[SFM] "Don't take the Elevator at 3am" (Creepypasta)

[@Amsosorryscotty]

The one character in a creepypasta that’s smart enough not to go into a elevator at 3am. Good thinking.

[@mortefin5101]

i take it at 3am all the time to smoke and only once did it close unusually slowly while making a very loud weird noise i took the stairs that day

[@stanleybochenek1862]

Yea

[@Alinarotster]

I have never seen fear like that in a animated character in my life...

[@cyberdragon4249]

Well these are half life models, of course there’d be a look of fear on their faces

[@zerogaming0000]

hey can somebody explain to me why he was scared at the end bc im confused all he said was that he never heard the elevator doors close and asked if it had always been that dark in the basement and then he looked terrified

[@abbasu1191]

@@zerogaming0000 because he thinks there are creatures in the basement and they are about to go in or are in the elevator

[@cherias.4069]

@@cyberdragon4249 Can you please explain "half life models?"

[@cyberdragon4249]

@@cherias.4069 As in the models them selfs came from the game half life

[@someoneelse1441]

This is some A-grade animation, the dudes facial expressions are so real it's unreal.

[@JaneDoe-p5w]

it is unreal, thats why its called unreal engine

[@jackmack4181]

2:13 Ghost1: DAMMIT ROGGER WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE THE INTERCOM LOWER THAN IT HAD TO BE Ghost2: WELL ROB MAYBE IT IS BECAUSE I HAVE BEEN DEAD FOR 40 YEARS ,I DON’T KNOW WHAT AN ELEVATOR VOICE SOUNDS LIKE

[@d-boithescientist2263]

Lmfao!

[@Sin2nd]

Me standing there: wtf

[@G011d3n]

Normally this would be called, “OMG! SPOOKY SCARY ELEVATOR AT 3AM, MUST WATCH!!!”

[@kitkatscribbles]

Preach

[@demon108hunter6]

KitKat Kookiez Jesus Christ why is this so relatable

[@cherryofficial1020]

If Jake Paul, Logan Paul, or the brother that used to be with Jake would name it

[@ClunkerRogerRoger]

MORGZ IS ALL OVER THIS ONE

[@sansthedimensiontraveler5574]

More like SCARY ELEVATOR, ALMOST DIED ,3AM CHALLENGE NOT CLICKBAIT!

[@Hirasawaprime864]

You ever put your clothes in the washer and they come out dry?

[@H.E_I.S_R.I.S.E.N]

You ever put your clothes in the dryer for four cycles and they're still wet?

[@DrikTrajado]

Y'all ever shit on your clothes?

[@FranciumBoron]

@@DrikTrajado What de fook?

[@FranciumBoron]

@alex a *_The scariest thing ever._*

[@somerandomperson4451]

@alex a (SFM) My stepsis is still moaning in the washing machine (creepypasta)

[@necrocephsfm6793]

Aww, I wanted to do an adaption of this, oh well. Good job!

[@jayrg4]

Necroceph. OMG its you!!

[@yeezyclout1662]

He beat you to it

[@cameraman4549]

Well damn man, you already beat him to god knows how many.

[@kingcreeper81]

I just watched you siren head animation before watching this

[@aesthetics7649]

Hey you could also do an adaptation of this if you really want to you can use the TF2 mercenaries instead of half life citizens like normal 👍

[@yaysaber3731]

At first i thought this was just one of theese quick done bad animations, but this turned out very well. The story is much better with an animation

[@-A-Hybrid-Skunk-Productions-]

Wholey smokes. That was very well done. Very very impressive. Excellent animation to. So realistically done.

[@aydenburgess905]

This is really well done! If I was to give any critique it'd just be in the adaptation choices, actually showing something getting onto the elevator, even if only their legs, takes away some of the mystery of what the monster may be and makes them less scary than whatever the viewer is imagining, other than that though this is pretty much perfect

[@marieeveleduc630]

Not at all its better to show the monster.

[@MatiasEscalada-ll3kx]

The legs belong to the creatures the protagonist is imagining. The real creatures are not even shown.

[@aydenburgess905]

@@MatiasEscalada-ll3kx That's a fair interpretation actually, I hadn't thought of it that way

[@Jimmy-rv5dh]

Lol imagine if it was actually a secret entrance to a SCP foundation

[@timothyparham5064]

I was thinking the same thing!

[@suddenchangessans3119]

Omg yes

[@Titanic-wo6bq]

well who's going to inform them that some D-Class have probably escaped

[@jowbabadook8530]

This guy's gonna get some class-b amnestics

[@some_guy_does_art]

The doors open and scp-096 runs out.

[@ColorInversion]

If the man went down: The valve headquarters was there Gaben welcomed him Gabe shows him the updates they are working on Works for valve to help make new updates

[@vpplants4467]

That explains why the people who entered the elevator were pierced with chains

[@totallyreyalfactsfsfs]

​@fotniter ???

[@stanleybochenek1862]

Gabe showed him half life 3

[@GarrisonValentinelli-pk1bf]

What if they were victims of something horrible that happened in history?

[@awesomeninja9178]

dude ur work is still amazing to this day!

[@alanalot]

Now that is some good storytelling

[@haziqsembilanlima]

Sometimes I had the same thought when using isolated elevators. Even the main one, sometimes it felt uneasy when using it at 2am

[@kaijufan313]

Who takes an elevator at 3 in the morning? Ghosts: Oh, boy, 3 A.M!

[@SamuelTrademarked]

felt like i was watching a real person textured in source. this animation is absolutely brilliant, great work man.

[@spenserfarman3045]

Was anyone expecting there to be something rushing up the stairs as it closed in and showed the reflection in the guy's eyes?

[@ismaelgingles9409]

Yes

[@chimz8057]

Great Work! Great animation, great camera work, and a good story picked. Although leaving out the Retrospect part of the story would have been much better. Because by showing it, you guaranteed that the protagonist survived the night. If it had been left out, his fate would have been unknown and much scarier.

[@Hollarite]

Elevators are dangerous kids. Take the stairs instead.

[@Crom_Apsotle]

But what if a stair ghost comes out

[@dakotasan8719]

Rainbow Dash I’m terrified of elevators. I’ve been taking steps to avoid them

[@thatmeme7077]

What if someone is in a wheelchair?

[@theunidentifiedchangeling9451]

Hi rainbow dash

[@CatsandBoots935]

What if it's SCP 087

[@thomasthebo1750]

Oh shit this is well done!

[@TheMrMayo]

A very fluent animation. It brings back the good days of SFM horror. :D

[@Gatlingun101]

Blimey this was really well done, nice job Dan, Brilliant 👍🏻

[@purplepartytigerd1598]

*Hides under blankets while waiting for jumpscare* This is so cool! I was afraid there was going to be a jumpscare, so I didn't get to look at everything closely. Gotta watch it again! :D

[@lemonlimeeyeliner7905]

You know it’s well done when you got as scared as I did. Good job!

[@grandmasteryoda8919]

"Well done citizens! Now it's time for beating!" - Some CP boi.

[@iamamanbouttorunoverthoseh7059]

2:13 Demon:Dude Why did you do that? Other Demon:I sound like this though Demon:but we failed the mission Other Demon:Satan isn't happy now Demon:Frick

[@Dillon4599]

My prediction before watching: Male09 from hl2 discovers ghost.

[@adumbmaggot3476]

¡right!

[@alexnatch4528]

Oh that was real spooky! I got chills!!! Still though, very well done :)

[@PhantomObiWan]

This is really good! I love the cinematic style.

[@ArchangelExile]

1:48 No, most elevators don't do that.

[@ultimadragonlord6764]

Well done for your first creepypasta

[@DanJacobsonDANJ16]

Thanks

[@ultimadragonlord6764]

Dan Jacobson™ it’s no problem

[@ultimadragonlord6764]

Dan Jacobson™ I mean it to

[@ultimadragonlord6764]

Dan Jacobson™ ps I hope you make more

[@dumbdaniel4274]

I would just book it up the stairs, I don’t care if it’s heavy, fuck the idea of entering a elevator, I have a fear of them anyways.

[@eskirix1069]

That's exactly why I'm taking stairs instead of elevator.

[@geoflo5391]

Really great story but i have to get someone explain to me why he said "Was it always that dark in the basement?"

[@sinclairguess1187]

When he was washing his laundry the basement floor isnt as dark as he described in the last scene

[@themrsaltysplatoon7100]

The Door opens and it's filled with Gnomes

[@winzigerflashendeckel6894]

Gnome alone

[@atom_bomb_77]

Bro, use the freaking stairs, like… if you hear that happen irl. You leave your laundry and run your ass up to your apartment

[@theflexers1405]

Oh hey if you listen closely starting at about 0:34 you’ll be able to hear that piano suspense music clearly which is the one mr creeps uses.

[@coneypone0729]

Someone should send this to creepypastajr. This is pretty good 👌😄

[@toasties3404]

I bet he is thinking ima buy my own washer from now on

[@Xbob42]

I know this is a few years old, and it doesn't look like creepypastas are something you even do much, but I just gotta say, I really dislike how so many SFM creepypastas have the character talking to the camera at some point. It's really weird and comes across as some sort of local news interview or something. Would much rather just have it focus on environmental stuff as they talk before getting to the next scene, or something like that. Like I said, know you don't really make these, but maybe someone who watches these and gets inspired to make their own might read this and consider my feedback. Just puttin' my 2 cents out there! This one complaint aside, good work! I much prefer when people use the HL2 models for creepypastas instead of TF2, the TF2 ones are just completely strange.

[@iforget_2780]

Was it always been that dark in the basement??? *Extreme angry face*

[@atomicreptiliascreator738]

Sometimes, at 15:00:00 PM. The elevator at THE BLOCK ( its literally called THE BLOCK!) would say “SATURN FLOOR! GOING UP!” It is a little confusing at times!

[@firstnamelastname5230]

Nick Wilde it’s just going to Uranus floor

[@pepper5439]

MORE PASTA GOOD!thanks man love ya hope you have a nice day!

[@DanJacobsonDANJ16]

Thanks, you too!

[@cappedminer369]

Please do more creepypasta SFMs . We need more of these

[@nitefurie.]

Well here I was, about to go to sleep after too many hours of KZbin. I would have been done and falling asleep if I hadn’t seen the time: 3 am on the dot

[@dustpanman2998]

I bet there were either 9 or 8 floors below the basement. I guess it depends on if you consider Limbo to be its own layer

[@0_Not_Myself_0]

Him: It's 3:00 a.m. Me:Y DO U DO THIS TO YOURSELF! U R DUCKED!

[@youryoutubeyoda]

the floor downstairs was hell, and the things came from it were demons.

[@Lundy445]

dude this story gave me chills

[@ObieDobieZoomer]

not a bad story and it had good animation :)

[@djmidnight4279]

I love creepypastas and your animation is golden. I give it 10 vodkas out of 10 vodkas

[@alexhb7949]

The way it said basement going down gave me chills

[@vanndymaywho1910]

But… what about his laundry?

[@vanndymaywho1910]

Seriously did he just leave his laundry down there for Demons to take? ...Yeah I have a materialist problem, it’s a bit difficult for me to let things go.

[@rmstitanica3204]

@@vanndymaywho1910 same here

[@ElRiki77]

these are way better than those tf2 sfm creepypastas

[@thumpermedley3431]

This is well done

[@Hatster985]

Looks like HL2 Jim Carrey ngl. But still great animation, I wish I could do anything like this

[@evosupersonic7298]

4 years later I still don't understand the ending

[@giovannidelacruz6893]

Nice job, buddy. :)

[@stick-xg5ni]

It's either the hellavator or 15 flights of stairs your choice im going with the stairs

[@lethaltags5400]

When the combine forget to remove the secret black mesa outpost

[@DanielReyes-jr7ps]

¿que mierda fue eso? ESTA INCREÍBLE. excelente animación para una historia un poco corta, pero buena ambientación e historia para hacerla. excelente trabajo con la animación, audio y selección de historia.

[@TheCloseout]

Truly amazing and inspriring thumbnail

[@Tony-xj8lp]

He dropped his clothes and ran. I would have done the same thing LOL

[@deo_exus2041]

I always enjoy these

[@buddymanz6294]

I like to imagine that those things would be like "what are you doing up here everyone is downstairs"

[@JannySC72]

This is probably one of the best creepy pastas I have ever heard it’s great btw this is not my account

[@MOUNT4INpeak]

this gave me goose bumps O~O

[@blitztherescuepup4110]

Sfm creepypastas are a great pastime

[@_Stercore]

"Don't take the Elevator at 3am" *but dood i rilly gotta poo!*

[@Finzun]

I FOUND THE GOLDEN PINKIE PIE! SHE WAS AT A TRASH CAN AT 3:22 :'D

[@simplypony4108]

Well animated!

[@Scrat-106]

I love this animation amazing job

[@georgeofhamilton]

That’s some creepy pasta.

[@BluSoldier..]

AT 3AM OH NO XD nice these are still happening

[@blankyjae3316]

Dude could’ve just waited until 3:01

[@Brownie877]

News guy: hello and welcome back to GM news. Racing is going to be canceled due to the weather the forecast for dark, RP is going to be a sunny, cloudy day June next time for GM news!

[@SimpleSam89]

"when he said squatting" SQUATING LIKE A COMRADE

[@diontaedaughtry974]

Great animation, good job 👍👍

[@fetusdeletus9266]

Thanks for the warning I will now take it at 3:01 am

[@GrimGlitters]

4:05 it’s the suitors from amnesia :D

[@veronicasukz7712]

guy hears elevator intercom malfunction, and runs upstairs nearly paralyzed in fear... also he was up at 3 am so he couldve ben hearing shit... im very fun at parties

[@richardbrowning9953]

Superb Animation 👍

[@kitkatscribbles]

If I was that guy,I would just take the stairs

[@ethanbudlong718]

Ah the video is great it's creepy and not one of those clickbait that is OMG DONT GO TO THE PIGGY ELEVATOR AT 3:00 AM

[@hannahelise301]

fricken awesome graphics

[@galwhoroams]

DON'T TAKE THE ELEVATOR AT 3AM!!!!!!! MUST WATCH! (I DIED)

[@TopSuperDude]

The main character got scared because of the voice when it was just really they replaced the HL2 speaker for the BMAS (Black Mesa Announcment System)

[@Chase_baker_1996]

Why does it always have to be 3 AM when something bad happens, why not midnight?

[@smuwug]

wait I don't get the ending, why does the male citizen have a shocked realization expression?

[@chrumpet2275]

same here

[@AggressiveSpaghetti]

"Hell. Going up"

[@roni_foxcoon]

Anyway, that's how i lost my clothes for the week.

[@MangleFoxy]

Chills. O-o

[@Codename_KayC]

UNDER RATED

[@thatlemonmelon2714]

No tf2 models?! Come on bro! You know better!

[@winzigerflashendeckel6894]

Jas we need puttis

[@cappedminer369]

Can I use this for a tribute video ?

[@ditzydoo04]

I found the golden pinkie pie. It’s at 3:23

[@raaaaaaat]

Omg i got scared oof

[@sharkPause1]

What if i only got back from somewhere and wanted to go back to my hotel room and it was 3:00 AM? Take the stairs? Nah mate, i think I'll use the elevator to get to the 17th floor

[@aidenperez7853]

3am, the time the spongebob "my leg!" guy comes out to break your legs