Change Your Focus | 60 Second Short Film

My submission for the Aputure Find Your Focus Film Contest.
Honestly I don't really like it at all anymore, I think its corny but it has 14k views so I'm going to leave it up just to see where this goes lol
Camera used: Canon Rebel T3i w/ 50mm 1.8 lens

[@taracollins5597]

This is NOT corny in the slightest! If anything, this is perfect to show people of all ages, both female & male. About not only what we should focus on...but that we don't have to stay how we are. We can change our focus at any time....& thus love who we are! Well done.

[@capturedbyouwen]

Not corny at all! It provokes emotions and theme of self love very well

[@latelino]

Sends a nice message in a short time!

[@jamesdoanecompositions]

I loved it! Great little message.

[@ako390]

We love ourselves the way we are.

[@robinbarwick8473]

Not corny, excellent. And really useful as a discussion starting point for lessons with young people about self image, make up etc

[@josephb1911]

Loved the color grading and scene splicing.😁👌

[@wilsonabbey]

Sorry I'm only seeing this now, but thank you so much! Funny, I actually didn't do any color grading I just worked with the lighting, but I appreciate the comment! Thanks for watching :)

[@serjiviejoven9594]

well done!!! especially lighting work

[@Godisglorious1]

I love short films. This is such a beautiful message and beautifully done. Thank you! 🥰👍

[@duna2549]

❤❤

[@attisharma2863]

Last 10 seconds says it all

[@SHAAMFILMSENTERTAINMENT]

THE NAME SHOULD BE "FIX YOUR FOCUS"

[@annoyingboss8171]

This is adorable

[@wilsonabbey]

+California Poppy Thank you so much. I appreciate it. :)

[@naughty121]

Beautiful 👏👏👏👏

[@flutteringleaves1]

Really awesome work

[@sydisawesome90]

I love it. It’s not corny

[@stefyguereschi]

'PERHAPS,WHEN YOU SHIFT YOUR FOCUS,YOU CHANGE YOUR LIFE🌺

[@juttabrassil]

great clip, not corny at all, well done

[@jeffr7752]

Well done. I like it.

[@NeelGulati]

HELL! YES! ABSO-FUCKING-LUTELY! AMAZING!

[@mehtabmunwar4227]

Fabulous makeup

[@ELINAHAWK]

aww I really like it! such sweet video! new subbie purely because of this video! :)

[@shitchops]

She doesnt need make ups ^__^

[@djdubtron9966]

loved it

[@ranender]

Very nice ❤️

[@ajcinefilms]

Fab...💫

[@sujithsugathan6273]

Good one

[@sjh218]

vroom🏁

[@jeanlodescarjr.6229]

Dope

[@mdjillorahoman8153]

Nice

[@yumiyungue4105]

Woah

[@naiknigam8031]

Hello.. can i use this concept

[@sbkvoice]

good

[@shamilkhan4387]

she looks like Emma Watson

[@jazilabenslim5146]

i agree

[@zzzzzz1926]

Hello Future

[@arwaabdullah-mg2qo]

she’s pretty

[@VivekPandey-yi3hv]

MUSIC USED ??

[@ygpakeningmoney2884]

Ok bro

[@LieLikesMusic]

This was a nice one. Do you still make films?

[@wilsonabbey]

Just a couple random projects but its just a side thing that I don't have much time for as I'm currently in nursing school!!

[@ajaljoseph869]

Can you give your email I'd we are also trying for aa nice concept

[@sujithsugathan6273]

Good one

[@wilsonabbey]

I didn’t even realize who you were at the time, I’m a big fan of your videos! Thanks for the nice comment. Cheers!

[@LieLikesMusic]

@@wilsonabbey Haha no worries. And thanks. I've decided to take a break from KZbin these days.

[@gustavosantos2606]

MT bom

[@clasencoach]

I don’t get it. Does she remove her make-up again?

[@pankajmishra3313]

I'm seeing your reply to people.. And I know you are not gonna reply me 😅 bt I'm commenting 😁 Bcz it's is adorable and i appreciate your work... ❤️

[@karenpearson6991]

I have no idea what this is meant to be telling me.

[@charuhasini1234]

Band V4

[@jeongwoo5104]

nicee stream Hello by treasure

[@DillonTrinhProductions]

Did you win?

[@wilsonabbey]

Unfortunately no

[@cjmadridtv4289]

@@wilsonabbey but for us.. you win

[@wilsonabbey]

​@@cjmadridtv4289 :'-)

[@lilianrodrigueselias8483]

LETS STREAM TREASURE - JIKJIN

[@ronimajumder3815]

The girl is so cute

[@chachanim_]

The girl is beautiful~

[@the_plan_official]

Aperture?

[@wilsonabbey]

It's a company called Aputure

[@user-si1hn6dj3n]

美しいです♪ ( ・ε・)

[@rosepark6729]

JikjiiiiNn

[@bamtori3426]

Came here cause TXT

[@imfear9633]

In India we called this "chutiya katna"

[@bernsberns819]

she's still pretty tho even w/o make up

[@The_Cs]

Awesome ! Great concept. Hey, can you help me a bit ? I never went to a film school but i got inspired to make my own short films after watching dozens of them. I took some help from youtubers about lightning and created my 1st short film but didn't received good feedbacks. Few comments that i have are of my friends. And i feel like i missed something. Can you please help me a bit because after my high school exams i will be working on an amazing storyline that i recently completed and i want it to be far better than this. Actually this was my 1st short film and i learnt a lot but i want to improve so... I hope this doesn't look awkward and at last, amazing message in less than a minute and half. Congratulations 👏

[@user-xt4pj4ve2y]

Hi) Sorry, what exact help do you mean: to watch your film and tell you the impressions as an ordinary watcher or to help you with filming?)

[@The_Cs]

@@user-xt4pj4ve2y i will be very grateful to you if you could post your genuine review in my comment section, i am very new to this field and i have very limited knowledge so i would also be very thankful if you could tell me the area where i need to improve the most. I want my next short film to be much better than this, i want to feel a lot improved in making of my next film.

[@jennefergaviola1708]

Jikjin

[@tuesdayflores7930]

i'm here becauese of HELLO- TREASURE

[@tinedelo2471]

JIKJIN BY TREASURE

[@roccgg]

Ok

[@charieanotde7870]

Jikjiiinnn

[@jannahgaviola269]

jikjin

[@daksha7054]

[@shabdizfilmproduction2821]

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