''Cheesy’s World'' | TERRIFYING THEME PARK CREEPYPASTA (THIS ONE IS AN ABSOLUTE CLASSIC)

[@FacesProductions1]

Wanted to thank you for reading my story, Dr. Creepen! You did a great job with it. I also appreciate all the love I've been shown in the comments! Means a lot to have something you worked hard on be appreciated

[@KendallM0219]

Was dizzy her son? The charred corpse who was found holding the dizzy costume.

[@Dudewithnoface1]

This is an awesome story dude

[@Alexandra-rb7ju]

This is one of the best stories I have heard in a long time! These unique stories definitely need more attention.

[@wolfthornnholtzklau4913]

Love your story

[@greenwitchinc.1682]

I was just scrolling through the comments before I gave this a listen. I'm about to go for a spooky evening walk and check this out. Definitely looking forward to hearing your story!

[@joleenphillips2415]

"I'm sure wherever they (the missing children) are, I'm sure they're happy and healthy." What a weird thing to say. That would have set me on edge too.

[@lexzem1123]

Right like why would you say that

[@CZsWorld]

This title sounds strangely familiar...

[@milessumida6770]

For context a “rat king” is a of group of rats whose tails have become tied and cemented together, this leads to a massive ball of rats, some living some not, that moves as a single squirming unit. This leads me to believe that the Rat King in this story was more of a collective consciousness of rats rather than a single entity.

[@bobtheblindbedroomguitaris8742]

I have come across other rat king videos with creepypasta and in those videos there's a distinct individual racking I never heard of what you said I don't know if I should take that as a jest or as some kind of far in god-knows-what anyway sincerely yours, Bob the blind guitarist yes I'm blind that's why the text is not perfect so don't kill me LOL

[@milessumida6770]

Robert Sutton I apologize, I hadn’t come across any rat king videos before, could you recommend a good one? Also the rat kings I described are a real thing en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rat_king Edit: after rereading I discovered that Rat King did originally mean an individual and was latter applied to the knotted mass. It’s still creepy though.

[@wolfthornnholtzklau4913]

@@milessumida6770 that....is some weird stuff.

[@darlene1417]

I find it interesting that the number 33 was used to describe the area that the children and the 🐀 👑 rat king were hidden at! Disney has the CLUB 33 where the FreeMasons/Illuminati meet!

[@kingcatnip2614]

@milessumida6770 kzbin.info/www/bejne/pWTMinSwi8qsisUsi=daM_afIXDkZChTsp

[@Cesly-mo3uf]

Alright kids, after we ride Mayhem Mountain we will leave for Cheesy's World, and then Mogli's Island.

[@pmorales4696]

Mayhem Mountain was the first creepypasta I ever listened to and one of my all time faves! Mogli’s Island is definitely a great one too.

[@DeltaPi314]

@@pmorales4696 What I don't like about the Theme Park Creepypastas is that they would work better as an SCP and not a creepypasta. They require a suspension of disbelief that a stand-alone story just can't carry unless it was written with SusoDis clearly in mind from the begining (which is rarely the case). The SCP universe carries them far better.

[@rickyhurtt8692]

And last but not least Harold's hangout

[@milessumida6770]

I’d love to go to Mogli’s Palace! Unfortunately I’m pretty sure that it’s been abandoned by Disney...

[@morriganravenmist5539]

Moglis world/palace/island and Harold place/world I've not heard of these ones are they good or Cheesy??

[@entropicwombat8393]

I swear around part 3, you made Miss Turner sound like Morgan Freeman. Now, every time I hear you voice her, I just get this vision of Morgan Freeman in a bad wig, and a sun dress. Thanks for that.

[@jackdurden466]

The second I heard that a flow of rats came from beneath their car, I payed closer attention to them. Something told me that the rats were key, I honestly still don’t know exactly how, but they became a talking humanoid being when piled together. A cool premise, albeit gross! I love the theme park stories! Most especially ones about Disney. Mainly because I truly believe that that place is shrouded in mystery and horrifying truths. And who could forget Mayhem Mountain? A classic among classics! I loved this one! Props to the author, and of course to our beloved Dr. for blessing us with a 2 hour tale to keep me away from any damn theme parks! Ha! What a fascinating tale, all being done by what we previously considered a significantly Lower life form. Perhaps not quite so low!

[@LordBitememan]

Well, if I remember the 90s correctly the Rat King did find a hole to climb down. And there's these four turtles down there. . .

[@BloodRaven1969]

love the deeper stories like this one, and do not mind the length.

[@fernandobarajas8747]

Same

[@Felorina]

I prefer the longer stories, they tend to feel more well rounded

[@AW27007]

@@Felorina and all you gotta do is turn it on and play a video game

[@evanclark2656]

Thats what she said lol but honestly i agree

[@TheMattc999]

I like the longer stories, more time listening, less time looking for something to listen to.

[@PrimateProductions]

Oh... couldn't ask for more...an awesome story...on top of that a very long narration...and the icing on the cake...narrated by Dr. Creepen!! 🥰

[@sexygrandmadarkness2722]

Hi there 👋 my Sweetlicious Friend:) hope that you are doing well during these Bleaklicious 😢times I'm good;) stay safe okay 😊 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️💋

[@stevietricks]

I was absolutely wrapped in that brilliance. Fantastic. Thanks again good sir (Doffs hat)

[@twostonedactual2541]

This was a damn good one. I like these longer ones because I'll download them and listen while I'm at work since I lose signal in the shop. I zoned out while gaming and listening to the Pacific island one. I relistened to that today. All I can say is, imagine training scientists to be soldiers.

[@Slideyslide]

That one made me zone out a bit too

[@major_nobody311]

I'm sure this will make me get through dishes and making dinner

[@major_nobody311]

Thank you doc

[@tashaderry3580]

I listen to these while doing the exact same things! Lol and while I'm at work. (evenings cleaning)

[@angelined9814]

You're doing it in the wrong order.

[@major_nobody311]

@@angelined9814 wrong order huh? Just so happens I don't feel like doing dishes after I cook dinner, they sit in the sink festering until I clean them the next day for dinner.

[@swordstrafe]

Colonel_Cracklicker iii he’s saying most people tend to make dinner, eat, then do dishes...

[@ThatAwkwardFish]

I wasn't expecting much when I heard "amusement park story's, but I really enjoyed that! The characters felt genuine and the story itself was fun and interesting!

[@lukaswilliams5851]

I agree I didn't want an amusement park story either But this one is solid.

[@DeltaPi314]

genuine? it's a FNAF copy.

[@ThatAwkwardFish]

@@DeltaPi314 everything is a copy of something, nothing is original, all that matters is the effort and unique perspective of the person or people making it

[@bobtheblindbedroomguitaris8742]

hey if you want to really good Adventureland type story checkouts Stephen King's book joyland and there's another book that's similar by what's his name Dean Koontz I can't remember the name the name of the book off hand but it was also really interesting that's also another great the carnival traveling call no show carnivals book by Ray Bradbury can't remember what the name of it is and that's a really great ones heels that's three sort of adventure Park 😛 so that there was another three pyeah to other books on a story actually it's three books joyland the Dean Koontz book and the Ray Bradbury book which I can't remember which is actually a very well-known book please excuse typos misspelled words excetera I'm not illiterate I'm not even a bad type of all the way everyone says I am legally blind using Speech-to-Text what does to the English language Reddit wants to LOL sincerely yours, Bob zipline bedroom guitarist guitarist

[@uncleduck09]

I'm a grown ass man with kids of my own, but, when Amari was returned, I had tears in my eyes.

[@angelined9814]

I'm only halfway through. I am making the very very safe assumption that I absolutely won't have the same reaction. Problem with these shorter stories is you dont get much time to care about the characters. No development. Thus..meh.

[@clashofclans5317]

Angeline D short this 2 hours long

[@morriganravenmist5539]

@@angelined9814 this is 2hrs long I wouldn't class that as a short story, a short story is 10 mins 😆 this is long enough 2 get into

[@kevo3985]

I'm a grown man with kids they been a few stories that made me cry the other night they was one about a dad dying and turning into a pokeyman and watching over his kids the end had me sobbing for some reason

[@juniorpersaud8199]

@@angelined9814 h j

[@millieallen1876]

Great story Dr. Creepen. It had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. You have a great voice. You’re one of my favorites.

[@cerriemadden8081]

This has been the best and most capturing reading by you in a while... I love a proper length story Dr creepen and you telling it adds perfection... Thankyou so much ❤️

[@durgadivinewrath8879]

Oh my god! I genuinely loved this, it really kept me on edge until the end. Creepy carnival type stories are always a win for me, but this was really enjoyable!

[@Alexandra-rb7ju]

These are seriously good pastas. Much better than those mainstream stories circulating on youtube. This is the breath of fresh air I needed.

[@ilovesteveclark6084]

I just listened to this story!!! I absolutely loved it! It had a perfect combination of everything a story needs to keep the listener's attention constantly! And it seemed tailor-made for you to narrate it. You portrayed each person in a way that I could actually envision them as real people. And a beautiful ending!💕🥰

[@kimlambert159]

Love the long stories. Creepy for sure! I might need to listen to this one again. It reminds me of that circus story you narrated some years back. That one gave me nightmares lol

[@ceirwynsinclair4198]

Yay! Don't mind me happy shivering here in the corner with my cup of cocoa!

[@MrSleepless]

This was amazing Dr Creepen, I'm improving with each of my stories, so i'm hoping we could someday collab!

[@lordfluffatized3135]

Overnight has started. Clocked in finished patrol got my coffee my pistol and my go to narrator Its gonna be a good night

[@angelined9814]

Oy

[@jaggirl]

Life is good..🙂🇦🇺

[@BenSS3]

Sit back with your favorite gun, or weapon of choice, and... Listen.. Edit: Don't actually do this, firearm safety isn't a joke. Just a full "don't try this at home, kids" disclaimer, as I don't want anyone fooling around or playing with any kind of weapon(s). I know, I know, buzzkiller, but rather be a buzzkill than being even partial to blame for any kind of possible injury. Not for legal reasons, of course, but I'd literally be unable to live with any kind of guilt on my shoulders. xD

[@morriganravenmist5539]

We don't have guns here in uk not like in the US anyways, the license laws are HARD it's mostly farmers who have guns in Wales oh and some drug dealers so yeah last isn't great 😣😣 but they was go that's their choice I suppose. My Wepon is my mouth!!! And my cats! Don't mess with meh cats they think their guard attack tigers so yeah they do not like night visitors 2 the door or people they don't know, and if they don't like you anyways my oldest one will just sit and get in you're space make you feel real uncomfortable like she does with my nephew! My dog didn't like him.either!!! Only 2 people my dog ever growled at and tried 2 get out of the house!! My nephew is horrible nasty kid who hits his mother and treats every one like shite the other is some man who came in my home once with a friend of mine and the man ended up after abusing my friend and taking another persons life!!!! I miss my dog he was a good boy! He was my AK 🤗🤗 but I do miss him my cat does 2 it's made her evil his death! Come 2 Wales we have mad pets who can tell evil.from good!😆😆😆 No buy really tho it's a gawjus place, sorry for babbling shit I'm. Tired I have problems sleeping and I over share 😂😂😂😂 brilliant

[@bobtheblindbedroomguitaris8742]

Lord fluffy thighs that's got to be one of the most coolest names or whatever they call those type things a username that I've come across in my blind life and the yeah I don't think my speech-to-text could actually spell that correctly so if it's been eviscerated good word for these kind of stories the your name that is that's why I sincerely yours, but all the blind bedroom

[@skyetonbo1011]

I got a notification for Mr. Nightmare while watching this and I had an internal struggle. I chose to stay as I was already hooked into the story. Best decision ever. Incredible and vivid story. SPOILER ALERT ⚠️ SPOILER ALERT ⚠️SPOILER ALERT ⚠️SPOILER ALERT ⚠️SPOILER ALERT ⚠️ "It's said a human has 3 lives. The death of innocence, the death of naivete and the death of the body." ~Dark-Netflix This story actively engages this quote each time he returns to the park. From the 1st to the last. He lost his innocence when he entered the park with his parents. He lost his naivety when his brother went missing and re entered the park. And even though he didn't physically die, a part of him died when he pulled that trigger. Such a wonderful captivating story with all the scary elements of theme parks around the world and urban legends making the story seem mildly realistic and relatable. I can only imagine what his little brother was seeing all throughout the day but as the story goes it's revealed without having to know his brother's complete point of view. For example. The freak out at the rollercoaster.... It's so very possible he saw the animatronic perched on top and that caused the meltdown.... But then for the same one to appear at the gate... My guess is I'm right. The story was so beautifully written and I loved it. Of course Dr. Creepen the story wouldn't be the same without your narration. You know how to make a person's heart race when it needs to, without being over dramatic and keep people on the edge of their seats with the lure of your rich voice and near perfect expressive dialog. Thank you 🦋

[@williamhobbs7344]

To both you, and the author. That was a wild ride. Thank you both for everything you do, and of course the best of blessings. Good night, and bye bye.🙂

[@rjkmannusaf0166]

Omgosh that Story was phenomenal! I saw the title and then I saw the narrator and I knew it was going to be an awesome adventure. Thank you....😃😁

[@BeeBait]

I think I'll download this and take a nice trip to the woods tonight and give this a listen. Thanks for filling my script Doc, hope you feel better soon enough yourself and wishing the family well.

[@turtleanton6539]

How u download?

[@BeeBait]

@@turtleanton6539 tubemate

[@morriganravenmist5539]

@@BeeBait is that an app?

[@FusionTechCinema]

I’m prob a psycho for listening to these while I drive at night (Truck driver) in the middle of nowhere

[@yvonnesmith1708]

Not at all m8

[@Theonlyjustkat]

It’s ok I sleep to these

[@emulatemetheuniverse.3670]

I like to do the same when I drive at night

[@dgage1776]

It's the only way to feel fear after driving a truck for years

[@squidcultist0022]

Nah. They're just stories

[@vladimiroparlato6001]

Great story,great narration by the doctor,really enjoyed it.

[@mandyfair9082]

This was an amazing story and excellently narrated of course. Than you Dr. Creepen. 😊

[@Maxx________]

I loved it! Like listening to the events of a movie play out. Thank you for reading such an awesome story as you do every week.

[@Sarah-said]

Thanks Doc, I love the long ones!

[@dianarendon4037]

A+ grade narration and incredible story.

[@jacobsteele7138]

That is in my top five Dr Creepen read stories!

[@bluestain3340]

Perfect timing 😊 I love amusement park stories

[@joshwillis5215]

I think this might be my favorite story so far. You do such an awesome job narrating these tales.

[@kimberlysawickey4312]

HAPPY FRIDAY DOC !! LOVED THIS ONE ! THANK YOU NICE STORY FOR THIS RAINY DAY AT WORK ALONE. GOT YA PULLED UP ON MY DESK TOP SPEAKERS LOL. XO

[@greggoodman1460]

This is one of my favorite ones you have read, and I like to think I have heard all the stories you have read!

[@thejudgmentalcat]

Didn't expect the villain to be THAT, but cool story!

[@kenyaaquarius8097]

This one was very good!!! I am happy this is one with a Happy Ending. There is usually not that many with Happy Ending.

[@danimatedo]

I loved this! It was perfect for a slow day at work. Very well written and narrated. Thank you, Doc.

[@jshaw9140]

This is easily one of the best horror stories I have ever heard, which was made even better by your fantastic narration! Keep up the amazing work doc!

[@SonnyCorleone-tg1ik]

Very good story. It flows well too. Does not get confusing. Great narration and great writing. Thanks for the upload.

[@valiantwarrior4517]

Thanks for the epic narration, sir Doctor! I was hooked from beginning to end. Hope you are feeling better!

[@annegriffiths8820]

Absolutely brilliant. God I love these long stories. And I love the way you nitrate them . Many many thank yous x

[@BenSS3]

Damn, Doc! That one was amazing all the way through. You had me hooked after the first few words! Great job narrating an absolutely brilliantly produced story! It was even long enough that the author should seriously consider having that story made into a light novel. He'd make a killing, and, he wouldn't have to split families apart in the process!

[@halloweengiraffe]

That did not go where I was expecting it to go! Really enjoyed listening to this one.

[@taranaylor31]

This sounds right up my alley!

[@theroadhouseraccoon9025]

Man this was so much better listening than when I read it myself , I was even more on the edge of my seat...and I already know what happens. You're such a great narrator

[@jackiealpeter4993]

Had to take 2 days to finish this one Doc, but it was so worth it! Excellent story! Evil theme parks are another big story hook for me,so I was really involved with this tale and the characters. Thanks for your perseverance to narrate this one. There ought to be awards or plaques or something for the hardest-working creepypasta narrator; you have my nomination for 1st prize,lol! Hope you're feeling much better,too. Best wishes as always to you and yours. Good health and Peace!

[@Calalden]

Some big creepypasta channel's are getting taken over by bitcoin scams make sure everything is up to date on your channel mate!

[@Ela.elizabeth]

What do you mean getting taken over? What's the scam?

[@zenayoung2822]

I just clicked on chilling tales for dark nights and it's changed to telsa with only three vids wtaf

[@thejdemon]

@@Ela.elizabeth the channels seem to be getting hacked by someone, a little while back there was a huge hack on twitter putting crypto scams on high profile pages, sames happening on KZbin with big channels being hacked then they upload videos saying they will double your crypto, surprised alot don't know about this as apparently channels with millions of subs have even been hacked, so stay safe from these scams and as op mentioned just keep your security info as up to date as possible 👍🙏

[@Ela.elizabeth]

thejdemon - Ah yes I def heard of the modernization of the old Runescape scam on Twitter 😂 I thought you meant the channel itself on KZbin had been hacked; I've only heard about high profile channels' social media being hacked. Apparently those hackers made $150k+ in one hour. Jeeeeeeesus!

[@Ela.elizabeth]

Zena Young - Hooooooly crap you're right!!! Well there goes my previous comment - some hackers actually managed to hack Dark Tails' KZbin channel! I bet they have their social media too. It's for sure hackers because you can see on the Elon Musk pic the "bitcoin giveaway" text. Good find, Zena! It goes without saying to anyone reading this - anyone who sees anyone anywhere online offering to double your crypto currency, or double your cash if you send some, etc., is a scammer. Even if it's coming from a KZbin channel of someone you trust - it's been hacked! Do NOT send money!

[@Ela.elizabeth]

I've never been this early before, yay! Thanks again Doc!!!

[@jnokomis]

She was clutching a Dizzy costume. And eewww I always hated those things!! See you soon dearest Dr. Rest well

[@dylanmorris7357]

Right on time Doc and with an awesome Theme Park Horror story. We definitely need more of these IMO.

[@dawnshort5215]

I love love LOVED Cheesy!!! Thank you for the wonderful narration of this piece. You truly did a fantastic job!

[@James-pk4jf]

This was great 👍 good job Doc. Cheers dude. 😁

[@darylphipps890]

Still a good story...AND a Great narration. Not sure from when...but is a re-hash. And STILL Awesome!

[@CynthiaB08]

This was an awesome story!! Thank you for this! I just loved it!

[@gengar6666]

Wow.. For the length of the story it was totally worth it. Damn good story.

[@lenijones168]

Thoroughly enjoyed this story and your reading of it. Your vast and incredible work never ceases to amaze and entertain me

[@insidemanful]

Enjoyed that! Especially the happy ending!

[@sagetscippio8878]

I love this one! Cool how they made a "deep" creepypasta about an amusement park, lol.

[@bigmacharbingerofthegoodne2105]

Once again you don’t disappoint. Awesome story well told.

[@nikkit1892]

Midnight here in NZ and time for bed, can't wait to get cosy and listen to a long one from my fav doc 💕

[@jonathanw1567]

Wow! I think this one is one of your best yet! Dr., you as usual get 10 out of 5 stars! #hopemeetshustle

[@theundeadkaiser1512]

Me when I wake up from taking shrooms at 6 flags thinking It was called cheesy

[@jaceek2030]

Loved this one! Spooky carnival, haunted house, ghost tales are my faves. I must say your Rat King character's voice was terrific..and it had me laughing some too. Bravo Dr. C!

[@drzerofrost9559]

IT WAS AMAZING!!!!GREAT NARRATION!!!

[@katherinemadaras6985]

Such a good story thank you doctor. Was trying to get some sleep and now I’m finishing the whole thing.

[@asgardsson7339]

Normaly dont like the Theme Park stories, but this one hit it off

[@dcsimons940]

absolutely loved this one!!! Fantastic job Doctor!

[@JustBlessd84]

Amari being returned was awesome but him marrying Chloe was the besttttttt... awesome story

[@moocow6189]

Really enjoy the suspense and ups and downs throughout the journey thank you Dr Cpreeennnn

[@GlitterismyCRACK]

Fantabulous narration! And I loved the story! Different yet freaky. XOX Luna

[@lisagking8853]

Il LOVED this one. Thank You so much for bringing this to us in such an awesome way. It’s going to be a two timer!♥️

[@zombeefan6428]

Outstanding story and great job reading, Doc!

[@sincerelyrob4240]

Love the story and I like it when there's length to it because it allows me to get deeply invested. I laughed out loud at that part where the main character is hiding in the last boat going into that cave or whatever it was and the creature in a children's character costume is yelling and swearing at him! Hilarious!

[@NanAFreaK]

Beautiful! Enjoyed every minute of it.

[@KB-pu8ff]

Strangely enough, I want to go give my rat a cuddle after this. Keep him happy and hope he doesn't join any evil rat gangs.

[@dvjfredmerc529]

I miss my rattie bois! Your post made me nostalgic 💜 🐀

[@cryptidaddictionxx1073]

Wow! That was an awesome tale! 💖 aaand I listened in my new Dr. Creepen tank. 😉 Could there possibly be more of this tale to come? 🤔 As always, thank you for all the time you devote to keeping us creepy 🧟🦇

[@FiliaNoctis]

Wow wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed listening to you tell the story. Thank you for sharing that velvet voice of yours with us yet again! ❤️ ❤️ 💙

[@punkyreggaeparty8786]

I loved this one!!! Amusement parks and apocolyptic tales are two of my favourite types of creepy/horror. The author did an amazing job! I'd be quite interested in a prequel on tbe Rat King....One can hope. 😉 Another great read, Dr.C. Stay well.

[@michaelsmith2799]

Another great narration, I love these long stories. #DRCreepen

[@progressivedigressor6036]

What on Earth is awaiting us in tonites vid. Starting now, thanks doc 👍

[@Slayer_The_Rogue]

I don’t know if I’m in the minority here, but I really miss the Doc’s old intro, like in something like the Last Chance Ritual, it makes me sad bc the new one is kinda... bland if I’m honest, I hope he brings it back

[@DeltaPi314]

I miss when the stories he picked were actually good.

[@theundeadkaiser1512]

@@DeltaPi314 there still good try and DM him a story or make one and let him read it out for you

[@jaggirl]

@@DeltaPi314 I think his stories are good. That's a bit harsh.

[@alchemicmercury]

I kinda miss the nightmare fuel intro too.

[@lorisanchez6659]

I Absolutely loved this one !!! I don't mind the length of the stories at all . Also I love your voice . Have a wonderful weekend ! Much love from Moore, Oklahoma

[@lordofchaos1845]

First few minutes I get interested. I look at how long it is... 2 hours and 10 minutes... That's when you have my full attention.

[@soniaj2185]

Very interesting story thank u! 😊 I really enjoy the longer ones

[@alicefly3198]

Great story & narration! As always.

[@tonilambert8481]

Cheesy World my favorite. Yes it is classic. I might just have to listen to that one again. Just loved it. Thanks. ♥️

[@claredyj2015]

Wowsers that was brilliant!! Got me through hours of rearranging furniture lol! Have subscribed will be listening to more!! Lovely soft voice!

[@evedaseattlemirabal7751]

Great job, as usual.😁

[@sherwinbuffalo7892]

Facheerrtt cracks me another cold one hell yeah doc 👋 thanks cheers boss 🍻🍺

[@cutenose38]

Hiya doc its jenny and the cats. We are all stuffed into my comfortable recliner. We have been watching old episodes of murder she wrote until we saw your notification when we grabbed our favorite drinks ready to listen 😸😸😸😸😸😸

[@jackiealpeter4993]

Hi Jenny! Give your kitties a Pat for me!

[@umairAli-bt6wc]

Thanks Doc!

[@roonkolos]

One Night at Horrorland meets Horrors at Camp Jellyjam vibes I love it

[@museysmoderndreadfuls]

Snap. I just noticed the length. Well at least I have something to painlessly pull me to sleep

[@DepressedDiego]

Abandoned by Disney but actually good

[@LuisaD93]

Loving the changing background pic and colors . Looks very familiar 😉😀