"Display Coming Soon" | 2 Horror Stories | Creepypastas

[@MrSpook]

Clancy! Thank you for posting all 2020! You were one of the narrators who motivated me to start my own channel! I really appreciate your videos 👻

[@daygoncornhole2395]

Simping for hearts 😂😂😂

[@pjwoody3315]

And you both are awesome storytellers. Thank you both.

[@mayaadil7471]

Pj Woody I agree. You guys are both awesome and I love both your guys' videos

[@Chronicler9]

The first one was absolutely well-written. Fantastic. Especially since I kept wondering why it had its title until the ending and was like "Ah. Yes that is certainly terrifying." Great narration as always, Clancy. Thank you~

[@laurelsilberman5705]

Oooooh. I like it. Very threatening end to that first story, there!

[@EpicMathTime]

Clancy, I'm not doing so great, but your narrations make me forget for a little while.

[@lordhuha6043]

Sorry to hear your not doing great bud but it will pick up it’s been a shit year for us all :) Keep ya head up

[@carlia5615]

Talk sweet in my ear. Love your scary stories. Much love from the depths of my introverted brain.

[@alexdonnelly9655]

I love this comment ❤️

[@theconfusedvampire]

Couldn't agree more. 😌💭💕

[@winstonwins1096]

Okay, so you're grandma's being held hostage and you just leave it to the police and go back to the motel for a nap and some Netflix?

[@BloodfoxV]

I would have gone outside but theres no way i would have left the property until the police arrived.

[@mayaadil7471]

Winston Wins well, he did have a knife and cut his grandma's forehead. I don't think that they were in a strong negotiating position

[@winstonwins1096]

@@mayaadil7471 I do get that but I would have at least wanted to know what was going on. Seemed like once they passed the baton to the police they really didn't want to be bothered with it. Which is probably how a psychotic weirdo came to be living with their grandmother in the first place.

[@mayaadil7471]

Winston Wins yeah I see your point, but I guess they were probably really freaked out. I mean I'd be freaked out. But I get what you mean

[@jordanhatesyou1512]

Ikr.

[@s.v8125]

The first story is twisted. Poor grandma and grandpa.

[@brendakristoffersen9435]

Poor Grams !

[@Ender-s-]

It’s been a while since a creepy pasta has scared/disturbed me Idk there’s Something about the first one that I just love Display coming soon was amazing

[@leighanndunn3321]

Bravo 👏 These stories were incredible and beautifully narrated.

[@Chronicler9]

I give props for a well-rounded story for the second one and hope the author continues to write. A bit of constructive criticism: The writing and visuals are wonderful. I believe your writing will improve more with life experiences, in this case. It sounded slightly immaturely written - not by the writing style (you've got a great style that is vivid, hits all the proper story points, and completes itself), but rather by interactions among characters and social atmosphere within settings. For this, I would spend time talking with people in similar social positions and simply listen to their personal stories, or look up writings like biographies from people in similar societal placements. (OR, if you can manage it, visit locations similar to the ones you wish to write about, and just people-watch for a bit, taking note of nuances and interactions). One other thing that can enhance writing to a next level is found in a quote by RL Stine: "There are three main parts to a good story: The beginning, the middle, and the twist." While the desire for a "twist" can often threaten a story by the author trying too hard to put one in, a "natural" twist is like the best finishing icing to a decadent cake. Case in point, the first story's "twist" for me was honestly the title. I kept wondering why it was called "Display Coming Soon" when all the main plot points were basically taking place in an old woman's home. That drive-by made a perfect-icing finish and nailed home that extra little jab of fear. Twists don't have to be anything over the top, simply that *little* something extra which perhaps 60-80% of people are likely to have missed or forgotten alluded to sometime previous. Please please keep writing. My critiques are mild, and your ability is evident. Thank you for your story.

[@anniereddj]

Two excellent choices! Thank you Clancypasta!!

[@jamierowe_]

damn fine upload as usual 👏👏👏👏 that first...if it was me id probably attacked the knife hand n hoped others joined in,no way I'm letting him hurt my little girl or grandma,anyways thanks Clancy.....🍻

[@moscowvicent1995]

I just found your channel a couple months ago or maybe a year ago but I've been loving your narration I think it's the best of all the challenge I've been listening to so hope you keep making more they're very good

[@paullinaclayton1760]

I love the first one

[@MohammedBraima]

Short... sweet... mellifluous... 🖤

[@blakecausey908]

Amazing stories

[@shadowfalls86]

Thank you for the stories, your voice is so awesome 💜🖤💜

[@kaishawna3753]

Me- Asleep Clancy- Just posted an hour ago. Me- I’m awake now!! 😮

[@BABADOOK726]

Tell me there"s a continuation of the 1st story what ever happened to the Stewart guy if the mannequins would be the protagonist and his family.please you left me thirsty for more great story unfinished IMO thanx

[@paullinaclayton1760]

Yes

[@fredlishamx1649]

your voice paints pictures in my thoughts

[@raven9955]

Am addicted, well and truly. Love your voice. Soothing. More please. Umwa

[@nunosantos1745]

Oh Clancy Clancy if you only knew how good of a company your voice is.

[@macaulk967]

the 🐐 is back for anotha 1😈🔥

[@rockythewerepuppy2253]

Merry Christmas everyone

[@ZikedY]

1. 0:20 2. 13:05

[@SEADP-Official]

Thank you!

[@Ender-s-]

Thanks fo dis

[@kirboskislowflo2270]

S.C. represent lol

[@notforsaletoday1895]

The last one was ok. The first was quite good.

[@fafnir97]

Sorry Clancy, gotta downvote this one. The 'protagonist' in the first story was awful, both in stupidity and cowardice. 1. He did not fight or fight back against Stewart when he found his grandfather dead, just ran away. 2. No one in that family really fought Stewart when he threatened their grandmother? He was not described as a menacing man, so if he was threatening to kill someone regardless, why not just all gang up on him? 3. Even if they were going to call the police to save their grandmother, why would they all just leave the property? Why not stay and guard the entrances to the house until the police arrived to make sure he could not get away? 4. This is rural SC in the story; one of them must own a gun. Could hide outside the house in the bushes and shoot him if he tries to leave while waiting for the police. The creepiness of the story does not make up for the annoying lack of action from the protagonist and the family.

[@RyujinRoninReach]

What’s the title of the intro song

[@jordanhatesyou1512]

Okay but. Tbh. If Stewart wasnt a weirdo, why tf would you be rude to your grandmas caretaker?

[@beautifulfreak76]

Woot Woot my favorite narrator

[@unlabeleditem8299]

Clancypasta's actually a blue guy 😎

[@Streifen1911]

is this supposed to be a shitty joke or how do u know?

[@truckingwithteenie6170]

Weirdo.. does it matter what his race is 🙄

[@raven9955]

Can not see what colour has got to do with it. But love his voice. Umwa

[@unlabeleditem8299]

I see deer, I see deer! I see deer in my rearview mirror! :D

[@unlabeleditem8299]

Blm

[@andrewscolari5724]

The second story was good.

[@serviceroadsss]

POG

[@EdgyShooter]

Why would they bother training rookies if that was the whole plan? Wouldn't they just pick people off the street or whatever?

[@SEADP-Official]

How creepy.

[@SisuGirl]

Awesome! Hope you’re well!

[@JessicaDuBois]

Ty Clancy 😍

[@brooklynngonzales8274]

Keep up the amazing work

[@laura72339]

Spoiler: That guy was outnumbered, I'm sure between the lot of the family they could have subdued him somehow

[@Streifen1911]

Mr. SLC!? i wanna know if this writer is in my city. that’d be cooL. maybe share some ideas.

[@Streifen1911]

that second story was so random & outta pLace

[@morriganravenmist5539]

Wow 22 people with the same account disliked this!!! Behave

[@Samy-qx5vz]

First ! (Nice to see from you again)

[@Xolze]

Story makes no sense, how many people were at the dinner again? Can't they just dogpile him and beat him unconcious?

[@sijachwilkes1927]

Not when a 6yr old is being held at knife point...

[@Xolze]

@@sijachwilkes1927 What about the moment he released her? 1 guy can grab her and another 1 can tackle him before he can hold the grandma.

[@lisa777nicole]

Heck ya

[@EndingTimes0]

Perfect timing. couldnt find anything to watch.

[@ReddyRisery]

Hold up the 2nd story doesn't make any sense

[@justinahmer7116]

Im never so early

[@EdgyShooter]

The protagonist in the second story comes off as an arse straight away 😅 kind of feels like the writer is bitter

[@illuminatedslug]

epic

[@John-Perry]

These stories were lackluster and poorly written. These authors need to try harder.

[@digitropic3182]

Great reading, youtube hasn't been recommending your new uploads to me even though I sub and watch, so I just rang the bell and wanted to give you a heads up and tell fellow subs to do the same and turn Clancy's notifications on!