for that.😂 'Cause I wanted part 1 to have some sort of graphics by the end of the video to direct the listeners to the endings... but if I didn't upload all three parts at the same time, then the graphics would be out of place.🤔

[@mrksimka1159]

Ok another critique if you allow. Sorry for being annoying nerd. My guess you did it to make videos length bigger. But I feel when two videos representing choices are 80% same until a point then why not make this “cut off” point the choice part? Yes this way it would have been two videos less then 4 minutes but at least the branching was immediate.

[@xaileyaudio]

No, no, I appreciate the critiques! It helps me improve! 🥰 And from that standpoint, it makes 100% sense. It would definitely be a better experience for the listeners, too. I'll keep it in mind for the next one! 💕 Thank you, Simka!