Creative Writing | GCSE Revision Guide | AQA

[@glowupyourgrades]

If you guys want to paste any of your work in the comments, I’m more than happy to give you some feedback!

[@salmanahmad871]

@@rayangcse8508 i think so

[@LMAO-hk1zz]

Do you have anyway I could privately message you my story? I'm kinda self conscious of everyone seeing my work?

[@manveenkhurana6558]

A breathtaking kaleidoscope of colours cascaded across the skyline; saffron, amethyst, azure, and fiery red hues merging into a vivid gradient of mesmerising display. is the semi colon used correctly?

[@LMAO-hk1zz]

@@manveenkhurana6558 You'd use a Colon instead of a Semi Colon.

[@AliAdeel777]

This video is so underrated

[@strawberrycake6]

This video helped me get 35/40 marks! I suck at english! Crazily underated tysm

[@HPB1776]

This is wonderful. The best English video I've ever seen. Thank you, from a very grateful mum ❤

[@piecectrld3495]

Bleak clouds shrouded the city in a blanket of despair, a cacophony of hissing sounds struck the nearby land as though it had been engulfed by a sallow moon hunting its prey, turning the sky from an azure setting, into a sight of charcoal which had carefully lit the obsidian night sky. Forgotten, forsaken, forlorn. A morose package lay into the depths of a delivery van, squashed right at the back, lying in agony. The pristine exterior began to fade away as the years passed: it became abandoned every miniscule second of waiting. "Why hasn't anyone chosen me? I've been waiting for five long years," the melancholic parcel wonders aloud.

[@maeveh4272]

Very good imagery but I believe you are comma splicing.

[@piecectrld3495]

@@maeveh4272 what do you mean?

[@sheebamasood4711]

You are amazing-truly amazing.

[@ChinyereOkia]

I always smile through your videos-you bring me joy.

[@KRIMOE_1]

rahhh your a lesbian

[@umarlassi4330]

Thank you so much mehreen u saved my creative writing today 😎

[@ayeshatariq182]

my favourite teacher🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

[@AliAzmat-t1t]

yh coz shs fit 😉

[@Alfie-pr3kl]

I just used the destruction devastation death thing in my creative writing today 😭

[@isharanjan634]

LEGEND

[@samianwar-alsadig]

Thank you ❤

[@shereenxaslam]

Hi, can you do some Edexcel videos of Papers 1 & 2, for my revision please?

[@kirpa-um6th]

she said its the same thing basically, just use the ideas from her video and apply it to your exam board

[@OzanUtku]

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