Creative Writing Part 2 | GCSE Revision Guide

Creative Writing Part 2 | GCSE Revision Guide | AQA

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@glowupyourgrades Жыл бұрын

If you guys want to leave any of your creative writing in the comments, I’m more than happy to give you some feedback! Make sure you watch video 1 first though…

@Saddafa-p1q 7 ай бұрын

your videos are actually really helpful you deserve a lot more

@VIDEOSTOWATCH-gv8sc 5 ай бұрын

let me use this words you said to make a sentence: "In a dilapidated room, the obsidian walls reflected a kaleidoscope of colors, every pixel of my skin tingling as the cacophony of sounds ricocheted and reverberated incessantly, like a Midas-kissed dream undulating in a scintillating elixir of holy water." right?, am i correct?

@leahlaw2911 5 ай бұрын

hi, i used your creativive wrighting videos to help me make this. thank you for making these videos they are incrediable helpful Without trepidation i mounted my bike and darted out; i raced through the forest sounds ricocheting through it. Uncessartly i biked and not once - not even for a minute did i look back. I raced myself through the muddy forest, My tire’s slipping on the damp earth. Every last pixel of my skin rang with fury. Adrenaline like a powerful elixir. Powering me to go the speed of light. I didn’t know where i was going. All i knew was that i could stay there. I had to get far - and get far quick. In the short time i had been moving, the sky had changed from a beautiful azure to a kaleidoscope of colours. I couldn’t help but look at the enchanting, undulating holy water that was reflecting the hell above. Enchanting like cursed by a enchanterous; whispering like if saying hello. I stormed past the gripping lake. The forest a cacophony of noice. Letting their voices be heard, the trees sang their songs, as leaves fell from there homes as the wind overpowered the tree’s branches. Fragments of leaves scattering across the moist ground. Covering the path in their trail. I dont know how long i’d been gone, had no way to tell. My only indicater the cycle of a star. I was nearly out of the campsite and away from this never ending tourcher. I could see a Dilapidated building in the distance, i wondered if i could stay the night. It was getting late and i might not survive the bitter chill of the cold winter night. I went to stop and go in the house - nothing was there. Somethings not right. I can feel it. Was i dreaming? Hallucinating? I sat on an ancient bench just up the path. Moss had covered it head to toe. After a minute, i stood up. Got back on my bike. I must nearly be out by now? how big could this place be? I started to pendel but my body would let me. It had given up. I tried to keep going, to keep fighting - i couldn’t. I looked up at the beautiful sky, in the dead of night, as every thing was turned to a dreadful obsidian like a thick black blanked consuming the night, taking me with it. This is strange. It’slike i’m trapped in my body. Not able to move or speak only thing, locked up in an endless cycle I tried to speak. “Hello, can any one hear me?” “Is anyone there?” No one could hear me. Was i speaking at all Was i dead? Was i dying? Was i ever going to get to say sorry? My eyes swung open I was alive… i was actually alive. All alone but alive. I sat up against a tree the leaves glowing the sky Midas-kissed from the suns inferno of heat. How much time had passed? It was dark from what i remember. thank you for taking time to read this. sinceraly leah

@VIDEOSTOWATCH-gv8sc 5 ай бұрын

@@leahlaw2911 nice and excellent work

@dgpytc Жыл бұрын

a true underrated queen

@bellaamos1664 7 ай бұрын

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@caliandrew_ 5 ай бұрын

she’s saving my english gcse😭

@oskarbigus937 5 ай бұрын

English lang paper 1 tomorrow and I feel sooooo much more confident thanks to your vids

@oliviamurray-rp1nn 5 ай бұрын

Your videos are sooooo helpful and made me feel so much more confident thank you!!!!❤❤❤❤

@VIDEOSTOWATCH-gv8sc 5 ай бұрын

let me make a sentence with these word bank vocabulary of mine: "In a dilapidated room, the obsidian walls reflected a kaleidoscope of colors, every pixel of my skin tingling as the cacophony of sounds ricocheted and reverberated incessantly, like a Midas-kissed dream undulating in a scintillating elixir of holy water." right?