Band 9 IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 SAMPLE ANSWER | Bar Chart + Pie Chart

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[@GurkreetShubhneet]

I would have written: The bar graph provides information on the cost of seafood imports in the US from 2002 to 2022 along with a prediction for 2032 not volume. The pie chart illustrates the geographical distribution of US seafood imports among the countries in 2022.

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Most students need to achieve Band 6 or 7 to pass. However, the sample answer is Band 9.

[@godfather5433]

Why we don’t say at Paragraph 2. That China had the biggest share export to US not import? Cuz from the context seems like so! Correct me if I’m wrong please. Thank you.

[@jianx7807]

Hello, in the body paragraph 1, at 7:00, should we be specifying a number of "6 billion" even though it's not given? I think it should be "just above 5 billion".

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Hi , how did you do in writing part ?

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@@chubbypanda3398 Bro, watched some practice videos of Asiya Didi and printed them, learned the important words and some important paragraph beginnings and endings. Also, I wrote 250 words in Task 1, 450 Words in Task2, used a variety of sentence structures. And, luck ka bhi sath hoga. Coz mera writing boht especial hai nahi. So 7 is fine for me. All the best to you.

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[@annitamaharanikamil1699]

Hi sasha! I tried to write my own essay on this within 20 minutes. Mind if you check and perhaps you have any input or suggestion! thanks! The bar graph presents the overseas buying of seafood in United States of America starting from 2002 to 2022, further predicting for 2032, while the pie chart displays the overseas buying distribution based on countries origin specifically in 2022. Overall, the import consumption of seafood in US has been growing since 2002 to 2022. However, the forecast will project a slight decline a decade later, in 2032. The buying behavior geographically of 2022, US can be observed has highest demand to China, and comparatively has Thailand and Canada came in as second and third as the highest seafood suppliers. Fish consuming in USA was started to slightly above 5 billion USD in 2002, and has been increased until 2022, two decades later, which it has culminated its peak with over 20 billion USD. Despite of that, the prediction shown that 10 years later, in 2032 the demand of seafood will evidenced lower purchase, but will stand still above 15 billion USD. Moreover, if being observed to be more detailed of import activities in 2022, the most highest importer for USA nation demand in Seafood was China, which took 28% of total consumptions. Thailand came as the second highest supplier, which fulfilled the demand of 23% population, and followed by Canada (16%). USA was also imported from other countries such as Indonesia, Vietnam, Ecuador, which contributed less than 10% as seafood sources.

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forecast or forecasted😂 gave the clarification exactly at the time when i was thinking about it.

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Is bracket and hyphan allowed in writing tasks???

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tasl 2 is more like a cause and solution essay type

[@vanilla6595]

if its tripled, it should be 15, but it actually quadrupled from 5 to more 20. 5*4=20. any explanation?

[@riderhue5]

No bro the bar is actually above 5, it’s at 6. so, 6×3=18 and 18≈20

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[@abrarahmad3897]

Hello Dear Teacher, I have written my answer to the following question before seeing your tips and final sample answer. I think that there are certain areas in the answer wherein I could improve upon. I highly request anyone to skim through my answer and rate it fair. Answer: The following charts illustrate the amount of seafood being imported into America over a twenty-year period while making future predictions for the upcoming decade. In general, one can observe that the number of imports upsurged over the time wherein the South-Asian countries were the major contributors. In 2002, the total seafood being brought into the U.S was roughly above 5 which quadrupled itself in 2022, which is also the time when the total imports peaked in the United States Of America. Besides, the trend predicts a gradual decline with the total seafood being imported to be approximately below 20. In very simple words, the number nearly doubled from 2002 until 2022 followed by a down-surge in the later decade. Moving on, it is evident from the pie chart that the leading exporters of food from the oceans are namely China, Thailand and Canada having a share of 28,23 and 16 respectively with China being the largest exporter to the U.S. Furthermore, smaller countries such as Indonesia and Vietnam also add around 17 percent on the graph and are essential in American seafood market.

[@faiqaashraf2439]

im no expert but very well written. *with prediction for the upcoming decade. In the first paragraph only paraphrase the statement given so i wouldnt write about the upsurge and south asian countries, which is repeated twice in the next paragraph . Use another word instead of besides i'd say even though . below 20 what? you must mention us dollars. dont say very simple just simple. downward surge. say seafood in third paragraph. and you mentioned the amount of shares then said china has the largest share try to adjust that somehow. in the end also mention the country with lowest imports

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I'm preparing for the IELTS General Training exam, and i would like to know if the General exam involves graphs

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"illustrate the distribution of seafood imports among countries", doesn't it have different meaning with country of origin for US imports. Can paraphrasing have the different meaning?

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I still do not understand the last sentence which says , import levels are forecast to shrink. I need further explanation, please.

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It is predicted that the import levels will go down :)

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In the first paragraph, is it volume ? I think it is cost in in billion US dollars.

[@FasTrackIELTS]

Strictly speaking, there is a difference between measuring imports in terms of tonnes and $, but from a point of view of an average person (not an economist), the two are close enough :)

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Hi asiya , i thought we have to write the introduction in verbs i.e 's , according to my teacher if the question is in verb 5 (the chart below SHOWS ) then we have to write illustrates or decipts or provides information and so on . Is he guiding me wrong or did i fell off the track ??

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China had the largest shares of seafood EXPORTS to the US. do we need to state Export to US OR Imports to US. Which one is correct?

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Hello! I just want to ask why you use volume of seafood imports when the unit of measure used is in billion US dollars? If it were me, I will use seafood importation spending (because we are talking of the cost) instead of using the volume which implies quantity (example in metric tons). This is for clarification only as I wanted to make it clear so I will understand better. Thank you.

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Strictly speaking, yes. There're a difference between volume and value in statistics/economics. In a non-specialist IELTS report, it's okay ;)

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@@FasTrackIELTS But for Academic IELTS, I think using the most appropriate word is recommended :)

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Why overview is not the last part?

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People are :) "30 percent of people eat apples."

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I wonder... Usually, it said in the instruction to take only 20 minutes for each question. Is it kind of rule from them? Are we able to move on to the next question before 20 minutes?

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Sure, you have 60 minutes for your Writing section and you can spend them as you wish. You can start with Task 2, for example. Or switch between tasks freely

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What's the most perfect structure for higher score in writing task 1 ? Is it to write overview in the beginning or in the end ? Tell me please anyone Nd most of Indian says to write overview in the end

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it is wrong. just research the web! overview follows only after introduction, because it lets them know what you are going to say in the following paragraphs.

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Dear Asiya, is it correct to use ''electrical power'' or ''electrical energy'' instead of ''electricity''?

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Please reply.. can we use 'true' in yes or no question??

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No , u can't u have to read the instructions carefully brother it will be wrong to write true in the place of yes because both are different in IELTS reading. Yes used for writer's opinions and true is used for natural things in IELTS reading. Hope this helps you. Good luck 👍

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Do you need a conclusion for task 1 academic?

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Do we need to provide conclusion for this task?

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