DEFLOWERED GIRL [Sweet Anne] [Original song inspired by WeevilDoing/ThePostTraumaticManifesto]

“You promise me, that this is normal love?”
Duuuude this has been months in the making. Chocolate Box Girl’s release was what finally pushed me to finish this!
This is technically part of a Vocaloid challenge hosted by a discord server, but idk if it counts cuz when the prompt was picked I was already basically done lol.
Also, GarageBand, i love you, PLEASE add some kind of BPM and Time signature belt! This song goes from 125 at 4/4 to 180 at 3/4 (which wasn’t HARD to do manually, just annoying…).
I have some more songs n progress that I’ve written as TPTM oc’s, but idk I kinda wanna make money off of them when I get the chance. SPEAKING OF: I’m almost to 100 subscribers! Thank y’all sm actually I’m amazed I’ve even gotten this far. I’ve been trying to push my stuff cuz I really want to make a living doing this; I’ve got a long wait before that, but I know it’ll happen! Either way, thank y’all so much for everything! Once I hit 100, I’ll make something super special for all of you!
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Base lyrics/Tuning/Art/Pv:
ASREYAL(me)
Lyrical assistance: alltheworlds_taboo (insta)
Also credits to my brother for helping me record!
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[@WeevilDoing]

WOW!!!!!! this is GORGEOUS!!!! i love the use of sweet anne, the original gardening footage, the lyrics, the tempo changes, EVERYTHING!!!! this is so delightful, im honored you were inspired by my works to make this....... thank you.....!!!!!! (Ｔ▽Ｔ)

[@ASREYAL]

AHHHHHH omg thank you smmm!!! I’m so glad you like it!

[@ghostiieeseason]

DUDE DUDE IVE JUST DISCOVERED THIS AND I READ THE CARRD this made me so heard and im crying this is so good

[@bugsinspace3699]

dude. duuuude this is SO good. i love the use of the music box it fits the song so perfectly. and the visuals??? the SYMBOLISM???? eats this and leaves no crumbs

[@MayorofNerdsville]

Daaaang this could actually pass as an actual ptm song Like this is really good

[@s3lf1shsyan1d3]

i like that i'm seeing tptm turn into a fandom and people having ocs for it this song is really good, i feel like you did a good job at replicating weevildoing's style but also making it sound like your own thing

[@mygrandmasfavoriteflower]

just like me fr !! (this is heartbreaking and captures the feeling of the thoughts of a victim really well)

[@Meowerr404]

ngl a friend recommend me a song, autoplay led me here, and im so grateful i found this, my current love situation has been this kind of desparate for a while now, and ive been trying to get myself out of it, ans this song made me realize how bad my situaton really was, definitely the first song to make me cry like this in a while, thank you for coming up with this work of art, best wishes ❤

[@ChouchiePotatie]

Y’know what, that’s it, I’m subscribing, you have NO RIGHTS making a song this good

[@purupurikaa]

THIS IS SO GOOODDD AUGHGHGHJ!!!2121 you are so underrated omgmggmmg

[@TriangleKisser94]

You.

[@EllCatzLB]

i love this one oml this is the best fansong of anything

[@irlselkie]

You're inspiring me to work on my fansong lol

[@ASREYAL]

Do itttt I love seeing tptm fansongsssss

[@jaydinotjd]

I love the lyrics for the bridge bit on 2:42!! The instrumental is such a sweet mix of like 8-bit and music box that is absolutely my bread and butter fr

[@faecore668]

THIS IS AMAZING OH MY GOD???

[@hope7317]

omg i really like this, i really like the melody and the lyrics are so good!

[@Shnuuy]

Gonna listen to this till I die 😋

[@baizhuchin]

NEW SONG AHHHHHHHH Edit: hejdhdjdhsh THIS THIS SONG AHHHHH I love the lyrics so much I also really like the deflowered girls design, if I have the time to I might draw her!!! :33

[@moji_mojyo]

OH MY GOD AAAAAA A A A A A A THIS IS SO AMAZING AND ITS SO COOL THAT PEOPLE ARE MAKING SOMGS INSPIRED MBY WEEVIL CAUSE THEYRE SO AMAZING BUT THIS IS SO OKMMG

[@zarzophone]

IM INSANNNNNNNEEE ABT THISS AHHHHH

[@icecube3345]

Waugh this makes me want to make songs for my tptm ocs but I don’t have any music programs :(

[@ASREYAL]

Well, there are several free programs! I use GarageBand for apple, but there are other options for PC and android devices! In regards to vocals, Synth V has a free version you can use on basically any laptop, along with several free Voicebanks!

[@jesterpiesvoca]

I used LMMS for my first 4 songs and it's pretty ok I think

[@Eosinophyllis]

BandLab is free and pretty good for a free software

[@EllCatzLB]

This song is epic, the start of the chorus actually reminds me of the start of the chorus of taxidermy girl (i literally just listened to that song I'm sorry if I got the name wrong I forget things instantly)

[@dvffYT]

IM OBESSEDDD THIS IS AMAZINGG!!!

[@unsubscribbly]

I adore this so much, and I'm looking forward to more great work from you!! ❤

[@Aioraito-p]

I LIKE THIS SONG ❤

[@Chaos_Incarnat.e]

I realized that nobody had posted the lyrics here, so in case anyone wants them, here they are!: [Verse 1] Oh, what a beautiful day Another day that I’ll waste away Alone and stagnant, I live I have a heart that I’d love to give That sort of intimacy, I wanna have it And all the closeness I see, Isn’t it lavish? Do I deserve that, you think? Or is it just out of reach? I see your hand’s close to me, But should I grab it? [Pre-Chorus] An arrow through my heart I see you from afar Just say you love me please, That’s all I really need I wonder to myself: Are you with someone else? I hold the flower taut; You love me! Love me not! [Chorus] I CAN BE WHATEVER YOU WANT ME IF IT MEANS YOU’LL THINK THAT I’M LOVELY IF YOU NEED, I’LL LET YOU COME HUNT ME BABY, JUST LOVE ME PROMISE I’M SOMETHING [Post-Chorus] Make me anything, Just make me your way Like a half-finished drawing I’m a human buffet, baby! I could be yours, maybe, What will it take? What sacrifices do I have to make? [Verse 2] I am a puzzle who is missing her piece; So do me a favor and come fill it up please Let me be worthy of your kind of anti-love, The special of love that makes me Throw up… [Pre-Chorus] Be still, my beating heart! ‘Twas broken from the start… Just say you’ll love me, please! That’s what you know I need! I’ve wondered to myself: “Is all love made from hell?” My flower lays in rot; It will forget-you-not [Chorus] I CAN BE WHATEVER YOU WANT ME IF IT MEANS YOU’LL THINK THAT I’M LOVELY IF YOU NEED, I’LL LET YOU COME HUNT ME BABY, JUST LOVE ME PROMISE I’M SOMETHING [Post-Chorus] Mark your territory, no matter my cries You’re a rabid wild animal, And your bark is your Biting my neck, oh-so “lovingly,” Drawing my blood… You promise me that this is normal love? [Pre-Chorus] An arrow through my heart, You broke it into parts… Just say you loved me once… That’s all I really want. An impulse made on sight; You were bathed in golden light… I held the flower taut; You loved-me-loved-me-not. かい嫌いこ?* [Chorus] I CAN BE WHATEVER YOU WANT ME IF IT MEANS YOU’LL THINK THAT I’M LOVELY IF YOU NEED, I’LL LET YOU COME HUNT ME BABY, JUST LOVE ME PROMISE I’M SOMETHING LET ME BE YOUR ONE AND YOUR ONLY OR MAYBE I’M MEANT TO BE LONELY YOU DON’T NEED ME AND I’M SURE YOU DON’T WANT ME BABY, DON’T TOUCH ME MAKE ME FEEL NOTHING [Post-Chorus] Just… leave I’m not that naive enough to fall blindly Oh… I see, Yes, I’ll leave you be… I promise you won’t find me. *intended to be “Do you really hate me that much?”

[@ASREYAL]

@@Chaos_Incarnat.e i looked up anime with a rejected confession, the translation given to me was “Do you really hate me that much?” But yeah, “don’t you hate it” Is basically the same thing.

[@Chaos_Incarnat.e]

@@ASREYAL oh! I will update that right now, thank you! And also thank you for making this song ^^! It’s genuinely the best TPTM fan song, and it just carries *so* much of the series heart and style. You did an amazing job.

[@crawpilled]

if you dont mind me asking PLEASE tell me how you made this!! ive been meaning to make a song for so long but i have no clue how to do it and this is exactly the vibe id wanna go for,,, i didnt add before, but this is amazing!! it feels just like a tptm song..,, i love it so much

[@ASREYAL]

Uhhh i don’t really know how to answer this in full 😅 I can give a more in-depth explanation on my discord server (you can join if interested) but the short answer is I picked up on a lot of patterns from all the TPTM vids and played them to my own style kinda!

[@crawpilled]

@@ASREYAL aah i think i mispoke but i mainly meant what programs you used ^^ or like instruments since i thiught i saw you say you use garageband?

[@SilverDoesCringe-yx2dn]

very good, reminds me of jake english from homestuck!!!!!!! i might make a deflowered jake design, if you dont mind !!!!!!

[@alriune]

This is gorgeously made!!! I love the tempo switches, I love how the lyrics go together!! Fantastic work :-)

[@irlselkie]

THIS IS SO GREAT OMG??? I LOVE THIS

[@usernamessuckactually]

THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!

[@leesee_u]

this is so good omg

[@Dianessly]

Я ОБОЖАЮ ЭТО!!!!!!!!!!!

[@abortedfetus4500]

I like the way it gots a pause to the chorus because in most relationships like this, the other significant other would start showing affection then wears off. That attention to detail is amazing

[@InK_DeD]

NGL THIS SLAPS I LOVE THE WAY YOU TUNED THIS AFTER 7-8 lines of lyrics I understood it 90% of the lyrics without the subtitles!!! It slayed, also do you have this on Apple Music?

[@ASREYAL]

@@InK_DeD No, actually, i don’t have permission from the Artist who I took heavy inspiration of, since this is a fansong of their works! Maybe one day it the future, though!

[@InK_DeD]

@@ASREYAL ah okay! Thanks for letting me know!

[@LaylaMerrieGold]

I love this song! Is it on spotify?

[@ASREYAL]

@@LaylaMerrieGold no, actually, I don’t know how to work Spotify and I don’t currently have permission from the inspiration (WeevilDoing) to monetize this song atm. Maybe one day tho!

[@LaylaMerrieGold]

@@ASREYAL Oh ok tho thanks for telling me!

[@kappathefish7171]

I love this??

[@Eosinophyllis]

Ok now I wanna make a song for my tptm oc

[@kittybugz_925]

This song is so so so pretty ^__^

[@ompeach]

Hey is it alright if I ask a question? I really really like this song and I'm thinking about making a playlist (like a playlist of music that's a video, not a literal playlist), and maybe putting this song in it? You'll be credited and the video won't be monetized, but I'd like to get your permission first! :] (don't feel pressured to say yes btw!)

[@ASREYAL]

@@ompeach yeah, of course! @ me when you post it, too!

[@aliceeveesh9349]

Babe wake up asreyal posted

[@fluffynix6076]

Where can i get a vsqx? Because the song is so good i wanna cover it atp :3

[@CaMo-fp6mr]

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