Brandon Sanderson 2013 Lecture 12: Critiques by Joshua Bilmes, Literary Agent Pt 2

[@andyross383]

This is quite useful, though I find it helps a lot to set the speed to 1.5 in the video settings :)

[@rhubarber2272]

The problem with the silver dragon scene is that the perspective drops from an omniscient viewpoint- somewhere on the ground I imagine- to a 3rd limited where you are watching her. This makes a clear disconnect between 'her' and the silver dragon. I see where that gets odd for Mr. Bilmes.

[@LydiLockhart]

#3 - I liked the concept but, but it feels so unfinished, needs clarity #4 - I'm not sure what is happening there and there isn't enough to draw me in to try and figure it out. #5 - interesting - I would like to find out more. #6 - wow.. I want to read that one.

[@beefdlo]

mmmm number 5 stands out for me so far