Cosmic Horror Story "In Search For Our Creators" | Sci-Fi Creepypasta 2023

[@jmerc6304]

I love multicast narrations. It gives more life to a story. I just found this channel and immediately subbed. 👍

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Welcome aboard!

[@Aishawas9islam]

To what do we owe for such and honor. A 1 hr story from this channel truly makes my day. Thank you 🎉

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Wow, thank you!

[@Djsmt2250]

Wow! Any follow up story?

[@TheBaconStrip]

2 things that really make my day; the rotation of the Earth, and TDC uploading an hour long story with narration by Thomas Barker. The dark looming cosmic dread stories are my favorite kind. 🥓🥓🥓👍🏼

[@Teknofobe]

Don't know what gets the heart pounding more? The whirling rotation of our Earth? Or a rollercoaster of a story? I'll go with the latter. 👍

[@Uknowho9967]

One of the best narration ever....you rock! Thanks for making my night! Getting home from 4 days on the road making deliveries to people who don't appreciate the hard work for crap pay😵‍💫

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

You got this!

[@MidBoss]

Lovely story, a real feast for the imagination ❤

[@tijanska]

Author here. Many thanks!

[@melbaelba5706]

Well written...fantastic narrators as usual.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thank you kindly!

[@tijanska]

Author here. Many thanks!

[@ericexp497]

Am I the only one pissed off that 2 of the crewmates were hiding things from the other 2 for months?

[@ur1cat]

Nice story, not run of the mill. Thank you.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thanks for listening!

[@tijanska]

Author here. Many thanks!

[@durere]

Great story/stories. Loved the narration. One question: when is part 2 coming out? Because if this is it, my testicular cyanosis demands blood.

[@ScullyPop]

Spectacular Sci-Fi Narrating.

[@ericexp497]

Having just finished, i feel a bit let down. This wasnt even open ended, its more like use your imagination. Im getting the vibes that this story was all about hopelessness. With both the crew and the little girl. hense the "abandon all hope" this was more sad than it was scary

[@seanmurphy6480]

EXCELLENT A HUMAN NARRATOR GOD BLESS YOU 😎👍

[@grimreaper6557]

Absolutely Awesome story thank you for sharing this with us 🖤☠️🖤☠️🖤☠️🖤

[@tijanska]

Author here. Many thanks!

[@TheStuart-of-Cosby]

Awesomeness again Team Cosmos.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

You rock!

[@stupidfast900]

Man i was really getting into this and POOF "THE END"!! HOW CAN YOU DO THAT?!?! This EASILY has 2 more chapters, PLEASE! the A plot, AND the B plot both seemed to just drop off right at the climax. I dont want to give any spoilers, so ill just say; This universe has great potential and even if the general plot points are pretty generic, I was still digging it waiting to see the outcome. Or at least some backstory, reasons, even a detailed final reveal/description would have felt more rewarding. It really feels like the writer couldn't come up with an ending that would live up to the lead up, so just left it hanging. I am all for "Use your imagination to fill it in..." but in its current iteration I feel robbed! THERE IS STILL HOPE! I beg the author to make a 2nd installment (it would bring in Subscribers as well). A final chapter or 2 on both plots would make a perfect 45-1 hr sequel. I don't even mind if you don't have any great way to tie the 2 plots together! expanding 1 or both would be just fine, just crack down and fill in the outcomes here. IMO: something generic is fine or even throw in a huge twist to some crazy cosmic horror. But when I see Anything about "Creators" by god I wanna learn SOMETHING about Who/What/How CREATED this verse', PLEASE!

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thank you very much for all your input and feedback!!

[@martincoleman2134]

Really need more to this story one of the best I’ve heard so far . The ending just leaves you feeling empty .it feels like only half the story was told .?

[@ShaneLehoux]

Love the storie listening while making pasta 🎉keep up the amazing work

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

More to come!

[@royltbescheidenblake6187]

Was it creepy pasta? 😂😂😂😂. That joke is so unfunny its funny

[@emilianoorona9890]

Wait, was Aliosha hott?

[@joelrosenfeld8447]

I thought for a minute you were going to do Jeremiah 1.5 “Before I formed you in the womb I knew you.”

[@richardupcott3794]

Good voice acting

[@shadowfire9118]

❤❤

[@omaracevedo4784]

Si what happen to the little girl when the torch Shu off?

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

She was consumed

[@Jyiber]

That story had so many loose threads at the end that the whole thing was just a pile of strings 😂 The writing wasn't even that bad, but it doesn't matter how fancy of a staircase you install into your house if it's only a one-story building and it just goes into the ceiling. The guests will ask: "Where was this supposed go?" and you just have to be honest and say: "Nowhere, I suppose." 😂

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Free your mind - if you can, re-listen to it, you might pick up new details :)

[@TheWesleyCarter]

The production value is amazing, but ultimately hollow with no ending to either storyline.

[@MidBoss]

I don't think explaining everything and tying it all up works for this type of story. Instead of spelling everything out for you it leaves lots of room for imagination while still hinting toward some pretty clear ideas.

[@wreid4995]

Wait. A 15 year mission with a one way fission engine? And they new the pbject was closimg with earth? So essentially they detected the object way out in the Kyper belt and decided to just throw a ship and crew away? Hmmmm.

[@Demortixx]

We where not created. So there are not creators

[@harrygrimley4352]

Wasn't bad I just didn't understand. 🤔

[@bubbafrump74]

Huuuuh???😕 that made NO sense at all. Isn't anyone else going to admit that there wasn't ANY resolution to any of the plot strings? I don't get it. VERY were narrated!(as always) just seems like maybe someone should read some of the recent stories before wasting there time on a stinker, and wasting our time on the same. That story was very interesting and could have been awesome, but the ball was dropped so hard at the end, it was a poor choice for narration. The ending sucked!

[@Oldpopcorn]

I liked it 😊

[@StarBrained]

Aw man I wish I would’ve seen this sooner I just wasted so much time on this just to facepalm so hard at the end. Nothing ruins a good story, movie or show like a terrible ending

[@entrepreneursfinest]

This was just the shell of a story. It could have been fleshed out into something good. As it stands there's no antagonist nor defined protagonist. Other than a dream that connects the girl to the Argonauts they are two distinct and unrelated story lines. There's no ending, but rather as if someone ended a chapter and never picked back up. No reason given for skinning people or anything to tie the shamanic practices to the salvation of the world, and just as lacking is any reason why these " creators" would want to emerge and destroy what they'd created. Neither is there any hint of why they left their home world or why earth is the only place they're at anymore. Narration was great but the story -if it can be called that- was a complete mess.

[@yotamonster]

That was gay

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

LOL

[@gmuney2680]

this story was awful, made zero sense 👎

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

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