Reading the Essay that Got Me Into Harvard | Personal Statement | Indonesian Student

[@nemsjep3725]

Aight, imma make a bet now, that ur going to be one of the most influential woman in Indonesia in at least 30 years. Here's hopin for a better edu 💪

[@샤이닝-e4v]

I bet!!!

[@laura1089]

It made me cry. It's beautiful. Hope you can achieve these goals for your community!

[@hafidadwiyaalima9246]

Hearing the first sentence makes me cry kak, that's why your essay can get you into harvard... As indonesian That's so true.. Thankyou for the insight and wish my essay can get get me into harvard too

[@AishaRizqy]

Tearing up while listening to you reading your essay. Like the name, it's very personal dan touch heart of the reader. I hope all of your plans and visions for Indonesia's education could come true, Kak Wai! You're doing great and will always be, insya Allah❤️

[@Waitatiri]

Sasaaa thank you so much for the kind words!!! Aamiin, doa yang sama untukmu💛

[@albaloven5737]

Hi, I can definitely say that you aced your Harvard application with your essay. You are one of a kind. I was looking for a winning essay example as I am preparing a master's degree scholarship application. However, your essay made me reflect and question my purpose again. I don't have an exceptional life story like yours and I am a total mediocre. One of the reasons why I want to go after grad school is because since I graduated in 2021, I have never been accepted by any companies that I applied to. Meanwhile, I desperately want to have a career in the environmental sector or marine science-related field. So, I thought grad school is a good idea to elevate my qualification, skills, and knowledge. But now, I still question myself. Anyway, you're a star and I am sure you'll excel in your study at Harvard.

[@ellifz]

girl same

[@GovindJadhav-j5j]

Props to her for actually reading her essay. Other youtubers make clickbait videos about their essays and give bs advice in their videos.

[@auliafulfah1029]

wwoooow surprisingly your essay made me cry and amaze😍 that was beautiful essay, thank you for sharing..

[@nidasjafia4060]

Kak,thank you so much for sharing this statement of purpose. I can see the view that your essay is eloquent,simple yet captured all your vision for applying master's in harvard. Hope you always had a great day ya kak! Thank you for inspiring me!

[@indrawanyoswanda]

That was awesome hearing your essay, Mbak Wai. It encouraged me to pursue my dream studying abroad then payback to our country. Also appreciate with the LPDP tracker. It could be useful for me. See you in Harvard

[@Bookisque]

Hello, I'm absolutely sold at how you brought the sop to a full circle by beginning and ending with the same statement. Absolutely loved it. ❤❤

[@anitahartinisuryaman4917]

Just found the video. Thank you so much...so inspiring...

[@Temur818]

I am impressed, finally understood how to write a perfect personal statement. I am also coming from the impoverished country and the stories mentioned in your essay are very familiar to me. God bless you and help you to achieve all of your dreams and aspirations.

[@hafsa7081]

IT MIGHT EVEN HAVE BROUGHT TEARS IN THE EYES OF READERS ,PERFECTTT WELL I LEARNT A LOT FROM IT THANKSSSS A LOTTTTT

[@annisasjournal]

Hi kak, I am new here and this video is so helpful and inspiring. Thank you for letting us reading your essay

[@sarahdrio4623]

I also learned Barbara Oakley's Learning How To Learn. Thank you for sharing!

[@darisataqiya5875]

Kak Wai u r very inspiring🥹🥹 keren banget kakk! Thank you for making this video🫶

[@adhwaav]

Hi kak! Thank you for sharing this with us❤. I'm a big fan. And i'll be sure to watch you making all the dream happen! Good luck kakkkk

[@ratanatepynarin1218]

Thank you for sharing this essay

[@andreaegeapato3510]

No wonders why you got in! Loved it! Congrats!♥

[@viraxeva6748]

Thank you so much for sharing this kak Wai ❤❤❤

[@Waitatiri]

Hope you find it helpful💛

[@AB.926]

So inspiring, thank you for sharing :)

[@agusdwihastutik8109]

You are an inspiration. Thank you for sharing this.

[@MissionCome-Back]

After listening your whole essay, I am pretty much sure this is not just an essay, it's your lifes one of the priority goal you are striving for! Kudos🎉! May Allah gift you constant success throughout the process😊

[@zalikhadista3649]

kakk, your essay really touch my heart! wishing all the good things for you! thank you for sharing🤍

[@Waitatiri]

thank you so much! 🫶

[@1ridz0]

i am absolutely awestruck by your ability of story telling through your essay. im struggling with my SOP, i come from a business background. i wish there were any ways to connect with you and brainstorm together. im not sure if youll even see this comment, and if you do, it would mean a lot if you reached out to me. im in dire need of help and dont have mans to pay for SOP experts. in in mess right now and time is a scarcity. oh may God be kind to me!

[@zora0927]

Thanks for sharing your experience! 💖

[@melistyaee5460]

kak waiii❤❤❤ you always inspire me! thankyou so much for share this

[@Waitatiri]

Terima kasih banyakk kata2 baiknya! Semoga bermanfaat💛

[@poppy-vo2dp]

Hi! Would you mind making a video on your stats & especially ecs? I find it really difficult to branch out to shadowing/internship programs that accept us SMA students in indonesia. Virtual programs of that sort are also very rare :( I believe my best chances are just highschool club branch chapters but I don’t think it’ll sway the ao much. Thanks! Really admire your essay writing 😊

[@anonymously2525]

TREMENDOUS!

[@arnavdixit1397]

Is this a Statement of Purpose? Or a Personal Statement? From my understanding, a Personal Statement has a word limit of 500 words and this is quite big for that

[@haninhaha]

Your opening kakkk😭👊🏼✨ slap so hard

[@Waitatiri]

semoga bermanfaattt💛

[@pnarkaya3382]

How many words should your composition consist of and how many pages should it be?

[@itohowoakpan5320]

This is great

[@pnarkaya3382]

Hello, I wonder if there is a pdf of the composition?

[@Trillion61]

I saw and read your complete essay, now I am thinking that how I grate thinking like you for my best essay. Harvard is my dream college like you. My dear sister ! Can you help(guide) me filliout the common app a application? Please please please...

[@Rin_1459]

Jesus bless you. Your video really helped me. Thanks!

[@andredaniel5631]

Halo kak. Makasih udah share. Bermanfaat banget informasinya. Kalau boleh tanya kak, dulu pas daftar ke uni-nya ada syarat buat kasih GRE/GMAT kita ga kak?

[@ariannasser2385]

this is waaayy longer than a 500 word limit for a personal statement...

[@reddragon6317]

Brilliant essay but not useful. I dont have a sob story to play on the emotions of the admission committee

[@MamaRambu-k4b]

every people have their own stories and the same thing as you. you should looking for it,even at the smallest action that you take