Hey! I think this is a pretty good vid, the silent style makes it a bit peaceful I think, because I can hear all the ambient sounds from the game. I have a few recommendations: 1- When it comes to the actual gameplay, I recommend strip mining, it's when you mine in straight lines with 2 solid blocks in-between each two lines, this allows you to see the maximum number of resources with the minimum amount of mining. 2- When it comes to the video, I just recommend changing up the title a bit, because the current title seems a little boring, I don't think many people would see this title and click on the video. Usually putting the name of the game first is a bit bad, and especially if you also put in if you won or failed. To change it up I would recommend putting a title which contains the main "mode" or "challenge" you're playing and then followed by the name of the game, without spoiling the success or failure of what you just played, you should also add words like "today" or an enthusiastic "I" and end the title with an exclamation point. Here's a few examples: "First time playing DomeKeeper! I hope this goes well" or "Today I got all the upgrades in DomeKeeper!" or "Time for some more DomeKeeper! | HARD MODE" or some stuff like that. You should try applying this formula to all of your future videos, because it adds a sense of humor or excitement! I hope this helped! If you did read the whole comment then Thank You! It would make sense if you didn't though, it's a bit long :D