CELPIP WRITING TASK 2 TEMPLATE DETAILED! COMPLETE VERSION. Advanced Vocabulary and Structure.

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@nuzattabassum8205 4 ай бұрын

I followed this template and memorized it. Practiced two writing tests before my test. I got my result yesterday I scored 11 in writing. Thank you so much for helping us and providing all these helpful tips without any cost. These youtube videos are like blessings!

@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 4 ай бұрын

Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad your exam went well :)

@poorvikasharma2489 8 ай бұрын

Watched this video just a day before exam, with no preparation, just followed the template mentioned in this video and got 10 in writing. Thank you!

@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 8 ай бұрын

Great to hear!

@DebINCalgary 8 ай бұрын

These are some of the best tips for CELPIP general. I appeared for the exam last week and got a band 10. Thank you so much for these artifacts.

@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 8 ай бұрын

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@RahulKumar-mh7yj 8 ай бұрын

What was your topic ? Thanks

@blossomndu3665 5 ай бұрын

I used this template and got an 11 in writing , although I twisted some words. I strongly recommend and this isn't a paid review.

@sathya.kolli369 9 ай бұрын

The idea of implementing new annual membership fee would be great topic of debate. However, I personally opine that, small membership fee will brings us the new library facilities for the people of Markham. Clearly with the shortage of funds for running the public library by the govt. We need to pay annul fee inorder to run the library. Likewise, it's going to be a great destination for our kids and families and senior citizens to utilize the services. Evidently, Increasing in the fines for overdue books also gives us some relief for paying salaries to run the Library. Nonetheless, the fines overdue amount is less when compared with annual fee. Plus the annual membership is great idea and will not cause much burden to the people of Markham. Based on the above aforementioned reasoning, I still affirm that, increasing overdue fines will not resolve the problem. Which is why it should be supplemented with annul membership fee. However I will respect whatever the decision eventually chosen. I appreciate this opportunity to give my opinion on this topic.

@maritesstronco8733 5 ай бұрын

May I know your score in your CELPIP writing using this format?

@vaanisrinivasan718 4 ай бұрын

@@maritesstronco8733 hi

@vaanisrinivasan718 4 ай бұрын

May I know the score what u got for this

@sahilnanda9668 13 күн бұрын

In CELPIP Writing Task 2, responses are evaluated on criteria such as content and coherence, vocabulary, readability, grammar, and sentence structure. Here's a breakdown of your response: 1. Content and Coherence (6/12): The ideas are clear, and your argument is generally well-structured. However, the reasoning could be more fully developed. You mention the benefits of a membership fee and its potential impact on library services, but there are missed opportunities to elaborate on those points with more specific examples or supporting details. Some sections, like the comparison between overdue fines and membership fees, could be better linked to your argument. Additionally, your final sentence could be more conclusive. 2. Vocabulary (6/12): The vocabulary used is appropriate, but somewhat repetitive ("annual membership fee" is repeated multiple times). More varied expressions would enhance the quality of your writing. Some word choices are awkward, such as "small membership fee will brings" (should be "will bring") or "the fines overdue amount" (should be "overdue fine amounts"). 3. Readability (6/12): The text is readable, but some sentences are unclear or awkwardly phrased, which impacts the flow. For example: "Clearly with the shortage of funds for running the public library by the govt." could be smoother with better sentence structure. Additionally, "pay annul fee" should be "pay an annual fee." 4. Grammar and Sentence Structure (5/12): There are several grammatical issues, such as incorrect subject-verb agreement ("small membership fee will brings"), unnecessary commas ("I still affirm that, increasing overdue fines"), and incomplete or fragmented sentences ("Clearly with the shortage of funds for running the public library by the govt."). Sentence structure can be improved to enhance clarity, and attention to articles ("an" vs. "a") and prepositions (e.g., "brings us new library facilities") is needed. Overall Score: 6/12 To improve your score, focus on refining sentence structure, expanding your reasoning with more examples, and addressing grammatical issues. Varying your vocabulary and ensuring logical flow between ideas would also enhance the overall response.

@afreenmaliat7222 8 ай бұрын

Watched this video just before the day of my exam. Followed all the tips and got 11/12 by practicing just 2 sample questions

@thecokcans 6 ай бұрын

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@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 6 ай бұрын

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@HarmeetSingh-rc1wp 9 сағат бұрын

Hi Thanks for your continuous guidance I purchased your Upgrade package and it's really helpful Can you please clarify the question 12 of the writing task 2 in above package please Thanks

@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 9 ай бұрын

TRANSCRIPT CONTINUED: lot of people ignore this so we'll see the tone change happening here now we're going to assume a topic assume that the essay question is asking you we have an empty space and we have two options we can build option A a nuclear plant or option b uh a park okay so I'm GNA start here with saying the idea off and then we're going to put our topic here which is off building uh a new and you can now add your stuff a new premises or you can say a nuclear plant or a park it's going to be lengthy but you can say that you can also say the idea of having a new construction in this area whatever the question is you can put that in multiple ways to do it another way could have been the idea of developing the empty space has been a topic of great debate this is your general sentence because you don't start with your opinion right away so with our general sentence we give it a start we rephrase the question essentially and then we give our opinion we do not use the common words which are in my opinion uh if we have used them before we want to change them every time templates keep getting updated which is why keep subscribing and make sure you follow the latest templates this is the latest one so you want to start with IOP that and using this will give you marks for advanced vocabulary uh cuz it's less used off a word I op that give your opinion that a park should be built or when you connect it with this one you're going to say I op that the park will be a more it is a much more suitable option or the nuclear plant is a much more suitable option so you put the uh option here and you just copy paste the rest simple as that now when we jump into body one here and here and here you can see these are all good connections we are building a flow and that's why we have these specific words in the template not only do you build a flow but you are using Le and Lee on purpose because adverbs add to your range of vocabulary very few people use it and that's why very few people score more than nine so the the template targets all those great things so we're going to start with clearly and this is where we start with our first point in uh supporting my option so let's say my option is the park okay so I'm going to say clearly and give one reason here okay give one reason about the park uh you can separate it with a comma to make it a complex sentence for example you could say clearly with the rise in CO2 comma we would need to have more parks and trees to counter that effect Now by doing comma and breaking the sentence into two parts Again part one given that we have a lot of CO2 second part we need trees to provide more oxygen and clear up the uh environment breaking it into two parts helps you get that Mark for the complex sentence and that's why I have recommended using a comma here but if it's hard for you you can just say clearly and start one simple sentence however try your best to have it complex separated with a comma gives a great first impression likewise is your mark for your connector so now you connect it and now you give another point this is going to be the second point in support of your option so it's going to be different than the first one my first one was about environment the second Point could be likewise it's going to be great for Recreation as kids and families would have a suitable place during evening hours and weekends to just have a great time and uh relish the outdoors okay that's the second point so you got two points separated nicely organized nicely with a connector in between and it's not an ordinary connector like and or also well in most cases people don't don't even do connectors so we want to make sure we get get our connectors there now here here is why I said this is going to be important here you have to talk remember this about the other side please I beg you talk about the other side here okay this is where people usually don't switch the side they keep talking about the park and then think about it why did The Examiner even mention the nuclear Park you cannot just ignore it you have to address it and address it negatively so this whole body is going to be negative about the other side and this will show The Examiner your versatility your range of vocabulary and your ability to switch directions because as as soon as you start talking about the negative side you're going to say it's detrimental it's harmful it's bad it's a whole different range of vocabulary a different expression multiple different expressions and you're also switching sides using different connectors like nonetheless and however which adds more variety and you need that for a good range of a vocab so we are not going to start with neg a negative sentence right here you're going to say evidently an nuclear plant may have its benefits so just agree because we're building a flow we said something positive so we're not just going to say but the nuclear plant is terrible slowly so evidently the the nuclear plant may have its benefits nonetheless so we're going to say that in the middle of the sentence nonetheless the and then one negative point right here okay the uh what do you call it the uh got I forgot the word for it but the gases the harmful gases that will be uh emitted from those nuclear plants are going to be disastrous for the environment one point plus the risks of nuclear radiation are Apparent from past experiences which will be hazardous to the community that would be your second Point guys so you have a connector connector in both body one and two and after that you start your second point so basically your body one has two points body two has two points body one supports your opinion and body two opposes the other opinion finally you finish with based on the aforementioned reasoning copy paste don't need to think about it copy paste this one too I still affirm that and then rephrase your opinion I still affirm that the nuclear plant will be disastrous which is why it should be supplemented with a park or replaced with a park okay there you go so that's it your have four paragraphs and it has great vocab great structure keeps your word limit in check as well just try it you will see you will end up in around 200 words so it works like magic in all areas and gives you marks in multiple places uh again this is not the best the most Superior version of our template we do have a lot more advanced words if you want to find the best version check out the course Link in the description and you'll see just how the next level of this template looks like and you'll be amazed with that too so will the examiner but if you like this template and if you want to find more variations which will be coming up very soon actually next month do subscribe share this video and please like it it does help our Channel grow thank you very much

@harshdave9561 9 ай бұрын

I used exactly same format in writing part 1 and 2 and got 7. Maybe, I did not fulfill other requirements of writing to score higher.

@kerulin6793 Ай бұрын

Thank you for posting this, I've seen so many of your videos recently! I've noticed you always say please do not start with dear sir or madam for task two which make sense. But when I was going through CELPIP's official study guide, the example they listed there for a level 10 started with a dear sir or madam (very email like format). I do understand this is not something that would EARN marks, but could you please explain why this is the case? Could it be that the content overrides the format in terms of grading? Or are graders/examiners are not THAT strict with this kind of stuff?

@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 Ай бұрын

There is a very detailed answer I can give you for this, however, to keep things simple, the best thing to do is to start with Dear Mr. or Miss. (add a real name here). Keeping it personalized is always the best thing.

@ansonkmathew9196 9 ай бұрын

Can you also upload a template for task 1?,please

@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 9 ай бұрын

It's already here :) kzbin.info/www/bejne/qofZpnaLqqaNrcU

@Ellenpl19 9 ай бұрын

After "Clearly" should we put a "," comma? For me makes sense to put a comma and continue the sentence, but when I do it Word recommends I delete the word "clearly".

@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 9 ай бұрын

Depends but yes, generally, a comma is better. Word and Grammarly are not always accurate. For our context, it makes sense.

@Ellenpl19 9 ай бұрын

@@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 Thank you!