Dragon Ball Deliverance Episode 1 | FAN MADE SERIES | - Emergency

It´s been 8 years since I tried to accomplish this little dream of mine, and I can finally say that through all the hardships I´ve been through I never gave up and this is the result of that. I´m glad I was fortunate enough to meet some special people that helped me complete this first episode.
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Also a special thanks to Markus Ferretti ( co-writer) and
Shaka Diemens(Db Deliverance logo)
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Music done by KFLARE PRODUCTION: / nkflare
Thank you to all the Voice actors:
Monty Thompson: Vegeta, Piccolo, Narrator
Monty Thompson Ytb channel: / @wildcatva
Brandon Cabreja: Gohan, Trunks, Broly
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Michael Lundin- Johansson: Mystery Character
Michael Lundin- Johansson Ytb channel: / lankor
Steve Israel: Goku
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Gavin Neal: Goten, Majuub
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Morgan Taiga: Bra, Pan
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It has been 8 years since Goku defeated all of the Shadow dragons and left with Shenron. A new threat is upon the Z-fighters again, but will they able to face this threat with Goku gone?
Time to find out!!!
DragonBall Deliverance is a non-profit trailer being made for private use, and is not intended for sales of any sort. No money is being made from this film. It is in no way affiliated with, or sponsored or approved, by Akira Toriyama, Toei, Shueisha, FUNimation,20th Century Fox or any of their respective affiliates or licensees. The content is for the private use of the viewer and should not be sold, rented, or used for any commercial enterprise in any way, shape, or form. We make no claim to any characters, storylines, names, logos or situations that are trademarked, copyrighted or otherwise protected by federal, state, international or other intellectual property law. This work is produced solely for the personal, uncompensated enjoyment of ourselves and other DragonBall Z fans.

[@frameone1]

Episode 2 is OUT!!!!! kzbin.info/www/bejne/j2G9Y4WYrcxlgs0

[@filmeeseries9898]

Dublagem pra português

[@alexandralite835]

Are you going to make more?

[@alexbailey8526]

I'm working on my own KZbin original animeted series. I've been working on it for 9 years now. So I know how much work & effort goes into this kinda stuff. Your's looks amazing & I'm looking for to see more episodes.

[@rico666six7]

@Andrew Tran mastar is not as good tho

[@johannheidrich6481]

Why You delete Part 2?? :o :(

[@dani3lru1z]

'We are looking for the strongest fighter" *Vegeta's thumb has entered the chat*

[@tcistrash9911]

Why does this not have likes LOL

[@wesxd5292]

Lmfao

[@autonomous3614]

Lmao

[@Something-Waffle]

Why is this considered funny? I don't get it...

[@FreedomAndPeaceOnly]

Veggy: *_" I strongest ukh. "_* All others: *_" Ahh sh°t, here we go again! "_*

[@c0rrupt3d_g0d2]

Episode 1: Pretty good Episode 2: Insane Episode 3: Godly

[@mr.negative8624]

I just can’t handle some of the voice acting

[@waldinipanini6379]

Mr.Negative It definitely stepped up on episode 3 though you have to admit

[@c0rrupt3d_g0d2]

@@mr.negative8624 Yeah for the first episode the quality for the voice acting was kinda bad

[@kuzanFF]

Even 3 of this fan made serie look better than whole dbs

[@spickle1275]

@@kuzanFF No

[@seangaming2144]

Trunks voice sounds like he smokes daily

[@heavenlyway108]

bruh he needs to stop

[@ArgusticDunbar]

And his face makes him look like a villain lol

[@autonomous3614]

Minutely

[@CholoskeeJones]

Goku sounds like Big Gay Al 😂

[@NinjaaGohan]

He always sounds like that

[@TheUglyBoy]

Can we not forget the VA’s in this episode are probably not professional actors, just huge fans with more talent than I wanting to share something amazing with the community. I think the VA isn’t perfect but damn it’s a free animated series and I quite like the voices. It’s an added charm.

[@n0dash18]

I agree that it’s part of the charm, and “You triked on us!” is probably unironically the funniest sentence I’ve heard today. I’m gonna use that later in some way, shape, or form.

[@yozel3411]

The mysterious figure at tye start is really bad ngl

[@EpicGames-hd4ug]

fr i wanted someone to point that out@@yozel3411

[@notMe-pg8yg]

Imagine if TFS's voice actors voice over these episodes

[@LeonCorbett-bf6oz]

@@yozel3411 yeh not to be rude but damn that accent is awful

[@allenvilfort631]

The vegeta voice actor makes me wanna clear my throat

[@JeromeProductions]

Allen Vilfort oof

[@lazyakuma1165]

SAME

[@ARGHADEEP321]

😂😂😂😂

[@AfricaHasWater]

INIT

[@techwizpc4484]

He didn't drink enough juice.

[@Randomvibes234]

I can say this is 100 times better than the money wasted on making live action dragon ball evolution...

[@narlyturtle503]

I thoguht u was gonna say super i was gonna be like xD

[@Randomvibes234]

@@narlyturtle503 like what huh😳

[@narlyturtle503]

@@Randomvibes234 like dude they did not waste hella money on super that was worth it also live action is trash i never watched it

[@Randomvibes234]

@@narlyturtle503 I know right🤦🏻‍♂️and they are gonna come out with a sequel

[@gokutera8265]

DBE made goku look gay on school

[@rahzheeemmanuel]

Whoever is doin Vegeta, Piccolo and Gohan's voice is the GOAT. They sound just like the real characters 🙌💪

[@Blaze1101]

They really dont

[@Woter_X]

wtf no they don’t

[@saysikeern202]

70 other people say otherwise...​@@Woter_X

[@Woter_X]

@@saysikeern202 70 other people are retarded and have never watched Dragon Ball Z from the beginning to end

[@WFOnaga]

@@saysikeern202 people agreeing does not mean its true nor factual, ever heard flat earthers, swiftys, or untrue opinions. I will give props to piccolo though, his voice is pretty good and got better with yelling.

[@realdanshi]

Going back to the first episode now that episode 4 has been released, it's mind boggling to see the difference in quality from each episode, and how each is better than the last. Animation, voice acting, music, character design, EVERYTHING about each episode is 10x better than the previous one.

[@cristorey4638]

It looks like they are being released every year? One every year?

[@WoolleyWoolf]

They keep getting stronger and with even greater power, always evolving to the next level, amazing.

[@vDorgengoa]

The Best Part: Everyone having a monologue about their power and ambitions. Bulla..... "I was hoping to go shopping. "

[@ihateeveryone8161]

I think they forgot about that line too because her character hates shopping and stuff later on 😂

[@vDorgengoa]

@@ihateeveryone8161 I caught that during my rewatch before episode 4 lol. I rationalize it as she needed some essentials for the house and was overconfident in her friends' and brother's combat abilities (which would make being there a waste of time).

[@arielm.1378]

@@vDorgengoa That's a great interpretation actually! It makes perfect sense.

[@c.galindo9639]

What is more important than shopping?

[@DragonballBlack]

Can it be?! Deliverance is HERE!

[@goldaa100]

BlackScape I’m a fan

[@wolfboysadventures1039]

Yep

[@Saiyagami]

Didnt get the joke

[@z-man1237]

Yay!

[@Synthwave89]

Came here thanks to your video. now to watch part 2

[@kemosabe2583]

No matter how many times I have watched it, Gohans defeat remains jaw-dropping and unbelievable! 99% of fan made stories would never kill him off, much less right off the bat! Bravo. I tip my cap!

[@frocity8459]

It's goes to show his always leading arrogance with his power. Then it gets used against his family

[@gskuani7769]

@@frocity8459 that has nothing to do with what happened here. he detransformed because of the other dude's cut he gave him prior.

[@xyoungdipsetx]

So your happy they killed him off like that?

[@MonkeyOfficial123]

@@xyoungdipsetx i think she or he’s impressed but i’m not sure

[@charrah4692]

Jaw Hit The Damn Floor

[@kirin316]

Bruh Gohan gets no love anymore smh. He stay gettin slammed on. He needs a Redemption arc ASAP. Make Gohan Great Again!

[@LavaCreeperPeople]

He was put down with ease lol

[@JeromeProductions]

frrrr

[@viisionafrikacomics5893]

Facts

[@frankrabbit2247]

Agreed man. Seeing Gohan killed like THIS was hard to watch.

[@KallusGarnet]

It's because he was an annoying character after cell.

[@jovinard02]

Pan is thicc, Trunks has a villain's voice. Vegeta is the best.

[@toastyanimations1256]

No trunks sounds like he’s on crack

[@innamispirit6471]

@@toastyanimations1256 lol

[@pannacottafugo9971]

Why do I sound like baby if he went through puberty in a loop?

[@toastyanimations1256]

@inna mi spirit it very true he on crack he always laughs

[@Sam_sam2554]

All FACTS!

[@xenophagia]

I've gotta say, that Vegeta design with the Capsule Corp flight jacket looks great.

[@christopherbartley6885]

Couldnt agree more

[@ashmazr3539]

I see ur comment everywhere xenophagia

[@JeromeProductions]

Xenophagia pretty darn cool

[@xenophagia]

@@ashmazr3539 lol I'll keep an eye out for you too then :)

[@ramenknight2981]

Xenophagia Agl god goku I’ve been trying to pull your for months goddamnit

[@last90sdude7]

NGL they may just be fictional characters but DAMN both Pan & Bra/Bulla looking all kinds of fine 👌

[@joceliagomesribeirojocelia9156]

Tiopatis

[@Black_Knight_-BK-]

Couldnt agree more

[@BenjiClips614]

The fan made stuff are literally the best because it’s what we wish we could see in the actual anime.

[@OfficialNobl3]

I heard they makin this to reality

[@gskuani7769]

@@OfficialNobl3 from who? lol. there's literally nothing to support that.

[@nunovarela2653]

@@gskuani7769 I think this story takes place a few years from the end of the DBS

[@nunovarela2653]

@@gskuani7769 If Akira Toriyama made this canonical it would be pretty good

[@nunovarela2653]

@@gskuani7769I know it wasn't Akira who made it but I would like him to buy the author's rights

[@Popperdrop]

When gohan turned into the Oozaruand SS4 that animation was BEYOND EPIC!!!

[@mistyvisty9846]

LazR but I’m confused did he have a tail or not and what moon he had

[@chenoodles8985]

Misty Visty He used Bulma's machine, the same way Vegeta did (except it was smaller)

[@MannyloAnimeSquad]

youtube just now notifying me about this smh

[@MichaelJohnson.]

Dang your a big youtuber fam

[@Juanitosaurus_1]

3rd Way shit, my friend recommended me this

[@duringmydeath]

If you like this then you will enjoy this re-edit of Vegeta becoming a Super Saiyan. A great fan made re-vision. Its worth it trust me. kzbin.info/www/bejne/m4PSdauOma-Cbc0

[@twingoody7306]

I'm now getting this.

[@rush0wr987]

Just now ran into this, amazing.

[@JohnSmith-qq7gj]

Y pan got big old buddies And why trunks look like he sold capsule corps stock for crack

[@andrewcole8478]

ROFL

[@mathewjavela479]

Underrated comment

[@CommandereON]

Yo Trunk’s voice sounds like he’s about to snitch on someone. 😩

[@erycalexander7315]

He look like he Bouda go snitch on somebody

[@soop3r872]

@@erycalexander7315 he literally just said that???

[@dissipateddestiny5087]

@@soop3r872 he said looks not sounds

[@soop3r872]

@@dissipateddestiny5087 my bad

[@ViinSmoke66_]

😂😂😂

[@GeeBriane]

Damn man this is so dark. I love it! The ending scene was jaw dropping. Didn't expect that.

[@frameone1]

Thank u so much man!!! Please help this grow even more by sharing the video with all your friends!! We need ppl to watch this!!

[@Ssj_tomado]

Seriously tho, like wtf😳🙊💀

[@KobayashiBrynhild]

​@@Ssj_tomado fr, wasn't expecting that

[@GeekedOutNeckbeard]

First Absalon and now THIS?! How can we be so lucky! Love when fans do fam-animations it really shows the LOVE of the series!!!

[@klein8424]

this is what i needed after dbz, something dark, distressing, not a childish anime

[@darrenpalar2832]

Trunks sounds like he had 10 pack of cigarettes whilst planing an evil scheme

[@renardbennett75]

So, Gohan basically just got beat by Namekian Shang Tsung...

[@ronjayrose9706]

*YOU'RE SOUL IS MINE!!!*

[@stonecold2298]

Ronjay Rose your*

[@chuviis3508]

Yeah, lmao

[@supervegito4237]

Yoo, I wasn't aware of that 😂😂😂

[@dr.badtimes3660]

Your brother's soul is mine! GOHAN! You...will be next!

[@simonchoudhury8717]

This was on fire 10/10

[@frameone1]

Thank u !Please share this video everywhere !!!

[@bangster1869]

The Notorious Luke you have a great talent when drawing accurate proportions of the muscles

[@BBGUNGAMER110]

11/10

[@grunt4943]

@@frameone1 and u didn't copy like that one dude who made anime war good job

[@LilEjeezy]

Na son this w as s OVER 9,000!!!

[@Amateur-fitness]

You guys have come such a long way in a short period of 2 years. It's just amazing!!

[@kailechante9664]

13:35 Goku's laugh was spot on 😂

[@DevilArtemis]

Animation was awesome. Audio made me want to pull my hair out cause everything was distorted out the hoohaaa other than that cool.

[@andrewpaul1644]

Soundtrack couldvd used some of kermits mixtape

[@nickthedbzaddict3442]

LOL

[@SCRaetz]

Never gonna be perfect. Fuck outta here with your shit.

[@kjackson9677]

@@SCRaetz dude stfu he is pointing out the positives and negatives its constructive critisiscm so u fuck outta here

[@alexmero5590]

@@kjackson9677 ñ

[@btb4ndito783]

Voice acting is shaky, at worst...but damn Pan :*

[@btb4ndito783]

@@s1iznc1d34 I understand that. When I say shaky, I mean that certain voices are either different quality by a wide margin from others, or the voices given (Trunks for example) sound meh to somewhat bad to unacceptable

[@Shootingfoul]

I rather like the voice acting, the accent is quite unique to dragon ball.

[@btb4ndito783]

@@Shootingfoul but namekians aren't known for having accents in any form of dubbing,and trunks voice is just so high pitched and gritty

[@btb4ndito783]

@Kuurr I was talking about the auditory issues. Visually, I see nothing wrong. Especially for a fan made project

[@Matt_Matt96]

@@btb4ndito783 hope you watched the new episode.

[@MrSupermarioOG]

The guy in a black robe sounds like jean Claude van dam reading a script😂 still very good work I’m subbing

[@jameswalker4291]

Great voice actress for mature Pan. Bulla wanting to go shopping was hilarious and character true. I know I'm late to this party but great going so far.

[@kingcrimson1222]

Liked everyone voice actors until I heard trunks....

[@maxsikas]

Xd

[@dontapulliam8438]

Agreed! I forgot how he sounded on here🤣

[@Loco23444]

Goten’s voice is wack too lmao

[@luisgarcia-ru3sq]

I bursted out laughing when I heard trunks😂

[@hevillepeacefoot8647]

Didn’t like the girls’ voice actors either

[@GoldenAeroCreations]

Just one tip for writing, when you’re writing, use less exposition. Don’t tell what’s going on or how the characters feel, show it. It’s a lot more impactful on the audience. Other than that, this was absolutely amazing! The VAs matched so well, and the original story is super good. I gotta give you tops!

[@hurdyu4146]

Being that it’s the first episode I think it needs a lil more dialogue than other episodes to sort of introduce what’s going on. too little to begin with could also make people lost, this builds up the sense of threat and danger coming later on backing it up with actions

[@erikaliebenberg9317]

Mulan animation vs real one perfect example what you talking about..

[@lvl5charmander]

shut up thats the best part

[@leultrainstinct406]

Hunter x hunter is typing...

[@Eyeless105]

You can tell that whoever wrote the script speaks English as a second language. Either that or they used an auto translator. The dialogue and whoever is voicing Trunks are really my only criticisms. Everything else from the animation to the other voice actors are amazing. I absolutely want to see more of this.

[@trissy2446]

Such talented people out there. Glad to see awesome people like you bringing more love to the franchise as a whole. It deserves it.

[@SMASHINGblargharghar]

If you're coming into this for the first time, I beg that you give this series a chance and overlook the obvious quality issues in episode 1. Like many fan projects, things are a bit rough in the beginning... Borderline bad. But wait until you see the massive increase in EVERYTHING from character development and story telling to animation, art, and voice acting that is to come. Each new episode takes production values to insane new heights and by episode 4 has honestly surpassed any official DB anime to date in terms of overall quality. Great job to this team. I had the privilege of watching your years of growth over the period of a few days and am so impressed.

[@treektheneet]

Love these but killing off Gohan hurt me

[@santiagovelasquez1580]

Yeah Gohan is my 2nd favorite I was mad that Gohan die 😪

[@meek4076]

TreekTheNeet same dude

[@sakernoc5559]

He didn’t die his soul is trapped

[@entertainmentalways2205]

And beating him so brutally.😯

[@brolythefusion3299]

Who cares about gohan

[@yourmomsbffxd5725]

1. Pan.......... 2. Why'd you guys have to go & do my man Gohan dirty on episode 1?! 3. This is pretty dope. Look at the inspiration Akira puts into people. Isn't it wonderful?

[@vtec3070]

YourmomsBFF XD foreal tho I was hype for Gohan

[@dougdouglas5543]

Well he should of kept his training up, his own fault

[@Tyrant820]

YourmomsBFF XD fact, all this fan mad shit need to b sent to AK

[@donflamingo8375]

@@dougdouglas5543 but he started training again he would've killed him if he was super poisoned.

[@JeromeProductions]

YourmomsBFF XD yep

[@joeyflvkko]

Bulla episode 1: “I was hoping to go shopping today” Bulla episode 3: crying,” all my friends wanna do is shop and talk about boys wahhhh I’m not interested in that stuff waaaah why am I like this? Why am I different wahhhh?!”😂😂😂😂

[@TheFelixxxmaster]

Absolutely amazing, I love the turning points, not a trivial story with trivial fights like in Super Dragon Ball Heroes, this is a real alternative serie of the DB universe. Usually fan animation series don't have catching stories, we only want to see cool animations.

[@kendalllinklater6650]

I literally screamed “WHAT?!?”after gohan was forced back to base

[@JOIG_NACHO]

I mean... wtf this namekian is so OP

[@Beast2TheGods]

I like how they had a scary reaction when they sensed Brolys power except Uub. Cause he’s a monster himself as we’ll see in the second episode. Well played.

[@soratwin]

🤣🤣Why does Goten look like JOEY WEELER from Yu-Gi-Oh??💀💀💀

[@justarandombluebird8222]

Wow the difference between EP 1 and 4 is amazing it feels like two sperate series

[@QDArt-gj6lb]

5:26 Ahhhh. Vegeta still being vegeta. Classic 😂

[@JeromeProductions]

Q.D Art yep

[@hyderawssouthwest8584]

thats the problem.

[@SuperShade64]

Even in the fan projects, my man gohan gets played!

[@Nick-qo9de]

Can I redo trunks voice

[@zerona]

adult gohan powering up just to go down like a bitch from a one-shot yup sounds about right

[@largemarge2098]

Not the first timw

[@shadowfox87]

To have worked on this for 8 years, I congratulate you man. Well deserved. Keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next episode.

[@marcquisgaines4134]

Vegeta going super saiyan 3 was the most beautiful thing I ever seen

[@yenlaj]

Pan and Bulla, Nice touch forreal I'm glad you included them, Episode two's thumbnail looks pretty good im sure ill enjoy this fan series. (found you through a tiktok on goten and trunks it was INSANE, keep up the great work you've came a long way and updated the graphics, cinematic's, etc)

[@gigadwight]

I’m late to the party and just discovering this, and I see a lot of people hating on Trunks’ VA, but I love it bc it shows the difference between him being raised by his mother (future Trunks) vs him being raised by his dad. Dude sounds like a menace! Getting Ocean Dub Vegeta vibes

[@Shootingfoul]

Me: "Don't worry, Gohan has his mystic form." Pan: "I trained hard to not be a burden to everyone again" Me: "Wait, what? I thought Goku said near the end of DBZ that Pan was one of the people that is likely to protect Earth in Goku's place" Minutes later.... "Gohan used Super Saiyan instead of Mystic form"..... Me: "Oh....totally forgot this was after GT, Gohan didn't have mystic form and Pan sucked."

[@Latinofire202]

Gohan did have mystic. But just like in Super, he lost the ability to use it from lack of training.

[@Robert-tl2vg]

Weizi: Let’s do a small script to be funny Me: Grow up

[@Shootingfoul]

@@Robert-tl2vg That was pretty random, let me do it to: I like penguins.

[@Latinofire202]

@Martin Ramirez that he lost it because he didn't train. Then he started training in super and was able to do it again.

[@Latinofire202]

@Martin Ramirez semantics

[@boredaf5282]

6:07 The Broly Movie: Part 75, Broly Returns(again, if you didn't figure)

[@dexterjsullen]

But broly was the best villian out of dbz series

[@theflowerhead]

A little late to show me this but hey - still better than never! Great job, guys. We all wanted Gohan to be a badass.

[@KingPazzaz]

By far the best fan Gohan voice I've heard. Piccolo is damn good, too!

[@otakukaiju6045]

Ppl talking about that girl in black and realize that it's adult pan

[@animeclub9885]

All here in the comments are talking about pan and gohan but legends only know that vegeta said goku as goku

[@ericmcmanus5179]

The voices sound ridiculous, hilarious, and also eerily spot on to the real voices.

[@The_Mysterious_Saiyan]

This was sick! Trunk’s hair is lit Everyone is taking their role seriously 🔥🔥

[@Dx-sl9iq]

No matter who write the story ..gohan is always shown useless😂 Edit: okay i was wrong ..he is dope Edit2: wtf he is useless again

[@valentds]

who wrote dragonball absalon made gohan great again

[@saltysnowboi]

CC_ Jade cucked buu until he got too cocky

[@bayareayackem100]

Gohan was great again in absalon

[@Kevin-yk7tk]

Yo the ending was crazy!

[@MrDumnice]

Thats a lie Gohan beat cell

[@DeuceFrmEC]

Simply the fact you killed off Gohan in the first freaking episode is more than enough to have me come back for another one😂😂😂

[@TruthSeeker23099]

Lol

[@frameone1]

Elizabeth Smith悪名高い悪魔の定規 yeah ahhahaa this stupid guys think that I kill Gohan in the first EP hahahahaha

[@DeuceFrmEC]

Bruh💀💀not a damn fakeout. Leave the fool dead, please.

[@DeuceFrmEC]

Mr.Wolfchamp 1999 I’m guessing he doesn’t want criticism after putting all this time into this project. Nothing is wrong with constructive criticism but some ppl that commented were straight bashing it.

[@DeuceFrmEC]

Mr.Wolfchamp 1999 I don’t believe it was just for thinking he was dead since I said the same thing myself. I think it’s more how some ppl worded what they said that ended up rubbing him wrong. I’m not saying he isnt overreacting or not. I’m just saying it wasn’t completely unwarranted

[@samuraiakira6497]

This ain’t just a fan animation. It’s a love letter to Dragon Ball. Keep up the amazing work y’all.

[@RobTLand]

This is brilliant! I will be watching all and following. Excellent work.

[@djtrunkz313]

they gave ss4 gohan a mullet....ah hell

[@punani_slayer4209]

Jae Orlando perfect for gohan

[@marcusjoyner5977]

That warning can't stop anyone

[@Theprobadmintonplayer]

Never expected this kind of animation You're skyrocketing

[@LordJesusDiedforUs]

The voice acting is so good each character definitely put in effort. Great stuff 🔥

[@seymourbuttz6419]

Bro tfym they suck.

[@adrianadkins366]

You need a bigger team. Respect. This is a direction DB has needed to go. We need some dark and difficult to process stuff.

[@trudaman_solo8833]

Adrian Adkins facts

[@Dan-zt7uj]

If he had a bigger team, the quality would most certainly boost. Idk how many staff are working on this project, but I hope theres enough animators. The less animators available the more time it will take.

[@theblueelement7539]

First of all: I love the overall story, the ending caught me completely of guard, its gonna be interesting to follow. Regarding Animation: smooth as hell. (and loki delivered one hell of a transformation) the part where the bad guy punched super saiyan directly off of him was awesome to see. But there are some things (at least in my opinion) that could use a little bit of adjustment. The Pacing, while the viewer is able to understand what is happening plot wise, is a bit too fast. Some scenes could have been established better if things moved at a bit slower rate. For example: it would have been interesting to see if there was a scene on the namekian spaceship where the Z-fighters already get slightly suspicious, thus raising the tension a bit. And some of the shading choices are a bit incompatible. While Gohans face became more red with each layer of shading added, bullas (or bras) face became less saturated/almost grey . But those are the only things that i thought were worthy of pointing out. The character designs you did look awesome (vegetas jacket is really satisfying to look at and im curious how gokus clothes are gonna be if you did a new one). Im really excited to see where this series goes in the future and how you grow as an artist and an animator. Therefore i wish you the best of luck

[@tomotion8524]

Thanks alot for this comment! Great feedback too. We´re gonna remember this and take this with us in the next episode, so stay tuned!

[@theguy106]

In regards to the pace, the quickness feels right imo because the premise is that they're all in a hurry to get to the closed figures' home planet to stop the force (broly) so I'm a sense the urgency force the fast pace. After the plot (and lies) unfold the pace could definitely be dialed back some tho

[@pierremyles2900]

So in other words this is not. A real dragon ball show some body thats not affolliated and is just a fan made this one

[@Mustafa-we2pj]

I’m LIVID YT just notified me about this. This is absolutely incredible work. Wauw.

[@MarvinPowell1]

Just discovered this for the first time and about to binge all episodes.

[@kidfoolyjay]

Fax

[@broly1609]

I know I've commented so many times now but you've inspired me to carry on with my fan made manga thank you

[@JasonGuitarHand]

Broly if there is one thing I love is fan made stories of Dragon Ball. Do you have a link for me to read your Manga?

[@kraangdragon6828]

Hey me too

[@suckmyspaghettimonster4603]

Broly YOU IMPOSTOR!

[@broly1609]

JasonGuitarHand I'm still getting things together

[@broly5871]

BROLY The SPAGHETTI MONSTER Hmph...

[@the1eyed]

Are we not gonna talk about how hardcore that front flip Gohan did before shooting that Kamehameha was?!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@blackspiderman1887]

Anime 101: Never trust a group of guys wearing cloaks

[@MasAlaMode]

Been watching this since the 90s LOVED It thank you everyone that made this

[@willpenneth9407]

I NEED more after that ending!!!

[@frameone1]

Will Penneth this series is in the audience hands so hope theyll support me on Patreon.. So I will able to work on that full time and speed process

[@srnova9486]

The Notorious Luke How long did it take you to make this?

[@kloudguy5669]

SR Nova Roksic +1 year

[@jordancook4909]

Cole Brown why don't you make it yourself then ... free of charge put in the year of work

[@jordancook4909]

My man Jiren with the truth OWARI DAAAAA

[@dawnbreaker5008]

Gohan still doesn't know how to dodge 😒

[@aceghost7477]

Did he just knocked the transformation out of him!!!! DAMN this is epic

[@trashmonet]

Doesn't feel like a true Dragonball story, but it's pretty good for some fan fiction. I applaud the animation and voice acting. Not perfect, but who expects it to be. Keep it up. You got my subscription. Keep it up man. Great content.

[@MattrixNY]

The Vegeta and Gohan voices nailed it!!!! 💯💯💯💯

[@ethownzbh]

Piccolo too

[@CallMeKPYourLeader]

Gokus voice was the only one i didnt like. And the Spanish namekian

[@Tyrant820]

Yea vegeta is spot on

[@JJ-io2nz]

Vegeta isn't bad but I can do a pretty damn good one myself

[@arlandow]

Vegeta sounds horrible

[@trials6502]

Started with episode three: big mistake.

[@d-stroyer6888]

Same lol

[@jnlouismathurin2722]

Same .. sigh

[@NLFAST]

Same LOL

[@andrehoskins9126]

Same yay

[@tomotion8524]

Yea we improved a lot since ep1, sorry guys

[@rickdeezy07dj]

This is actually solid. I’m interested to see where the story goes

[@MrNexusPrime]

OMG i watched this on shrooms and laughed the whole time. This series if fucking amazing, Im now going to follow it forever

[@penisnt]

Bra is the only character who blinked in this entire thing 😂

[@veznc7785]

Leon Gjata goku blinked

[@charleschase7945]

Bulma blinked

[@supervegito6752]

Gohan fans will be so triggered. 😂

[@uzairpatel6942]

so true, but Gohan will most likely return somehow

[@Imperfectcelll]

Low-key am...

[@MGSBigBoss77]

After Dragonball Super no they won't. They'll be use to Gohan getting his ass kicked on a regular basis!

[@mrvlog3126]

🤣🤣 gohan you disappointed me

[@prisesion]

Of course Gohan was the FIRST to go..... Piccolo should be ashamed... he didnt use his first lesson..... DODGE!!!!!!!!!

[@zaynescelta1382]

So I've read most of af seen all of absalon first time watching deliverance I love it already yall really nailed gokus father of the year moment

[@tavozalvaje9926]

Man now i want ep 4!!! For a fan made series, im hooked!! 👏👏💯💯👌

[@NexalZita]

It wouldn't be a dragonball series without Gohan taking an a big L. But in all seriousness really amazing job.

[@johnnyjoestar7595]

Nexal Zita man i hoped for real gohan action since he got none in dbs .... so fucking sad ... he even got a flashback ... atleast let him die in a fight .

[@DeuceFrmEC]

Facts😂😂that L was destined

[@DJBSuicide456]

Leo pika Wouldn't say done nothing, done little yes. His fight with Goku in super is amazing & him fighting with Piccolo against the U6 Namekians is great too & should of had more air. Everyone in the TOP gets shafted by Goku

[@MainEventRon]

Nexal Zita kmsl

[@QuintQuint18]

WTF!!! No i need more after that ending lol I LOVED IT!!!!

[@majinbuu7846]

wow this is better than i thought it was going to be. keep making these please!

[@titantrainer592]

Vegeta’s characterization is a bit different in GT, he doesn’t have the desire to usurp goku

[@aleksandrasdambrauskas2065]

Wtf the secend gohan sensed broly body got 100 % goosebumps

[@WhatIfTheories]

Great work! You captured the feel of the characters from what I have seen with Gohan. Then some extremely sharp animation that was fantastic like when Gohan got knocked out of Super Saiyan! Great ending and now I want more :)

[@dre4534]

What If Theories yoo whatsup bro!

[@rakhilour5018]

What If Theories hii

[@rakhilour5018]

Nice imagination

[@CoonjoobeeharryLaval-qv2px]

You nailed it! I watched all the episodes! Keep the good work up❤

[@bizzybrown8372]

I stumbled upon this channel. Dope vibes. I like how this seems to take place on the GT timeline or an almost identical one.

[@jirenthegrey6897]

8 years on this!!!! That’s astonishing you’ve truly put devotion into this so let us appreciate and get to that goal you want which is 100k subs. Your hard work will truly pay off

[@kaiba226]

The voice acting is a level above most fan made projects, I like this a lot

[@knownuser09]

WoW Man this was amazing.. The ending thow was so sad.. Poor Gohan... We will miss you