Cara Menulis Essay Beasiswa LPDP 2023 | Waitatiri, Harvard Graduate School of Education

Sesi Pengantar Workshop Essay Studentnesia Spesial Beasiswa LPDP 2023
Pembicara Waitatiri
Mahasiswa Indonesia di Harvard University
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Ikuti program Studentnesia Mentorship program persiapan mendaftar beasiswa.
1. Mentoring Studentnesia One-on-One
- Paket Menulis Essay
- Paket Persiapan Interview
- Paket Full (Dokumen, Essay, Interview)
2. Review Essay
- Proofread Essay Beasiswa
- Proofread Essay Kampus Tujuan
3. Translate Dokumen
- Terjemah Tersumpah
- Legalisasi Notaris
- Apostille
4. Studentnesia Scholarship Centre
- Konsultasi Kuliah S2
Untuk info lengkap bisa menghubungi kami via
Admin WA (Tata):
wa.me/6281391330481
Instagram:
/ studentnesia
/ studentnesia_mentorship
Website:
www.studentnesia.org

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🎯 Key Takeaways for quick navigation: 00:02 🎤 *Introduction and Workshop Overview* - Introduction to the session on essay writing for scholarship applications, highlighting its importance for those preparing to apply. - Welcome and introduction of speakers. - Invitation for participants to introduce themselves in the chat. 01:40 📝 *Essay Writing Workshop Details* - Explanation of the session's focus on essay writing for scholarship applications. - Overview of the upcoming segments, including a presentation on essay writing experiences and a Q&A session. 03:44 🌍 *Participant Introductions and Diversity* - Acknowledgment of the wide geographical distribution of participants, emphasizing the power of social media in bringing people together for educational opportunities. 04:29 🏆 *Speaker Introduction and Background* - Introduction of the speaker's background, educational journey, and professional experience. - Discussion on the importance of education and personal growth through diverse experiences. 06:35 📘 *Overview of Scholarship Application Process* - Detailed walkthrough of the scholarship application process, emphasizing the critical role of the essay in the selection process. - Insights into the speaker's personal experience with the scholarship application, highlighting the importance of aligning one's goals with the essay's content. 09:07 💡 *Finding Your Contribution Idea* - Strategies for identifying a meaningful contribution theme for the scholarship essay. - Encouragement to reflect on personal passions, goals, and the desire to effect positive change as the foundation for the essay's content. 12:07 🎯 *Setting Goals and Identifying Passions* - Guidance on how to define clear goals and passions that can drivethe content of the scholarship essay. - Tips for connecting personal objectives with broader social or environmental issues, emphasizing the importance of authenticity in the essay. 17:09 🤔 *Identifying Personal Goals and Observations* - Insights on how personal observations and concerns can shape educational goals and contributions. - Examples of deriving goals from education, work experience, volunteering, and personal background. - Emphasis on the importance of goals being closely related to personal experiences and the desire to address specific issues in Indonesia. 18:33 🌱 *Impact and Contribution* - Discussion on the dual nature of impact: internal (personal growth) and external (contributions to society). - Encouragement to consider both personal and societal benefits when planning educational and career goals. - Highlighting that contributions do not need to be nationwide but should be significant to Indonesian communities. 22:09 ✍️ *Essay Structure and Writing Tips* - Detailed breakdown of a successful essay structure for scholarship applications, including introduction (hook), background, study motivation, and choice of institution. - Strategies for making the essay engaging and reflective of personal aspirations and potential contributions. - Emphasis on authenticity and relevance in discussing personal background and achievements in relation to study goals. 29:08 🎯 *Personal Background and Motivation for Study* - Explanation of how to integrate personal background and professional experiences into the essay to support study motivations and goals. - Suggestions for highlighting relevant experiences, family background, and personal challenges to underscore the applicant's commitment and relevance of their goals. 32:50 🎯 *Goal Setting Strategy* - Discussion on setting achievable short, medium, and long-term goals post-study. - Short-term goals should be immediately actionable and not overly ambitious to appear realistic. 35:25 🌟 *Importance of Connectivity in Goals* - Emphasis on the connection between short, medium, and long-term goals. - Goals should be related but not necessarily linear, allowing for flexibility in their achievement and relevance to Indonesia. 38:04 🔄 *Goal Flexibility and Uniqueness* - Clarification that goals do not need to be grandiose or unique to be valuable. - The importance of goals being related to Indonesia and the allowance for goals to evolve based on new experiences and insights. 40:07 🎓 *Selecting Study Programs and Institutions* - How to align program selection with personal goals and demonstrate serious commitment through research on specific courses and faculty. - Importance of showing detailed interest in the chosen program to prove dedication and the significance of education beyond obtaining a degree. 44:26 🔄 *Feedback and Revision Process* - Encouragement to seek, accept, and thoughtfully consider feedback from others. - Importance of being open to criticism without being defensive, and the ability to discern which feedback to incorporate into revisions for improvement. 48:48 🔄 *Self-awareness in Feedback Selection* - Emphasizing the importance of being selective with feedback to ensure it aligns with personal conviction and goals. - Acknowledgment that while feedback is crucial, the final decision on essay content rests with the individual. 49:59 ⏳ *Focus on Controllable Elements* - Advice on focusing efforts on aspects within one's control, such as time management and preparation. - The significance of dedicating time and effort to the application process, including revision and practice for tests and interviews. 55:31 📝 *Essay Writing Specifics* - Discussion on the approach to including data in essays, recommending restraint to avoid excessive word count usage. - Highlighting the importance of using data to strengthen arguments without overwhelming the narrative or detracting from the essay's personal elements. 01:03:26 🌟 *Importance of Personal Branding and English Proficiency* - Debate on prioritizing English proficiency over personal branding in the scholarship application process. - Acknowledgment that while building a personal brand is beneficial, meeting the essential requirements, such as language proficiency, should be the initial focus. 01:05:39 🎓 *Prioritizing Essential Requirements* - Emphasis on focusing on essential requirements such as language proficiency before building personal branding. - Advice on utilizing time between application submission and selection process for personal development and branding. 01:06:24 🤔 *Choosing Multiple Study Programs* - Guidance on selecting and justifying three different study programs in an application. - Importance of ensuring all chosen programs are aligned with personal goals and adequately explained, avoiding the appearance of backup options. 01:09:06 🚀 *Transitioning Between Different Fields* - Discussion on the feasibility and strategy of transitioning from one field of study or work to another for higher education. - Highlighting the importance of framing the transition in the application essay to show relevance and commitment to the new field. 01:16:49 🌱 *Developing Skills and Experiences* - Suggestions for undergraduate students to prepare for postgraduate studies, focusing on participation in organizations, publication, and building relationships with faculty for strong recommendations. - Encouragement for engagement in activities that showcase leadership and teamwork skills, and the pursuit of relevant certifications or courses. 01:23:10 ✍️ *Writing a Strong Essay Without Direct Experience* - Tips for writing a compelling essay focused on future goals rather than past experiences. - Advice on how to demonstrate knowledge and commitment to a field through a well-articulated vision and goal setting, compensating for lack of direct experience. 01:24:52 🎯 *Maximizing Focus on Goals in Essays* - Advice on focusing the essay on goals rather than limited experiences to bolster the application. - Emphasis on the importance of clearly defined goals to compensate for any perceived lack of relevant experience. 01:25:44 🤝 *Selecting Feedback Providers* - Guidance on choosing individuals for essay feedback, suggesting either close trusted individuals or professional mentors. - Highlighting the balance between personal confidence and openness to feedback. 01:28:45 📚 *Application Process Insights* - Clarification on the LPDP scholarship application requirements and suggestions for frequent website consultation for updates. - Advice on how to demonstrate commitment and knowledge through direct engagementwith prospective faculty. 01:32:23 🚀 *Incorporating Career Aspirations into Essays* - Discussion on how aspirations like becoming a civil servant in a field related to the essay topic can be integrated as medium or long-term goals. - Stresses the validity of including such career goals as part of the contribution to the country. 01:34:13 🌟 *Closing Statements and Encouragement* - Final thoughts emphasize the importance of staying focused on one's goals and not fearing rejection or failure. - Encouragement to view the scholarship and educational journey as a means to an end, not the end itself. 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[@fatimatuzzahra7686]

Halo Kak Wai dan Studentnesia, terima kasih ya, materinya sudah turut membantu aku untuk lolos LPDP

[@meowcico]

padat banget isinya, not even a second ever wasted, thank you so much for sharing, kak!

[@Studentnesia]

Semoga bermanfaat ya kak

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terima kasih, semoga sukses untuk semuana

[@wininafisyah7224]

wah terimakasih kak wei dan tim studentnesia, jadi dapat banyak insight ❤

[@naufaltastian]

Terima kasih informasinya kak

[@afrizal9141]

Pembahasa esai dimulai dari 10:05

[@jesselynchoo4930]

terima kasih kak

[@clarisajesika5675]

Keren bgt pengampaiannya, on point dan membuka insight!! Thank you kaaa

[@Studentnesia]

Semoga bermanfaat ya kak

[@maluunn]

terimakasih banyak Kak Wai dan Studentnesia untuk sharing2 nyaa!! alhamdulillah jadi tercerahkan bangeett

[@Studentnesia]

Yey, semoga lancar untuk persiapannya ya kak :D

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kalau ada info beasiswa lain mohon info juga kawan2 yang lagi cari beasiswa

[@achmadhanifmardinsyah5825]

8 jam lagi ges ditutup

[@dinanazla4289]

dalam essay boleh tidak mencantumkan foto/dokumentasi pendukung?

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aku hadir di seminar ini sebelumnya, tpi dibagian essay yg menjelaskan tentang alasan memilih kampus dan jurusan nya gaada ya?

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Ada kaa