BAND 9 IELTS Writing Task 1 SAMPLE | Academic - Pie Charts

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[@verenarefky7392]

Hi asiya I have question May I write each pie chart in each body paragraph? to mention the disadvantages in case of increase salt or sugar in meals which may cause diabetes and high pressure

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Congratulations 🎉 what was the topic in speaking?

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Can you help me by providing some solution for reading please?

[@puneetkaur7086]

Hello ma'am it is compulsory to write overview after introduction

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@@Saha9800 It was academic, so basically first I read the questions to identify the questions' types, here are how I strategize it, for : • true, false, not given; short answer/summary; multiple choice, bcs they usually come in order, I try to locate whichever question is the easiest to be answered and move through accordingly in the passage (answer for the previous question usually located above the answer for the next question in the passage). • matching name to the statement, for this type, while I read to find other questions' answer, I always highlight everytime I see a person's name to save time when I hv to match the statement later. • matching headings/paragraph info,for me, this type is the most challenging and time consuming one bcs I need to literally read the whole passage, so maybe make sure to try answering this type of question first (while highlighting the important words/parts for the other questions)

[@FasTrackIELTS]

That's a huge improvement. Very well done indeed! Congrats and thank you for your kind feedback

[@pureheart6174]

What was your overall result?did you take cd iels

[@누구누구-r2j]

@@pureheart6174yes, it was a computer delivered test and i got an overall of 7.5,

[@pureheart6174]

누구 누구 what about listening and u have questions are we allow to take notes in paper while listenig ? Because i think that typing on computer is much more difficult or we can skip next question

[@salsh7987]

My response which I wrote before watching the video: The pie charts illustrate the daily intake of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar by the average adult in the United Kingdom. Overall, meals with sodium and saturated fat are mainly consumed during dinner, whereas snacks have the highest fraction of added sugar. Dinner for UK citizens is rich in sodium as it accounts for 42% of their daily intake. Lunch comes second with more than a quarter, while both breakfast and snacks constitute 30% of sodium consumption per day. The trend of saturated fats intake is similar to that of sodium, albeit the proportions are slightly different. The reported percentages were 39%, 26%, 19% and 16% for dinner, lunch, snacks and breakfast, respectively. Added sugars, on the other hand, depict a different behaviour. Snacks rank at the top with 45%, followed by lunch and dinner as both contributed to about a fifth of added sugar consumption. Finally, breakfast had the least nutrients involving added sugars, with only 16%.

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Nuno Dias hey! What all topics did u get for the writing and speaking situations

[@nunodias7427]

Writing: económic development: Advantages and disadvantages Speaking: part 2:a time where I needed to use my cellphone and couldn’t Part 3: different cultures and the importance of respecting them

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[@ashwinaabarath]

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar taken in during meals by adults in the UK. Excessive intake of any of those nutrients may lead to undesirable repercussions affecting one’s health. Overall, the consumption of all the three nutrients for breakfast and lunch were relatively lower compared to snacks and dinner. This shows that that the UK adults consume a healthier and balanced meal during the 2 vital meals of the day, whereas dinner contains the most sodium and saturated fat. Most of the added sugar is taken in during sncaks. According to the pie charts, adults in the UK consume around 13% to16% sodium, saturated fat and added sugar during breakfast which is clearly on the healthy end of the spectrum. The intake of the same nutrients during dinner make up almost three-fifth of the pie charts, at which sodium and added sugar is the most and least consumed nutrition accounting for 28% and 19% respectively. On the other hand, the intake of all three nutrients appear to be less balanced during dinner and snacks. The intake of sodium during dinner were among the highest, at around 42% while during snacks, added sugar is noted to be the most consumed nutrition. Meanwhile, the daily consumption of saturated fat during snacks and dinner is 19% and 39% respectively.

[@yusaylovelee2134]

INTRODUCTION: (For checking:') )The three pie charts gives information about the proportion of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar in typical meals of UK adults. Excessive consumption of any of those nutrients can be detrimental to one's health.

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[@shalompritam9124]

How did you score average marks with such AmAzIng english?! (Sarcasm, obviously)

[@lakhjeetsinghbadesha4654]

Say today my result was declared how did you get 6 in writing

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Class feeling While reading you want to study ielts but still wrote ‘teaches’ for ‘you’ ?

[@classfeelingwhilereading9551]

@@ngochan5338 I'm in 9th standard and I don't know much English but I want to improve it. You pointed out my mistake. Thanks for it. Now please tell me what to write instead of this.

[@ngochan5338]

teach

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[@luizcadu]

15:34 I think the same goes for the word "people" too. If it means "more than one person", it is uncountable. However, if it refers to different groups of people, ethnicities and cultures, the plural "peoples" can be used.

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[@DrMuzis]

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[@danatarek2211]

Hey Asiya, Will you please upload more of task one writing as well as task 2 writing more often; my exam is a month from now and I want to prepare for those tasks as much as possible. Hoping i would score 7+ in my writing. Thank you

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[@rashzayn]

Can you please do a video about tables.I find it difficult to compare each of the categories in such task 1 type.Thank you

[@Emmiee_]

Just got my results today (academic), I was so confident about reading part, I had everything and in a really good time but obviously wrong...a bit odd and I am so sad even though i got overall score higher than i needed - I believed in better results. :( L 6.5 , R 6.0, W 6.5, S 7.5, Overall 6.5...

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What matters is that you've passed and are free to do what you want :)

[@dewmithwaranasooriya4342]

Since both sodium and saturated fat have similar pie charts could descirbe both of them in a single paragraph and then describe added sugar in another paragraph?

[@amm9653]

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[@ankitjana9027]

Would appreciate your opinion of this - The chart provides information about the proportion of consumption of the 3 nutrients consumed by adults. However, excess intake of these nutrients may be detrimental to the human body. The three nutrients namely, sodium, saturated fat and added sugar are consumed in 4 types of meals which are snacks, breakfast, lunch and dinner. The percentage intake of sodium and saturated fat is almost similar in all the four meals whereas for percentage of added sugar in snacks and dinner differ vastly from the other two nutrients for the same meals. For dinner, sodium and saturated fat are consumed the most with 42% and 39% respectively whereas added sugar comprises of is 19%. For the first meal of the day all three nutrients are consumed in similar quantities where sodium being 13% and saturated fat and added sugar both are 16%. Among the three nutrients sodium is consumed the most during lunch with 28% followed by saturated fat at 26% and lastly added sugar with 20%. Interestingly, for snacks the proportion of sodium and saturated fat is only 17% and 19% respectively while the percentage of added sugar the largest while snacking with 45%.

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[@arabiclanguage4711]

@14:12: when you say (as well as slightly more sodium and saturated fat than for breakfast) is this statement correct? is it should be (as well as slightly more sodium and saturated fat than added sugar) ? please correct me and could you explain it more? thank you

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[@omeryilmazz]

The chart illustrates proportions of three different kinds of nutrients ( sodium, added sugar and saturated fat ) in ordinary meals which is consumer may be affected unhealthy if consumed to much among three of them in the USA. Overall, consumers were the most affected unhealthy if consumed to sodium at dinner, while the least affected if consumed to sodium at breakfast and snacks. Initially, average percentage of consumed sodium at breakfast and snacks were hit a low-point of 14%. If sodium consumed at lunch time which led to affect to consumer by 29%. Moreover, dinner contributed the most share was 43% among in typical meals. However, if added sugar ate by people at snacks time had the most portion at 42%, while breakfast had the least rate at 16%. Also, added sugar spent at lunch and dinner times at 19% and 23% respectively. Saturated fat created the most unhealthy portion at dinner time by 37%, while breakfast time had just at 16%. Lunch time took the second most unhealthy place with rate of 26% and snacks followed it at 21% on spent saturated fat.

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Result?

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Hi, can you please do one on general training too. Thanks beforehand.

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[@windyrizki3888]

Maybe someone could correct this: The pie charts illustrate the daily consumption of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar by adults living in the UK. Each chart is categorized by meals as breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks. Breakfast and lunch appear to be the quite healthy meals comparing to the dinner and snacks. Breakfast has the lowest intake of these three nutrients which contains between 13 to 16 percent of each nutrient. For lunch, adults in UK consumed about 20 to 28 percent of these nutrients which added sugar being the lowest and sodium being the highest. In regards of healthiness, the meals for dinner and snacks appear to be the less healthy. Out of all the meals, dinner contains the largest amount of sodium then followed by saturated fat (42 percent and 39 percent). The added sugar is consumed in the largest quantity in adult’s snacks for 45 percent while only 16 percent of adults consumed this nutrient for their breakfast. Overall, the meals for breakfast and lunch by adults in the UK is relatively healthier compared to their dinner which contains the largest the highest sodium and saturated fat while snacks contain the largest ingredients of added sugar which makes up almost half of the nutrient. This clearly shows that too much snacking is unhealthy and could ruin your healthy diet plan.

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[@handsomemehdi3445]

11:48 can someone explain this grammar -->.... with added sugar being the lowest and sodium *the highest* I don't understand how *highest* correlates with the sentence.

[@plamenaivanova1604]

The sentence is "....with added sugar being the lowest and sodium beeing the highest", but the word "being" can be omitted as the meaning of the sentence is self-evident.

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[@nabeel796]

Please suggest something for IELTS general writing task 1 and task 2. Thank you.

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I really impressing with your teaching. Could you please give sample TASK 1 general please. Many thanks!

[@Nqo19]

If your breakfast has little sodium, fat and sugar, does that necessarily mean that that meal is light? I personally have a big bowl of oats with no salt and sugar every morning, my meal is definitely not light, or am I misunderstanding the sentence?

[@ikz8439]

Yup I agree with you on this.

[@vanshikaupadhyaya4819]

is it okay if i focus the paragraphs around the nutrients? I practiced the same and instead of forming a and b on the basis of meals, clubbed sodium and saturated fats in a and dedicated a paragraph to added sugar.

[@jayroseville58]

The pie charts show the average consumption of three nutrients by UK adults at different eating times. Excessive intake of these nutrients such as sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar, could be detrimental on one’s health. As the pie charts show, these three nutrients are the least consumed by British adults at breakfast, with sodium at 13% and saturated fat and added sugars at equal amounts of 16%. In addition, an increased average intake is observed during lunch, as values ​​vary from 20% to 28%, with added sugars being the lowest and sodium being the highest. Nevertheless, during these meal periods, UK adults consumed nutrients considerably healthy. Although high value of 45% added sugars is consumed by British adults at the same meal time, the average ratio of sodium and saturated fat consumed at snacks is much lower at 17% and 19%, respectively. Furthermore, 42% of sodium and 39% of saturated fat are taken at dinner. Clearly, at these peak percentages, UK adults nutrients consumption is unhealthy. In general, older Britons consume mainly sodium and saturated fat at dinner, while they prefer to eat large amounts of added sugar when snacking. On the other hand, these three nutrients are the least consumed at breakfast.

[@laddisingh1998]

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[@wongjinxuan8354]

Hi Asiya, could you do a video regarding line graph? It’s hard for me.

[@joshhoang896]

Thank you for you informative video. Could I use "percentagewise" in Writing?

[@EnglishteacherJane]

I took my academic ielts the last july 15 and I got 6.0 listening, reading 7.0, writing 6.0, speaking 7.0 in total I got 6.5 . The most difficult for me was the writing of the first part because they showed a picture about the sand dunes and their formation, this was difficult for me because I didn´t know how to do it, I wrote some ideas but I forgot to include the wind any suggestions to improve this part?. In the listening I had problems with the last listening, because there were many details and I couldn´t get all of them.

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Don't worry baby u got 6.5

[@tanveelansari8113]

Can we write a conclusion in task 1, or it is strictly prohibited?

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Это задание достаточно сложное для человека, просто в совершенстве владеющего языком и не работающего с диаграммами. Здесь важно упомянуть, что в завтраке к примеру, 16 или 18 от общего потребления (дневного) того или иного компонента, иначе может сложиться впечатление что речь идёт о доле среди прочих компонентов

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I am extremrely thank you from my bottom of heat.

[@sonyas8756]

Ma'am , do maps and diagrams still come in the writing task 1 of the academic module?

[@FasTrackIELTS]

Yes, but they are less common than charts and tables

[@syedsofiyan1323]

hello, can we use complex and compound structure in the Ielts writing task 1 ? please reply .

[@_anju555]

Thank you asiya❤

[@teacherjoko8029]

You really should avoid the "healthy" analysis. There is no indication of how MUCH each nutrient is consumed. They are proportions - not quantities. If someone has 100g of fat or 10g of fat - that's not shown in the charts. In either case, 100% of it comes from somewhere.

[@SuccessPoint3216]

Hello do you also teach general Ielts ?? Pls reply

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mine is tomorrow wish me luck

[@euphony1431]

Seeing this before a day of my IELTS.....

[@FasTrackIELTS]

Good luck!

[@ShubhamNeupane-xb9ql]

Asiya can you plz the video on how to improve task 2 writing plz

[@hardiklakhanpal8931]

Wow so beautiful 🥰

[@abhisheksinha5244]

The pie charts provide the information about the average consumption of three nutrients by grown ups in the. United Kingdom. These all nutrients may be unhealthy if it is being consumed in higher quantity

[@saraa180]

Please make the same video for general training

[@ingegroen9825]

Is the given example of the overview exact the same as you would write if it were placed after the introduction? With the exact same words and all

[@danushagalpaya411]

Hi, should we write all the changes and proportions which have been given in the pie chart or is it alright if we describe only the main parts.

[@WARRIXR1]

Thanks alot 😇

[@planetgermansheperd7428]

Need help for writing R: 8 L: 8.5 S: 7.5 W: 6.5 Overall 7.5 Need 7 each

[@muskank_9]

I have exam tomorrow 🙂 Thank you mam for your help

[@aunanyatasneem7263]

Please give a general training session

[@SaindhavaSanyasi]

Intro The three pie charts demonstrate the ratio of nutritious contents which are included in the food items utilised by grown-up population in the United Kingdom. Is this fine?

[@quynhchau2278]

Can you show me some good books about Ielts Writing?

[@sakshikulkarni1279]

Is it our choice to write overview after introduction or at the end?

[@gangabenshah2837]

Thanks mam. Your videos are truly helpful. I am having hard time with writing section. Kindly suggest .

[@nisansaladharmasena6174]

Hi dear!i am going to sit for the Ielts in next month.i think my vocabulary is not good.i feel fear.what can i do to improve my vocabulary?

[@SarinaBahrami-w6k]

So i have a question to ask: Can i write my overview in my introduction and also write an overview again in the last paragraph?

[@dahyuniewang1557]

what about the life cycles or a process for task 1. They are a process as a whole so is it okay to write them in one body paragraph or should we split them up?

[@manikgrover2614]

Instead of the word "snack foods" can we use the word "Snacks" ?

[@FasTrackIELTS]

Certainly!

[@akashsharma4643]

mam, I am having hard time in reading mcq and listening Heading question..please mam help me..

[@simpleenglish1673]

you have to learn more words and improve your general English

[@nisthashakya60]

You really are a smart english speaker and writer. Is english your first language ?

[@FasTrackIELTS]

Thank you! My first language is Russian, but I've been in the UK for 11 years now

[@tracywilliam3947]

i wanna ask u a question that in the sentence " ..with a relatively even distribution of nutrients." Why can "relatively" stand in front of "distribution" while it is a adverb ? tks

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can you make a video on how to evalaute writing tasks🙏🙏🙏🙏

[@45Anhad]

I would be thankful if you can answer my query, in academic test there has both bars and graphs related tasks or one as in general and other bar and graph.