“Do you remember me, human” The alien woman claimed to recognize me.

[@stevewhite-ko4zj]

Agreed , vary good story line , writing is spot on . GOOD STUFF ..

[@davidhenderson3400]

Honestly she don't look that bad I wouldn't mind seeing more of her.

[@Player_36C]

Yep...More of her and less of her clothes. 😜

[@davemi00]

Now, this is a great story !!

[@ScottBionicBlasters]

Okay, that was a good one....even the cleaning stopped to observe....

[@zachall101]

Space dad the saga 😆😂actually sounds like a good name for a book series lol

[@davidsiegel9656]

Not bad… keep up the good writing.

[@GeorgeMace-em7re]

Good Story

[@peteratkin3788]

Good story well told, I don't often say this, but part two is in order :)

[@WingnutJSL]

A good story.

[@HarrisonPudding]

Well done! I give it a hearty three Huzzahs!

[@RayRatchford]

Interesting, but spoiled by so many ads - and such long ones. Obviously meant to be just a moneymaker using a decent story.

[@davidhenderson3400]

Okay this is a good story up in the end and anyone off the rails. The hologram room with the his father's hologram showed up what's back at the military base. And now they're talking about the hologram room and now they're talking about the hologram room being on a laboratory jungle planet. The store was good and evenly up in the last few minutes and then it is what completely off the rail sideways or continuity errors and everything.

[@LiveFreeOrDieDH]

Agreed. I was enjoying it until the end. A bunch of aliens in ships show up to steal the tech, the team of 4(?) fends them off and then... everyone just leaves?

[@RobertPaterson-ns7xv]

Constant attempts at dry humor is tedious, should have dialed back.

[@privateperson5054]

3 commercials by 13 minutes. 4 by 15. Done watching

[@stupiddems9422]

Never saw any commercials...

[@juanlopez3260]

Same just one in beginning through

[@Iznuts69]

thats on you, learn to protect yourself. firefox+no script+ublockorigin. first big step remove chrome if you use that spyware hiding behind a shitty web browser.

[@peteratkin3788]

I did not see any commercials at all... how are you viewing this and where from?

[@Iznuts69]

this is all on you. learn to protect yourself. firefox + noscript + ublockorigin. first lesson stop using chrome. its spyware hiding behind a shitty web browser.

[@davidcripe835]

Do to the comments about commercials I won’t waste my time!

[@rogerj.fugere3570]

Too bad, it’s a good story.

[@KevinSmith-qg6uz]

I pay for premium and I have no complaints