FROZEN IN TIME (Revise app V1: Declined)

[@AnselEdits]

Interesting ideas. I'd work on fine tuning your effects and pushing them.

[@DefinedEdits]

thanks ansel :DD

[@danielkeane1225]

Defined tK You use fraps or what? :D

[@DefinedEdits]

CFC Edits MSI Afterburner

[@Glews]

This is the best edit i have seen in a long time. Truely amazing!

[@RevisePicturessox]

Appclip detailed response: Hi, first of all thank you very much for the interest in the team and the time you gave to make that appclip :) Unfortunately this isnt living up to our expectations and standards and thats why im forced to decline that application but nonetheless with a strong recommendation to reapp after work on the points detailed under. What we liked in that Appclip: ------------------------------------------ The atmosphere of the edit was pretty much interesting, as well as correctly tuned with the gun sounds and sfx in general, the edit itself got along with the song pretty nicely. Flow was good, with nice screen movements. Its was a good point of the edit but also what made it a great flaw. The cine was nice and well transitioned :). And i noticed some nice distortion effects that were pretty interesting :c What we didnt like: --------------------------- First thing is the fact that the flow that was good, didn't really fit the pace of the edit actually, sometime the screen movements were too strong, too fast and transitions too, way too fast for an edit that is first really chill then strong keeping its basic structure. So it sometimes looked like the two had nothing in common. So to sum up, in order not to get you confused with what has been said earlier, i can see you master and know how to use those skill, but your weakness is in the way you make them fit the atmosphere of the edit (which is for 80% given by the song). Next is the cc, black and white cc, which is okay but what you did and maybe shouldn't have is you used what we can call the 'barker' cc type, which is a b&w cc with some rgb split on one color. Well its kind of a tiny thing but actually not since it became his trademark in a way, something that makes his edits recognizable. So thats a bad point that is a flaw for the edit in it's originality and that wasted a bit the atmosphere. Last thing is the effects, apart from the distortion effects (that seems like coming from the s_ suite and are kind of being overused nowadays) that looked good indeed, there were no other cool/interesting effects, apart from screen effects but they account or flow and not really vfx. Moreover it was basic stuff, not particular research of creativity and all. Thats somewhat of a big flaw and is one of the reason why i dont think this edit is not up to Rp's standards. All those point can be improved and i hope to see you/i strongly recommend you to app again as we see you as a potential future member, only if you accept to gain experience especially by trying to be more creative, original and make yourself be noticed by standing out from others ;) The first idea, the chillness was interesting in some point but try to give it your own thing, something that'll be unique and belong only to you and not something others could have done. Anyway i hope you don't get it the wrong way since detailed response are only dedicated to judge and give directions to the most promising applicants :). Status [Declined] - NXVA on behalf of RevisePictures

[@DefinedEdits]

You see, this is why revise is the best. You actually take the time to help people out. I will definately app again in the future, even if its just to get more advice... :D

[@WarzEdits]

Defined tK ae8narts too

[@OYD]

Finally, i saw this edit when it was released in the playlist of RevisePictures liked videos, couldnt find it since then :D

[@Toy_Turnip]

Very nice as always :D

[@HenryYeomansMotion]

Awesome mate :)

[@DefinedEdits]

ty :)

[@WarzEdits]

This is soo nice man :)

[@keifOMG]

dude this was insane

[@ElmosWorldofGaming]

OMG AMAZINGG!!!!!

[@ColorBlindEdits]

You're unreal! So amazing!

[@MichaelCabral]

About time you've made this edit public. It's been unlisted for months on your channel.

[@DefinedEdits]

aha yeah finally got around to finishing it :)

[@Witkowski_Cam]

I remember the day I joined tk you linked this in chat for ops. It was about halfway done and that was 7 months ago xD

[@DefinedEdits]

loaft

[@Witkowski_Cam]

hahahahaha yes

[@insidiousmarko]

So amazing man!!!

[@NormandyEdits]

nice :) like the chromatic distortion :D

[@JAKEXEdits]

So smooth

[@JeeZeh]

Oh this is sweet!

[@rohopp]

I can see alot of Barker in it but nontheless great edit! :)

[@DefinedEdits]

This looks absolutly NOTHING like barker.... His flow structure is so different than mine.... I dont get why you say that

[@rohopp]

Defined tK wow wow this wasnt ment to be a hateful comment so calm down haha :) I just wanted to say that some things looked kinda similar to Barkers style! For example: The warp rgb with leave color, the cc and the triangle thingy in one cine. Sorry if my comment annoyed you but it had to be said ^^

[@DefinedEdits]

Cronos I didnt take it as a hatefull comment im just supprised because i think we edit nothing alike

[@JAMbox555]

So sick:D

[@TrashhEdits]

Beautiful

[@ImTronHD]

I think I saw a beta to this one like so long ago :D !

[@rohopp]

Tron du bist überall... Illuminati?

[@Reakk]

:O

[@richmoss208]

Needs more rainbows and unicorns ;)

[@DefinedEdits]

true :/

[@MegaEdits]

0:27 ILLUMINATI

[@OuterTimeClan]

How much for a TT?

[@chrissween51]

was that an intervention on bo1?

[@DefinedEdits]

ye mods

[@chrissween51]

that's dope

[@ArminNemeth99]

I fucking love you

[@Witkowski_Cam]

Revise Dofoned tK

[@okTrnty]

Song ?

[@DefinedEdits]

amfir - drop by drop

[@grinchy31]

Have my babies