"We buried the only key with my sister. Now her old room is locked from the inside" Creepypasta

[@thidt.305]

"my mother decided what it was they had to call" All right, I'll say it: Ghostbusters.

[@artimisma4954]

I yelled out A Witch! 😂

[@tempestshadowheart2073]

Lol No call the Winchester Sam and dean

[@hypnoguygaming1178]

@@tempestshadowheart2073 it would be Sam and Dean Winchester

[@sarahhan1964]

Heather Allen nnnnnkkkkkkk

[@moseshakeem123]

Who you gonna call

[@itsthatonechickagaincallth7843]

I saw the notification and literally said "Oo creepy" out loud. My dad and his gf were going through pictures of her new nephew.... Had to explain that I wasn't calling him creepy... So embarrassing...

[@kristinehansen.]

😂

[@Fapplecake]

To be fair, fresh babies are pretty creepy

[@maggiemay7403]

@@Fapplecake fresh babies 😂

[@INDRA027_]

I’m wheezing. 🤣

[@lazersend]

@@Fapplecake 😂😂

[@triggerhappydivisionanal4476]

the dad seems like he’s a good handy man. they could have taken the door off its hinges to see what was inside

[@animeentranced1130]

Sounds like the hinges were on the inside.

[@MikasaAckerman-zc5nj]

They didn’t want to get inside after he knocked the key down and it disappeared from the newspaper.

Hinges can be on the inside. Nonetheless you can drill through the lock...

[@nancy9324]

But do they really want to see what's inside?

[@tiberiuscanineus8705]

@@nancy9324 Yes

[@seraphimtear7700]

I dont know why they didnt just kick the door open. Those old locks are flimsy and one good kick to it will pop it open

[@artimisma4954]

Exactly! I didn't understand it either. With all that emotional upset and grief anyone would have been like screw this and went off and beat the crap out of that door just to do it for messing with their little girl's room like they were thinking.

[@theplaguedoctor5773]

SeraphimTear at that point I don’t think they wanted to see what was inside of that room. Remember they know where the only key was last seen.

[@artimisma4954]

@@theplaguedoctor5773 i understand that...truly do 😂

[@gengar6666]

That or knock a hole in the wall.. Since parents wall shared with her bedroom.

[@connerhulet721]

They must have wanted to keep the room intact

[@Plainchickenandrice]

Idk why but this story kinda shook me more then the other ones

[@runebowz191]

Yea man, fr this was really fucking well written. I swear this is one of the best yet.

[@teckfire9189]

I think it’s because of the sense of suspense and the lack of answers. We *don’t* quite know what was in that room. We *don’t* know what the friend saw, and we *don’t* know what will happen to whoever else steps foot in that house next. It’s a perfect level of just enough information to keep us inferring, with not enough to give it all away. Horror at its best.

[@chipp255]

Bro same I might have to sleep with the tv on

[@bojack9286]

Reminded me of Ed And Lorraine warren stories

[@TheGoat-dn4hx]

This one actually has meaning to me too

[@Kruhee]

Soooooo, as parents you leave your kids in the house unsupervised, having apparently never taught them vehicle or road safety, and being unable to deal with the guilt that, yes, this is YOUR fault, you blame your last remaining kid and leave them to feel responsible for 'killing' their sister. Not the driver who hit her, not the girl for running into the road, not yourselves for being absent parents... Great.

[@misseselise3864]

the bad version of pet sematary

[@SuigaRou]

This. I could barely pay attention to the second half of the story because the parents annoyed me so much.

[@artimisma4954]

Yes..they really only cared about themselves and then the girl a little more to begin with...coming from a household that is a little like this I also was VERY annoyed by the parents and could feel for that boy

[@BennyLlama39]

The mom blames the older kid, and gets pissy with the dad about something trivial... boy, *that* sounds f@^kin' familiar. 😒

[@BeepTheMeep60]

This story should be on r/insaneparents lmao

[@theskieshavefallen8408]

BUY A LADDER AND GO THROUGH THE DAMN WINDOW!!!

[@imnottellinudontwannaknow3188]

I know right? Simple answers to simple problems. It annoys me so much. I wish they would like get an axe or something

[@anthonydefilippo8526]

It would not have helped. They knew it was supernatural

[@elemental7726]

Ya sure great idea, then go inside the room by yourself only to be confronted by a dead corpse

[@karmakiller4745]

I know *BURN THE HOUSE DOWNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN*

[@garchamp9844]

Damn, thats cold. The poor girl came back from the dead because her family beckoned her, and instead of welcoming her back after her miraculous return they just flipped their shit and left. Poor girl.

[@gobanito]

Yeah as in Stephen King Pet Sematary miraculous. I'd be out of that house so fast I don't care if I sleep on the street with the rest of the bums.

[@dropdoejenna8542]

Let's be honest... The "sister" probably a demon

[@garchamp9844]

Geralt of Rivia That is a possibility. She may also be the spirit of your beloved sister, whose death you are partially responsible for, returning to the world of the living at God only knows what cost because you asked her to.

[@Nowters]

She shouldn't have done some creepy shit

[@Theonlyjustkat]

Garchamp I don’t think the spirit of his sister would have hurt his friend and made him choke or radiated a broken music box in the middle of the night

[@cem8821]

My first thought "what horrible parents to treat there remaining kid like this because they didn't bother teaching there kids not to run across the road!"

[@microwavegum]

I have a brother who does that and I always have to yell at him, but he’s 18 🤦‍♀️

[@CalsGirl97]

I dont think I could forgive my remaining kid if they played a horrible joke ending in the death of my other child. I know they'd blame themselves too but idk if I'd ever be able to look at them again. Grief is a strong thing, but so is the parental instinct so who knows.

[@tempestshadowheart2073]

@zonescat how do you know she ran into the road do you think drivers always follow the the speed limit or stop when they hit someone especially a child how do you know it wasn't a hit-and-run I live in a residential area with lots of kids I've seen drivers going 60 in a 30-mile zone

[@tempestshadowheart2073]

@Estrella my best friends little sister when we were twelve she was 9 was in the crosswalk the walk silence on she was hit buy a car drag 200 feet after they arrested him he confessed he knew he hit a kid he knew he was dragging the kid he admitted he didn't care

[@jstn229]

ITS YA BOI it wasn’t the child’s fault it was their own fault for being bad parents

[@cookiie92]

I wonder if he would have just asked to be allowed into the room if the door would have unlocked. Sense he was the one who asked her to come back.

[@MikasaAckerman-zc5nj]

Right? I was waiting for him to knock, say her name, ask if he could come in, and for the door to unlock and open.

[@adrianturtle2570]

he probably didnt want to find out though

[@goneloko1368]

This was one of those stories where the main character was smart enough to not try something like that

[@TheGoat-dn4hx]

Or just kicked down then fucking door glock in hand and ask if sis wanted to die again

[@Rockhoppr3]

"My mother decided who it was we needed to call." "GHOSTBUST--" "A real estate agent." Damn it

[@AnnoyingMystery]

I actually feel so sad for the ghost. Like i guess she was vengeful and angry and was willing to hurt them, but imagine being the dead spirit of a scared little girl and constantly playing your music box to calm yourself only to have your family members treat you like a demon and then leave you all alone in your abandoned house. especially if her spirit was trapped in the room and couldnt leave, so the music box was the only thing that she could use to get her family's attention. maybe she was just angry and despairing because she couldnt get out????? though i guess she did prevent them from getting the key for some reason....

[@MalcomHeavy]

The thing is, she could get out. She had the key.

[@jimmiesussler8640]

Maybe it wasn’t her.....

[@gabrielam.7681]

The story itself explained it. The music is a symbol of her ghost, in the end that single key is all that plays when the box broke, unrecognisable and uneasy. His sister is dead and the only part of her spirit left is unrecognisable, it's just her hate and nothing else, so this is as much his sister as that single note is it's whole song, which it isn't. It's not his sister, it's the worst part of her played in a loop.

[@gabrielam.7681]

Imagine you split a person's state of mind into pieces. Say one of those pieces is 'hatred', plenty of people feel that but it's with other things, now isolate that feeling, that's what's in their house, it's not any particular person, it's just 'his sister's hate'. It can't dissipate back into his sister because that's the only piece of her that exists there in the first place, her hate.

[@gabrielam.7681]

Ultimately like the note, playing over and over again doesn't make it it's original song. Her hate playing over and over again doesn't make it her.

[@gengar6666]

I know this wasn't meant to be a funny story; but when he suggested to leave the house to some un-liked in-laws I nearly choked on my dinner laughing. That is something I would totally do ROL Otherwise great story.

[@DubCatXero]

Something about this story just gets under my skin.

[@BennyLlama39]

The parents?

[@nancy9324]

Exactly

[@TearingDownIdols]

The plot style is very classic... a style that's classic for a good reason. 👍🏻

[@SaintMaxxi]

The Parnets

[@TheDarkNature]

When you look up soothing music

[@gailjones7044]

🤣🤣🤣🤣

[@bubblegumshrimp]

his voice 😌

[@alreadykawaii]

I literally use these to fall asleep cause his voice is so perfect

[@squidwardtortellini4982]

0:01 that's one hell of a start

[@TienKhaiTH]

I just read this few days back. You're so quick in bringing this into your channel. Good job, sir.

[@ericmcgill8117]

This was one of the saddest stories I’ve heard on here. Really breaks your heart to think about it from the little girl’s point of view.

[@aurobhatta]

A simple yet terrifying story. More than those stories of gruesome monsters.

[@-JaggedGrace-]

Is it simpler than the gruesome monster stories, do you think?

[@jackdurden466]

This one got me, I felt truly scared for an unknown reason. Far more than the usual ones. Maybe it was how she tortured them with the music, or maybe the excellent description of how the parents reacted. Well done!

[@adraevic7840]

I actually like this story, listening to it before bed, I could actually Invision it. Only thing is, I wonder why the parents never broke down the door, but other than that, Good job!

[@shubhambera7886]

@@suckmyballzgameplays7172 get some help dude..

[@FrankLeeWillis]

tbh, would you want to break down that door and confront whatever was on the other side? I wouldn't....

[@egyptianboi305]

@@suckmyballzgameplays7172 Disgusting creep

[@egyptianboi305]

@@suckmyballzgameplays7172 reported for sexual harrassment

[@Theonlyjustkat]

Yeah but I thought about it and I’m not sure if I would have wanted to either, it’s kinda like in my mind id have believed the thing was contained to the bedroom and opening the door would let it out or something

[@BlueSkyCountry]

NICE! This story is one of the very few in the recent tidal wave of Internet short stories that can genuinely invoke some chills. Very rare these days. Very similar to "The Unseen" and "Joe The Creep", another two fantastic ones that Creeps had narrated some years back...

[@FrankLeeWillis]

What an absolutely horrifying premise. Been a while since I was creeped out. I love it.

[@DemonCreep]

I lile the visual stuff you're doing. Seems to break the monotony up. I just stick to the tried and true thumbnail over narration right now. Good stuff creeps!

[@eogerlodge198]

Your narration is amazing either way bud

[@BeepTheMeep60]

Creeps tells it in a way that makes it spooky. You tell it in a way that sounds like you're the person who experienced it recalling a story. Both are amazing

[@misseselise3864]

i’m liking the old theme, like having a video/photo with the narration so it’s not scary. i can’t even say how many times i’ve woken up in the middle night and got spooked by the scary art

[@FervidDawn]

I’ve absolutely loved your videos for years! However I have a double ear infection and can barely hear out of one ear. Since I have issues anyway, I usually use closed captions for Netflix/Hulu/etc. I haven’t used them on KZbin as I usually wear headphones. The positioning of the name of this video on the image itself is sorta making it hard to read CC and I just wanted to bring it up for fans who are far worse hearing on a regular basis might find it more difficult. Thanks for all the lovely videos. I don’t think a reupload or anything of that nature is needed at all btw! I just wanted to point it out for future videos for you to potentially consider . 🥰

[@CalsGirl97]

Maybe just repositioning the text will help. I hope he sees this and can adjust future uploads for viewers like you. Everyone deserves to enjoy spooky stories❤

[@trumalicee5061]

Thumbs this up so he can see this!

[@somethingedgy2185]

If you lose one child but still have another then you should love and cherish the child you still have instead of holding a grudge and being bitter to them. I understand why they did it but it was still wrong.

[@rinsedpie]

poor girl; from the description, she sounded like a good shy girl; sadder still that they even left her soul in the house

[@lekhaclam87]

It seems to me like the only thing manifested in there was her grudge and nothing else.

[@asifmetal666]

This is amazing suffocating horror story. Im only 17 minutes in n I'm really feel scared.

[@brainlessjimmy8231]

This kinda reminds me of the time I locked the door to one of the older rooms and there was no key for it,so they had to break the door knob off

[@Lychee-P0P]

Thank you for going back to neutral backgrounds! The monsters were ok but this is much better!!

[@robertbarnhart3042]

Doesn’t anyone own boots? Trust me, that door would open quickly.

[@janfgfdx5165]

Why would you want to get into the room that supernatural shit happens in?

[@MicocoSpice]

Keep up the good work! This is more authentic than the typical tall skinny figure story and I absolutely love it! ❤️❤️❤️

[@blizzardfog9501]

Always leave things locked or they unlock themselves

[@ejpool4104]

You beat me! Holy cow, you type fast lol

[@andrewh3585]

This not write I not a car on a house while sliced bread is on car park until piano plays guitar to charge pillow

[@HelmetGlue]

@@andrewh3585 you okay there pal?

[@Qwozocube]

@@andrewh3585 [Insert profile picture here]

[@kairu_aname]

@@HelmetGlue Google translate strikes again?

[@hobosam21]

Anyone else feel bad for the girl that got left behind?

[@dc4372]

This story isn’t even that scary it’s just something about it that gets me

[@SaintMaxxi]

The Parnets

[@BriarPatchNyra]

This is generally well written but all I can think about is what a massive overreaction she had. Who tf bursts into tears over not being able to get in your room? Even if she thought there was no key the parents could've gotten the door open the first time, and the second time she KNOWS there's a key and her brother will open it. I was a very sensitive child and I'd never have lost my crap and run into traffic over being locked out of my room. Also the parents clearly didn't teach her basic road safety, or she's a moron. Not to mention them then mistreating their son. The whole thing is whack.

[@chriscanfly6386]

You ever seen kids? My ex 100% . her dad was the state republican representative

[@musicwithj1759]

ChrisCanFly what?

[@chriscanfly6386]

@@musicwithj1759 the sister in this story remimds me of my ex. As in, its totally believable

[@orangesoda4535]

Take into consideration that it might have been the sister that summoned the spirit. Perhaps she had to ritualistically interact with the ballerina box from time to time in order to keep it docile.

[@notme8652]

R/kidsarestupid would be like 👁️👄👁️

[@MikasaAckerman-zc5nj]

I don’t understand why there are so many comments confused as to why they didn’t try harder to get into the room after the key disappeared from the newspaper. They didn’t *want* to get in.

[@KMvsMK]

Exactly, right? This isn't a mere problem-solving situation about the door being locked. They could have called the locksmith after, but they didn't.

[@janfgfdx5165]

​@@KMvsMK why would you want to get into a room after some supernatural shit happed in there?

[@edgarreyes2468]

Listening to this at 3 am was a bad idea

[@katmorningstar374]

Bro I am listening to it at 3:30 am I got the same feeling

[@mohammaddelmonte6303]

Yep me too

[@deandre2476]

You can't swallow your own tongue it's impossible. Josh sent me

[@MalcomHeavy]

Creepypastas don't really scare me anymore. But this one legitimately made me uncomfortable. I just feel like the only thing that could have improved it, was if he never saw anything in the window at the end. It would bring up an interesting discussion about wether it was really a ghost or just their overwhelming grief haunting them the whole time. The ending kind of threw that out of the window.

[@edgarreyes2468]

Same

[@Theonlyjustkat]

I haven’t yet got to the end, but it could still be grief manifesting into a hallucination

[@SavvySmiles11]

I do think the ending needed some kind of catch to it. Or else I would’ve been like... “that was it?” I see what you mean though

[@watertommyz]

The key being in the door threw it out the window. That part is still unexplainable as well.

[@shawty.4447]

This actually made me uneasy :o

[@EllySoccerstar]

victori4k4thryn _ yup I’m am

[@cindybrunell4137]

I believe the little girl just wanted to be heard...and her only way of doing that, was through the music box. ♥️

[@celestialzebra708]

No one seems to be commenting about this, but I am ecstatic that you have different visuals up! I don’t know when you started reverting back to candid b roll; whether it be on a hill, pointed at a house, or other simple objects. I simply hated looking at a horror picture because it took away the charm and made it seem artificial. Idk, reminds me of videos from years back when I was really invested. Nostalgia

[@legrang.archives]

Trenton Nickel yeah two years back was the last time it was one of these screens, I think it was christmas

[@skystrickland2576]

Is the door slowly opening and closing or is that my mind playing tricks?

[@legrang.archives]

Sky Strickland no I see it too

[@fovosprodromus5020]

I REALLY liked this pasta! Out of the many i've heard so far, this story, the elevator repairman one with the rules("sperm" loll) "Something is hidden beneath the waves in the North Sea" and "The Ocean Is Much Deeper Than We Thought" are my top favorites. don't know for certain, but pretty sure Dark Somium narrated the last two meaning i'll be thinking about them for a while after hearing them and they gave me the spooks. fantastic narration as always

[@alo42d]

I am soooooo glad and happy that you use your real voice It is so soothing and beautiful to listen to Thumbs up and subscribed

[@pokemontrainerelio3648]

Do I have months of CreepsMcPasta content to catch up with? Yes. Did I intend to have so much CreepsMcPasta content to catch up with? No. Am I mad that I have so much CreepsMcPasta content to catch up with? Hell no! Am I happy and excited to catch up with over five months of CreepsMcPasta content? Hell yes!

[@joann3190]

This is one of the best creepy pastas.

[@Mo_Speckleblitz]

:05 - *flashes back to "It's just a prank, Han' "*

[@local38on-tv]

I like these "Old style" of creepypasta

[@sammcmc9888]

This is probably the first video on this guys channel that I’ve seen whose thumbnail has been relevant to the story

[@sammcmc9888]

“There’s only one of us, and we don’t take family pictures anymore.” It would be concerning if you did

[@KingDennisJensen]

Listened to this before bed last night, had some crazy ass dreams.

[@navarog378]

"Hello, my name is lock picking lawyer and today I will show you how to open a dook closed by a ghost"

[@bigfoxki]

Look, I will call the ghost to lock it again and I will unlock it just to prove it is not a hoax.

[@nicholaslee5523]

This story is on the top of my list this week 👍👍👍

[@punkyreggaeparty8786]

Ohhhh, Creeps. You can't know the thrill of seeing you post vids longer than 11 minutes! Thank you so much. Stay well.

[@MusetheInsomniac]

Oh, look, there’s Melanie! ... Well, that’s a shame. She was really nice.

[@Zeabox]

Call a locksmith

[@katesay1559]

Plot twist: the little girl went straight to heaven and has nothing to do with this. When the brother left the key and said "come home", he actually invited something bad that happened to be wandering around.

[@martinwestern3334]

I think she probably just wanted to communicate at first but got corrupted into an evil spirit when they treated her like a demon

[@JessicaDuBois]

Ty sweetheart 😘 I will enjoy this at bedtime in about 8 hours. It's almost 4:20 pm here. I'm in NC USA! I love your voice!!! They way you say says is so adorable!!! Mama says! That was a great one btw!!!

[@richardpetty6362]

Hey Jessica

[@newtfigton8795]

This story makes my skin crawl.

[@gavriel-raymaldonado355]

I just got strait up anxiety right at the end and that woke me up

[@sueannwebster7036]

Never invite the dead to come home no matter what! Great story 🙏🏽

[@JL-to9vg]

He didn’t even go out to look for her 😒 this guy deserves all he gets imo!

[@chipdouglas9734]

That's quite the opening line...

[@heathersumrall6656]

What if they put dry wall over the door and the same for the window? And then make some sort of other room like the basement act as the third room?

[@anniegreenwind971]

The music box would still play and they would tear down the dry wall and discover the hidden door.

[@nancy9324]

This story is so creepy, i think it's the best one I've heard this year

[@nancy9324]

Still the best one so far even after 1 year

[@eoserigeneia]

Great story and very well read.

[@kingazazel3306]

I saw the title and was like: OOOoOoooO

[@visualdosage234]

I saw the title and was like: theres tons of ways to open a locked door without a key

[@harlodmud9474]

I immediately thought of a zombie neet imouto.

[@earndoggy]

This is good. A bit anticlimactic ending but a good story.

[@jenna6867]

Fully agree

[@jdcarter3626]

Take the hinges off, kick the door in, break a hole through the fucking door just do something instead of calling a fckin locksmith seriously. That makes me so mad becuase the old door can be kicked in very easily.

[@joehasberryjr7398]

Pt2 please really i love this story

[@TheRonaldNess]

Was kinda hoping that instead of that ending, the sister revealed herself and that this was one massive prank, parents were in on it, looked at her brother and said "paybacks a bitch aint it!"

[@anniegreenwind971]

That would of been a great ending! 😄

[@legrang.archives]

I-

[@briarblackwood]

what an excellent ghost story.

[@potatopotato8360]

Screw selling the house, that house needs to be JDAM'd.

[@TheGoat-dn4hx]

And take out the hole damn block?

[@chylkie5796]

Title makes sense to me

[@phantumgrey]

The dad spent too much time fucking with the door. Has he not seen “The Shining”?!

[@lindleloverwatterson3484]

how they didn't simply put some sturdy boots on, flex up and kick that damn door down is beyond me ... curiosity killed the cat did it? yeah well the satisfaction brought it back!! what in the hell is behind that door?! screw that ballerina box imma find out what's up

[@RanchDelivery]

Best story I’ve heard in like a year dam

[@captainamerica6525]

That thumbnail is creepy!! The story? Couldn't stop listening. Nicely done.

[@AbyssScythe]

What a terrible big brother

[@Caleigho]

amazing story. Good job!

[@samasiaskipperable]

Good read thank you 🙏

[@pagesinyellow]

Very well-written and scary.

[@xisagegaming5058]

My grand-mom has old carousels in the house with merry go round twisting nobs I broke one along time ago and put it back with out saying a word so when it plays every now and then especially at night you can imagine how bone chilling that is for everyone but me

[@hellscape404]

This starts out amazing

[@HelmetGlue]

Why does it get bad or something?

[@hellscape404]

LunaDejay Fox no it just really brings you into the story

[@aquariumstudios1430]

“My mother decided what it was they had to call.” My stupid brain: “*GHOSTBUSTERS!*”

[@tryintolive1960]

What a great sad story.

[@lalehiandeity1649]

Should’ve gone Jack Torrance on that door.

[@knalltrogge739]

This story was really good😁 one of the best here

[@melody3741]

Killing a person is fucking difficult. I sincerely doubt she would have an open casket funeral if the car killed her before she got to the hospital.

[@theequalizer694]

Guilt is the mind breaker

[@mariasato2884]

The real horror is their irresponsible parenting

[@1darkmatterbeatz]

Love ya creeps keep up the great narrations 🙌💯

[@felixcosm]

Poor girl though, watching her family drive away without her. Maybe the music box was just to get their attention, it's not like she actually hurt anyone.

[@AngelDust6969]

Plot Twist: The sister never died, the parents and her decided to get back at him, faking her death and making it seem like the parents hated him.

[@Zminator1986]

How to open a haunted bedroom door. Step 1: Approach door Step 2: Yell, "THIS IS SPARTA" Step 3: Kick door like a Persian messenger

[@russle5996]

50 percent of the comments are pointing fingers on who to blame for the childs death.