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@itsmediwash5083 Жыл бұрын
Sir warrior batch ka maths basics sa start hoga
@SakshamTALIYAN Жыл бұрын
i think no bro
@RajYadav-sy3nq10 ай бұрын
not so one time but@@SakshamTALIYAN
@anjaliharsana-d9w Жыл бұрын
story written in the picture shown at 1:05:30 ,in which raman reduce his working hours to help his wife in daily chores,so first of all how he can reduce working hours as he is working in IT company where work load is already more as technology is increasing so reducing working hour is not possible instead of it raman should seek permission from company for work from home so that he able to manage both his work as well as house chores, which may shows his responsibility not only towards his wife help but also towards his company work.
@Abhimanyu-cw8fw2 ай бұрын
What where have you written about why he has put his hand on his face and why there are books and why his wife lying on the bed.i have also write story you cam check in newest comment and try to find mistake and tell me please bro
@sameerkushwaha584 Жыл бұрын
1:08:12 .. yeah this is acceptable story but some improvement is needed. according to the action some actions should be write i.e. how he take care of his wife such as help her in household works, make one time of meal, also they both do meditation etc.
@sumitpawar6989 Жыл бұрын
27:00 the exact picture i am having trouble to percieve sir i swear if i will get recommend definitely will met all DW teachers
@imnitin9898 Жыл бұрын
The unexpected session we all needed❤
@vishnugurjar3187 Жыл бұрын
Vote for Shakti batch ❤❤❤
@vickychauhan.7 Жыл бұрын
Ayega bhai i think march me....jab tak ek baar shaurya warrior se complete kar lo shakti revision purpose k liye hh ❤❤
@UPSC_1NDAofficers Жыл бұрын
01:05:16 Yes this is a acceptable story But we can add more action like hoping in her household work. .....etc Take care of the her health
@AryanDubey1432 Жыл бұрын
perfect❤❤ vote for another session like that
@bhavnachaudhary28562 ай бұрын
Srita is a 17 year old girl. Her father, an army officer recently got posted to Belgaum cantt. After shifting to this new place, she felt a lil sad as she had no friends. She started staying quiet. Her father Ajay often suggested her to go out and enjoy her summer holidays. He was concerned about her daughter. One day Srita saw her neighbour's kids going to the shooting club. Looking at their happy faces Srita quickly went inside and took her shooting gun. She went to her father and asked her to make her join the shooting club of their city. Looking at this sudden change, his father got amazed and inquired about the reason for the sudden change. Srita replies, going out is necessary for mental and physical development and she finally finds friends at the club.
@VinayMeena-fs6xh7 ай бұрын
Rupesh is main character of my story.He is 17 year old boy.he is in sad mood.he stand in a garden and cry alone beacause today the board examination (12th) result was declared.when he look his result then he started cry because he did not attain 80% marks in 12th class.he regret it and after some time he came in a garden and cry alone. But he thought that regret is not a solution and he dicided to do preparation for NDA which is dream of rupesh and does hard work for it . ❤❤
@bkkumarbanti27387 ай бұрын
Suranding background kaha gaya bhi
@divyamsoni2884 Жыл бұрын
Jai hind Sahab 🇮🇳✨ lieutenant Divyam verma reporting sir ✨🇮🇳😊
@official-daksh9153 Жыл бұрын
Bro aap konsi reference se pdh rha ho
@YUVARAJDEKAOfficial Жыл бұрын
Bro you are not a lieutenant you are a student . You will never use this word before you earn it . When you earn it and then use this..
@imnitin9898 Жыл бұрын
@@YUVARAJDEKAOfficial totally agree with you
@divyamsoni2884 Жыл бұрын
@@YUVARAJDEKAOfficialI know bro Prathamesh sir has said this but my belief is that you will become as you speak and think...🇮🇳
@divyamsoni2884 Жыл бұрын
@@official-daksh9153Shaurya book
@Abhimanyu-cw8fw2 ай бұрын
49:38 1st he score wrong he scored 2nd when he goes to tell may be then he went to his father 3rd want's not its wants and after dull stop he should have used capital letter😊
@Chiku567-m4o Жыл бұрын
NDA FOUNDATION STUDENTS 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😊😊😊
@ShivamRaj___095 Жыл бұрын
Where are u from
@shubhamjaiswal2628 Жыл бұрын
Up and you@@ShivamRaj___095
@Aapki_art3 Жыл бұрын
This video is really good ❤❤❤
@sunnyyadav7956 Жыл бұрын
Parthmesh sir osmm ❤🎉
@PradyumnaPandey433 Жыл бұрын
Thank you sir ❤❤❤❤
@NDAIIT11 ай бұрын
1:08:17 well that is not written by a cds aspirant, it is written by a NDA aspirant and that's me😅. Thanks for giving me a feedback!
@pratyushanand-T3RMINAT0R7 ай бұрын
were u screened out for that ?
@darpandalvi98372 ай бұрын
Great video Thank you Sir for Guidance
@prashantyadav3731 Жыл бұрын
Vote for NDA foundation batch walo ❤
@ShivamRaj___095 Жыл бұрын
Whare are u from bro
@FFSATYAM70523 ай бұрын
Up@@ShivamRaj___095
@kishanswain63723 ай бұрын
Very informative vdo guruji❤❤❤
@NitishKumar-mx1ggАй бұрын
Thank-you sir for guidance 😊
@arunrajg96677 ай бұрын
1:08 this story is acceptable sir..
@Way_of_Success463Ай бұрын
Thank you sir u are excellent teacher jao hind
@CDS...Aspirants0919 Жыл бұрын
Vote for viraat 1.0❤❤❤❤❤
@gamingfouna99 Жыл бұрын
Love you sir 🙏
@SonuKumar-zu9vp Жыл бұрын
Shourya batch is best❤❤❤💯💯💯
@VikashYadav-pi9nz Жыл бұрын
Thank sir 👍❤❤❤❤
@Abhishek0.09 Жыл бұрын
Jai hind jai bharat ❤
@PradipKorram2 ай бұрын
Sir ppdt me story ko hindi me nareth kar sakte hai😢😢🙏🙏🙏🙏🤔😟 pliz sir
@nikhilsingh28006 Жыл бұрын
NDA foundation student ❤
@himansusaini87409 күн бұрын
really helpful video
@SARFARAZ_ZAYN Жыл бұрын
...JOSH ALWAYS TOP IN THE SKY ☝💪
@aryantyagi1319 Жыл бұрын
Intellectual Intelligence means that how briefly or deeply can a person goes inside the situation given to him.
@deepak007ind7 Жыл бұрын
In this picture i perceive two characters ramu and siya both are in positive mode Ramu gave training for self defence and he went with siya on training . Ramu gave training how to save hired bus from the teririst Siya practice on it day by day and improve mistakes. After that siya is happy to complete hired bus training.
@Shaikh_Aayan. Жыл бұрын
Whole story must be written in past tense except sentence written in double inverted commas
@Ljs12327 Жыл бұрын
Thank you 😊🙏
@chhavi39293 ай бұрын
Sir does it create a big effect if we make spelling mistakes or grammatical mistakes
@Yashrajput2007-0 Жыл бұрын
Foundation students here 🫱
@SHAM...20 Жыл бұрын
Ha
@AMIT_SINGH_07. Жыл бұрын
Yes bro ❤
@sandeeprajpurohit5121 Жыл бұрын
1:21:21 There are two charter in my. Story M 36 F 28 it looks like a seen of an airplane the female was a terrorist pretending to be a normal person she told the pilot to fly it to pak but pilot was clever he told her that " its not possible we don't have enough fuel we have land in india" she agreed with a lot pressure the plane land in india for fueling and indian army came there at that point they found that there are more terrorist in the plane with a great plan and difficulties they saveed all the peoples
@mayankraj6533 Жыл бұрын
Acceptable but there was little lack observation that in picture his extreme reaction shows that the lady is in critical condition 1:07:51
@Chandraveersingh-lk7gh7 ай бұрын
In this story two characters are shown ram is a train driver and sita is gang leader of his gang and she performs theift on monthly basis one day she along his gang did robbery and in order to escape out of place she along with his group members got into the triain she went to driver and threat him that if ram had not followes his instructions she would kill him she told him to the train between and two station ram did according to her instructions and stopped the train she along with his team moved out of train and ram immediately called police and informed them about this issue and he had given exact location and he had also taken photographs when she was going by these all information police caught them in few days
@AdityaSingh-h1u2e2 ай бұрын
Everything is ok bro but where is rail track
@NDALOVER-cl6rw Жыл бұрын
This is an acceptable story
@ShivamkumarKumar-d7q Жыл бұрын
I perceived two characters in the given picture arjun and shreya arjun is 33yrs old and shreya is 28yrs arjun drives the bus and once day arjun drive the bus shreya is try to hijake the bus and shreya put the gun on arjun
@ShivamkumarKumar-d7q Жыл бұрын
Sir pls reply me that I am going on the right path or not
@nomadic_Humans1944 Жыл бұрын
Kaha se Bhai ?
@ShivamkumarKumar-d7q Жыл бұрын
I write only that part whi is given in the pic
@Nishi759 Жыл бұрын
Sir you are my favourite ❤❤😊😊
@Akashyadav-vt2ht9 ай бұрын
Bas itna kahna hai Jai hind sir Love❤ my country aur me aapne payar ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu ❤
@AnkitAhirana-l8s Жыл бұрын
Thanks sir
@SAKSHIKURMI-w3s Жыл бұрын
Bharat mata ki Jay🇮🇳 Jay Hind sir
@priyanshu_teotia26 күн бұрын
49:00
@All_aBout_indianArmy Жыл бұрын
Jai hind sir🇮🇳🇮🇳
@PranavPote-ng7cv Жыл бұрын
Jai Hind sir
@IITaspirant81 Жыл бұрын
Once you think 🤔 what I'm did in past that looks like nuisance 😮
@GauravJarodia Жыл бұрын
Story written on 1:17:15 .in this story siya friend gender is not mentioned
@SatyamKumar-we4vo19 күн бұрын
काश SSB हिन्दी मे होता 😊
@ufdygfhd7087 Жыл бұрын
Jay hind sir
@IncomeTaxOfficers Жыл бұрын
Sir ap ppdt ki classes liya kriye
@SurajKumar-pg6qn3 ай бұрын
HELP ! Hey please someone tell me what to when we see a lot of character in the picture . Do we have to write the age,gender. Mood of all characters. If not what to write in the box
@LavishSaini-yo6yt3 ай бұрын
same doubt here
@AB-7371Ай бұрын
No only a few main characters.....around 3 to 4
@SurajKumar-pg6qnАй бұрын
@@AB-7371 thanks for your help
@RitikYadav-gb6fx6 ай бұрын
Nice teacher
@sanjaychopda6057 ай бұрын
1:16:53 a young girl cannot be 24
@AnshuKumar-i3e5k2 ай бұрын
SSB PP and DT
@Saif-yg2pt Жыл бұрын
Foundation batch se written ki tyari kar rahe hai sir
@sumitkumarrolay-qf5ygАй бұрын
SSB😇/ SSB ka full form kaya hai sir
@Mrvlooger.v Жыл бұрын
Jaldi shakti batcha lado sir❤ plz
@kanikasingh58359 ай бұрын
Sir the picture shown at1:17:16 is half conditional from start to where he gives a reason that why he grabbed her neck but afterward it seems to me that it is little unconditional according to the environment he mentioned in his story
@AbhayKumar-fm6ey Жыл бұрын
Vote for NDA foundation batch
@DhirajKumar-wm7nd Жыл бұрын
Sir ,His wife is housemaker wife because his maination own story. It's mean her basic education is not good then how possible his wife is UPSC aisparents. This my opinion because my mother's and aunt's also housemaker.
@ammanisha0 Жыл бұрын
Parthmesh sir aaj Tak itne ppdt ka video banaye h but abhi tak kisi answer nhi diye h 😅😅
@domvlogchannel62577 ай бұрын
What n explanation sir big fan of you Sir I'm looking for coaching center for the preparation of SCO commission If you can guide or help me I will be most humble, great and thankful to you sir
@PARTH092 Жыл бұрын
Sir cds ka KZbin par kabse start hoga new ?
@praveen9662 Жыл бұрын
Sir in 1hr 16min how could a women Marry unknown person
@Chandraveersingh-lk7gh7 ай бұрын
Raman is 28 and his wife sunita is 26 years old raman have been trying for job for last 4 years he is unemployed he studies on daily basis for competative exam and finally he has cleared a exam just 2 months back and now a days his ife have been suffering from high fever for last 15 days and he has called for interview his wife was feeling High fever on that day also by raman's hard work he has cleared interview and when he returned his home back he saw his wife was laying on bed
@ManuSoni_11 ай бұрын
Story written for the picture 1:08:13 in which a lady lying on a bed and a man wearing a tie stand near to him Story writing started here -----> [ M F ] [ 24 22 ] [ - - ] Action: A caring husband worried for his wife There are two characters in in my those name are Ankit and Sana. Ankit is the main protagonist of my story. Ankit is a employee in a IT company. Ankit is husband of Sana. Sana is a housewife who also preparing for UPSC exam. One day when Ankit returned from his work he saw his wife lying on the bed and she had high fever. Ankit immediately call the doctor and in the time when the doctor Ankit think it might be because of morning argument between him and his wife on not tasty food he realised that he done a major mistake promised himself to never do any mistake like this. After sometime doctor came and treated his wife. In few days his wife was well.
@KaranKumar-cq7du Жыл бұрын
Bheed ka photo rahega tb sara character mein kaise perceiv karenge??
@atozmotivationalclub2421 Жыл бұрын
I think that 🤔 We'll collect a person & write a story on them . Like, no matter how croweded
@RobinKumar-ti3lv Жыл бұрын
Hello friends tell me one thing that how can I join the NDA shourya warrior batch❤️❤️
@deepakshakya9538 Жыл бұрын
Sir shaurya Warrior batch me ssb ki preparation hogi kya please sir told me
@MuskanSaini-y1i Жыл бұрын
Yes ssb classes bhi lgti hai or theoretical paper ki bhi
@Sangamrathour6602 Жыл бұрын
Sir cds 2 ka batch kb ayega
@ishuchauhan7566 Жыл бұрын
Kitni mehnat ki hogi sir aapne bhi is video k liye kitne photo, kitne points,kitne olq btaye dikhaye
@AMIT_SINGH_07. Жыл бұрын
Sir, can we write the story in Hindi?
@OMVANSH Жыл бұрын
No
@AMIT_SINGH_07. Жыл бұрын
@@OMVANSH But why
@SierraHunter2106 Жыл бұрын
@@AMIT_SINGH_07.that is how it works. It tests if you ready for accepting challenges you will readily learn english than writing in hindi
@Shahjahanpurgoswami7 ай бұрын
How Manny years service is required for SCO Please tell me
@SuryaSingh-cv7un5 ай бұрын
Sir many person ho to kya likhe please batado
@ashutoshkaloi802110 ай бұрын
Who noticed that sir dont know the meaning of 'chores' 😂😂
@gopalkrusnajena73837 ай бұрын
Your behaviour tells you are not a right candidate
@HarshRajak1466 ай бұрын
Sir you explained all the major flaws of the stories and the flaws in the observations of the writers but not even once mentioned a way to correct those observation skills , you are just pointing out the flaws which is not at all wrong , but I think it would had have been better had you given a few suggestions for correcting those mistakes or ways to inculcate those OLQ's which you mentioned , can you suggest a few solutions or will you just point out the mistakes !!!??
@FFsinghFF39 Жыл бұрын
Oo p
@abmixer1210 Жыл бұрын
Waiting for cds 2 😊
@flying_officer_sudhanshu_jha11 ай бұрын
sir one doubt is If I write the story then i can't see my story while naration😢
@Vaisnav-c3m Жыл бұрын
NDA Shakti kab aayegi sir
@legendxyz69025 ай бұрын
Sir app gange ho na 🤔
@AMIT_SINGH_07. Жыл бұрын
Sir Kya mai abhi Nda Foundation Bach le sakta hu
@keshavbaranwal7066 Жыл бұрын
No You are very late
@ufdygfhd7087 Жыл бұрын
Nhi bhai itna late koi batch leta hai kya
@AMIT_SINGH_07. Жыл бұрын
@@ufdygfhd7087 bro mai abhi 11th me hu . Q nahi le sakta Bach abhi NDA 2 ke liye bahot time hai
@keshavbaranwal7066 Жыл бұрын
@@AMIT_SINGH_07. Bahut bada backlogs hoga
@ufdygfhd7087 Жыл бұрын
@@AMIT_SINGH_07. vo bat nhi hai
@RajeshKumar-lp2vp Жыл бұрын
❤
@mayank5137 Жыл бұрын
Jo pic mai male , female ka neck grab kr rha h usme nda aspirant ne btaya ki siya is a young girl But picture mai saf dikh rha h ki woh 35-40 years k persons h dono Or wahi se puri story bigad jati h ki siya try hard krti h apni shadishuda zindagi ko achi zindagi bnane ki But how? 35-40 k hai dono toh ab kese achi zindagi bnane ka try kr rhe hai... Why not before? Yahi sbse badi mistake hai Lken agr m apna perception du toh yeh ho sakta hai ki Person = women - , landlord Ek widow women hai 35 years ki jiske pas 2 bcche hai 13 or 15 saal k jab woh 30 saal ki thi tab uska husband ki bike accident mai maut ho jati hai job se lautte wakt.....or uske pas sirf husband hi tha jo pura ghar chalata tha paise kamake... Bcz widow women itna jada padhi likhi nahi hoti ki woh tution school mai teacher banke money earn kar ske... Islie woh maid ka kaam karti h jisse woh kuch money earn krti h jisse bas ghar ka rashan or apne baccho ki fees hi bhar pati h ,.. Widow women ghar ka rent nahi de pati jiske wjh se landlord ka temper high ho jata h or woh ghar se nikalne ki dhamki deta h lken women mna kr deti h or landlord gusse m haathapai kr deta h or uski neck pakad leta hai after that jab landlord chla jata h wha se toh women police station m jakr complaint kr dete hai landlord k khilaf ki usne aurat pr haath uthaya...or finally wo landlord arrest ho jata hai I know story eng m likha jata h but This is my rough story not an accurate This is only from my perception Agr kisiko mistake lgi toh pls comment mai apna vichar jrur de
@Chandraveersingh-lk7gh7 ай бұрын
And was not responding to raman voice he got panic and raman called doctor and doctor checked the sutna and told raman that her wife became unconscious due to high fever and she would recover soon and after some days his wife recovered and raman has job and he spends a lot of time with his wife
@kanikasingh58359 ай бұрын
Sir half of the story from start to the part where he tells about why he grabbed her neck is conditional but afterwards it seems to be little unrealistic
@sameerkushwaha584 Жыл бұрын
ANYONE 19 dec SSB BANGALORE??
@Army0002 Жыл бұрын
Voice
@NDAcadet-j2o Жыл бұрын
Sir agar mai shaurya warrior batch leta hi or imandari se padhta hu to kya mera selection ho sakta hai
@cadetvivek69 Жыл бұрын
Haa bro
@AryanDubey1432 Жыл бұрын
bhai mirror ke samne Jake pucho aur do minute tak mirror ko dekho you got your answer